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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:56 am
Just a little fyi :: I have yet to get to the other members, sadly it was almost one in the morning and I still had to work on my term paper for english. sweatdrop But I will get there. 3nodding ~RA
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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:46 am
hmm part one is up eh?
not bad at all... i perosnally cant wait till you put ketsu in
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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:59 am
Well it may take a while, seeming as I only work on it when my laptop is on. Maybe I will put more up after work tonight.
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Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 8:00 am
Several weeks have passed, as well as several villagers who have gone missing. Those whom held no power within themselves were in a state of panic. Both Chrissy and Kajaro were setting off to find others who were willing to be part of their clan. People who were similar to them, and who have a caring heart. Else where, within the woods area, a small group was keeping an eye on both Chrissy and Kajaro, after all, they were told to be careful when they see a group of two or more; and that is what they were doing. By keeping an eye on the two, maybe they can actually save their king. "I actually remembered when Scirocco was peaceful, no one was fighting and anything like this." Chrissy sighed lightly as she looked about. Kajaro mumbled a few words that made the woman laugh as they continued walking. "You know, you can speak more than just mumbles," Kajaro sported a glare towards Chrissy's way, as he stopped for a small drink. For some reason, it never failed for her to do little jokes here and there.
~~~ Coughing a little here and there, King Zaki coughed slightly; his semi long dark brown was plastered onto his milky white sweat covered forehead. Pale amethyst eyes looked about, Shai was nowhere to be seen, and he really wanted to go out and see how his kingdom was doing.
(sorry that it is so small, I am having a hard time to get some things into my head)
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:31 am
cool! looks good so far. i'm wondering what kajaro will say when he gets on :3 i'm looking forward to seeing how this ends up going!
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:54 pm
The truth, I am taking on others whom I hardly even know. sweatdrop I just gather what I can from talking to them, looking at their avatars and from what they posts. sweatdrop Glade you like it, I need some feed back for this one.
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:42 am
i wouldn't stress too much about it.
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Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:01 am
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:37 pm
*scrubs teeth* Well? ninja
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:47 pm
you know rax you could just put the new part when you get it typed... you dont have to do place holders. in fact i think might be easyer for people as well, they wont get as confused.
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:16 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:16 am
Where is his trusty priest? Matter of fact, where are most of his own guards, servants? With another cough, the weak king slowly stood up; he had to see to his kingdom. A rarity, in most cases one would think, but the king has to do something or else his own kingdom would fall apart.
Another cough raked through his body, as he slowly moved his milky white legs out of his own bed. With a raspy voice, King Zaki called out for his servants. Yet no one came forth, another cough and another harsh words came out. There was no way that he could even make it to the door for how weak he was. "They could at least given me a bell," he thought rather bitterly.
A young woman with long ruby colored hair and misty blue eyes ran through the woods. It wasn't every day that one could stretch out ones legs. But this, this was no ordinary run, no, this was more like a run for ones own life. Someone was after her for what she has seen, and she planed on finding someone or at least a group of someones to help her out. But in order to do so, she must find them rather quickly, her own life is on the line.
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"For the last time, I have no clue on what you are even talking about." Stated a woman with what seemed to have white hair with black tips on the edges. Slate colored eyes glared at a group of three young women. One seemed to sigh lightly and roll her eyes as another seemed to keep one at bay. The one whom was being held at bay just seemed to yell words at the woman who she thought that she knew at least something.
"Maybe this was a bad idea V," with a slight laugh, the young woman ran a hand through her sandy brown hair, the one who was holding the other back could not help but to agree. "I mean, this woman must not know what we are talking about."
"Very true Cale," the one who was called V grinned slightly, her jet black hair was held up into an unusual style. "But try telling Ra that."
Both sighed heavily, as both the woman being held back and the woman in front of the three were having a stare down with each other. "You know, it never fails for her. She always seems to start fights every where we go." V started as Ra did another plunge for the woman. Both sighed heavily as the two were yelling at each other once more. Both shook their heads at the display that their own friend, it was as if every where they went, the one always started a fight. Be it at their own village or some where down the road, Ra seemed to be the magnet for fights.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:55 pm
o: I am interested now 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:00 pm
*moves close* Whys that? I must know. lol. ninja
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chrissy_of_hailfire Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:00 pm
i edited it just a bit to make it look better and easier to read, its lines were breaking weirdly
we have some introductions to more characters whee
and it seems that a certain red head is in danger surprised this seems quite interesting.
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