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 Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:30 pm
So... I guess you missed the part where the guild has a Subforum for Profiles.
I can't tell you how many rule infractions I have found within your profile.
I'll list them here:
If what you have put in your personality and biography section is even just a fraction of your literacy, I don't understand why you have such terrible physical descriptions of almost everything that requires one. It seems that you simply think these are unimportant, judging by the amount of effort you obviously input into the remainder of your profile.
Gran Rey Cero needs to be trained for, no ifs ands or buts.
Almost all of your powers, that you have actually taken the time to write out, are stolen. Your Shotgun Cero technique is an obviously ripped-off version of Starrk's Resurreccion. Your Espadas Convocadas attack is a Devil May Cry rip off, obviously enough because you even use a Devil May Cry video to aide in your lacking description.
Your Escudo del Diablo technique is an Auto-Block/Auto-Dodge technique, which is obviously against Guild Rules.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:49 pm
Addressed in order:
1. Meh. What I think deserves more description shouldn't matter to you. I think character development is more important than giving a full depth explanation on powers that can be explained in one or two sentences. Btw, I wouldnt be talking about "terrible descriptions" when you yourself use only a sentence or two to describe your abilities.
2. Understandable.
3. My character, which you might not recall, was here and used a year and a half ago when "Azien" first got into power in Las Noches and before the big attack against Earth. This was all well before Stark was introduced and seen in his second form. Also all my powers were approved way before this and yes "Espadas" is DMC based, but I found it to be an interesting concept.
4. Approved a year and a half ago, but I could see why it is against the rules.
I have defended myself in the best way possible. I speak the same way I am spoken to, so do not take offense.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:15 pm
Actually, as the Race Leader, it does matter to me how you describe your RPC, as others are more concerned with the description of your RPC than they are his development. It's not they who will be developing your RPC. However, they still need to be able to understand what kind of Character they are RPing with.
Secondly, yes, my Zanpakuto abilities are not described in full, seeing as a whole new section is being written. I have only recently been promoted into this position and have focused upon making this area presentable, rather than the dump it was before.
Thirdly, you didn't sign in before the deadline for the activity check, and therefore your RPC was considered dead. Therefore, your RPC was no longer in existence. Therefore, your RPC shall be considered a new addition to this race, provided you can get it up to code.
Furthermore, the guild has recently made new rules regarding Zanpakuto and other Character-Unique powers. Any powers resembling the powers of Canon Characters are considered Banned Powers. As your RPC is now considered new, it doesn't fall under any form of a hypothetical "grandfathering" system. Your Devil May Cry ability would also fall under the Canon rules, as it explicitly states that Canon also encompasses powers stolen from other media, as well.
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:10 am
1. Personality?
2. Understandable
3. Also understandable seeing as how this character has not been "alive" technically for about a year.
4. I have not read that so I thank you for the heads up. I will erase that power and edit "Escudo del Diablo"
What else do you think I need to fix other than descriptions for powers?
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:34 pm
I'm looking for more detail describing what he looks like. Sometimes, using specific adjectives, rather than just images, assists when other RPers are interacting with you, so they know how to describe your character the way you want them to.
That, and his Resureccion needs a bit more detail as far as physical appearance goes.
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:59 pm
Name:
Tsukino, Hazuki
Nickname(s)/Alias(es):
N/A
Race:
Arrancar
Age:
Actual age: 739
Appearance age: ~21
Height:
5’ 9”
Weight:
129 lbs
Rank: Numeros 37
Personality:
Hazuki has two distinctive sides, which appear to acknowledge each other as individuals. Most of the time the personality that is seen is actually the less dominant one, who is shy and timid, keeping quiet and out of the way. She is easily intimidated and appears weak. She prefers to stay back but isn’t to be mistaken. More often than not she is fully aware of everything that is happening and is well aware of the small nuisances that could hint at what the person is going to do, or who they are. The dominant personality is technically sealed by her sword, although she claims that the real reason she stays back is in order to keep the peace. The dominant side is the far less human side and tends to show several wolf like traits. She is calm and confident, and doesn’t give way to those she sees as below her. It is best not to get into a staring match with this side, as she takes that to be a sign of challenge, with the loser looking away first. She has no issues with causing pain and is more than willing to fight. She can be lazy and the littlest things grate on her nerves. This dominant side appears mainly when her sword is drawn or away from her side (thus the release of the seal), although it is distinctly possible that she will surface at other times.
