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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 6:45 pm


Ryoko Earth
RPC Name: Ryoko Hashamoto

Rank: Trainee

Talent Description: While he is in the shadows, at the cost of 100 energy, he can mold the shadows around him and around things close to him, almost like turning them into one themselves. They attach to his skin, and he is almost completely hidden.

Talent Weakness: Along with the cost of 100 energy, if any light is shed on him in this state, his skin burns as the shadows literally tear themselves from his skin.

How did the character get this talent?: On his travels, after being turned into a vampire, he joined a cult that worshiped the "Shadows" He was brought into the Cult, and this was one of the things he was taught.

Sample: Ryoko ran across the halls, his footsteps not making a sound. By now, it was all routine for him. These guards, not knowing of the intruder, practically walked into their doom. From is observations, he knew that he had about one hour, if he was lucky, before the lack of the entrance guard was noticed.

He came to an open door, and heard voices inside. He peeked into the room, and saw a multitude of high ranked officials, including one he recognized from the profiles he read as the leader. The attack could be ended here. He sat back, closing his eyes, murmuring a quiet prayer. "Sithis, father of Shadows, enemy of light, embrace me with your Gift." He felt the gentle touch of the darkness embracing him.


He slipped into the room, unseen to all but the most observant. He counted six men. He aimed his bow, and fired his arrow. The light exploded, and all went dark. He got to work, killing all but the leader before he raised his torch. Ryoko backed from the light, and he saw the fear of the leader's eyes. He moved to the side, surely unseen, but the man's grimace became a smirk.

Ryoko's opponent darted forward, and Ryoko let out a short scream as a sickening sound of flesh ripping exposed him. Pain filled his being, but he forced himself back into the comfort of darkness. He moved quickly, letting the other's confusion mask his retreat. He readied his bow once more, now behind the man. He fired, and the arrow hit the torch, and it flew away, still lit. The man made a desperate run for the torch, but it was already too late. Before he could make two steps, the fatal dagger was already sheathed in his back. The confrontation was over.

Ninja's have this ability. just letting you know. But anyone higher then your rank can detect you.

Feel me?
If you choose to stick with this talent, it's approved.
If not, then ok.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:09 pm


I'm not a ninja, so I do want the skill. Plus, it builds more of a history for my character.

Ryoko Earth

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:26 pm


RPC Name: Alexandre St. Amant
Rank: Trainee
Talent Description: Highland Gunner - Speed + 2. Gunslinger skills +1 rank, Quicker reload (Extra reload once per three posts), Mental Defense (Resistance to Charms/Illusions/Mental Attacks as though they were one rank lower than actual rank).
Talent Weakness: In order to reach this level of gun mastery, he sacrificed his ability to control elemental magic, and is limited to light weapons for melee weapon style. (No axes, duel weapon styles, or two-handed weapon styles). Due to his Mental Defense training, he slacked in learning how to use Semi-Automatic weapons, limiting his ranged styles to Revolver and Rifle.
How did the character get this talent?: Alex has gone far beyond the normal training a Gunslinger went through. During his years on this planet, Alex went through horrors no other would have dared to go through in efforts to better what made him him. Through his travels, the needs for guns: reloading, aiming, being able to avoid, he adapted to lessen the burden of his style's downfalls.
Sample:
Alex ran, and kept running. Another target, a trickster. He thought he was so fast, so quick. The problem was that Alex was just as fast, being able to keep up with the trickster as he ran up the wall of a apartment building. The trickster kept sending balls of fire at Alex, who simply zig-zagged to avoid the attacks.

Once they reached the top, Alex launched upward and barrel rolled in mid air, rapid firing with both revolvers. At the height of the jump, the clips went empty, and the trickster thought he was now safe, sending another fireball at Alex. Alex tossed his revolvers up and threw up twelve rounds. The rounds went into the empty chambers so when he landed after avoiding the fireball, he could resume firing away. Two shots to the shoulders, one to the stomach, both kneecaps.

The trickster fell, but laughed a little. "What'sa matter, vampy? Can't use elements? What about fancy swords?" Alex holstered his guns, shook his head, then yanked the trickster up. "How do you think I beat you? All they do is weigh me down."
PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:56 pm


Shruikan Tenshi
@Pish: How about something like +2 speed and -2 strength, and vise versa or something like that?

