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Amorpheous

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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 5:13 pm

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What cruel, cruel people. And all over alcohol. --cries--

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I think I'm too used to setting up role-plays... --sighs-- I dunno. I worked really hard on the thread to make it organized and such so that it wasn't all clutterred and you could find things quickly. I guess I'll just stick with this one, but thanks for your opinion....

Looking at it, it does seem really long.... I really should stop trying to set stuff up like this... >< I guess it's 'cause I'm a role-play addict. ^^

Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 12:48 am

Hmmm.... I'm finally getting out of artist's block by continually drawing butterflies... They're the only think I can draw well lately...

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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 11:50 am

Ehm... I don't want to be arogant or something.... realy I don't... but... would you please change your letter setting to normal sice? The lightblue inimini letterstype is giving me a straight headedge and I realy wanna read more than the firts 3 lines....?

Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 9:28 pm

KuroJenny

Ehm... I don't want to be arogant or something.... realy I don't... but... would you please change your letter setting to normal sice? The lightblue inimini letterstype is giving me a straight headedge and I realy wanna read more than the firts 3 lines....?

I don't want to be rude or anything, but you could please type correctly. smile At least I can understand the small blue font girl, you made absolutley no sense. 3nodding (except for "please change your letter setting..." rolleyes )

Onto thread crit:
I like the idea until I realized that the main character is also an assassin, and that her picture was left at the crime scene, that is way too obvious of a way to frame someone, that it would never work. Police would just be like WTF mate? I think you just need better plot devices and this will be very good, but for right now, it's a no-go for me. sad

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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:46 am

I really like your idea. Please tell me when you get it going... unless you already have, then still tell me! blaugh I agree with that one dude who totally got out all that opinionated crap. Wise words there. I'm not gonna totally harpoon you. So don't worry 'bout that. Alls I was gonna say is (I know this sounds reeeeeeeally stupid) that (if you haven't already) you should check out FMA (the anime; I never really got through the manga) and just see what they do. 'Cause I can tell ya, there are some DEEP messages in that show and there is symbolism all over the place. Not joking. And it's so subtle that you don't really notice it until you've gone through the series a second time or you try relating it to something else. Seriously. All through English this year, I was able to connect the most complex ideas to FMA and "wonderful" literature (like the Odyssey, Beowulf, Metamorphosis, Things Fall Apart, The Second Coming, and LOTS more). AND people relate to that show since the heroes are kids and the rest of the world is so very Adult. There's a definite clash of childhood innocence and Mature brutality. Although, i think with your main character bein' a school girl you've got the younger character panned out. Although, you didn't really mention whether the other characters were Akane's age or not. Oh! And just make sure your villains or whatever vary in character even though they do the same things. I know that's stating the obvious but whatever. I mean, they don't have to all look completely different, just they have to be original. Like Loz, Kadash, and ... Crap! I always forget his name. Whatever. That's all I was gonna say (actually ended up being rather long, huh?). Anyways, like your idea! rofl

Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:42 am

This looks really good; you've put a lot of planning and thought into it. Are you still working on it? Have you started yet? I hope so, it'd be a pity to just drop the idea.

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