Physical Description:
Hazuki is far from short although her height isn’t beyond what a normal human’s would be. She slouches horribly however (at least when the less dominant side is in charge). She is somewhat skinny, with long lean muscles capable of surprising strength. Most of that is hidden however since her outfit usually includes a long coat done in the usual Arrancar colors. Usually worn open it still does a considerable job at hiding as much skin as possible. Her outfit beneath the coat consists of simple white slacks, as well as a loose V neck with no sleeves and an open back. Her deep black hair is usually worn loose and straight, stretching down her back easily. Her bangs are split down the middle, steadily getting longer as they fade back into her hair. While even the shortest are enough to cover her eyes they tend to be drawn to their respective side. Her face is most often open and easy to read, with her eyes being the dead giveaway as to which side of her is in charge. The normal side has eyes that seem wide and innocent, with her thoughts written clearly, however when the dominant side takes over, they narrow slightly, and become darker, almost impossible to read. The remains of her hollow mask are simple enough, a necklace of wolves’ teeth around her neck, which more often than not is hidden by her coat. Her hollow hole is located at the base of her neck, and is similarly hidden.
Zanpakutou:
Sealed Form:
The blade is a deep reflective black, with a curious tribal like marking just below the hilt that when closely studied is revealed to be an intricate seal. It is a little over 4 feet long, total. The hilt is wrapped in deep almost black fabric with a small guard in a vaguely circular shape.
Resurrección Name/Release Phrase:
Name: Akuma ookami (Demon wolf)
Release Phrase: Howl to the Moon, Akuma ookami
Resurrección Description:
When Hazuki releases, the dominant personality takes full control, and loses any restrictions she had about killing. Her eyes turn completely white and her vision suffers greatly, however her hearing, smell, and Pesquisa are spiked. She becomes somewhat wolf like, with a long tail, as well as furry ears. Her hands lengthen somewhat, the nails growing long, pointed, as nearly as deadly as her similarly lengthened blade. Her teeth change as well, becoming sharper with the canines distinctly pointed. When in this form her speed is at least doubled if not tripled.
Resurrección Powers/Attacks:
Hazuki's release grants her the ability to control and solidify shadows, limited only by how much her own shadow is in contact with. Because of this she is at her best when in areas that have a brilliant light, where shadows are cast by anything and everything. She can call upon her shadow to take any form she deems fit, bending the rules of how far a shadow would naturally go. Even in areas of darkness she is able to use the shadows by lightning the area with a cero (Most likely the reason she mastered it to a level where she could hold it steady without firing.) Her favored technique is to overlap her shadow with the person she is fighting. It actually doesn't do much as far as power goes, it is simply that her theory is that it is very had to outrun your own shadow.
Special Accessories:
Her sword acts somewhat as a seal, being that when it is sheathed her personality, as well as acting as a dampener on her power. Any time that it is away from her, or so much as cracked form the sheath, it is as if she becomes a different person.
Skills:
Sword –She has a mastery of single sword styles.
Hand to Hand – Fair but with lots of room to improve
Abilities:
Cero – Her cero mastery is exceptional, to a point where she can fire it instantaneously if she wishes. More what that level is for however, is in order to gain the ability to hold it stable. She is able to hold the full cero back and keep it from firing, her personal color of brilliant white working far better than any form of fire. Her cero can be fired from either hand.
Garganta
Hierro
Pesquisa – Due to her poor eyesight in her original hollow form her Pesquisa was her primary sense. Even when she became an Arrancar and regained her eyes, her Pesquisa remained her primary sense. For her it works somewhat like sonar, with her able to tell the general level, as well as pinpoint location.