@Met: I agree with Holy man there, it'll be pretty awesome XD


Alright. ill do a +2 in speed and a -2 in strength. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:37 am


_Manpish_
RPC Name: Raizo Altair/ Rachel Altair

Rank: Novice

Talent Description: Basically it allows Raizo's other personality Rachel take over his body allowing him to rest because he never sleeps and hardly eats. Rachel is Raizo's split personality who knows everything he does (umm duh she shares the same body!), but she is still not the same exact person and can act much differently then Raizo would in any situation. While in control speed goes up by 2 (so +2 in speed when Rachel is out).

Talent Weakness: Rachel is not as strong as Raizo so whenever she is in control strength goes down by 2. (so -2 from strength when Rachel is out)

How did the character get this talent?: Raizo Developed a second personality shortly after his friend Yensen was put in Cryo-sleep two years ago. With no one besides his AI Alice to talk to Raizo began to do some small experiments on himself. And when one went horribly wrong Rachel was the result. Raizo didn't mind having a split personality seeing as he would be able to rest and sleep when Rachel was in control of his body.

Sample:

Rachel sighed. she was of course now in control of the body. But of course fighting a Ogre is pretty difficult when you are weaker then the main controller of the body. As the Ogre swung down with his axe Rachel deployed the gauntlet and blocked the attack with it but was shoved down to the ground still. 'damn it Raizo... why did you choose now to let me take over?' She thought wondering if he would hear her as the Ogre lifted up its axe to swing again. She rolled out of the way and retracted the gauntlet then pulled out some shuriken and threw those at the Ogre's head aiming to take an eye out.


It's approved, but you have to scrap your old talent.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:03 pm


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_Manpish_
RPC Name: Raizo Altair/ Rachel Altair

Rank: Novice

Talent Description: Basically it allows Raizo's other personality Rachel take over his body allowing him to rest because he never sleeps and hardly eats. Rachel is Raizo's split personality who knows everything he does (umm duh she shares the same body!), but she is still not the same exact person and can act much differently then Raizo would in any situation. While in control speed goes up by 2 (so +2 in speed when Rachel is out).

Talent Weakness: Rachel is not as strong as Raizo so whenever she is in control strength goes down by 2. (so -2 from strength when Rachel is out)

How did the character get this talent?: Raizo Developed a second personality shortly after his friend Yensen was put in Cryo-sleep two years ago. With no one besides his AI Alice to talk to Raizo began to do some small experiments on himself. And when one went horribly wrong Rachel was the result. Raizo didn't mind having a split personality seeing as he would be able to rest and sleep when Rachel was in control of his body.

Sample:

Rachel sighed. she was of course now in control of the body. But of course fighting a Ogre is pretty difficult when you are weaker then the main controller of the body. As the Ogre swung down with his axe Rachel deployed the gauntlet and blocked the attack with it but was shoved down to the ground still. 'damn it Raizo... why did you choose now to let me take over?' She thought wondering if he would hear her as the Ogre lifted up its axe to swing again. She rolled out of the way and retracted the gauntlet then pulled out some shuriken and threw those at the Ogre's head aiming to take an eye out.


It's approved, but you have to scrap your old talent.


My old talent was already not approved anyway... remember? there was a large argument over it and crap... but anyways. Thank You.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 5:33 pm


Chilling2
RPC Name: Kora Summer
Rank: Master
Talent Description: She can make special cloth/clothing. Protection, fire proof, water proof, little bonus, special ability, ect. (Probably like clothe enchanting XP) Each people are only allowed to wear one of them, ether one part of special clothing or the hole suit witch ever works fine.

Clothing such as:
Clock of insensibly; Large big sheet, having it over the hole body well blend into the background magically, even moving.
speed or strength up; clothing with gives magically boost to the body's strength or speed by one rank.
flight; part of the clothing that can be use to levitate or spread wings(like your back on a shirt) use to fly.
breathing under water; Full body suit that gives the ability to breath under water. (Like in Zelda)
Water or fire proof; the clothing that will not burn from fire attacks or wont be sucked from the water.
attacks up; from keep wearing the clothing, all the persons attack is one rank higher.
energy up; From keeping the the clothing on, the person gain 80 more energy they can use.
attraction; Like a succubuce/inccubuce ability, having a sexy clothing on will attract peoples attention to you and will not resets.
protection; clothing that seam so tough and strong like leather but yet so thin like a rag. The clothing well only be strong as iron witch well help some of the sharp blades. It can't be any stronger than that, because it's just made of cloth.


