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Moose-San

PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 2:33 pm


Dantar Crom came out of hyperspace with a slight whoosh from the engines of his borrowed Y-Wing. It had been a 3 day trip - Tatooine was pretty far from Coruscant, and so even hyperspace took awhile to get him there. He surveyed the planet for the first time in 10 years. The planet was alive with yellow lights and endless amounts of starship trafic entered in and out of it. Has it really been...10 years since I left? the smuggler thought. Many bad memories that he was reminded of at this moment had happened here. ...Well, I'm not 13 anymore. I'm 23, and I'll find them...wherever they are...but not now, I've got a job at the moment.

He entered into the atmosphere of the planet, and gazed across the endless sea of skyscrapers and the hundreds of thousands of cruisers and other ships flying through the city, weaving around the different buildings like little mice. He docked his ship, turned over his blaster (as was the law on Coruscant) and received a ticket for it, the guard telling him to turn it in once he was departing the planet to recieve his weapon back. Crom jumped onto a local transportation ship that brought him as close as he could get to the Jedi Temple, his destination. He checked in his pack for the Twi'Lek oil, and found it still in its sealed container.

He walked the few blocks across the glidewalks to the Jedi Temple. This too required a weapon's check for the citizen's entry, which he cleared quickly, and walked up the steps. Upon reaching the top, he looked around for the human that Gomma the Hutt, his employer, had mentioned.He still couldn't believe the amount he was getting for it - 2000 credits...man, this guy's definetly generous! He spied a lone robed human in the shadows of one of the statues and decided to approach him.

"Shaanan Ik?" Crom asked. The man looked up at him. "Yeah, what's it to you?" He asked suspiciously. I'm Dantar Crom, Crom for short - Gomma the Hutt sent me here to deliver this Twi'lek oil..." He handed the sealed pcontainer over to the hooded man, and he laughed. "Ahh, yes, haha, I did request these...and in return, here is the Krayt Dragon blood." Ik handed the smuggler a vial of a thick dark purple substance. Crom put this carefully in his inside pocket - visitors to Coruscant might find their wallets sufficiently lighter at the end of the day if they didn't watch for pickpockets.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 4:53 am


On his way back to the docking bay, Crom decided to stop by his old house. When he reached it, it was vacant, with the inside walls being a haven of vandalism. He looked over at the window in the corner - the glass was still broken as it had been all those years ago...He turned away quickly and left the house. Dantar returned to the docking bay and turned in the slip he had received earlier for his blaster, which he replaced inside his jacket. Beofre taking off, Crom checked inside his pocket to make sure the precious cargo was there and intact - it was. He launched off the platform and into space. As he started flipping the switches and calculating the time and distance for hyperspace, the smuggler glanced back one last time at Courscant. Who knew when he might be coming back - not that he was in love with his birthplace, but there were just so many memories...he finished his calculations and punched the Hyperspace key, and once again the white lines appeared all around the ship, leaving Coruscant behind...

Moose-San


Antonio Romani

PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 9:21 am


((How do I join?))
PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 12:27 pm


((You make a profile in the Roleplay Character Application sticky and wait until it gets accepted by one of the Mods...))

VoLt189


Davie_Diamond

PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 2:04 pm


Guilyn
Kari was suprised, not only by how good Diamond was at combat, but also how well she was doing. Her concentration during the duel wasn''t as much as it was with the boxes, but she could feel that there was something helping her.

Blocking all of Diamonds hits was hard, but it had got easier the longer she did, however he was no longer attacking. Kari then went on the offencive and attempted to hit Diamond.

Kari attempted a swing from the right was easily blocked by Diamond, she again swung and it got her nowhere. His defence was as good as his offence, she didn''t know what she could do, but the challange made her try harder.

Kari went on trying to hit Diamond, and with each swing she seemed to be better then the last, however so was Diamond defence improving. Kari went back to a defencive stance, hoping he would try to attack again.

However after a many moments it was clear he was not going to attack. Kari then choose to try something a little crazy, and went for an all out offencive to try to catch him off guard...


Diamond was impressed by his opponent''s obvious skill with a lightsaber and knew she was going to do anything and everything to win this duel.

At that Kari ran at him and began an all out offensive assault with her lightsaber. Her blade was coming from all directions and Diamond knew if he didn''t do something he was done for.

At first he blocked her blows easily away but as this continued he began to tire and suddenly an idea came into his mind...not an idea he was proud of but he had to win and so decided to do it.

Kari''s saber was becoming more quicker and Diamond feared even more accurate with each of her swings. He could sense she was starting to tire also and knew his chance had come...

He began to focus and suddenly went back to one handed saber swings, which took Kari a back slightly but not enough for her to slow down her assault.

"You have been an excellent opponent Kari..."