Sonído
Biography/History:
Living: Hazuki lived a fairly normal life for her time. She was a woodsman’s daughter and loved spending her time out among the trees, or with the more wolf than dog pets that her family kept. She learned the requirements of a woman at the time and culture, to be a shy timid thing who gave in to the requests of those who were above her, which at the time was almost everyone. However she loved the forest, and the freedom it represented. At least, she loved it until it killed her. While wandering in the forest with several of the wolf dogs her father kept, she stumbled across several bandits. In the resulting chaos most of the wolf dogs who tried to defend her were killed, and she suffered fatal injuries herself, only just managing to get away and hide before succumbing.
Soul: Hazuki actually didn’t much mind being dead. The dogs who had been with her stayed with her even as ghosts and she was finally free of societies demands. Most of her time she spend wandering the forest, carefully avoiding the tree where her body was. Sometimes she congratulated herself on that hiding spot, wedged under the roots of an old oak tree. The search parties never found her, although they did find the blood and the dogs. She spent her love of freedom however and longed to return to her family, even seeing the usefulness and beauty of such an unfair social system. Guessing that her days were numbered by the chain coming from her, she could do nothing but wait and see what would happen.
Hollow: Hazuki’s transformation was nothing more than that she ran out of time, and the situation called for her to do something. For all the searching that had been done throughout the months in the forest, the bandits who had originally killed her had not been found. Unfortunately they found someone else. The little girl had been a fool, wandering in the woods with no protection and no knowledge of what she was doing. The sheer noise she was causing attracted both Hazuki’s attention, as well as the bandits who she was haunting at the time. The thing Hazuki hadn’t counted on however was that the girl could see ghosts, although again, she had no idea what she was doing. In desperation she grabbed onto the tiny stub of Hazuki’s chain left, and ripped it off.
In a way the girl go her wish, the bandits stopped trying to bother her. Unfortunately the hollow that was created, at that time far too new to have any self or control killed everything it could. Surprisingly the hollow that was created wasn’t just Hazuki alone; when she started to transform, the wolf dogs with her melded into her form. Also surprising, this creature had no eyesight, with nothing but milky white orbs as eyes, instead she relyed on hearing, smell, and her ability to sense other’s Reiatsu. It wasn’t until after the creature had killed anything and everything around it that it once again took on a self, although this Hazuki now had the attitude of the lead wolf dog. She found little interest in the human, and only devoured them when it was convenient. It wasn’t long however before she met another hollow. They two clashed and Hazuki found herself enjoying the fight. When the hollow attempted to retreat she followed. Finding far more entertainment in battling in hueco mundo she stayed there, her ferocity in battle gaining her power quickly. It wasn’t long before she joined several other hollows, the wolf’s need to be in a pack showing. Together they traveled menos forest, attacking when the opening was good enough to take. Slowly the group fell apart as the hollows became Gillian. When Hazuki’s turn came she accepted it, and sought to get through it quickly. Becoming an Adjuchas, she continued to fight, with the dream of becoming a vasto lorde. One of her previous companions joined her in the quest, the last two remaining of the original group. Unfortunatly that soon came to an end when they picked a fight with someone who turned out to almost be more powerful. The companion suffered a massive wound that would have killed him, and using the distraction Hazuki finally took down the creature, only a few steps short of dead herself. The companion demanded that Hazuki devour him, so that all of his effort didn’t go to waste and that his power would continue on. In doing so she ascended to Vasto Lorde level, although she was far from happy. Not finding anyone to join with her in a new group she left for Las Noches, no really thinking that it was real, but willing to try. Once there she was accepted (after having gotten into a fight and destroyed the other hollow that was waiting) and quickly changed to an arrancar.
Rp Example
Hazuki yawned, itching to do something, anything. Instead she sat as still as she could, waiting. This was completely pointless, and the hollow across from her was getting on her nerves. For all that she looked like a weak little wolf; she could easily rip that grinning, smug look right off of his face. Why even think of a wolf as weak in the first place anyway? I really should teach him why assuming gets you little more than… Taking a deep breath she caught herself; that would be a bloody fight, even if she would win. This creature was too close to her in power for her to expect to get away without having to actually work at beating him. She glanced at the massive doors into the throne room, she wanted all of her strength to go in front of this so called ruler.