I'm not sure what else I can explain. I mite need help with that if need added more. crying

Talent Weakness: Can not put in more than one ability the cloth/clothing can do. She can only make it special at one thing. Also it doesn't work on leather; they're made of animal skin, not cloth. Wearing this cloth takes up two weapon slots, and that only one cloth can worn at a time for each people.
How did the character get this talent?:
After the last two years, Kora been very entrusted with weaving the strings together and making clothing. She then tried to make it with the metal wires, silky strings and strong web strings from Arachnoid. After time, from many mistake, she finally knows how to make cloths be more useful by making it by scratch.
Sample:
Kora was laying by the tree, covered in many cuts. She just was attacked from a wile creature and it finally got defeated. Kora used up all her energy and couldn't do any healing on her self. She has to do something with these cut's before they get infected.

Kora slowly move her acing arm to reach something in her pocket. She pulled out a banged, all roiled up that she made her self. Slowly she un-roiled it and just rap it around her acing arms. Once she covered all the wounds, the banged started to making her arms feel better. That's because Kora made these banged with her own specialty to heal any wounds that aren't that leather.

After a hour, Kora's arm stopped seeping blood on to the cloth, meaning the cuts are closed, but her arms isn't fully healed yet. She slowly pull her self up and tried to walk. She didn't had any damage to her legs but it was very sower. She grabbed the her staff, that her hands are finally feeling better, and headed back home.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 5:41 pm


Unrelinquished Despair
Unrelinquished Despair
RPC Name: Laura Delgado
Rank: Novice
Talent Description: (Man, I couldn't word this well at all.) This talent enhances Laura with the features of a werewolf. However, instead of being a lycan, she is a living experiment from toyed DNA between wolves, and humans. It gives her most of the traits that wolves hold, including physical, and social roles. Fur covers just about every inch of her body, and she has a tail. Her intelligence is also enhanced beyond that of a normal human being, giving her decreased reaction time. (+1 Rank in speed.)
Talent Weakness: Laura is more prone to catching fire than your average person due to her fur, and has sensitive hearing. She suffers from extremely loud noises like lycans.
How did the character get this talent?: Laura Delgado is the product of an experiment housed by a biochemist, and a mechanist. While by technical terms she is only a few years old, her body was created at a much later age than, and her mind matured far faster by technology and natural manipulation.
Sample:
Laura crouched low against the ground, peering about at her surroundings. There was a tree to her back, and much vegetation speckled about where she stood. She was searching for the Barrens, but wasn't exactly sure in what direction it was. Several times she had asked directions from travelers she found, but it appeared either they tricked her for some unknown reason, or they just didn't feel like telling her. The only reason she had made it this far was because of her keen sense of smell, picking up on trails that had even a hint of the barrens outlandish smell on them. It was tedious work, since often the trail was lost. Eventually she would find another one again, but it wouldn't be worth anything if it didn't lead her in the right direction. It had been weeks since she had last seen civilization, prowling about as if she were on a mission. No wild life thought to challenge her, which was one of the things she found to be odd.

Unrelinquished Despair


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:20 am


Unrelinquished Despair
Unrelinquished Despair
Unrelinquished Despair
RPC Name: Laura Delgado
Rank: Novice
Talent Description: (Man, I couldn't word this well at all.) This talent enhances Laura with the features of a werewolf. However, instead of being a lycan, she is a living experiment from toyed DNA between wolves, and humans. It gives her most of the traits that wolves hold, including physical, and social roles. Fur covers just about every inch of her body, and she has a tail. Her intelligence is also enhanced beyond that of a normal human being, giving her decreased reaction time. (+1 Rank in speed.)
Talent Weakness: Laura is more prone to catching fire than your average person due to her fur, and has sensitive hearing. She suffers from extremely loud noises like lycans.
How did the character get this talent?: Laura Delgado is the product of an experiment housed by a biochemist, and a mechanist. While by technical terms she is only a few years old, her body was created at a much later age than, and her mind matured far faster by technology and natural manipulation.
Sample:
Laura crouched low against the ground, peering about at her surroundings. There was a tree to her back, and much vegetation speckled about where she stood. She was searching for the Barrens, but wasn't exactly sure in what direction it was. Several times she had asked directions from travelers she found, but it appeared either they tricked her for some unknown reason, or they just didn't feel like telling her. The only reason she had made it this far was because of her keen sense of smell, picking up on trails that had even a hint of the barrens outlandish smell on them. It was tedious work, since often the trail was lost. Eventually she would find another one again, but it wouldn't be worth anything if it didn't lead her in the right direction. It had been weeks since she had last seen civilization, prowling about as if she were on a mission. No wild life thought to challenge her, which was one of the things she found to be odd.


