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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 9:07 pm
Accepted. She can stay at the Sapphire Dorm.
And you can resize in photobucket if you upload and edit a picture. =D That's mostly how I resize.
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Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:44 am
xLieselotte Lady Madelina xLieselotte Sorry for the delayed reaction. >.<"
It'll be interesting to have Erin, but first we need to fix her flaws. You need to be a little bit more specific.
Some examples that might help could be unable to relate her emotions, can't say what she really means, overly strict, cranky... Um.. I changed them..Can you like..tell me some more flaws for her sweatdrop Sorry, not used to making angry/serious characters... gonk It's okay! I'm also pretty bad when it comes to serious people. >.<"
Maybe arrogant might work? Overbearing, pushy, nags a lot, bossy? Maybe that helps a little? Thanks! biggrin Done!! smile
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Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:51 am
Thank you! She can stay in the Luminescent Light Dorm. =D
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Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:08 am
xLieselotte Thank you! She can stay in the Luminescent Light Dorm. =D yaay! thanks!! whee
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:21 am
 Character Information: Teacher Name: Diana Parks
Species: Witch/diviner
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Personality: Diana is sometimes a little too optimistic when students in her class see bad futures. She is very cheerful and tends to blurt things out at random. Diana may also get off track easily. She can be kind of immature.
Bio: Diana's ancestors were mostly famous diviners and witches/wizards. When she was little, Diana was "gifted" by a fairy so that she could only tell the truth. Because of this, Diana was afraid to speak for she might tell someone else's secrets. Later, her father figured out how to break the curse. After that, Diana was so happy that she became a constant chatterbox. Sadly her father couldn't stop all of the curse. It comes back to Diana from time to time.
Skills and Abilities: Diana can see the future through visions, tea leaves, crystal balls, ect... sometimes but her interpretation of it maybe wrong.
Flaws: - Too optimistic - Gets off track easily - Talks about random stuff way too much - Sometimes will tell secrets of other people - Can sometimes act like a over-excited first grader.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Occupation: Divination
Likes: (at least 3) - Sunny days - Cupcakes - Adventures
Dislikes: (at least 3) - Overcast weather - Her divination tools not working properly - Depressing fortunes/futures
Extra Information: Diana's hair can change colors. She looks and dresses younger than her real age.
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:30 am
Accepted. Diana Parks can stay in the Luminescent Light Dormitory.
I'll make an announcement for her class tomorrow. i'll see if I can get all the schedules set up today. It'll take awhile before you start getting students, but as we get more people, they'll start to trickle in.
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:35 am
xLieselotte Accepted. Diana Parks can stay in the Luminescent Light Dormitory.
I'll make an announcement for her class tomorrow. i'll see if I can get all the schedules set up today. It'll take awhile before you start getting students, but as we get more people, they'll start to trickle in. Okay. Thxs!
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:48 am
 Character Information: Student Species: Fox Age: 19 Gender: Female Personality: Summer can be a kind person if she knows you well enough although most of the time she doesn't talk to people she barley knows. She's childish and playful, loves playing with her sister's hair and other objects. She can be overprotective of her sister and hard to get to know due to lack of trust for everyone. Bio: Summer has a twin sister named Spring whom was born first. Summer is five minutes younger then spring and shorter then her by 1/2cm. A traditional habit in the twins are having abnormally long hair, they show it as a symbol of their back and they never betray each other. Sense the two twins are no longer around their parents due to an tragic excitement they will have rely on each other. Skills and Abilities: Summer and her sister are Foxes which means they both have sensitive ears and enhanced reflexes. Character Flaws: Summer is extremely impatient when it comes to getting what she wants and utterly gullible. She'll believe anything her sister tells her which causes them to get in fights. Summer is also picky about everything, whats she eats and wears, what classes she wants, what clothing product literally everything. Sexual Orientation: Straight Status: Single. Likes: (at least 3) - Bright colors - Humming - Fiddling with hair Dislikes: (at least 3) - Load noises - Dark colors - Coffee
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:49 am
Character Information: Student Name: Spring Curel
Species: Fox
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Personality: Spring can sometimes have a bad attitude although this is partly because of her protective feelings for her sister. She can be a bookwarm sometimes and be smarter then she acts but Spring likes to give off the impression of she's too good for anyone.
Bio: Having twin sister was hard enough but loosing half family is another issue. When Spring and summer lost a few family members it was time they migrated away from the area, start a somewhere new. Ever sense a loose of close family Spring and Summer have stuck side to side. Spring Skills and Abilities: Sensitivity in ears and quick relaxes.
Character Flaws: Spring is quick to assumptions and doesn't think twice about them. She thinks she's always right and fools her sister in believing her all the time. She can be a little selfish sometimes and become jealous if she's not the center of attention and completely picky about her hair stiles just to voice the twin mix up.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Married to a novel book call Malice.
