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 Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 3:49 pm
RPC Name: Sheen Boux
Level: 1
Main Style: N/A
Talent Description: Soft Touch allows fluid movement while in a fight or making a move, not waisting any extra effort or Ki in his skills. His attacks only use the bare minimum effort required. Hard Touch increases the power put into skills and regular attacks. For skills it increases the power level by one [E→D] (except for Stage 5, where it increases the power level by two [A→SS]).
Talent Weakness: Soft Touch, should he ever miss calculate the energy required to use a skill against a person he will be left wide open to a counter attack. Hard Touch, constant use of Hard Touch in a battle puts strain on his body, and can damage him if used for more than five posts in a row, or 7 out of 10 posts. Hard Touch can only be applied to Stages that Sheen has mastered.
How did the character get this talent?: Through experience in street fighting when he was at the orphanage. Bullies often came at him in groups, so in order to improve his chance for survival/not having the crap beat out of him, he focused on moving only what was necessary and breaking bones of those who got to close.
Sample: Sweat rolled down Sheen's cheek as he looked at the boy standing before him. It was the final round of the tournament and he was down by a point and a half. It wasn't looking good for him. The other boy was faster than he was and used that to his advantage even though Sheen had better technique. Thats when it happened, the other boy went to get behind him using his speed while Sheen had been preoccupied by thought. Sheen immediately moved his body forward, and extend his left leg to trip the boy. He was successful in tripping the boy by lifting his opponents foot up at the ankle and pulling it towards him in a fluid motion. The other fell flat on the ground and Sheen was awarded a half point. Now they were only one point in difference.
Taking their positions again the two faced off, and exchanged a few grabs but neither could get a hold of the other or put them down in any way. It was on the 13th exchange that Sheen miscalculated his move. He had gone to sweep the legs out from under his opponent but had miscalculated the strength needed to do so, and had only kicked the boy in the back of the knee, making him step forward but not sweeping his legs out from under him. This left Sheen exposed and he was immediately jumped on by the boy, who was trying to put him in a hold. Sheen needed to get out of this, if the boy got this point, that would be the match. Frantic he watched in slow motion as the boy worked on pinning him and then, there it was, the boy had started to turn his back to finish the pin, taking the opportunity, Sheen stopped struggling in the other areas and stuck the spine of the boy with all his might with an open palm. This disrupted one of the C sections in the spine and knocked him out, the boy would latter die in route to the hospital, and Sheen would be cast out of the orphanage.
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 4:36 pm
v-v: Denied. This talent is too op by the guild standards, and as things go I highly recommend leveling up in the guild first before applying for a talent like this. That being said, I would be willing to allow this application to be edited if you really don't want to take my advice and want a talent right now. For this application to be approved, however, Hard Touch must be taken out completely. Soft Touch I can get behind, but on the condition that to use the bare minimum of effort will also have to mean that the technique you use is weaker in turn. In other words you could use a B-rank attack for a C-rank ki cost, but that technique would only have the strength and characteristics of a C-rank attack.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 5:34 pm
Hm~.... I'll pass on that for now and wait to apply for a Talent later then. At least now though I have a good grasp on power allowed in the Guild.
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 1:21 pm
RPC Name: Valentino Tempesta Level: 1 Main Style: None Talent Description: This talent allows my RPC to learn 2 Sub-styles per rank. Talent Weakness: He looses the ability to gain a Main-Style entirely. How did the character get this talent?: Upon being invited to the island, his DNA was tested to see if he was eligible to take the Gene-X, while his genetic structure was shown to be able to take it, all the tests they had inserting the different strands of Gene-X into his DNA showed that he was immune to it. He could take the medication, but nothing would ever happen to him. Sample: Unsure on how to Rp this out.
