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Alliance's Untitled Story - Indefinitely Suspended

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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:06 pm

Comment away, once I start posting the chapters.

Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 12:31 am

You know I love this story. I'm not sure how you keep up with posting it in three different places, though. I'm having a hard enough time posting it in one place.

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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 11:51 am

Wai~!!! Moritonianism strikes the nation!!!

*gnaws* It sucks! I hate it! Kitsune are lame!

Write more???

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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 3:46 pm

Gendou

You know I love this story. I'm not sure how you keep up with posting it in three different places, though. I'm having a hard enough time posting it in one place.

Well, I have LiveJournal and deviantART open on my terminal at work all day. I write it up in Word, post it to LJ, wait for a bit, then post it to dA with some commentary.

For a while, it was JUST LJ, before I started putting them up at the Otaku Alliance, the site I help run. I was bored one day and uploaded the whole thing to dA with commentary.

I've fallen behind at the OA, though, so I'll go update that now.

Basically, I have friends that are unique to each place that can only read it at each place. So I'm showing all of them.

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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 4:06 pm

Chapter Twenty-Two has been posted.

Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 5:11 pm

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Allison Gabrielle Roberts
by Amanda Payne

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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 1:48 am

Gorgeous art. It goes well with the story.

Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 5:59 am

AllianceSJR

Allison Gabrielle Roberts
by Amanda Payne

RIP. crying

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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 11:20 am

I enjoyed this story a lot so far. biggrin I like some the things where you point out that Things Aren't What They Seem; for instance William watching the sunset and while it usually is a symbol of hope to him, it's actually just a huge gaseous globe several millions of miles away. I also enjoy how the personalities of the characters bounce off of each other and how Allison is still an important figure even in death, because of her influence in people's lives. Um...

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I really suck at giving feedback sometimes. sweatdrop I... guess I'll end with "I think this story is cool and I wanna read more." 3nodding

And I love that art piece of Allison.

Deoridhe

RIP. crying

*moment of silence* cry

Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 1:01 pm

Lovely Art, must character die to get illustrated? sweatdrop

The story is quite good, it has a real feel, and sense of direction.

And we see some classic literary moments to.
Like the proverbial Deal with the Devil... which is a bad deal, because there are so many loopholes in that deal. crying

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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 5:21 pm

Fiddlers Green

Lovely Art, must character die to get illustrated? sweatdrop

The story is quite good, it has a real feel, and sense of direction.

No, a character doesn't have to die to get artwork. I'm getting a reference sheet of William soon. 3nodding

Fiddlers Green

And we see some classic literary moments to.
Like the proverbial Deal with the Devil... which is a bad deal, because there are so many loopholes in that deal. crying

"Curse your sudden - but inevitable - betrayal!"

Though again, things are not what they seem. And does one killed by a Lichlord stay dead very long?

Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 5:22 pm

Chapter Twenty-Three has been posted.

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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 7:11 pm

So the trio is making some progress in the cave, and have been betrayed unknowingly by Le Moru who was betrayed by Gendou. I wonder what he has in store for them, and that sudden quelling of the flame is NOT a good sign... gonk

And is that a hint that Le Moru will make a return somehow? Perhaps... if Gendou stole her "essence"... ninja

I should also mention that the pic of the Morysword is cool, too. 3nodding

Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 7:18 pm

I must say Genny totally rocks.

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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 12:59 pm

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