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Andy _1134
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:58 am


CH.4 Advise


Null watched as they left. He herd the sound of his cell going off he checked his pockets. and found it it read G.O.D.S, he answered it a little coutiosly.
"H-hello?" asked null
"Ah I see you met your first Grim and players. That was faster then I thought Null."
"Wh-who is this?"
"What!? Null please dont tell me that you forgot about me? Oh well I guess that youll remember my name. Its Seth by the way. So I guess you havent read that text message well just to save you the time. It says Welcome to the game of Grim. Well good by Null and good luck."
"Wait dont hang up What do you mean im in the game?" Null asked hesitant
"Don't tell me you forgot about or little pact. Your in the game. If I were you I would go find those two that saved you and ask them how to play.
Show them this message, and they should be more then happy to help you." Seth hung up.
"Hey wait" Null shouted into the phone.
A message appered on his phone it read.
Dear Alice and Miral please help this player with learing the game. You two are excused from your marks for the day. Thank you very much G.O.D Seth.
Null looked at the message. "I better go find those two girls." Null said to him self. He turned to the way the girls left and follow the way out. It was bright and sunny. He wacthed as the cars went by. He looked to see what way they went. He took a wild guess and headed west.
It took a while but he arvied at a constrution zone.
"Well well if it isn't goggles." The voice said
Null looked around and finaly found the source. It was the girl from before.
"Um is your name Alice or Miral?" Null asked
"Huh? My name is Alice the little girl right there is Miral.Why what do you want?" asked Alice alittle annoyed
Null for a seconed thought he knew her from somewhere. He finaly said
"I need your help."
"Oh is that all goggles?" asked Alice
"Yea and stop calling me that."Null replyed
"Okay so why should we help you I mean you got nothin to offer. But I guess I can help you." Alice said as she looked up at the sky
"Um I got this message it said that I should ask you for yor help."
Alice took the phone and read the message.
"Alright you got your self the help you need." Alice said to Null
"Hey Alice whats with the sudden change of heart?" Miral asked.
Alice tossed the phone up to her. Miral caught it before she almost droped it.
"Oh I see. So I guess we are gona help?"


(Still workin on this mrgreen )
PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 8:55 pm


So what do you think

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:50 am


keep writing. mrgreen
PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:56 am


Thanks ive added new G.O.D.S

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:31 pm


CH. 5 The help


"Alright, Im gona tell you a few things. One is how to play and use your gear the other things are about where your gona live for you duration of the game. How the game started and your ablilities."
Alice said as she handed him the phone. "So what do you want to know first?"
"Um how the game started if you may?" Null said in reply.
"Alright lets start from the beginig. This game was created for. Well no one really knows. Some say it was a way to test who was the best, others say by accedient. All we know is its here, The game is run by about 14 to 15 G.O.D.S. We dont know know what the acrinim is but thats what they call them selves. there are 8 elemental gods that control the 8 elemental sectors. Sectors are like lands. the sectors are. Fire,Water,Lightning,Wind,Earth,Ice, Light, and Darkness, there are about 10 sectors though. Now in the game there are monsters named the Grim they can veriy from element and others we have to hunt them. Got it there Goggles." Alice said to Null.
"Uh Yea I belive I do." Null said a little confused.
"Okay now for how to play.
The game is based on a long term hunt so to say. We the players ar givin Marks that we have to find and defeat. the marks can be very diffrent. Sometimes they can be the Grim, sometimes groups of Grim, But the hardest to fight are other players. Once you beat a Grim or player a whit or black heart will apperaer. The White hearts belong to the players, and the Black hearts belong to the Grim. Once the heart appereas you have to shatter it to count the kill. Do you under stand Goggles" Alice said as she walked back and forth.
"Yea i understand and stop calling me that!" Null shouted.
"Hey Temper there boy Im calling you Goggles because I dont know your name. So if you want me to stop tell me your name." Alice said in repley
"Fine it Null."
"Null? Come on my name was way better then that. Is that you real name or just some nick name?" Alice said
"Its a nick name. Now can we contiue" Null replyed annoyed
"Alright then Null Lets talk about your gear. You have some basic gear you have your Grim player Device Updater or GPDU for short. This gives you an update on your health points and stats along with what ablilities you have and if your on a team. It will tell you what team your on. The Mark Sensor is anthor important peice of equipment it tells you what way your mark has gone. One of your last peices of equipment is your Stats System Data. Use this if you encouter a mark you dont know about it useally looks like a pair of glasses." She took the SSD from Null and examined it.
"This is odd it looks like it wont work unless you have a frame." She looked at Null for a seconed. She quickly swiped his goggles and started to do some thing.
"Hey gives those back!" Null shouted as he tried to get them back.
"There thats all it needed." Alice said as she turned and handed Null back his new odd looking goggles.
"What did you do?" Null asked looking at his new goggles.
"I merly put the things together." Alice said in reply.
"Now time for the last 2 items. Your Ablility collector or A.C This lets you collect an ablility from your mark or other players. Its best if you keep this on so it will scan evrey ablility used against you. It saves it then all you have to do is train with it for a while and you will be able to use that ability.
Now the last Item is your most important its your Katra weapon. Its the rod looking thing. This is your main weapon it will always remain in its sealed form until you activate it. To activate it press and hold the button and call its name. Since your a Newbie it dosent have a form so your gona have to pic a weapon form.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:05 pm


