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Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 9:12 am
saint_savin We were out of Kool-aid, so I had to go with coffee ice cream. But! I DID IT! I'll neaten my outline for Part 2 over the weekend and start drafting on Monday. eek Yay! Congrats! And keep up the momentum! Good luck with Part 2.
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Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 9:16 am
saint_savin I'm very happy indeed. Thank you everyone for encouraging me heart heart heart . I'm also quite tired, but that's somewhat related to the fact it's Friday. I fully expect that the 131K I have now will shrink to 110K during editing. Maybe even 100K. But that's OK. My writing is like making pan sauce. Not so good if you don't reduce it! wink I already have a list of things to fix. Some of Part 1 is getting moved to part 2. There's a tiny subplot that goes nowhere that I'm going to drop- Male Lead #1 doesn't need any more angst! And two of the chapters are really badly paced. Err, bottom line: my job is just getting started. But I'm having a good time! Edit-planning is great fun. I actually enjoyed deleting chapters from my book. I did have to write some new ones, though, which isn't as easy as just snip snip snip. Anyway, hooray for you! Have fun editing...hum-diddle-lee-dee!
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Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:35 pm
I have two scenes coming out, including one instance of fanservice that was too obvious even for me. Deleting them is going to be like eating chocolate mousse! *slobbers at the thought* XD . I'm still drafting right now. I think I have to be finished or close to finished before I edit. I keep coming up with little things that I want t grandfather in. Things I want to change to make events flow better. I don't usually foreshadow, but I happen to have come up with the best possible excuse to do it, so I'm going to give it a shot! And if it doesn't work, it can come back out. I have an outline going for my next project. I want to write something a little more serious. I've been poking that the last few days because I happened to be faced with the most distracting thing ever- an international tracking number! My Soom Beryl shipped and oh, I've been waiting so long for her. http://www.dollsoom.com/shop/step1.php?number=3030 wink Yes. I bought a giant, resin goat girl. I'm going to have her done up with sweet lolita makeup and a pink wig.
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 11:12 pm
This was not a good week for Beryl shippage. I am 90% sure the people at my PO have mine, but decided not to sort the mail because ~it's Friiiiiiiiday~.
Telling me that you don't have piles of unsorted mail lying around when I CAN SEE THEM BEHIND YOU? So smart.
I am so angry! I gave myself an angry headache and sewed. No writing tonight.
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 8:36 am
saint_savin This was not a good week for Beryl shippage. I am 90% the people at my PO have mine, but decided not to sort the mail because ~it's Friiiiiiiiday~. Telling me that you don't have piles of unsorted mail lying around when I CAN SEE THEM BEHIND YOU? So smart. I am so angry! I gave myself an angry headache and sewed. No writing tonight. That's a bummer. Though you have to love when people lie straight to your face and you can tell it's an obvious lie. Not like when the object being lied about is hidden away and the person says that they are all out of lollipops. (I never did this! >.> ... <.< ... Ok, maybe I did, but at the urging of my GM because there were lollipop wrappers strewn about all over the hotel.) Though lollipops and shipped things are completely different.
I hope, come Monday, that your delivery is there and waiting for you!
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:08 pm
She's there NOW and she was probably there yesterday, so all is well! ...sort of. In the sense at least that I know I will never EVER have anything shipped there again. I'd rather deal with the noobie mail person who delivers to my house.
It is blistering hot out today. There are only two things "on" in my apartment right now. My Nabaztag and my laptop. I don't want to turn on anything else! Well, the air conditioning is on, but my apartment is tied in with the rest of the house so I don't really have a choice. I'm typing the the dark. The only sound is that of my fingers and occasionally my Nabaztag's tai chi. I can hear quail scratching around in the gravel outside. The dull hum of the fan in the air conditioner. The rustle of someone reading a newspaper.
It is peaceful, but rather uncomfortable. I am considering doing some revision work on Part 1 of The Doorstop, although I really wanted to do that by printing it out and typing it back in. I could maybe highlight problem areas. Or, I could write more.
It is too hot to fire up the iron and sew. It's too hot to cook. Too hot to clean. The darkness is fabulous though.
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Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 4:02 pm
Today I am less angry but my allergies are really bothering me. Goodness! I avoid going outside and they stay bad. I just can't win. *sneezes*
I'm pretty sure there's nothing around that would be making me sneeze and I know I'm not allergic to writing. I would be dead by now if that was the case.