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 6:17 pm
Enzio Kageryuu RPC Name: Valentino Tempesta Level: 1 Main Style: None Talent Description: This talent allows my RPC to learn 2 Sub-styles per rank. Talent Weakness: He looses the ability to gain a Main-Style entirely. How did the character get this talent?: Upon being invited to the island, his DNA was tested to see if he was eligible to take the Gene-X, while his genetic structure was shown to be able to take it, all the tests they had inserting the different strands of Gene-X into his DNA showed that he was immune to it. He could take the medication, but nothing would ever happen to him. Sample: Unsure on how to Rp this out. Hello. I am going to let Fen handle this application for the talent. If it was up to me, I would probably allow this to go through, except there is one problem I spot. The immediate implication of blocking your RPC from getting a Main Style. Story-wise, your RPC was invited to the island for the sole purpose of testing out the Gene-X. Your description of how your character got this talent raises the issue that if you cannot have the Gene-X, the reaction to island staff would probably be the following... 1. They will either find no use for you, and "expel" you, (oddly enough, being Crew even I don't know what happens when students are "expelled" but I am pretty sure it's something close to death). 2. The staff see your immunity as a threat to their experiments and straight up murder you. 3. The staff see possible implications to be used from your blood and probably treat you as a lab experiment. Of course these are all just assumptions. I'll let Fen make the final decision, though I think you should know that the above 3 options will probably happen. Each one basically requires your character to keep running from those working for Akasun. Of course...once again all assumption..but something I think you and Fen should consider before letting this talent through.
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 6:19 pm
jwalker67 Enzio Kageryuu RPC Name: Valentino Tempesta Level: 1 Main Style: None Talent Description: This talent allows my RPC to learn 2 Sub-styles per rank. Talent Weakness: He looses the ability to gain a Main-Style entirely. How did the character get this talent?: Upon being invited to the island, his DNA was tested to see if he was eligible to take the Gene-X, while his genetic structure was shown to be able to take it, all the tests they had inserting the different strands of Gene-X into his DNA showed that he was immune to it. He could take the medication, but nothing would ever happen to him. Sample: Unsure on how to Rp this out. Hello. I am going to let Fen handle this application for the talent. If it was up to me, I would probably allow this to go through, except there is one problem I spot. The immediate implication of blocking your RPC from getting a Main Style. Story-wise, your RPC was invited to the island for the sole purpose of testing out the Gene-X. Your description of how your character got this talent raises the issue that if you cannot have the Gene-X, the reaction to island staff would probably be the following... 1. They will either find no use for you, and "expel" you, (oddly enough, being Crew even I don't know what happens when students are "expelled" but I am pretty sure it's something close to death). 2. The staff see your immunity as a threat to their experiments and straight up murder you. 3. The staff see possible implications to be used from your blood and probably treat you as a lab experiment. Of course these are all just assumptions. I'll let Fen make the final decision, though I think you should know that the above 3 options will probably happen. Each one basically requires your character to keep running from those working for Akasun. Of course...once again all assumption..but something I think you and Fen should consider before letting this talent through. XD Fen said he'd allow it since it would add in some uniqueness to the RP. I'm just waiting for him to come approve it.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 7:25 pm
Enzio Kageryuu jwalker67 Enzio Kageryuu RPC Name: Valentino Tempesta Level: 1 Main Style: None Talent Description: This talent allows my RPC to learn 2 Sub-styles per rank. Talent Weakness: He looses the ability to gain a Main-Style entirely. How did the character get this talent?: Upon being invited to the island, his DNA was tested to see if he was eligible to take the Gene-X, while his genetic structure was shown to be able to take it, all the tests they had inserting the different strands of Gene-X into his DNA showed that he was immune to it. He could take the medication, but nothing would ever happen to him. Sample: Unsure on how to Rp this out. Hello. I am going to let Fen handle this application for the talent. If it was up to me, I would probably allow this to go through, except there is one problem I spot. The immediate implication of blocking your RPC from getting a Main Style. Story-wise, your RPC was invited to the island for the sole purpose of testing out the Gene-X. Your description of how your character got this talent raises the issue that if you cannot have the Gene-X, the reaction to island staff would probably be the following... 1. They will either find no use for you, and "expel" you, (oddly enough, being Crew even I don't know what happens when students are "expelled" but I am pretty sure it's something close to death). 2. The staff see your immunity as a threat to their experiments and straight up murder you. 3. The staff see possible implications to be used from your blood and probably treat you as a lab experiment. Of course these are all just assumptions. I'll let Fen make the final decision, though I think you should know that the above 3 options will probably happen. Each one basically requires your character to keep running from those working for Akasun. Of course...once again all assumption..but something I think you and Fen should consider before letting this talent through. XD Fen said he'd allow it since it would add in some uniqueness to the RP. I'm just waiting for him to come approve it. Yeah jwalker, I told him the same thing but after thinking about it some more I decided it would be alright for now. After all everyone is being secretly experimented on and monitored anyways so the only real difference is that his character will be monitored a little more closely. lol Approved.