As her next swing came down on him he blocked the blade and moved to the side of her, so they were now in a saber-lock side by side. The saber lock was all about power and he knew this but wasn''t intending to out power his opponent but infact the opposite.

Diamond began to use his own physical strength to add Kari in winning the saber lock, at first he began to battle her until he knew she was using all her physical strength in this encounter.

Suddenly he stopped fighting her and span out of the way as Kari''s lightsaber came back on her and slightly burned her shoulder. She let out a yelp of pain but she seemed more determined now as she looked at him but Diamond was already in the process of making his next move.

Before she could meet his eyes and regain her balance, he kicked Kari''s lightsaber out of her hands and summoning all his power to one point, used Force Push sending Kari into the boxes on the opposite side of the room.

Diamond proceeded to deactivate his lightsaber and ran over to Kari to check on her. On his journey over though he realised what he had done was wrong but also accepted that he had to win at all costs as in real combat things must be done to secure a victory.

Within a few seconds he was over at the fallen boxes and his fallen opponent. He fell to his knees beside Kari and picked up her body, in the process hugging her.

"I''m so sorry Kari, I''m so so sorry...."
PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 2:41 pm


(( note: the 3 days of waiting for ur post was going to kill me blaugh but it was worth it))

Kari sat as Diamond was hugging her. Kari was exhausted, she sat back as he let go of her.

Theres........nothing.........to be..........sorry for, Kari said breathing hard.

It was a good match, first time I ever used a lightsaber. Besides they''re just boxes they don''t hurt. But you never know I might have gotten a paper cut, Kari said laughing at her own joke.

Kari looked around for a moment and saw her training saber on the ground half way across the room. Kari closed her eyes and lifted her had at the saber. Concentrating on it, she lifted it slighting and brought it to her.

Kari looked down at her training saber, she had done alot better then she had thought she would and was happy even though she lost. Kari put the saber down beside her and look up, then turning to look at Diamond

Well that was a work out wasn''t it? Kari asked Diamond.

We will have to have a rematch after I learn some new saber styles. Kari said to Diamond smiling.

Go on, I''m fine besides I think someone wants to challange you. Kari said as she stood up.

Kari found it strange that losing made her happy, maybe it was because now she would have something to work for. To her this just ment there was more for her to learn and that made her happy. She picked up her training saber and walked over to Master Swex to see what he thought about their duel.

Brycia


liz_bliz_inc

PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 3:10 pm


"That there is," Glacian said to Kari's remark about a challenge. He walked into the dueling area and dug into his waist pack. he pulled out a basic training saber and twired it in his fingers to get a feel for the different hilt than his own one and then said. "Are you up for another duel Diamond?"
PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 3:43 pm


"You did well for a first time... It wasn't about who won, or who lost... it is obvious Kari is more in for a force-power style of training, and Diamond should concentrate on the sabers... unfortunatly, the academy offers one path of training for padawans now so your pads won't seperate before you are knights. Kari, observe the duel between the next 2 persons... you can learn from observing as well... and take a rest.."
Swex smiled at his padawans and awaited the next duel, it was always nice to see rookies attempt saberfights, without much grace, style, experience...

((how did anyone get burned? training sabers only shock neutral ....

and do watch out for godmodding... it's best to await a counter-action after your own attack, rather then saying you hurt someone immidiatly, and/or preforming a new action... not everyone appriciates it, and there might be ways to escape a block/attack without getting hurt))

Mr. AmsteL
Vice Captain


Davie_Diamond

PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 3:45 pm


((The blades shock yes but leave weild marks that do burn on the flesh))

Diamond jumped to his feet and grabbed his training saber from his belt. He slowly turned round to his friend Glacian and smiled slightly.

"I would be honoured Glacian."

Diamond walked over to Glacian and smiled. He then followed by taking several steps back and activating his saber. Again the beam of blue energy shot out of teh end of his saber.

Like before he took the Form V stance and prepared for combat.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 4:10 pm


Davie_Diamond
Diamond jumped to his feet and grabbed his training saber from his belt. He slowly turned round to his friend Glacian and smiled slightly.

"I would be honoured Glacian."

Diamond walked over to Glacian and smiled. He then followed by taking several steps back and activating his saber. Again the beam of blue energy shot out of teh end of his saber.

Like before he took the Form V stance and prepared for combat.
Glacian bowed and then turned his saber on, the emrald beam letting off it's erie light. "Thank you for the compliment Diamond," Glacian said as he took up his form three stance, holding his sabr close to his body. He circled Diamond a little, the way he moved with his saber showed he had some definite experience with the style.

liz_bliz_inc


Brycia

PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 5:18 pm


Kari stood agenst the wall still catching her breath, waiting for teh duel between Diamond and Glacian to begin. The memories of her duel was still coursing though her mind. Kari did much better then she had ever exspected for her first duel.

