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 Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 6:42 pm
Valheita Divine_Malevolence Valheita 'Tis better than my last story. 42 pages of off-colour humour and inside jokes. D: Any inside jokes I could fathom getting? Probably not. They're all products of my high-school friends' twisted imaginations. The basic premise of the plot is that Turkeys have taken over the world.Hmm, I wonder if there's somewhere I could upload the .pdf. That literally sounds like something I would have written before. xp
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 6:44 pm
AHMETRock I spotted a mistake. I am for the your will? Anyways, is nice! Probably not the only one, but, danke.
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:21 pm
-finally finished reading-
o.o I like... And I don't generally go for fantasy...
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:23 pm
Tabihito -finally finished reading-
o.o I like... And I don't generally go for fantasy... 0.o
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:24 pm
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-insane urge to re-write and fix mistakes-
sdifsldifhydlhlsdgsdlkhdghsdfg
other than that, I love it. :3
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:26 pm
Maris Pallitax .... -insane urge to re-write and fix mistakes- sdifsldifhydlhlsdgsdlkhdghsdfg other than that, I love it. :3 >.< Zis is what I expected most o' all. ninja
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:28 pm
Divine_Malevolence Tabihito -finally finished reading-
o.o I like... And I don't generally go for fantasy... 0.o I said 'generally'. There're exceptions. 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'The Wheel of Time', for instance... your story happens to read very much like the former. Which, believe me, is a good thing.
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:31 pm
Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito -finally finished reading-
o.o I like... And I don't generally go for fantasy... 0.o I said 'generally'. There're exceptions. 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'The Wheel of Time', for instance... your story happens to read very much like the former. Which, believe me, is a good thing. Ne'er heard of either. Last fantasy story I read was goddess of yesterday. ... If that counts. But I haven't had anything interesting to read lately.... *Might have to search for said stories.*
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:36 pm
Divine_Malevolence Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito -finally finished reading-
o.o I like... And I don't generally go for fantasy... 0.o I said 'generally'. There're exceptions. 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'The Wheel of Time', for instance... your story happens to read very much like the former. Which, believe me, is a good thing. Ne'er heard of either. Last fantasy story I read was goddess of yesterday. ... If that counts. But I haven't had anything interesting to read lately.... *Might have to search for said stories.* surprised Must read! Between the two, those series will keep you occupied for a couple months if you're not a crazy-fast reader. ASoIaF has four books, the first of which is 'A Game of Thrones' by George R.R. Martin. TWoT has eleven (will be twelve) books, the first of which is 'The Eye of the World' by Robert Jordan.
Only issue with that one is Mr Jordan died, and someone else is finishing off the last book for him. So uh....... he left notes on the ending, though as to how well it's written... remains to be seen.
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:36 pm
Divine_Malevolence Maris Pallitax .... -insane urge to re-write and fix mistakes- sdifsldifhydlhlsdgsdlkhdghsdfg other than that, I love it. :3 >.< Zis is what I expected most o' all. ninja I'm a writer and a proofreader at heart. XD I'm very interested though, it's something I'd read, but I love reading anything. >_>; If you want, I can point out the mistakes. xD
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:41 pm
Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito -finally finished reading-
o.o I like... And I don't generally go for fantasy... 0.o I said 'generally'. There're exceptions. 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'The Wheel of Time', for instance... your story happens to read very much like the former. Which, believe me, is a good thing. Ne'er heard of either. Last fantasy story I read was goddess of yesterday. ... If that counts. But I haven't had anything interesting to read lately.... *Might have to search for said stories.* surprised Must read! Between the two, those series will keep you occupied for a couple months if you're not a crazy-fast reader. ASoIaF has four books, the first of which is 'A Game of Thrones' by George R.R. Martin. TWoT has eleven (will be twelve) books, the first of which is 'The Eye of the World' by Robert Jordan.
Only issue with that one is Mr Jordan died, and someone else is finishing off the last book for him. So uh....... he left notes on the ending, though as to how well it's written... remains to be seen. Fif.... Teen? @.@ I don't think I can focus through that many. .... *Will try.* Maris: That would be of great help. I can't recognise my mistakes...... 'Cuz I don't read o'er it, 'cuz I assume I'd think it's absolutely horrible. Unless I actually manage to finish it. Then I'd go back and read over it entirely. .... If I could somehow erase all memory of what occured out of my mind. *Is wierd.*
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:47 pm
Divine_Malevolence Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito -finally finished reading-
o.o I like... And I don't generally go for fantasy... 0.o I said 'generally'. There're exceptions. 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'The Wheel of Time', for instance... your story happens to read very much like the former. Which, believe me, is a good thing. Ne'er heard of either. Last fantasy story I read was goddess of yesterday. ... If that counts. But I haven't had anything interesting to read lately.... *Might have to search for said stories.* surprised Must read! Between the two, those series will keep you occupied for a couple months if you're not a crazy-fast reader. ASoIaF has four books, the first of which is 'A Game of Thrones' by George R.R. Martin. TWoT has eleven (will be twelve) books, the first of which is 'The Eye of the World' by Robert Jordan.
