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 Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:10 am
Koosei Sauvie Koosei surprised sad uh oh. we're getting owned here. scream Maul, if you're gonna do something, do it NOW!!!! xd poor Trenn. he shall now forever be afraid of falling tiles. lol nice way to get in the room though. thanks for that, and a fear of falling tiles, thats somthing to think about Glad you liked it seriously? biggrin lol I was just kidding when I said that, but it'd be awesome if you could fit a random fear like that in there. whee of course I like it. it's a good story. Thanks again, I am lucky that you didnt see the first edit I put online, it was horrible by comparison sweatdrop . I might add a fear, I might not, there is only 6 things concrete so far for the rest of the story... but you never know. mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:35 am
Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei surprised sad uh oh. we're getting owned here. scream Maul, if you're gonna do something, do it NOW!!!! xd poor Trenn. he shall now forever be afraid of falling tiles. lol nice way to get in the room though. thanks for that, and a fear of falling tiles, thats somthing to think about Glad you liked it seriously? biggrin lol I was just kidding when I said that, but it'd be awesome if you could fit a random fear like that in there. whee of course I like it. it's a good story. Thanks again, I am lucky that you didnt see the first edit I put online, it was horrible by comparison sweatdrop . I might add a fear, I might not, there is only 6 things concrete so far for the rest of the story... but you never know. mrgreen if I had seen it, you would've received a bunch of writing advice. (again) mrgreen awesome. *awaits ch. 9*
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:37 am
Koosei Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei surprised sad uh oh. we're getting owned here. scream Maul, if you're gonna do something, do it NOW!!!! xd poor Trenn. he shall now forever be afraid of falling tiles. lol nice way to get in the room though. thanks for that, and a fear of falling tiles, thats somthing to think about Glad you liked it seriously? biggrin lol I was just kidding when I said that, but it'd be awesome if you could fit a random fear like that in there. whee of course I like it. it's a good story. Thanks again, I am lucky that you didnt see the first edit I put online, it was horrible by comparison sweatdrop . I might add a fear, I might not, there is only 6 things concrete so far for the rest of the story... but you never know. mrgreen if I had seen it, you would've received a bunch of writing advice. (again) mrgreen awesome. *awaits ch. 9* yeah...I know I appreciate the concern it will be made soon 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:59 am
Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei surprised sad uh oh. we're getting owned here. scream Maul, if you're gonna do something, do it NOW!!!! xd poor Trenn. he shall now forever be afraid of falling tiles. lol nice way to get in the room though. thanks for that, and a fear of falling tiles, thats somthing to think about Glad you liked it seriously? biggrin lol I was just kidding when I said that, but it'd be awesome if you could fit a random fear like that in there. whee of course I like it. it's a good story. Thanks again, I am lucky that you didnt see the first edit I put online, it was horrible by comparison sweatdrop . I might add a fear, I might not, there is only 6 things concrete so far for the rest of the story... but you never know. mrgreen if I had seen it, you would've received a bunch of writing advice. (again) mrgreen awesome. *awaits ch. 9* yeah...I know I appreciate the concern it will be made soon 3nodding at least you're willing to listen to the advice. stare I've met so many people that get all bristly and defensive when I give 'constructive criticism'. >< very annoying. biggrin awesome.
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:11 am
Koosei Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei xd seriously? biggrin lol I was just kidding when I said that, but it'd be awesome if you could fit a random fear like that in there. whee of course I like it. it's a good story. Thanks again, I am lucky that you didnt see the first edit I put online, it was horrible by comparison sweatdrop . I might add a fear, I might not, there is only 6 things concrete so far for the rest of the story... but you never know. mrgreen if I had seen it, you would've received a bunch of writing advice. (again) mrgreen awesome. *awaits ch. 9* yeah...I know I appreciate the concern it will be made soon 3nodding at least you're willing to listen to the advice. stare I've met so many people that get all bristly and defensive when I give 'constructive criticism'. >< very annoying. biggrin awesome. I love constructive critisism, I need it as well, This is my first long story for a long time so help is help, its all good 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:24 am
Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei xd seriously? biggrin lol I was just kidding when I said that, but it'd be awesome if you could fit a random fear like that in there. whee of course I like it. it's a good story. Thanks again, I am lucky that you didnt see the first edit I put online, it was horrible by comparison sweatdrop . I might add a fear, I might not, there is only 6 things concrete so far for the rest of the story... but you never know. mrgreen if I had seen it, you would've received a bunch of writing advice. (again) mrgreen awesome. *awaits ch. 9* yeah...I know I appreciate the concern it will be made soon 3nodding at least you're willing to listen to the advice. stare I've met so many people that get all bristly and defensive when I give 'constructive criticism'. >< very annoying. biggrin awesome. I love constructive critisism, I need it as well, This is my first long story for a long time so help is help, its all good 3nodding cool. you ever need help with spelling/grammar/potential bumps in a plot, feel free to ask. smile
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:25 am
Koosei Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei xd if I had seen it, you would've received a bunch of writing advice. (again) mrgreen awesome. *awaits ch. 9* yeah...I know I appreciate the concern it will be made soon 3nodding at least you're willing to listen to the advice. stare I've met so many people that get all bristly and defensive when I give 'constructive criticism'. >< very annoying. biggrin awesome. I love constructive critisism, I need it as well, This is my first long story for a long time so help is help, its all good 3nodding cool. you ever need help with spelling/grammar/potential bumps in a plot, feel free to ask. smile ofcourse, I now have 3 people who want to help...yay, my story is popular xd
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:34 am
Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei Sauvie Koosei xd if I had seen it, you would've received a bunch of writing advice. (again) mrgreen awesome. *awaits ch. 9* yeah...I know I appreciate the concern it will be made soon 3nodding at least you're willing to listen to the advice. stare I've met so many people that get all bristly and defensive when I give 'constructive criticism'. >< very annoying. biggrin awesome. I love constructive critisism, I need it as well, This is my first long story for a long time so help is help, its all good 3nodding cool. you ever need help with spelling/grammar/potential bumps in a plot, feel free to ask. smile ofcourse, I now have 3 people who want to help...yay, my story is popular xd indeed. lucky you
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:49 am
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:15 am
I've been really busy lately and unable to do much lately, but now I'm back (for a short period of time.) and I see I have a couple of chapters to read up on later.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:33 am
Zen Rider I've been really busy lately and unable to do much lately, but now I'm back (for a short period of time.) and I see I have a couple of chapters to read up on later. take all the time you need, there might me an update drought for a little while. Thanks for reading though
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 12:32 am
Okay, I finally got my chapter Drafts from my grandmothers place... after three forgetful attempts... anyway, I will have a new chapter out by monday after the editing process, seeing as my Editor has been notably a-wol for a small amount of time. So I now say this, while my edits are being made, I will most likely draw character concepts for main characters so keep a look out(dont hold your breath though, I kind of suck). Sauvie is back and so is his marginally above average brain. mrgreen
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 2:49 pm
Plain and Simple, who wants to edit this story untill my full time editor returns?
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 3:28 pm
Here's an idea.
Shove it into Word then spellcheck.
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 7:14 pm
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