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 Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 4:37 pm
longing[color=white] they threatened to break my body if i borke her heart
she broke my heart, and nobody noticed
i tried to love her, but she pushed me away
just as soon as i had grown accustomed to her, we were no more
she doenst care for me anymore, and now im on my own
alone in the darkness i feel the ache of my heart
longing for another, to someday love me back
someone to hold
someone to hug
someone to kiss
someone to care
and i, alone in the darkness..
waiting.. to someday love another.. ok so its not the best thing ive written, but i dunno if just really tired or what but i had to click the post reply button sweatdrop yea, its about me and my ex.. sweatdrop redface
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 6:32 pm
Kinsai-chan longing[color=white] they threatened to break my body if i borke her heart
she broke my heart, and nobody noticed
i tried to love her, but she pushed me away
just as soon as i had grown accustomed to her, we were no more
she doenst care for me anymore, and now im on my own
alone in the darkness i feel the ache of my heart
longing for another, to someday love me back
someone to hold
someone to hug
someone to kiss
someone to care
and i, alone in the darkness..
waiting.. to someday love another.. ok so its not the best thing ive written, but i dunno if just really tired or what but i had to click the post reply button sweatdrop yea, its about me and my ex.. sweatdrop redface
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 6:42 pm
kristinarr *Cuddles.* It made me cry. awww.. im sorry.. sad
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 6:46 pm
Aww poo, nobody read my other poem.
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 6:54 pm
MangaJoe Aww poo, nobody read my other poem. i read it 3nodding it sounds like an epilogue to a story xd
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 6:55 pm
Kinsai-chan MangaJoe Aww poo, nobody read my other poem. i read it 3nodding it sounds like an epilogue to a story xd It is sorta, I love writing and creating new characters.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 1:19 pm
t0paz Sketched what exactly is prose writing? ive heard of it once or twice but i have no clue what it is.... sweatdrop prose would be something like my journal entries. . . not so much a short story, just not a poem.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 2:35 pm
Kinsai-chan kristinarr *Cuddles.* It made me cry. awww.. im sorry.. sad
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 5:30 pm
kristinarr Kinsai-chan kristinarr *Cuddles.* It made me cry. awww.. im sorry.. sad *hugs* im glad it was at least good.. heart
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 6:41 pm
Angles cry.
Demos laugh.
I take up my blade.
God, I can't write tonight, damnit.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 6:58 pm
MangaJoe Angles cry. Demos laugh. I take up my blade. God, I can't write tonight, damnit. and were off to such a nice interesting start too whee
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 7:03 pm
Kinsai-chan MangaJoe Angles cry. Demos laugh. I take up my blade. God, I can't write tonight, damnit. and were off to such a nice interesting start too whee Ugh, it would sound better, I just tired and can't concentrate.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 8:59 pm
Kinsai-chan kristinarr Kinsai-chan kristinarr *Cuddles.* It made me cry. awww.. im sorry.. sad *hugs* im glad it was at least good.. heart
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Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 4:02 pm
I have a question. Just because a poem comes from someone's heart, does that necissarily make it good poetry? What does a good poem entail?
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Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 6:03 pm
kristinarr Everything inspired by you is good. *hugs* enchanted_chaos I have a question. Just because a poem comes from someone's heart, does that necissarily make it good poetry? What does a good poem entail? im my opinion it is feelings mostly that make the poetry good.. that and reasonably good diction sweatdrop
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