She leaned back, perfectly content to dose off, if that annoying creature across would have let her. He looked like some kind of cat, and had similar habits to one. The most annoying thing however was some sort of shiny bell thing he had, and was toying with. The high pitched ringing was driving her insane. Forcing herself not to growl at him, she closed her eyes and rested her head against the wall.
Tsk, brave fool. The cat had moved closer, thinking her asleep no doubt. Which, to be fair she had been, but years of living in the sands had taught her that any hollow that sleeps anything but lightly, is a dead hollow. She remained perfectly still however, until the cat was so close she could feel his breath. Her eyes snapped open and her hand shot out, touching his throat lightly, right on top of the artery. “Back away now, or I will kill you.” She growled, her eyes narrowing as her power rose. The cat did little more than smirk. He stared into her eyes, and her instinct showed itself. She stared right back, not so much as batting an eye until he backed away. Only then did she lean back once more, her eyes closing.
The peace was short lasted. The cat just couldn’t leave her alone, and couldn’t stop with that annoying bell thing. Her eyes opened just enough to catch his attention, her teeth bared, “Quit, or I will stop that annoying thing for you.” The cat grinned before holding up the bell, flicking it until the ring again resounded. Hazuki had had enough. First this waiting for hours on end for something she didn’t even care that much about, than being stuck with this thing, the ringing. Her power flared as she surged forward, the motion of getting her feet under her lost. Seemingly instantaneously her hand was in front of her, claws aimed for that annoying piece of metal. She pulled back however, twitching her aim just a bit so that she grabbed the bell, slowly crushing it while staring into the cat’s eyes. He didn’t like that; he didn’t like that at all. He hissed and leapt, taking her to the ground. The scuffle only lasted a few seconds before they both backed off, knowing that fighting now would not be the best of ideas. Instead they went to their respective sides and Hazuki at least tried to ignore the other.
The wait wasn’t much longer. Finally the massive doors opened, giving Hazuki a good excuse to leapt to her feet. The cat however, seemed to forget that she had been there long before him. They stopped in the center of the hall, trying to stare each other down for who would be first to enter. The cat was nervous, his Reiatsu pouring off of him in an attempt to intimidate her. She didn’t flinch, and slowly, gracefully her own rose, snuffing his out. To his credit he didn’t back down, and the two stood, a silent battle of wills. This is keeping the ruler of Las Noches waiting. I doubt he will be very happy about that, but then, he can blame this annoying cat.
Finally the cat looked away and she grinned, only to be knocked backwards as he lashed out. Snarling, not even bothering with words, she came to her feet, her shirt ripped, revealing the four thin lines across her stomach. Hazuki’s Reiatsu flared, a final warning before she retaliated. She tried to play nice, tried to avoid destroying any more than needed, but that was easier said than done. The fight poured into the throne room, Hazuki on the losing side. The cat was far faster than she was, and had no issues with destroying anything and everything that got in his way. As soon as she glanced up however, she grinned. The throne room wasn’t like the artificial sun outside, or the lit hallway. It was filled with shadows, with the main light source pouring through the doorway, casting a long shadow on anyone who entered. Going to one knee she waited, listening to the cat dance in circles around her, taunting her. Something about how much of a weak little dog she was. Like she cared. His mistake for not continuing to attack her since she was down. He should have already figured out that going from sitting, or even laying on the ground to attacking was not a matter of seconds, but a fraction, even if she had suffered a little from his claws. She had to make this count, they were both in the throne room, and while she didn’t know if the cat had noticed or not, they were being watched by the ruler of Las Noches, and two others. The cat’s steps were patterned, which meant that she could guess where he would be next. Sloppy of him Drawing in a deep breath, she moved, the two hollows appearing back to back, Hazuki’s shadow overlaying the cat’s. She grinned, before rounding on him, the layered shadows flaring around either side should he try to sidestep. Her teeth connected with his throat, wolf’s teeth digging deep. The cat flailed, trying to get her to release him. Like that will happen, once my teeth are in, not even death will convince me to let go. As it was however the cat was at an odd angle, and couldn’t get too much power into his strikes. She brought him to the ground, burying her knee in his gut and only when he stopped moving did she let go. A low growl still continued in her throat as she stared down at the creature. For now he was still alive, although it might be far better if he didn’t try to move for a while, his throat was torn open, although she could see it beginning to heal. Bringing one hand up she half heartedly wiped the blood from her face, licking it off absently. It was several minutes before she decided that the cat wasn’t going to do anything.
