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 Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 12:21 pm
last but not least...fire
power of the flame
Burns but cleanses in its wake
Makes way for new Life
thats it...how u like them???
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 6:28 pm
Oh! I had one for Earth, but I guess I'm too late... sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 7:21 pm
Rythmic and flowing,
water,
eternal never ending,
sustainer of all life!
random short water poem!! ^^ not to sure about my punctuation though sweatdrop I just kinda stuck punctuation in!! sweatdrop
you're not late Laiyre!! Post it anyways!!
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 7:25 pm
*shrugs, nervously* All right. I wanted to keep it kind of short and to the point...
Life-giver and life-taker
Forests, mountains, steel, and stone
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 5:26 am
those were both pretty good...looks like i got some competion! blaugh
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:35 am
JJax those were both pretty good...looks like i got some competion! blaugh You're not the only one who's a good writer you know!! razz heh.... writing IS my chosen career field...... heart
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:58 am
Thin sheet of sweat,
slick against skin.
Heat that grips the heart,
in loud pounding drums that pull,
hypnotize, like flickering scarlet
she welcomes and chars.
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:05 am
She births fire
from her hot molten womb.
She dances
and the wind whips around her making song.
She cracks
and the waves rise to bow to her might.
And when she sleeps in darkness
she also faces light.
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:19 am
Thoughtful_Marine JJax those were both pretty good...looks like i got some competion! blaugh You're not the only one who's a good writer you know!! razz heh.... writing IS my chosen career field...... heart i figured that...i was complimenting you...i was saying that you guys are good writers and that i have some competition when it comes to the poetic inserts of the banner... blaugh
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:23 am
Highly influential
she casts a curious glance
through any crack or crevice
if you give her the chance.
Though you may not see her
she's always there aloft
a gentle breeze when happy
a tornado, pissed off.
blaugh
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:27 am
Spera Wavewind Highly influential she casts a curious glance through any crack or crevice if you give her the chance. Though you may not see her she's always there aloft a gentle breeze when happy a tornado, pissed off. blaugh i likey...i likey...lol blaugh
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:31 am
Thank you smile I'm still working on water and spirit, they are harder as I have conflicting feelings about their natures.
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:34 am
Spera Wavewind Thank you smile I'm still working on water and spirit, they are harder as I have conflicting feelings about their natures. yeah...i espesially like the wind one...i like the little element of humor at the end...a tornado...pissed off...classic...lol blaugh
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:43 am
Breath of life
tainted or true,
glowing aura with
brilliant hue,
hope-filled blessing
or dusk-filled due
breath of life
tainted or true.
Not sure what to do with punctuation there.
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 10:29 am
Patient, waiting, weathering
boundries that seek to restrain you.
Calm, serenity, is your lapping shore
against the seductive undertow.
Patient passive aggression
rebels the destructive work
contracted out by others
the wind-whipped hurricane
the earth-pulsed tsunami
fire's boiling hotspring
the frozen stampeeding glacier.
All you wanted
was to feed the thristy.
Yeah that's all I can come up with now, hopefully I can make a better water, and a better fire and eath, I'm only remotely satisfied with the wind and spirit *grumble grumble* I have too many elemental thoughts.
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