Final Word: Hinata
This was a very tough match to judge for me (note the .25 point difference between the two), because both of you are almost equal both in terms of role-playing, and plain power as a Shinigami. After some deliberation, I chose Hinata not because I felt she won the battle, but because I saw her as having a better understanding of the mechanics of role-playing.
Suggestions:
Alder- The only thing I would suggest is take another look at how you put in details, maybe slim down on a few. Besides this, you are a perfectly able Shinigami.
Hinata- Get more offensive. There is a large chance Alder could have won that battle, you need to work more on keeping your opponent on his or her toes. Get your skill in battle on the same level as your skill with writing, and you will be a formidable one indeed.
Good job to both of you, this is quite a good fight. Best I have seen so far.