Likes: - Nature - The wind - Sitting in trees
Dislikes: - Load noises - Crickets - Heat
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 1:21 pm
Hey! Your characters are mostly okay but before I approve them, I am going to ask that you work on their character flaws: For Summer: Enjoying privacy (keeping things to herself) is not a flaw. It's something most people actually do. "Trust problems" could be a flaw but it might be better to actually state what that entails because it's a little vague. Spring: Having good hearing and avoiding loud noises is not a flaw. She will need some real flaws and weakness before she can be approved. Also, I noticed that it seems like you entirely removed the "abilities" section from the profile. It's fine if they don't have any notable skills but please do not delete the section if it's not applicable. You can just leave it blank or put N/A so we know they don't have any skills. If you're having issues with flaws, please refer to the Mary Sue 101 thread in this forum. There is a fairly large section that explains how to come up with realistic flaws for your characters. Thanks! Just quote me when you've fixed their issues and I'll have another look. ^^
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 2:46 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Hey! Your characters are mostly okay but before I approve them, I am going to ask that you work on their character flaws: For Summer: Enjoying privacy (keeping things to herself) is not a flaw. It's something most people actually do. "Trust problems" could be a flaw but it might be better to actually state what that entails because it's a little vague. Spring: Having good hearing and avoiding loud noises is not a flaw. She will need some real flaws and weakness before she can be approved. Also, I noticed that it seems like you entirely removed the "abilities" section from the profile. It's fine if they don't have any notable skills but please do not delete the section if it's not applicable. You can just leave it blank or put N/A so we know they don't have any skills. If you're having issues with flaws, please refer to the Mary Sue 101 thread in this forum. There is a fairly large section that explains how to come up with realistic flaws for your characters. Thanks! Just quote me when you've fixed their issues and I'll have another look. ^^ cat_3nodding
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 2:53 pm
Sweet Nani poo StrawberryZ0mbie Hey! Your characters are mostly okay but before I approve them, I am going to ask that you work on their character flaws: For Summer: Enjoying privacy (keeping things to herself) is not a flaw. It's something most people actually do. "Trust problems" could be a flaw but it might be better to actually state what that entails because it's a little vague. Spring: Having good hearing and avoiding loud noises is not a flaw. She will need some real flaws and weakness before she can be approved. Also, I noticed that it seems like you entirely removed the "abilities" section from the profile. It's fine if they don't have any notable skills but please do not delete the section if it's not applicable. You can just leave it blank or put N/A so we know they don't have any skills. If you're having issues with flaws, please refer to the Mary Sue 101 thread in this forum. There is a fairly large section that explains how to come up with realistic flaws for your characters. Thanks! Just quote me when you've fixed their issues and I'll have another look. ^^ cat_3nodding Okay, they're approved. =3 They'll be in Ruby Dorm, so they can be together.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:13 pm
Character Information: Student Name: Yuriko Akari Kanji
Species: Gifted
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance description: With hair of a gold-ish color, Yuriko stands at five foot seven and weighs only a hundred and thirty pounds. Yuriko hates it when people see beneath her cloak. Beneath the hood of her cloak, her eyes are covered in her shaggy bangs. And beneath that are her eyes - one of which she is blind in. Under the cloak, her clothing tends to be elaborate. She has a habit of wearing shorts, but then wrapping her legs in ribbon.
She knows that people look at her odd for it, but she really doesn't care, they can think what they want. She'd do that with her arms as well if her arms were to be exposed. A few inches above and below her cloak, that part is missing - only to be replaced by pieces of chain that hold the two pieces together. Her skin is pale, and people have mistaken her for a ghost before.
Personality: Shy as she is, Yuriko doesn't like to talk to people. Even with her studying of languages, she doesn't like to go out and be some optimistic person. Because people usually judge her for always concealing her face, she is often faced with ridicule. This ridicule doesn't stop her though. Often times, she pushes the people away like it's nothing, but other times, she stands up for herself and says things back to them.
She doesn't have any friends, and her reason for the hatred of the two clubs is that she believes they don't do anything good for society. All they do really is go around and amuse boys and girls with words and their politeness, and she doesn't find it right, because all of the sweet words they say are just said to other customers.
Bio: When Yuriko was younger, she didn't wear her cloak around. She lived in Japan since she was born, and has been going to a rich school since elementary school. Her views on things changed after her parents spent less and less time at home and she was often tortured by bullying at school. She had no one to talk to because her older brother had been so busy with work, and her younger sister would never really listen when she tried to talk to her.
When she received a scar across her face - crossing from above her right eyebrow to under her left eye, she began to wear her cloak around to hide it. She got into the habit of always wearing it, and that has stuck with her since then.
Nothing is really known of her family history though. All that is known is that her mother works for a clothing design agency, her father works as an actor, and she has one older brother and one younger sister. Her mother and father never really told any stories about before they met or even before they had children.
Skills and Abilities: Telepathy and psychokinesis
Character Flaws: She finds it hard to really show emotion, and has a mistrust for most people at meeting.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Likes: (at least 3) - Mythology - Language - Spiders - Reading - Playing the flute
Dislikes: (at least 3) - Bugs - Addicts - Distractions - Total silence
Extra Information: She is often given the nickname "Spider".
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:20 pm
Alright! She's accepted. I would suggest that you add a little bit more details on her flaws though. It's a little bit lacking and kind of fits the bare minimum. You could say that she is gloomy or brooding?
Yuriko Akari Kanji can stay in the Emerald Dorm.
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Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:31 pm
Sure, I'll add a bit more.
I'd never really had a 'flaws' section before when filling out stuff, so I just kind of just added a few things to it haha
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