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 Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 6:15 am
thats the thing.
only the concept is based on the book
that means ANYTHING can happen here in the RP
as long as its within the concept
hell the planet can blow up if i wanted it to it wouldnt matter.
Except the RP would die and that would be bad.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 7:15 am
oh ok by the way I like your avi
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 7:29 am
Great tell anyone else who you might think would be interested.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 8:11 am
What I am trying to tell you is that you will be moved to beginners if you cannot make it more readable! The better/longer the story line, the more important that you use good organization, grammar, and punctuation to convey your ideas. I haven't moved you yet because I understand that you are not ready. You may recreate or edit your thread.
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School Of Dedicated RPers Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 1:27 am
^^ thank you for your advice.
the prob is im terrible at all those things lol
thats why my other Rps are in the beginners forum.
hmmm i should probably get someone to do it for me.
but i will definably try.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 1:30 am
If you do make this. Can I be part of an elite team or the guy thats a rebel and some how ends up surviving after hes gone through some crazy s**t lol
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:17 am
umm........sure but what do u mean by rebel?
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:28 am
i think he wants to do something stupid which would get his character killed at an early time
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:52 am
no he pmed me
he wants to be the kinda soldier that doesnt like to folo orders ^^
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:02 am
Ah i thought by elite he might want to be in Paratroopers 101st Easy company lol. But the role he wants sounds like he is going to be killed at an early stage because like you said they ain't dummehs the enemy are trained soldiers aswell. Running at them with a battlecry will get you killed.
(paratroopers were the elite in WW2)
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:11 am
^^ i know who the paratroopers are.
in my story there still called paratroopers
except they dont para shoot they land via drop ship.
the diff is that they jump out of a drop ship mid air.
and use small jet pack like objects
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:14 am
When you make this and if you make it I'm playing the role of a Marine. I may show you all what the marines really are... lol. So the MV5 rifle has no scondary attachments like the 209 attachment to the M16A2 is a grenade type attachment modern impact grenae as well as a secondary scope can be atached I would think this would be enhanced in the future too. on futuristic weapons. (I'm brainstorming for you sorry... Also if you make this into an rp it may generate hundreds of ideas to make your book into a seris and send me info please we can trade Sci fi's ideas and stuf... lol)
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:34 am
sorry its way too long for me to read and it seems way too descriptive
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:42 am
lol yea my bad ^^
ut to the previous post from galaxy commander.
^^ dont worry i know full well about the marines spec ops.
as well as alot of practical future weapon plans.
^^ dont worry i did shitlouds of background research before writing my book its pretty Fact safe.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:27 am
I like what I read but it's long
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