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:34 am
RPC Name: Zeke Sevren (Pending)
Level: 1
Main Style: Lunar Dance
Talent Description: Starchild
Zeke has a second energy pool called 'Lunar Essence'. This 'Lunar Essence' mirrors Zeke's base Ki pool, but is used for specific purposes.
~Lunar Enhance: By expending a rank of what would normally be Ki, 'Lunar Essence' can buff an attack or a defense by one rank. (Using D 'Lunar Essence' to enhance a D-ranked tech to a C-ranked tech).
~Lunar Revive Zeke can transfer an equal amount of his 'Lunar Essence' to another person. (1 point of 'Lunar Essence' for 1 point of Ki) He cannot convert 'Lunar Essence' into Ki for himself, though. Tranfers this way heal wounds. (10 for cuts, 20 for gashes, 40 for deep wounds, 80 for fatal wounds) If he can get... 'close' to his target, the points are halved.
Talent Weakness: Zeke cannot access the 'Lunar Essence' until Level 2, and it cannot be replenished unless meditating under the moon. (New Moon nights do not count, and Full Moon nights double the amount received) At Level 2, Lunar Enhancement has a four post cool down, which does not lower until Level 5, when it becomes a 2 post cool down.
How did the character get this talent? When Zeke took the X-Gene, at first, he was not able to use it. It took weeks, months for the Lunar Dance to kick in. This was because during the DNA rewrite, one of the X-Gened cells mutated, and this mutation went through the process of rewriting everything a second time. The true potential of this mutation has yet to be uncovered.
Sample: Not sure how to play out the weaknesses without it sounding redundant...
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:01 am
This talent is too advanced for your character to develop simply by the level of 2, and would take extensive training to master, so I'm deciding that you cannot have this talent until level 5. Furthermore, your lunar essence pool cannot be the same as your base pool. I'm ruling that it be taken down to 1/5 the base pool.
Lunar Enhance can only be used to enhance Lunar Dance related skills, and to enhance it must pay the price of the skill that you raise it to in addition to the original cost. For example, if you want to raise a D-rank skill to a C-rank skill you will subtract a D-rank cost from your base pool and a C-rank skill cost from your Lunar Essence pool. Lunar Enhancement must always have a 4 post cooldown.
Lunar Revive's costs must be increased to match those of the ki system. 25 for cuts, 50 for gashes, 75 for deep wounds, 100 for fatal wounds. This can only be used on others, never on self wounds, and under no condition can the costs be lowered or halfed.
Because the guild does not have a lunar or weather system, no benefits can be given for meditating under a full moon.
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:36 am
Yea, figured it was a little on the OP side, but I wanted something no one else had thought of yet. What if... it was a stacking talent? Access to Lunar Essence at Level 4, Enhancement at 2, and Healing at 3? This is basically a talent that doesn't fully awaken until Level 5, giving only a small bonus each level until then. I agree with the costs, not really having something to compare to initially. And I agree with the Lunar Dance only detail. If this isn't acceptable... meh.
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 12:08 pm
iSuperKamiTenchi-kun Yea, figured it was a little on the OP side, but I wanted something no one else had thought of yet. What if... it was a stacking talent? Access to Lunar Essence at Level 4, Enhancement at 2, and Healing at 3? This is basically a talent that doesn't fully awaken until Level 5, giving only a small bonus each level until then. I agree with the costs, not really having something to compare to initially. And I agree with the Lunar Dance only detail. If this isn't acceptable... meh. No can do. I stretched my leniancy just to allow this talent to be accepted at all, and generally all Ki-related talents take several levels before learning, especially one that boosts the rank of skills.
