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Resin Sm0ke

PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 9:37 pm


WHAT THE ******** DID I SAY!?!?
PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:10 pm


2Sunz is a team of a turd sandwhich and Strife.
Makairo = Meow meow meow


THIS IS IT!?

AND YOU GOT ALL HUFFED UP OVER THIS!?

YOU'RE A GAY FISH!

Resin Sm0ke


Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 12:08 am


I can't help but notice Mak has taken pride out of beating Fem who isn't as experienced, and I who joked the entire battle. If I were Mak, I'd be offended that my opponent(Stryker) didn't care enough to write anything worthwhile, due to Stryker, as an LG newbie at the time, easily defeating him.

I wasn't even going to address that fact, but you can only brag about being handed a victory for so long before I drop some truth on you. Being humble never hurt anybody, and I try to maintain mine. However, I can't continue to attempt being nice to someone who doesn't know how to return it.

If you ever return, and want another go at me Mak, I promise you that you'll get smashed on. Just for the sake of proving that me just being capable of it is an understatement.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:45 am


I think you need to remember, I've already beat him.

Resin Sm0ke


Femmunition

PostPosted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:53 pm


Terrence Urameshi

Oh yeah, and one of your definitions is wrong.

Quote:


You should get on that one too. cool
I'm too lazy, do it yourself. =P
PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 1:00 pm


Damnit Femm, show some emotion!! scream


God: Femmunition, you are by far the greatest creation I have ever made.

Femm: -_-

_______________________________

Mak: Femm, you're a stupid b***h who will never succeed at anything in life other than being a b***h.

Femm: -_-


_______________________________

Chaos: STOP LYING TO ME!! You are Fujin, and I'm going to send you naked pictures of myself until you admit it!!!

Femm: -_-



_______________________________

Anonymous Person: Ya know Femm, I don't really think I like "Lyrical Generation".

Femm: WELL I THINK- blah blah blah
-wall of text-

(by the way, i'm saying all of this with this expression arrow -_-)


________________________________

Terrence: Femm I love you, and I want you to have my baby someday!! heart heart

Femm: -_-



_________________________________


Talking to you isn't fun. cry cry crying

Terrence Urameshi


Femmunition

PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:41 am


..... If I showed emotion I would be less likely to win an arguement.
xD.... -_-
PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 2:29 pm


You already don't win arguments. cool


And I STILL haven't forgotten about your end of the bargain. evil

Terrence Urameshi


Femmunition

PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:10 pm


Terrence Urameshi
You already don't win arguments. cool


And I STILL haven't forgotten about your end of the bargain. evil
You don't either, some people like to pretend they win. cool
PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 4:24 pm


Alright, I'm open to questions, practice battles or explanations if anyone needs them. I'm not exactly an experienced battler but I know enough to answer questions, do practice battles or say explanations.

Femmunition


Terrence Urameshi

PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 7:17 pm


Femmunition
Terrence Urameshi
You already don't win arguments. cool


And I STILL haven't forgotten about your end of the bargain. evil
You don't either, some people like to pretend they win. cool
Like when? I don't get it into arguments often anyway, but I have yet to lose to anyone that I can remember.


Makairo? SERVED
You? SERVED
Chaos? SERVED AND HE DELETED THE TOPIC
Lil Demyn? SERVED AND BANNED
Puppet? SERVED AND OWNED WITH A VERSE


Only arguments I've been in for the past year or so now lol. And since you're taking so long for my picture, it has to be signed with "For Terrence, because I love him." cool
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:06 am


One more thing, audio and keystyling are two different things. Often, complex lyrics in audio isn't a very appealing style and it's hard to fit all the lyrics in one spit. You don't need complex lyrics for audio to make it enjoyable and sound good.

In keystyling/rap battleling online, it's a little bit different, you don't need multis or long verses to convey a message and get a solid hit but if the verse doesn't hit hard in an insulting way, it'll probably not fly with the rest of gaia if you're opponent has an impressive repetoire of complexity, cleverness and insulting effect in their disses. Keystyling in poems is different from rap battleling online, you don't need to post anything complex to convey a message but it does add to your skill if you can convey a clear message while being complex.

Femmunition


Resin Sm0ke

PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:59 pm


Terrence Urameshi
Femmunition
Terrence Urameshi
You already don't win arguments. cool


And I STILL haven't forgotten about your end of the bargain. evil
You don't either, some people like to pretend they win. cool
Like when? I don't get it into arguments often anyway, but I have yet to lose to anyone that I can remember.


Makairo? SERVED
You? SERVED
Chaos? SERVED AND HE DELETED THE TOPIC
Lil Demyn? SERVED AND BANNED
Puppet? SERVED AND OWNED WITH A VERSE


Only arguments I've been in for the past year or so now lol. And since you're taking so long for my picture, it has to be signed with "For Terrence, because I love him." cool


what did I do now? Why am I always being brought up and I have no ******** clue what they are talking about.

And I never said I'd send nude pictures, you just want to see me naked TU.

Oh, and yeah, when did you serve me? I don't remember such things. I believe I would.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:22 pm


Resin Sm0ke
Terrence Urameshi
Femmunition
Terrence Urameshi
You already don't win arguments. cool


And I STILL haven't forgotten about your end of the bargain. evil
You don't either, some people like to pretend they win. cool
Like when? I don't get it into arguments often anyway, but I have yet to lose to anyone that I can remember.


Makairo? SERVED
You? SERVED
Chaos? SERVED AND HE DELETED THE TOPIC
Lil Demyn? SERVED AND BANNED
Puppet? SERVED AND OWNED WITH A VERSE


Only arguments I've been in for the past year or so now lol. And since you're taking so long for my picture, it has to be signed with "For Terrence, because I love him." cool


what did I do now? Why am I always being brought up and I have no ******** clue what they are talking about.

And I never said I'd send nude pictures, you just want to see me naked TU.

Oh, and yeah, when did you serve me? I don't remember such things. I believe I would.
i don't even remember anymore, but it must've been pretty minor if neither of us remember. I just needed another example to strengthen my argument lol. As for your nudies, we've ALL seen you naked man. But I guess you don't remember that either huh? xd

Terrence Urameshi


Femmunition

PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:42 pm


..... I don't want to know. xD
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