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 Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:39 am
Well, i can't help you by giving you a critique, because i'm not a writer myself. So i do apologize for that. I would, however, like to tell you that i absolutely love your poem! I too would be surprised if it were not published. I wish you much luck! smile
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 12:21 pm
Zahwomen Thank you for your critique, I guess I picked up that apostrophe thing from Stephen King, I've always chalked it up to being a different writing style. I kept "your" and "yer" different because the captain is referring to the Queen with "your", and it's a little sign of respect. "home from home" is just another way of saying "home away from home", I hadn't realized that it made a big difference if I took the word "away" away. I could slap it back in there I guess. Thank you for your time!
Hmm I've read quite a few of Stephen King's books, but I don't remember seeing any apostrophes out of place.
Now I'm curious to see which ones he did that to, so I might have to go back and reread my collection. XD
Ahh... I didn't understand what you were trying to do re: the Queen, but now that I do, I think it's fine.
No problem~ glad I could help. (^_Q)
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:23 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 11:26 pm
Agent Ginrei Well, i can't help you by giving you a critique, because i'm not a writer myself. So i do apologize for that. I would, however, like to tell you that i absolutely love your poem! I too would be surprised if it were not published. I wish you much luck! smile Thank you!
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:02 am
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 3:50 pm
you changed your name back, i see?
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 10:33 pm
Is steampunkmagazine still going? Like online? Or is it in print now?
I am confused by their platform.
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 8:19 pm
Amythyst Kimball Is steampunkmagazine still going? Like online? Or is it in print now? I am confused by their platform. It's both.
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