One small error. Alice doesn't know his name, but in the VERY first sentense she uses it? o_0

I'm good at pointing out random stuff, so whatev.

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Andy _1134
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:07 pm


LOL your right thanks for pointing that out
PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:10 pm


no problem. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:12 pm


For visual aid I added some Grim monster avis to the charater page
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 6:23 am


CH.6 First Mark


"Thats it Null thats all the basic info you need" Alice said as she pased back and forth
"Now what do I do?" Null asked as he put his goggles on.
"Well you wait till you get a mark." Alice said in reply.
"But first focuse on getting a form for you weapon. Judgeing on what class of weapon it is makes up what abilities you get. A small fast weapon like mine will give you quick attacks but low damage and defence. A weapon like Miral's will give you a balenced defence and offence." Alice said as she stoped. She turned to Null as his phone went off.
"Looks like you got a mark already. Boy the gods must not like you." Alice said with a smile.
Null picked up the same voice from before spoke.
"Ah good job Null looks like you know how to play. So Im sending you your marks instead of you finding them. Look up and get ready to doddge." The voice said and hung up.
"What dose he mean by dodge?" Null asked alice.
"He ment dodge Null!!" Miral shouted as the sky hunters swoped in. Null droped the phone and dived to the left avoiding the attack.
"You got to be kidding me Those are his marks!?" Alice said as she scanned the hunters. "Their level 4, theres no way he can win. We arnt aloud to help him so he'll have to do this him self." Alice said as she counted the hunters.

The hunters hovered in the air waiting for Null to stand up. Null quickly regained his balence and stood up He held out his Katra weapon and said. "Summoning long sword." The rod changed into a black long sword. The Hunters dove in as he summoned his weapon. They swooped in formation. Until one hit the ground as Null slamed its head down into the ground. The hunters body turned to dust and th heart floated up. Null shatered it.
"Hey look his stats are now visable." Miral said as she scanned him
"looks like hes a close range fighter, with low movement and high strength well for a level 1." Miral said as she read off her eyepeice.
"Yea but a close range with low speed and evasion is no match for a army of 10 now 9 fast moving Sky Hunters. Hes lucky He was able to hit that one." Alice said as she watched Null dodge the attacks.

Null took alot damage from the endless asualt from the hunters. "I cant keep up with their speed." Null said to himself.
"Hes down to 10 Hp if takes anthor hit like the one that droped him from 25 to 10 he'll be erased." Miral said
"Hes Done for theres no point in watchin a pointless battle. I had wished that a he would join our group but looks like he isnt going to surrvive." Alice said as she turned to leave.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:04 am


