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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 3:57 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 3:57 pm
YAAY.
I cut a square under Trenn.
TAKE THAT, TRENN! scream
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 3:59 pm
Hero Maul YAAY. I cut a square under Trenn. TAKE THAT, TRENN! scream Awesome!, nicely done Maul... nicely done xd
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 7:39 pm
I LOVE IT! it just keeps getting better and better
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:45 pm
It was a good chapter. I gotta say the grammer and stuff seemed to go down in this chapter, but other than that. Nice work Sauvie!
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 5:41 am
Seaphron It was a good chapter. I gotta say the grammer and stuff seemed to go down in this chapter, but other than that. Nice work Sauvie! Normal editor was otherwise disposed with Easter crap, sorry an edit is coming sweatdrop Thanks, glad you liked it
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 5:54 am
A good chapter, I liked it biggrin
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 6:12 am
Diana Godstone A good chapter, I liked it biggrin Thank you mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 11:09 am
okay the edit is here, V.2! now in theaters
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 11:53 am
you can tell the difference between V.1 and V.2 I love the story. even if V.1 had slight grammer mishaps, it's they storyline that is important!
it's a fun story and it's getting more and more interesting! I can't wait to read chapter 9 *bows*
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:38 am
Sauvie Seaphron It was a good chapter. I gotta say the grammer and stuff seemed to go down in this chapter, but other than that. Nice work Sauvie! Normal editor was otherwise disposed with Easter crap, sorry an edit is coming sweatdrop Thanks, glad you liked it Ah okay. don't be sorry it was good. Editted copy looks good as well.
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 7:45 am
surprised sad uh oh. we're getting owned here. scream Maul, if you're gonna do something, do it NOW!!!!
xd poor Trenn. he shall now forever be afraid of falling tiles. lol nice way to get in the room though.
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:03 am
Koosei surprised sad uh oh. we're getting owned here. scream Maul, if you're gonna do something, do it NOW!!!! xd poor Trenn. he shall now forever be afraid of falling tiles. lol nice way to get in the room though. thanks for that, and a fear of falling tiles, thats somthing to think about Glad you liked it
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:08 am
Sauvie Koosei surprised sad uh oh. we're getting owned here. scream Maul, if you're gonna do something, do it NOW!!!! xd poor Trenn. he shall now forever be afraid of falling tiles. lol nice way to get in the room though. thanks for that, and a fear of falling tiles, thats somthing to think about Glad you liked it seriously? biggrin lol I was just kidding when I said that, but it'd be awesome if you could fit a random fear like that in there. whee of course I like it. it's a good story.
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