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 Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:31 pm
cookie instinct stars candle erase (i used the word ERASED razz ) it will not rhyme. free-flow FTW An aroma wafts its way around the room
The smell lifts me, and takes me to the kitchen
Fresh cookies linger on the counter, fresh out of the oven
My hands act out of instinct, making their way to the fragile treats
My teeth dive into the warm cookie, sending me into another galaxy
A galaxy where the stars are giant chocolate chips
And the earthen ground is light and fluffy
I am brought back to reality when the pastry is gone
The cookie has left me faster than the single flame atop a waxen candle
The feeling of warmth has been erased
Its replacement is a fragment of sorrow
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:53 pm
Haha. A deep poem about eating a cookie. xDD
Dreams.
Green.
Violet.
Gazing.
Eyelashes.
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My dreams are crowded with
what was to be,
and would be still if
the world was still turning,
but since it is not
I'll fill my time gazing at the ever-blue sky,
and the world will pass me by,
so I'll think, as I lie
on my back -
of all the wasted nights I spent waiting for the first star
and the eyelashes I blew from my fingertips,
and how I saw them float to the ground,
and how that always seemed to kill the magic.
But, since the world will lay motionless between me, I'll just
wait for this blue to fade into violet to hide these green hillsides from sight.
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 8:24 am
End
Nothing
Lose (I used lost though >>)
Race
Done
Then the nothing came
And stole the race
We lost sight of the end
and we were doomed
until the finish
we finally arrived
and the nothing screamed
as it was done
it disappeared
never to return
until the time
that we cease to learn
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:06 pm
PandaEnlightenment Haha. A deep poem about eating a cookie. xDD
people get very emotional about cookies. :3
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:08 pm
I've never had to knock on wood, and I'm glad I haven't yet
I know someone like that. *cough* Squishy *cough*
Cause I'm sure it isn't good, thats the impression that I get
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 4:36 pm
era
do
sync
leave
magnetized
In an era of good feelings, do you really think
that all of us are patriots, thoughts in sync?
That no one ever wants to leave
magnetized, charged, willing to believe?
Bleh. Its not very good, but I figured I would keep it anyways just to get another new post in here. :]
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:51 pm
Flip
Two
Quantum
Banana
Jolly
The jolly man
he does a flip
to make two
banana splits
all the while
never using
quantum physics
>.>
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 4:24 pm
That is one very kickass poem.
Oops, I have six words. Oh well. :3
horses, whine, alone, dark, field, desperation
You will never know the feeling of being
alone, in a field at dark,
until you have been there yourself.
Everytime the wind blows,
you can hear the blades of grass singing,
blending together in a natural symphony so masterful and heartbreaking
that desperation soon sinks in, and you start finding
that you are afraid of many things that you never knew existed.
You begin to imagine you are somewhere else,
somewhere deep in the heartlands of America, or perhaps medieval Europe in the era of Robin Hood
and royalty. You begin
to see horses, whining for you to come ride, but somehow
you know you can't, so you let them nervously walk circles around you, occasionally picking up a
mouthful of grass while making their rounds,
or stopping momentarily in front of you to check
if you have happened to change your mind.
And then you begin to notice light on the horizon,
and you remember that your car broke down a few meters from your seat,
and you recall that you're supposed to be at work at the moment,
and you realize that nobody-
not your family, not your friends, not your coworkers-
nobody has noticed that you've been gove overnight
alone in a field
at dark.
It was only you.
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How strange, especially considering that I've never once been in a field alone, even during the day, I don't have a job, and I don't drive. o 3 o
Damn my random brain, making me write about horses and the medieval ages and broken down cars in the same poem.
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:12 pm
For the most part, you're dead on about being in a field alone at night...except I don't imagine myself away. I'm much too scared. Cause Hammi's a scaredy cat. >.<
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:30 pm
LMFAO. That bit was just to get them there horses in somehow.
panda's mind: Horses? ...ROBIN HOOD! :]
But now I'm curious, when were you in a field alone at night.
LMFAO. THE GUY STARTED SINGING IN SPANISH AGAIN. AHARARALALALLAMALLAMA. He sings with much passion. -w-
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:35 pm
I see. Hammi's mind says Robin Hood when he thinks of gangsters. =3
I've been in many fields alone at night. It's not a very pleasant experience, but I walk around a lot.
Then sing with him! BURRITO! TACO, ENCHILADA!
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:39 pm
Enchilada
Spanish
Valentine
Lamp
Copy
The Valentine copy machine
it copies for my spanish love
it creates the enchilada that serves us
and is the lamp in our relationship
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 6:17 pm
light
wild
tiger
while
mild
Whose wild eyes beam through the night
at mild prey that steps so light?
Whose birth marks death and symmetry
'cross earthen eyes and mystery?
(And all the while listening hard
to falling leaves and glistening stars.)
You mock us as we walk away
and stalk us, dark turns into day.
...
...
...
TIGEEEEEEEER.
o 3 o
Or something like that. XD I wrote some type of poem about a tiger for this thread a week ago, but my internet died when I tried to submit it. D:
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 7:54 pm
xD
I almost fell out of my chair when I got to the end of that. >w>
Tell
Resolute
Tune
Stumble
Relief
Tell me when you come again
The simple Tune you sang when
You stood Resolute in your belief
I stumbled and you gave me relief
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 6:31 pm
Its actually very fun making poems out of random words. :]
UGH. I HAVEN'T INVITED ANYONE HERE YET. GRR. Should I just go to the writer's forum and invite a bunch of people? :3
Then again, they might think I'm stalking them if I do that. ninja
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