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 Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:17 pm
krapolaonastick MiaIkumis#1Fan xana103 MiaIkumis#1Fan good. also, its 31,593,188... i think... and trust me, doing math that fast is WAY above 9th grade level... i suck at math myself.. i have a C in that class. the only thing i can do really fast is the thingy with the triangles.. what is that thing called.. the pathagorian theroum? i know i spelled that wrong... but ether way i am good at that. and in the storey, when the teacher went ot open the door... after that part, highlight the letters.. i got board and wrote something heh... my average in geometry is 97... sweatdrop my parents suggested i join the math team though, nd everyone is really nice, but being a 9th grader in a room full of advanced upperclassmen makes me feel somewhat stupid in comparisson... it's like how i feel about wrighting and posting here. compaired to zaber i am like a first grader, wile he is like a 10th grader well, honestly i think zaber may be one of the best fanfic writers in the world, but your stories are still pretty good ya know? I guess everyone kinda feels that way when you're comparing yourself to someone whose really good...
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 9:15 pm
my method of wrighting is reread what i wrote and add more as it comes to mind
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 9:11 pm
could be a little longer but its not bad
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:31 pm
i am baaaaad at wrighting long stuff.. although... there was a storey with no name.... other than that one storey, i have never wrighten more than 2 pages... a storey with no name was 16 pages... then it became 22.... and i am not done yet....
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 10:08 pm
chapter [3]
brandy quietly got her lunch and sat down outside.
jeremey has his laptop in his lap. he was looking at it puzzled. "jeremey, are you okay you look puzzled?" aelita said looking at his eyes
"it is wierd..." jeremey said, looking worryed "xana hasn't been doing anything for awile... it's like he is board or... of busy.."
"wierd.." aelita said back, they looked at eachother. then odd, ulrich and yumi joined them.
brandy finnshed her lunch and just stayed sitting when...
"oyu must be the new studend my father was talking about" said sissy appearing out of nowhere, she had a box in her hand. the box was purple and yellow and had an orange handle.
"yeah.. i am the new student.."
"my father told me to say hi and help you meet new people." nicholas and herv appered. sissy took brandy by the hand and dragged her out of the lunch room and towards the dorms..
"where are you takeing me?" brandy asked,
"we are going to my dorm."
"why?" they got to sissy's dorm. sissy opened the door and made brandy sit on her bed. should have seen this coming...
"why are we here? what are you doing to do to me?" no sissy don't do it!!!
"i am going to give you a makeover." said sissy
"makeover? with like makeup? and other stuff like that?"
"duh of corse."
"i can't wear makeup."
"sure oyu can..."
"i am ten, i don't need it."
"sure you do."
"no.. i can't wear make up." brandy said
"why not?"
"my dad dosn't want me wearing it"
"oh well...." sissy looked at hrev and nicholas, then held her down, then sissy opened her yellow, purple, orange handled box of evil and began the makeover.
10 minnuets later
"sissy, i can't hold her down like this for much longer" said nicholas as he held brandy by her shoulders,
"come on.. i have only coverup and blush left..."
"sissy i... OH MY #### GOD!!!!!" nicholas yelled as he fell on the ground, "holy krap.." he said in pain holding his
"nicholas?" sissy looked at him, then at brandy, "what did you do to him?!"
brandy was gone, she ran as fast as she could outside. she ran faster untill...
"ahh!!" odd yelled as he fell, brandy fell on top of him, ooooooooo
"help!! hide me!!!" she said as she looked at odd as a way of hideing,
"wow wow slow down, what happned?" yumi asked as she saw fear in the girl's eyes,
"i, she, headband, makeup, im scared!!" she said as she clung to odd as if he was a knight
"it's okay calm down.." odd said trying to make her feel better, "are you okay?" odd noticed that she was clinging to him, he saw that she was scared, he held her close, "it's okay.."
"can oyu tell mw qhat happned?" yumi asked,
"sissy..." brandy said in a low voice..
"did you say something?" yumi asked,
"sissy?" odd asked, "what do sissy do?"
"i gave brandy a makeover" sissy said in a chearful voice
"noooooo!!!!!!!!!" brandy screamed in fear as she hugged odd more,
"sissy get lost! you are mean!!!"
"fine. you people have no taste in makeup" she put up her nose and walked away.
[yes... i know this is a bit girly.... and wierd.. i am good at being wierd. get usto it....]
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