She turned, bowing low to the leader of Las Noches. Her eyes meeting his for the briefest of seconds before dropping, she had no wish to challenge him, him who stared at the carnage in his own throne room with a slight smile on his face. A shinigami the lord of a bunch of hollows, that certainly wasn’t expected. She sighed mentally. I really should have done a little more research before showing up Either way she was here, and there was no changing anything now. The lord stood, staring down at her. She refused to move, even when the cat behind her did. Fool, stay down where you belong. Stand up again and it will be the last time you ever do. Her eyes flickered backward, noting that the cat had done little more than roll over and try to cover his throat. That she didn’t care about, her focus was on the man in front of her.
“That was very good, but why didn’t you kill him?” Hazuki started slightly, she hadn’t been expecting him to say that. She glanced back before grinning, “I had no intention of getting into a fight, and in truth, I would rather not have. I saw no reason to kill him, and thus did not.” She turned slightly, staring at the cat with a hunter’s eyes, “That can of course be changed.” She met the cat’s eyes, his heartbeat flowing through her for just a moment before she cut it off, turning back to the king of Las Noches and dropped to one knee, “Milord, I ask if I can join your ranks.” Her answer was silence, although she glanced up anxiously just in time to see him nod.
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:09 pm
Your profile amuses me; not in a negative, sarcastic fashion.
It's that your RPC is essentially the amalgamation of the two Arrancar I had created for this guild, with the exception of gender.
I would like to pose this question for you, as I have used Shadow powers, as well.
How can one discern Shadows from Darkness?
I view Shadows as "Blocked Light," where Darkness is "Absence of Light."
To extend a Shadow, there needs to be light to serve as an opposite end or negative. Otherwise, one would not be able to tell if there was even a Shadow to begin with.
So, my view on this subject is that an RPC with powers over Shadows are, in fact, weakest in total darkness, as your RPC would not have a shadow.
So, I recommend, instead of making your RPC strongest in the Dark, adding a Light Source to your Ressureccion to create more shadows than before.
Secondly, I know that you want a foolproof attack, but nothing is "impossible" to block. As a Reiatsu based attack, high levels of Reiatsu would be able to defend against a Shadow attack.
Those are my recommendations.
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:28 pm
Quote: It's that your RPC is essentially the amalgamation of the two Arrancar I had created for this guild, with the exception of gender. Sorry about that. I had wondered if my character wouldn't be close to someone else's. Is that an issue? hmm, difference between Shadows and Darkness. I have never had someone ask me that before, and actually never considered it. Probably go with Shadows being the result of something being between the light and the resulting shadow and darkness being the lack or light or qualities of light.
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:54 pm
It's not a problem.
It would have been if you had plagiarized from those profiles, though.
I am glad you appreciate my insight in the matter.
Once you have made the proper revisions to your profile, you may link the thread in the Las Noches Profiles thread.