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Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2012 6:48 pm
RPC Name:
Rain Lee
Level:
1
Main Style:
Smoke Shifter
Talent Description: Don't judge a book by it's cover:
She may look weak due to her height, size, body mass and lack of viewable muscles but don't let that fool you, she has incredible amounts strength and power when she fights and/or when kicking. Pretty much it means she has high power and strength behind her skills and kicks.
Talent Weakness:
When someone has something thats strong it means they lack something right? Defense is something she lacks the most because of this, she can make all the strong hits but when she gets hit by a strong attack she will go down faster than most people.
How did the character get this talent?:
It was more of how she was taught when she was younger, being that her family taught her how to make lightning fast kicks with power and speed and lack of defensive training she never got the chance to really train for taking a hit and keep going, she relies on her raw heavy power to take them down while not worrying about getting hit since her opponent is having trouble trying not to get hit again.
Sample:
Rain would look to the dummy she had put on a medium type of level and seeing how it put it's arms up it was a boxing type of dummy, she would raise her guarding stance and would wait for the dummy to attack first. When the dummy went in for a right jab to her she would shirt into her smoke form and would move behind the dummy and make a strong back kick straight into the Dummy's back. The impact of the kick was strong and made the dummy fly forwards at incredible speed and hit the wall but since it was on a medium level it didn't fall apart, instead it came to her. Rain would shift into her form again and would to the left as the dummy made another right jab as she moved to her right she was about to make a front kick to its chin the dummy would make a left hook to her side, she felt the attack hit and she would step back holding her side falling to one knee showing that the attack did a lot of damage. If it were a normal person the person would be having a hard time trying to move but this dummy wasn't one, the dummy didn't hesitate to attack again but this time Rain would step on its knee and shift behind it and make another strong back kick to the back of its head knocking it off of its body. Rain would then stand back up weakly holding her side still hurt from the left hook showing that she had good power she lacked lots of defense.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2012 9:04 pm
Rain: Denied. I need details in the talent description for how this effects the rp. Do her kicks get +1 rank or something? You say her is that she has more power in her skills but that is a very vague description.
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Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2012 10:42 pm
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RPC Name:Rain Lee Level:1 Main Style:Smoke Shifter Talent Description: Don't judge a book by it's cover: She may look weak due to her height, size, body mass and lack of viewable muscles but don't let that fool you, she has incredible amounts strength and power when she fights and/or when kicking. Pretty much it means she has high power and strength behind her kicks. All kick techniques are one rank stronger Ex: If one kick is an E rank technique then, because of her talent that technique will be a D rank skill Talent Weakness: When someone has something thats strong it means they lack something right? Defense is something she lacks the most because of this, she can make all the strong hits but when she gets hit by a strong attack she will go down faster than most people. How did the character get this talent?:It was more of how she was taught when she was younger, being that her family taught her how to make lightning fast kicks with power and speed and lack of defensive training she never got the chance to really train for taking a hit and keep going, she relies on her raw heavy power to take them down while not worrying about getting hit since her opponent is having trouble trying not to get hit again. Sample: Rain would look to the dummy she had put on a medium type of level and seeing how it put it's arms up it was a boxing type of dummy, she would raise her guarding stance and would wait for the dummy to attack first. When the dummy went in for a right jab to her she would shirt into her smoke form and would move behind the dummy and make a strong back kick straight into the Dummy's back. The impact of the kick was strong and made the dummy fly forwards at incredible speed and hit the wall but since it was on a medium level it didn't fall apart, instead it came to her. Rain would shift into her form again and would to the left as the dummy made another right jab as she moved to her right she was about to make a front kick to its chin the dummy would make a left hook to her side, she felt the attack hit and she would step back holding her side falling to one knee showing that the attack did a lot of damage. If it were a normal person the person would be having a hard time trying to move but this dummy wasn't one, the dummy didn't hesitate to attack again but this time Rain would step on its knee and shift behind it and make another strong back kick to the back of its head knocking it off of its body. Rain would then stand back up weakly holding her side still hurt from the left hook showing that she had good power she lacked lots of defense.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2012 11:10 pm
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