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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 5:08 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 8:31 pm
I am NOT posting the third chapter until more people read the firt two and tell me if they liked it or not!
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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 8:48 pm
I've only read the first part but so far I like it. I go to lpfiction a lot. I bet you probably have posted there. If you haven't--you really should. Your work will be right at home. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 12:14 pm
SWEET!!!! i acually would like to see chester and mike duke it out MATRIX style of corse....
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 7:05 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 6:46 pm
There was a small hallway from my door to a spiral staircase. I slowly strided towards it, examining the walls and the ceiling. I stopped at the foot of the stairs and saw the gigantic glass wall that had a beautiful garden of flowers on the other side of it. I was awestruck as I rushed down the stairs. The kitchen was across the glass wall, and it lead to what I figured was the Forgotten Forest.
I decided to walk around in it, so I walked in the Forgotten Forest and stopped in front of a tree that was much larger than the other ones and had black flowers growing from it's outstretched branches. I sat under it and held my knees close to my chest, resting my chin on my knee. It was dark, and I couldn't see the sky because the branches of the trees were like a sunroof. I suddenly heard breathing coming from behind me. I figured it was Mike. I got up and stood there, just staring at the numerous trees surrounding me. Mike slid his hand around mine and gently pulled me towards him. We were now staring at each other with his hands around my waist. We closed our eyes and leaned in, passionately kissing one another.
But when our lips touched, I saw a flashback of Mike carrying me away when he took me from Chester. Mike's warm lips suddenly grew cold. I jolted back and opened my eyes, seeing Mike do the same. Our breaths were fast and heavy, and we looked at each other with the same expression on our face: What the ******** the hell was just happened? I thought I saw myself carrying you... with wings!"
I looked at him in disbeleif. "I saw it, too." He raised his eyebrow. "We have to go see Chester. He knows.", I said worriedly.
"... knows what?", Mike asked.
I forgot. He still doesn't know what happened. I looked at the giant tree again, this time more closely. I walked around it a few times, examining the trunk. "That's the Forsaken Tree of Tradgedies.", Mike said softly. "They say that only one person with the special gift of being a 'Kamera' can reveal it's secret, whatever that is. Do you know what a 'Kamera' is, [your name]?"
I stopped in front of the tree. I'm a Kamera. Mike is a Kamera. But how can he not know it? Is he still a Kamera in this universe?
"... [your name]?"
I closed my eyes and walked forward. I felt myself walk into a whole different place. The Forsaken Tree of Tradgedies was really a portal. But where did it lead me? I slowly opened my eyes and couldn't believe where I was.
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 6:03 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 9:49 pm
oh wow, I read all 3 chapters that have been posted so far, it's so awsome
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 5:16 pm
MORE TO COME AFTER A FEW MORE REVIEWS~~~
Until then, let's take a sneek peak at ANOTHER Linkin Park fictional story I am currently writing... er, TYPING, I should say.
[Mike's POV]:
~ All I could do was stand there in shock. Chester was kneeling on the ground with Draven in his arms, crying helplessly. Draven was limp; like he was sleeping. But there was blood everywhere. I don't think he was sleeping...
"Draven... please don't leave... wake up...", Chester cried softly, caressing the side of his head. "Come on... please. I know you're still alive..."
STAY TUNED~~~
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 3:12 pm
More! More! you left me wanting more...
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:36 pm
I'm dieing to read the rest, I want more... it's like a drug *starts tweekin*
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 5:54 am
Zomg! I want more too, it'z soo awesome <3 <3
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 8:36 am
MORE MORE MORE, ITS SO AWSOME!
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Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:33 pm
thats an awesome idea!! posting a story here...there should be a guild or people should start a guild about lp fanfiction where authors can talk bout their stories or ask for idea for a plot...that would be awesome...lol
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Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 4:28 pm
THANK YOU all for enjoying my story. Here is the next chapter:
I was standing in the grass that was shining from the moon's reflection. The tree was only a few feet away, but it was dead. I found my way out of the alternate universe! But... what about Mike? The kiss? Chester? Can I ever go back? I slowly walked over to the dead tree to regain my thoughts. I sat under it and exhaled a deep sigh. I held my knees in my arms and inhaled the aroma from Mike's pants. They smelled like him. They had the same smell from when I kissed him.