Well Despair, I think it's great. So you can tell them DG said yes.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 11:04 am


RPC Name:
Kaelrikk Cross
Rank:
Trainee
Talent Description:
Kaelrikk has the ability to use holy energy/magic.
Talent Weakness:
Apart from me needing to get every skill accepted individually?
I was thinking:
Due to Kaelrikk's heavenly experience, he now has a unique, sweet smell that Vampires/Lycans etc can smell.
How did the character get this talent?:
He was helping a group of clerics and paladins fight off an impending vampire attack on a village. They had also brought a necromancer or two to attempt to counter the clerics. The result of the clashing spells somehow sent Kaelrikk momentarily to the heavens, where he was granted this ability to help him in his personal quest to fight evil.
Sample:
The vampire was stronger than he was by a long shot, and Kaelrikk knew this. His only hope was to tap into his holy talent and pull something out that would help him. He began focusing the energy into his right arm. It began to glow faintly with a golden light. He was unsure what he was going to do with it, but he knew it was going to have to stop that vampire.

((I really didn't do anything else because I have no skills approved with it.))

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 6:38 pm


DG: Not a good enough weakness son. Your vote on Des' talent also doesn't count.
Met: Approved.
Chill: Ask Fenrir, I'm not sure how he'd feel about flying or stealth, or even breathing underwater.
Pish: Approved (Just in case
Tenchi: Specify this "Quick Reload" as when you fire a revolver, you must wait till next post to reload. Maybe something like "He can fire all the rounds, reload, fire all the rounds, reload, and be ready before the next post?" Also Tenchi, you get a cookie for that badass sig of yours with the head banging and the asian robes.
Ryoko: Approved. (Just in case)
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 6:55 pm


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DG: Not a good enough weakness son. Your vote on Des' talent also doesn't count.
Met: Approved.
Chill: Ask Fenrir, I'm not sure how he'd feel about flying or stealth, or even breathing underwater.
Pish: Approved (Just in case
Tenchi: Specify this "Quick Reload" as when you fire a revolver, you must wait till next post to reload. Maybe something like "He can fire all the rounds, reload, fire all the rounds, reload, and be ready before the next post?" Also Tenchi, you get a cookie for that badass sig of yours with the head banging and the asian robes.
Ryoko: Approved. (Just in case)


How is it not good enough? It doesn't do anything alone. I still need to get each individual ability approved.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 6:59 pm


How about... you say.... That you take extra damage from what would be considered destructive, or darker magic [Such as fire and wind] [Water and earth are considered constructive]
That and you can't learn another element of your own. This one would replace like water or something. O:

That sounds fair to me. Especially since the first weakness you put would only be temporary and the other one doesn't really matter much.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 7:14 pm


M o u r n ii n g W o o d
How about... you say.... That you take extra damage from what would be considered destructive, or darker magic [Such as fire and wind] [Water and earth are considered constructive]
That and you can't learn another element of your own. This one would replace like water or something. O:

That sounds fair to me. Especially since the first weakness you put would only be temporary and the other one doesn't really matter much.


Well considering I already have fire energy being used as my element, I can't do that, and the fact that each skill will need to be approved, then I have to learn it, it actually matters. As for the second weakness not mattering, Kael fights evil things, when they can smell him out easy like that, it makes him more of a target. I think I have a decent one though. *fixes talent*

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 7:15 pm


DGwar
RPC Name:
Kaelrikk Cross
Rank:
Trainee
Talent Description:
Kaelrikk has the ability to use holy energy/magic.
Talent Weakness:
Apart from me needing to get every skill accepted individually?
I was thinking:
Due to Kaelrikk's heavenly experience, he now has a unique, sweet smell that Vampires/Lycans etc can smell.
Additionally any of his fire element skills cost an additional rank up, or double the amount, whichever is lower.
How did the character get this talent?:
He was helping a group of clerics and paladins fight off an impending vampire attack on a village. They had also brought a necromancer or two to attempt to counter the clerics. The result of the clashing spells somehow sent Kaelrikk momentarily to the heavens, where he was granted this ability to help him in his personal quest to fight evil.
Sample:
The vampire was stronger than he was by a long shot, and Kaelrikk knew this. His only hope was to tap into his holy talent and pull something out that would help him. He began focusing the energy into his right arm. It began to glow faintly with a golden light. He was unsure what he was going to do with it, but he knew it was going to have to stop that vampire.

((I really didn't do anything else because I have no skills approved with it.))
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