Only issue with that one is Mr Jordan died, and someone else is finishing off the last book for him. So uh....... he left notes on the ending, though as to how well it's written... remains to be seen. Fif.... Teen? @.@ I don't think I can focus through that many. .... *Will try.* Maris: That would be of great help. I can't recognise my mistakes...... 'Cuz I don't read o'er it, 'cuz I assume I'd think it's absolutely horrible. Unless I actually manage to finish it. Then I'd go back and read over it entirely. .... If I could somehow erase all memory of what occured out of my mind. *Is wierd.* You'd be amazed.... I read The Wheel of Time over the course of two months, and ASoIaF over the course of two weeks. I borrowed A Game of Thrones from a friend then went and bought the next three because I didn't want any gaps between them because of the cliffhangers! THEY WERE EVIL CLIFFHANGERS!
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:50 pm
Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito I said 'generally'. There're exceptions. 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'The Wheel of Time', for instance... your story happens to read very much like the former. Which, believe me, is a good thing. Ne'er heard of either. Last fantasy story I read was goddess of yesterday. ... If that counts. But I haven't had anything interesting to read lately.... *Might have to search for said stories.* surprised Must read! Between the two, those series will keep you occupied for a couple months if you're not a crazy-fast reader. ASoIaF has four books, the first of which is 'A Game of Thrones' by George R.R. Martin. TWoT has eleven (will be twelve) books, the first of which is 'The Eye of the World' by Robert Jordan.
Only issue with that one is Mr Jordan died, and someone else is finishing off the last book for him. So uh....... he left notes on the ending, though as to how well it's written... remains to be seen. Fif.... Teen? @.@ I don't think I can focus through that many. .... *Will try.* Maris: That would be of great help. I can't recognise my mistakes...... 'Cuz I don't read o'er it, 'cuz I assume I'd think it's absolutely horrible. Unless I actually manage to finish it. Then I'd go back and read over it entirely. .... If I could somehow erase all memory of what occured out of my mind. *Is wierd.* You'd be amazed.... I read The Wheel of Time over the course of two months, and ASoIaF over the course of two weeks. I borrowed A Game of Thrones from a friend then went and bought the next three because I didn't want any gaps between them because of the cliffhangers! THEY WERE EVIL CLIFFHANGERS! Cliffhangers? eek Does it end in half the world getting destroyed? No! Don't answer that. Now I gotta see if my school library gots it....
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:54 pm
Divine_Malevolence Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito Divine_Malevolence Tabihito I said 'generally'. There're exceptions. 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'The Wheel of Time', for instance... your story happens to read very much like the former. Which, believe me, is a good thing. Ne'er heard of either. Last fantasy story I read was goddess of yesterday. ... If that counts. But I haven't had anything interesting to read lately.... *Might have to search for said stories.* surprised Must read! Between the two, those series will keep you occupied for a couple months if you're not a crazy-fast reader. ASoIaF has four books, the first of which is 'A Game of Thrones' by George R.R. Martin. TWoT has eleven (will be twelve) books, the first of which is 'The Eye of the World' by Robert Jordan.
Only issue with that one is Mr Jordan died, and someone else is finishing off the last book for him. So uh....... he left notes on the ending, though as to how well it's written... remains to be seen. Fif.... Teen? @.@ I don't think I can focus through that many. .... *Will try.* Maris: That would be of great help. I can't recognise my mistakes...... 'Cuz I don't read o'er it, 'cuz I assume I'd think it's absolutely horrible. Unless I actually manage to finish it. Then I'd go back and read over it entirely. .... If I could somehow erase all memory of what occured out of my mind. *Is wierd.* You'd be amazed.... I read The Wheel of Time over the course of two months, and ASoIaF over the course of two weeks. I borrowed A Game of Thrones from a friend then went and bought the next three because I didn't want any gaps between them because of the cliffhangers! THEY WERE EVIL CLIFFHANGERS! Cliffhangers? eek Does it end in half the world getting destroyed? No! Don't answer that. Now I gotta see if my school library gots it.... Let's just say that Mr Martin is of the opinion that anyone who can die, will, and leave it at that.
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:56 pm
Divine_Malevolence Maris: That would be of great help. I can't recognise my mistakes...... 'Cuz I don't read o'er it, 'cuz I assume I'd think it's absolutely horrible. Unless I actually manage to finish it. Then I'd go back and read over it entirely. .... If I could somehow erase all memory of what occured out of my mind. *Is wierd.* I'll get it to you tomorrow, sometime. xD Don't worry -- everyone has their oddities. :3
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