"Who are you?", a dark voice asked from nowhere. I nearly jumped out of my skin as I quickly got up and looked behind me. No one was there. My heart was pounding out of my chest. I slowly backed away from the tree and bumped into something behind me. I let out a small gasp and spun around. The sight I saw was even more frightening. A tall man stood in front of me with a long, black overjacket that dragged on the ground, The baggiest black pants I had ever seen, and black spikey hair. The shadow hid his face, but I could notice that he was angry. He looked like he could kill anyone that got in his way right now. I backed up until my back hit the tree. He strided towards me, keeping the evil look in his eyes on me.
"I SAID who ARE you!", he repeated angrily. I was scared speechless. I just stood there, legs shaking, waiting for him to kill me. He reached out his hand and grabbed my throat, squeezing it hard enough to choke me. The man then put his face right up to mine and whispered harshly, "Answer me", he tightened his grip, "Or die." Tears started streaming down my face. I could hardly breathe. I still couldn't see who he was. "ANSWER ME!", he screamed as he lifted me off of the ground. Now I couldn't breathe. I looked down at him. The shadow uncovered his face. It was Chester.
My heart stopped. I couldn't believe my eyes. I suddenly opened my wings in a desperate attempt for him to stop. His grip loosened. The look on his face changed. His eyes were now wide in shock. Just before I thought I would pass out, he lowered me onto my feet and let go. I constantly gasped for air, falling to my knees. I folded my wings back up and caught my breath.
"A Kamera, huh? What would a Kamera be doing in my lair?" Feeling light headed, I could finally breathe normally. It took a while before I had realized where he had said we were. Since Chester didn't know who I was, I figured I was still in the other universe. I looked up at him and saw him staring down at me with a disgusted look on his face.
"Are you a wizard?", I asked. I wasn't afraid of him as much anymore.
The field, the tree, and everything surrounding us suddenly faded into a whole different place. It was really dark and all I could see was the red hard floor I was sitting on and Chester, who was still staring at me.
"Hm. You don't know much for being a Kamera, do you?", he said, the darkness leaving. I was in the middle of a huge room and each wall was shelved with thousands of books. I slowly stood up and looked around the room. Chester was really starting to freak me out because he hasn't taken his eyes off of me.
"I am Chester, the Dark Magic Wizard," he narrowed his eyes, "and who might you be, Kamera?"
"____."
He slightly raised his eyebrow. "... How did you get here?"
"The Forsaken Tree Of Tradgedies." The evil but calm look on his face made him look as sexy as Mike. Oh! I came to ask about getting back home! "I need your help, Sir Chester."
"Yes?"
"How do I get back to my own universe?"
The question seemed to come out faster than I intended. He looked at me for a moment, then reached out his hand and and put it on my shoulder. He closed his eyes. I just stared at him, wondering what the hell he was doing. He flinched from time to time, and made a face like he was very angry. All of a sudden, what felt like an electrical surge crawled up my arm and shocked Chester's hand. He screamed and fell to the floor. I bent down to help him up.
"Are you okay!? Sorry for whatever I-"
"The ring", he interrupted. "You took the ring."
I looked at my finger. The ring was there. But how did he know? And what did this have to do with me getting back to the other universe?
"What about the ring?", I asked.
He took my hand and looked closely at the ring with curiosity and fright. "Do you know how much power this has!? It can destroy the whole planet!" He tried to slide the ring off of my finger. Obviously, it wouldn't budge.
"Holy s**t.", he murmured.
"What!?", I asked worriedly.
He quickly got up and rushed over to the wall behind him, searching for a certain book. He grabbed a big black book and levitated it in front of him, the pages turning furiously. The pages stopped flipping and Chester ran his finger down the page. His eyes swiftly shifted from left to right. He suddenly stopped his finger in the center of the page.
"... ____... The ancient goddess of demonic chaos and nightmares... the ring..." He turned the page and continued. "The ring given to ____ holds her inner strength and will. Though once put on can never be taken off until the visions seen in the mind are to become real."
I... am a GODDESS!? Wait... there's even a book about me? Whoah...
"What did you see when you put on the ring?", he asked hastly.
"I saw a bunch of guys playing instruments, and then I saw Mike with a woman. But the woman... she didn't look..."
Chester stopped and looked up at me.
"Human", I finished. He stared at me a moment, and levitated the book back onto the shelf without moving from where he was standing.
"Come with me. I want to show you something", he said calmly as he turned and walked towards the bookshelf. I followed him. He stopped in front of the bookshelf and watched it open into a bright white light. He stepped in, as did I.
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