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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:55 am
#3: What Matters Now Original Date of Posting: December 15th, 2006
~~~~~~~ New Note ~~~~~~~ Wrote this in Latin class next to a bunch of girls talking about nothing. And not even the nothing that is interesting to talk about--the absence of all things, a black hole, the lack of an afterlife--but rather, the kind of nothing that can only be described as gonk .
Hope you like it.
***NO ORIGINAL NOTE***
"What Matters Now" Everything is different now. If I try--really try-- I can feel the wind pulse, And the sap flow in a tree, And the rhythmic breath of someone near.
But they think everything is the same. They must--because still they chatter, Squabbling over the little things, As life's majesty passes them by.
But not me. Never me. I embrace the steady beat of Gaea's heart, And Celestia's steady breath, And the orchestra of a thousand souls,
Human and Beast and Wood, And Stone and River and Mountain, And Cloud and Sun and Moon and Stars, And all that is.
Everything else, All the little trivial matters Matter not.
Not anymore. Never again. ~~~~~
Love and Vale, ~Valens
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:56 pm
I've had a feeling to write such words before. I understand quite well your sentiments behind this poem. So... who's Celestia? The thing about making references to Gods and Literature, is that the references have to be widely known. If this one exists, it isn't known to me, or to wikipedia, unless you're referring to the computer program Celestia, which unsurprisingly lacks breath... blaugh
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:51 pm
Shouldn't it be obvious? If Celestial references something of heaven, then Celestia must therefore be heaven. (Subtle Disgaea reference, maybe?) -LD
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 2:05 pm
Nicely done. Yeah I think the same at times.
~Buwie
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 2:21 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 8:35 pm
#4: Celestia Original date of posting: December 19th
It's been a long day, guys, so no intro. It was my birthday. There was a party. It was fun. Now. I'm going to sleep.
"Celestia" Indigo-tipped Clouds Sleepwalk on a cobalt background, Yawning with the pale pink dawn, Awaiting the orange burst, That accompanies Sun To his zenith.
As they age, Clouds grow long white beards from navy beginnings. As time passes, The setting turns azure. Sun moves across his domain, Leaving nothing untouched, As his reign expands.
From sapphire comes ruby, And once more, the ginger streak comes, Now auburn with time's passage, Escorting Sun out of his palace, Just as it ushered him in, And the sun departs, gold tinted rose by exhaustion.
Ruby becomes burgandy; Burgandy, plum; Plum, wine; And finally inky cobalt once more, As Moon, Attended by a legion of twinkling wisps and silver-touched fluff, Steals the stage, Glowing with ethereal luminance.
And she retires also, Drifting on a fading lapis dream, As dawn returns. *****
Love and Vale, -LD
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 7:01 pm
Love the description of Celestia. It actually sounds beautiful in your words.
~Buwie
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 9:14 pm
I like the imagery, but this poem feels noticeably absent of the emotional connections your other works have. I can't say I like it as much as the previous ones you've shown here. A photograph set beside the words could add alot to this piece.
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 4:42 am
Yes, this is remarkably absent of emotion. This was one of my "trial" pieces. It isn't bad, just vacant. Well...I guess that vacant poetry is by nature bad, but...I don't know...maybe I just have an author bias. I think it has a certain charm to it, all on its own.
Interestingly enough, this poem's style was one of the key ingredients to Beryl's character. It seems to pull out meaning in something of simple beauty, or at least, to augment it. Or at least, that's what I meant to get across. sweatdrop
And, similarly, some of my later poems that are more scenic than personal are much better because of "Celestia". Though in one or two, I hybridized the personal and scenic by giving a place a meaning as well as scenery (As shown in "My Sunny Little Paradise").
Yes, if I ever get a digital camera, I'll do just that. I think you'd like Florida KiyoKyo, if I may say so.
Love and Vale, and thanks for posting Snow, KiyoKyo! -Valens
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:17 pm
Guest Poem #1: Rainy Days by Candice Wozniak, known better as our own Tommy Cullen!
"Rainy Days"
Now bad music, Chocolate almond on the floor... Quick, quick, Call in sick, Before the time has come and gone.
Rainy Days, Call for me... Come and stay, Fall for me...
Now, Goodlooking, use it..! Secret plan to win my heart Today, Don't go away Until my heart moves on.
Rainy Days, Fall for me. Come away, Call to me...
Grey skies Above blue eyes, Old but young again When a smile dares To come.
Rainy Days, Shove me... Rainy Days, Love me...
Kind heart works in Harsh light, My heart finds it Too bright, I need your words to see...
Rainy Days, Weep for me... Rainy Days, Keep me...
You know me, but... Don't know me all the same. Sanity isn't our happiness, On society I blame This unfair situation.
Rainy Days, Play me. Rainy Days, Save me.
To tango in the morning, But then to waltz All night Robs me of my judgement, Perpetuates my plight.
Rainy Days, Just hit me..! Rainy Days Just fit me.
Confusion And sickness of the heart Make me want to Cry aloud And make me wish to start...
Rainy Days, Blame me. Rainy Days, Shame me...
I'd run the world over Once, twice, a hundred times! If only you would See ME! The same as I see you.
Rainy Days, Show me. Rainy Days, Know me..!
So take my hand and Dance with me! Because if you do You just might see thing MY way!
Rainy Days, Slay me! Rainy Days, Pray for me! Rainy Days, Know me! and Rainy Days, Show me! And Rainy Days, Keep me! And Rainy Days, Weep for me! On Rainy Days, My love. ~~~~~
A big shoutout to Tommy for letting me use this piece! Love you, Tommy!
Love and Vale, ~Valens
EDIT:I fixed your name, Can!
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:55 am
There's an e at the end of my first name. "Candice Wozniak." Though I go by the surname Dionysus.
But yeah. Love ya, Lea. <3
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 8:35 pm
Sorry I got your name wrong, Can. It's been one crazy week.
Love and Vale and my apologies, -LD
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 9:05 pm
Love it Tommy. Thanks to Leavaros for posting it too.
~Buwie
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 10:09 pm
Its alright, Lea. XD People make more mistakes saying it than they do spelling it anyways. You have no idea how many times I've been called "Kansas"... [sigh]
Thank you, Buwie. <3 Glad you like it.
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 11:04 am
#5: Luna's Lullaby Original date of posting: December
***New Note!*** Sorry I missed yesterday! I had a friend to entertain, and things got a bit out of hand....
Umm..... This is actually one of the only poems I've written that I can honestly say I don't really like....
So without further ado, here's this week's poetry!
*Original Note* I'm having trouble sleeping with my fever. I often wake up coughing up phlegm or sweating my brains out. I remember though, one night when I was very young, and I was having trouble falling asleep.
Nothing could help me. I looked outside my window at the great white orb, and suddenly, I knew exactly why the ancient Greeks worshipped her. I fell asleep with her over me, and awoke in the morning rested.
She has inspired this poem, and I pray that this gives others that peace.
"Luna's Lullaby" The moon, Dressed in luminance, Attended by a thousand twinkling angels, Shines her silver light into my window, Gently penetrating the sheer curtains, Cutting to my soul, My heart of hearts, Where the whitish glow, Sings the sweetest lullaby, Lifting me to the midnight heavens, Where softest silver-kissed clouds Drift peacefully on quiet winds. And where the sun dreams, So do I. ~~~~
Love and Vale, -Valens
P.S. Somehow I missed this one...? *sigh* Sorry guys, I'm a mess these days....
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