CH.7 Nulls New Power

Null sat there on his knees He took long hard breaths.
"I cant lose not when ive braly started to play. Look at them they are tuanting me they wait for me to stande then dive and use the force of the wind to knock me back down. Theres no point to keep on fighting Im gona lose." Null said softly to him self. There was a sudden yell in his mind.
"No!! Null dont give up I know you have the power to beat them you just need someone to unlock it for you. So since you feel like giving up so easily, and dont even want to unlease your true power I'll do it for you."
Null felt a sudden surge of new energy his long sword changed to a new sword.
He rose to his feet and stood there.
"Ah it looks like Goggles is giving up like you said Alice." Miral said as she watched.
Three hunters dove down and readied their claws for the final strike. But hualted. They folated there frozen, Null Be hind them with his blade held out to his side. Their bodies faded away and the black hearts fell in half.
"Whooa"
Miral said as she turned
"Alice it looks like goggles isnt done yet."
Alice spun around and scaned Null again.
"This cant be, He jumped from Lv 1 to Lv 3 and his weapons and ablilites changed to a power that doent exist here." Alice said as she read his stats.
The 6 remaing hunters came at Null in formation this time running on the ground. Three jumped as the row of other three came at him and swung at the same time. Null spun around the three, And they faded away.
The other three came down at him. Null looked up at them and started to gather energy in his new blade and shouted. "Trinity blast!!!!!" Blast waves of white,black and gold energy shot out trowred the hunters.
eraseing them from the game.

Seth sprang up as the computers said "Error Error...Player has skiped level and now exibits unknown powers. Attempts to termainte the player have failed. Player cannot be erased by tecnical means. attempts to filter and find the sorce of the abnormality are under way."
"Theres no need I know what Player it is." Seth said as he reboted the computers.
"SO it looks like you were right about him Steh." Anubis said as she warped in
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:30 am


Okay time for C&C fire away

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:36 am


Sounds like soon he'll be godmoding. XD
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:39 am


LOL Well this is a one time thing. LOL

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 9:09 am


CH.8 Friend or Foe


"Not bad Null considering you almost lost." Alice said in a tuanting like tone.
"Ah Alice is just playing with you there Goggles" Miral said as she and Alice walked up to him.
"Thanks I guess So now what?" Null asked confused.
Null and the other 2 girls herd the echo of 2 hands claping.
"Not bad Null, not bad at all. Im surprized you beat those hunters." The voice said.
"Whos there?" asked Alice and Miral.
"Ah dont tell me you dont know a G.O.D.S voice when you hear it." The voice said. Null looked around and finaly found where the voice was comeing from. It was a man with a black an white mask. He was siting on the building's bare frames. The thing Null noticed first was the clock work on his back it seemed to tick sevral sevral times a seconed.
"Wow I cant belive it took you this long to find me." The man said.
"Who are you and what do you want?" Null shouted at him
"Temper temper Null. If you want to know my name ask nicely. My name is Gear god of the mind and time. I know all about you Alice and Miral. What I want is to congradulate you on your win. I mean Im just tryin to be nice. But fine ill leave if thats what you want." Gear said as he droped.
Null readied him self in case he had to fight. As Gear landed time froze. Null turned to find one last Hunter still standing It faded and the black heart shatered. Gear was standing behind it with his weird sword drawn. "What? Why did you help me?" Null asked.
"Who knows why, maybe I want to see how you play and how far you get.
Or maybe im a friend. But heres the most likely I want to fight you my self.

"That was the first time ive seen a god help a player like that." Said Miral as she watched Gear leave.
"It looks like the G.O.Ds favor you Null. So I was wondering Since me and Miral are a team do you want to join us?" Asked Alice
Null thought about it for a while and said "Nah I rather not. I mean thanks for the help and all but I think Ill do better on my own." Null said as he turned to leave.
"Well then I probably shouldent tell you evrey thing about the game Then. You dont honestly Think that I told you evrey thing did you?" Alice said with a laugh.
"Hey wait what do you mean?" Null asked confused.
"Oh its nothing Goggles but I guess me and Alice have to be going now. Bye bye hope you survive the night." Miral said as she started to walk away with Alice.
"Huh? Hey wait up I dont think I herd your question right. I think it would be a good Idea If we teamed up. Hey wait up." Null said as he ran after them.
{I still need to work on this mrgreen }
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