Anyway, as I mentioned in someone else's journal, I think that the literary world is truly lacking in good female leads. Now, one can complain about this endlessly and one would not be wrong to do so BUT the situation simply isn't going to improve unless people actually DO something about it.
I have fits about the portrayal of women in fiction on a regular basis in my LJ. Such things appear to be migrating.
Hmm. I'm going to need a short cut scene in a few pages of the Doorstop. I was hoping maybe this wouldn't be the case, but unless I want a MASSIVE chapter of DOOM, I do.
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 4:42 am
I have hayfever too. It kinda sucks but I won't complain as I can stay inside and write.
All my stories have strong female character leads, well apart from my next one which is my first ever solid guy lead. Though I like books when both female and male characters have an equal lead.
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DesertRoseFallen Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 9:09 am
Wow, page 300, that's awesome! I'm so excited for you! ^.^
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:43 pm
A good lead of any gender is a fabulous thing. It's only that I wish there were more fabulous girls. I think there will be! Eventually. If nothing else, this forum and my LJ mates give me hope.
So! I brought Hypatia home today.
She's 68cm tall and weighs as much as my sewing machine.
She is AWESOME. Worth the frustration to get her, oh yes.
But, no more dolls for me until I have my closet cleaned out, my apartment redecorated and the current gang painted! . . .I hope I can stick to that, I really do *SOB*. The summer special Pukipukis are so cute. And the Bambicrony pixies (although their resin blows and I wouldn't risk the purchase).
Anyway, I think of her as my treat for 300 pages. I haven't gotten that far since the second thing I wrote when I was a wee lass. If I can pass 321 pages, The Doorstop will be my longest ever solo project.
I'd like to be working on that, but Hypatia is ever so distracting X_X.
It is less hot today. I have a good feeling!
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DesertRoseFallen Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 5:52 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 9:24 am
saint_savin Anyway, as I mentioned in someone else's journal, I think that the literary world is truly lacking in good female leads. Now, one can complain about this endlessly and one would not be wrong to do so BUT the situation simply isn't going to improve unless people actually DO something about it. I have fits about the portrayal of women in fiction on a regular basis in my LJ. Such things appear to be migrating. I feel the same way about women in literature. Has anyone else ever noticed that 'strong' women leads are usually sarcastic and/or a total b***h? Like being mean is how they're strong, or they're always horribly stubborn, but then fall all over themselves and totally lose it when the hot male comes along. And don't even get me started on the sex lives of these women.
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DesertRoseFallen Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:16 am
Haha that is why all my main roles are strong willed women.
However, I feel there are strong women in fiction still. One of my favourite series the Black Dagger Brotherhood has some strong female roles. The books are mostly changing between the male and female but the female's are not weak. The same goes for The Dark Hunter series.
But still, I get the point about it mostly being directed at the men rather than the women but they can be strong sub-characters.
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:40 pm
Sorry about that! Hypatia is what I named my Soom Beryl Basically, she's a really big doll with goat feet.
In Baudolino by Umberto Eco, female satyrs are called (and all named) Hypatia.
You know, I like sarcasm and bitchiness, but too much is too much! And there never seems to be an end to it with female leads. It's obnoxious! And cliche.
Oh, umm, writing update! I only did 700 words last night, but I plotted out a quick intervention to prevent huge chapter ness. All should be well, more or less.
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:38 pm
Just when I thought the dramaz were over, we're having some major issues with our homeowners insurance. Not worth detailing here, but it's headdesky.
I came home, threw a fit, and caught up on the Hand Finishing Required pile of my sewing. I am getting good at tacking on lace! Anyway, that's what I thought until I stabbed myself with a needle.
Perhaps I sound a wee bit grumpy posting here, but I'm actually pretty mellow and content in person. Unless people ask me what I write. Then it's all *blushblush* *mumble* *tangent*.
I don't come off as someone who does this kind of stuff I suppose? sweatdrop
By "this kinda stuff", I mean the bed breaking sex I get to start on in another session or two. Naughty. It's what's for dinner.
Tonight, I took care of the intervening scene that prevented the naughty chapter from running long. I think it's funny. Or it will be. I kind of scrawled the notes down last night and just turned them into prose right now. I can't gauge the funny in this situation!
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