Kari looked up as Diamond and Glacian took up a stance, she relised she was going to have to learn more about them to hopfully learn one. However even without truly knowing a form she did well, and she could feel the force during the duel.

Maybe there is more to a lightsaber then fighting, Kari thought to herself.

She watched and waited for the duel to start.....
PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 4:28 am


The_Last_PlainsWalker
Glacian bowed and then turned his saber on, the emrald beam letting off it's erie light. "Thank you for the compliment Diamond," Glacian said as he took up his form three stance, holding his sabr close to his body. He circled Diamond a little, the way he moved with his saber showed he had some definite experience with the style.


Diamond's eyes never left Glacian as he finished circling him.

Diamond knew that stance Glacian was using only too well, it was Form III, the defensive equivalent to his Form V and knew he was going to have to be extremely careful in this duel.

He had no idea how he was going to beat Glacian but he was going to give it a damn good try.

At that he ran at Glacian and the duel began....

Davie_Diamond


liz_bliz_inc

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 8:47 am


Davie_Diamond
The_Last_PlainsWalker
Glacian bowed and then turned his saber on, the emrald beam letting off it's erie light. "Thank you for the compliment Diamond," Glacian said as he took up his form three stance, holding his sabr close to his body. He circled Diamond a little, the way he moved with his saber showed he had some definite experience with the style.


Diamond's eyes never left Glacian as he finished circling him.

Diamond knew that stance Glacian was using only too well, it was Form III, the defensive equivalent to his Form V and knew he was going to have to be extremely careful in this duel.

He had no idea how he was going to beat Glacian but he was going to give it a damn good try.

At that he ran at Glacian and the duel began....
When Diamond's blows came, Glacian was ready and blocked them with little movement and never showing any openings. Even if these two were equal in skill, Glacian would have the upper hand because he would not tire as fast as Diamond would.

Glacian saw an opening and used the force to aid him as he pushed aside Diamond's saber in a block and the made a move to tap Diamond on the shoulder, though he did not take a full swing, he did not want to be caught off off guard if Diamond had a trick up his sleeve...
PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 12:41 pm


Diamond was impressed by his friend's skill and determination. His skill in Form III was impressive but he was still learning it, Diamond knew he had a bit more experience in Form V and was going to use it to his advantage.

His arm was kind of sore after the shock he received from Glacian's training saber but knew he wasn't going to give up over a little shock.

Diamond knew Glacian was arrogant about Form III but Diamond knew Form V was a better form for many reasons but the main one was obvious is Glacian's use of his lightsaber.


Diamond continued his all out assault except this time he made a slight chance in his swings, he knew Glacian was skilled in Form III but he was going to exploit its weaknesses.

As Diamond began to finish his flurry of swings and defensive swings, he used a slight tap into the Force to knock his opponent off balance enough for him to quickly swing and connect with Glacian's leg.

He almost immediately returned to his original position but was ready as he knew Glacian would not be pleased at this....

Davie_Diamond


liz_bliz_inc

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 1:35 pm


Davie_Diamond
Diamond was impressed by his friend's skill and determination. His skill in Form III was impressive but he was still learning it, Diamond knew he had a bit more experience in Form V and was going to use it to his advantage.

His arm was kind of sore after the shock he received from Glacian's training saber but knew he wasn't going to give up over a little shock.

Diamond knew Glacian was arrogant about Form III but Diamond knew Form V was a better form for many reasons but the main one was obvious is Glacian's use of his lightsaber.


Diamond continued his all out assault except this time he made a slight chance in his swings, he knew Glacian was skilled in Form III but he was going to exploit its weaknesses.

As Diamond began to finish his flurry of swings and defensive swings, he used a slight tap into the Force to knock his opponent off balance enough for him to quickly swing and connect with Glacian's leg.

He almost immediately returned to his original position but was ready as he knew Glacian would not be pleased at this....
[[um, you really should give people a chance to responed to your attack, like i said that Glacian "made a move to tap your shoulder" insteasd of just saying it hit him]]

Glacian let out a small breath as he was nocked off balance and felt the sting of the training sbaer to his leg. He was surprised that Diamond was as skilled as he was in his respective style. Now he knew he had to try something a little more showy then he usually did.

Glacian took up his form III stnace again, looking as if he was a little more wary of the tricks Diamond knew. He blocked a few more attacks and then just as he was going to block another, he switched his stance to that of form II and ducked out of the way of the saber using th force to steady himself and used his own move of 5 quick strikes aimed to hit Diamond's thighs, shoulders, and one to the side of his chest. Glacian hoped his change of tactics at the last second was enough to throw Diamond off guard and confuse him long enough for the blows to hit home....
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