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:32 am
Name:
Nicolba baldamora
Ni-col-ba / bal-da-mor-a
Number:
50
Aliases/ Nicknames:
Nanpa
Nan-pa
Physical Description: 
Nicolba is a skinny man. Standing only five feet five inch's. His hair a blood red and pitch black combo. Only about six inch's or so at its longest and shinny. Well kept and groomed. His cloths also well kept. Nicolba seems to take great pride is in looks. The four horns that jet from the corners of his mask shin in the light. Each one curves back to form a kind of cage around his head that once past the crest of his skull end there curving and jet straight back. The mast has a kind of wind swapped look almost, Each horn point only goes about two inch's past the back of his skull. His hair flowing around the horns. A tuft of blood red hair always laying just over the front of his mask between the two top most horns. His eyes a pitch black void only broken by his snow white retina's that seems able to look into the souls of this he looks at. His hole face is covered in a single peace mask only broken by his jaw line. Two large fangs jet down form the two jaw and hang over the bottom jaw. A necklines of small hollow skulls hangs lose on his neck. He sports a uniform of red, black and white with only a small amount of gold to be seen. His coat has a fur coating that covered the hole of the inside as well as the rim of the coat. A small clasp for closing it if cold. His shirt flowing down past his waist. A dark red but once past the waist turns jet black. It cuts off into a different style of make as it comes from a skin tight shirt to a lose fitting skirt for better coverage and movement.He wears baggy pants that seem way to big for his size. A gold belt with a small trinket clasp on it. A pare of standard sandals. His sword hung on his back with out scavered.A short but slim tail protrudes from under his coat
His voice an echoing sound that seems to reverberate in small rooms.Even his breathing seems to echo.
Zanpacto & Resurreccion:
Nicolba's Zanpakutou
Sealed Form: Nicolba's Zanpakutou is about three feet long and four inch's wide. A dull black purple color. Its very ornate look makes it look more like a decoration then a weapon. Its only blade is at the tip in a hock form. Four small skulls run down the same side as the blade hock. The blade can extend like a wipe, each segment that is decorated with a skull can extend six feet by a thin wire. The full length of the blade when at is full extension it twenty-four feet.
Resurrección Name/Release Phrase:
Resurrección Name:Wonder Land Nightmares
Release Phrase:Awaken Doppelganger of Dreams
Resurrección Description:
Nicolba Swings his Zanpakutou in the air at its full length to almost form a wind mill effect. Slashing throw the air, the wind screams out as if in pain. Red lines form in the air as Nicolba quickly draws his Zanpakutou back in, causing the wind to with draw in with it. This draws in the red lines that then seem to splatter all over Nicolba like paint. As the wind and unknown red paint like substance flow around as if trapped in a dieing tornado a low echoing scream slowly comes to life. Then just as it seems the wind and red pain are about to fall to the floor three giant hollow chameleon burst forth. There short but razor sharp teeth born white , tongs flopping in the wind. There pure white as they come form the tornado but as the red pain falls on there skin tribe markings are magically painted down there back legs and face. There eyes twitching in every direction. Tongs jetting out to taste the air around them. Each standing about 5 feet tall and 13 feel long. small worthless wings on there back and stubby tails. Each one has different marking on its back. A miasma poison flows around them making there almost unview-able.
Zanpakutou Resurrección
As the wind blows upwards into the sky it blows up small parts of the red pain. As more and more of this strange substance fly's into the sky it begins to form the final form of Nicolba's Zanpakutou. At first it goes totally unnoticed how ever the large swords begin to form and slowly drop down into view. As the wind flows up it seems to hit the red pain and combine into the newly forming structure. Soon enough it to is fully formed. As the chameleon's look around scanning there environment this structure simple floats in the air high above the ground and out of danger of the battle to come.
Nicolba's Resurrección
Special Accessories:
He has a Gold Ring on his right hand that once belonged to his former owner while he was still alive as a pet chameleon.
Abilities:
Nicolba is seemingly able to walk on walls ceilings with out the use of his Reiatsu. Hes very fast and agile on his feet making him a hard target to hit head on. His style of sword play as just has evasive. Using sword slaps to counter stabs. upper cuts to block slashes and a combo of rolling and dodging to avoided hacks or any thing else thrown his way. He only using one arm as he uses the other to balance him self as well as perform acrobatic moves.
The ability to see people in Reiatsu, kinda like seeing in heat vision. This can be turned on and off. Each person is a different color.
Personality:
While Nicolba might not act very smart in battle every thing he does is a planned out step of attack. His wisdom and cunning might go unseen but to him that's a plus. He makes him self seem unreliable so others under estimate his ability's and he can better trick them into his traps. While extremely sly, cunning and wise he is not with out his moments. He still has no real under standing of what the difference is between a hollow and a Shinigami and to him its of little concern. In fact his been known to simply let a Shinigami go. He has little consideration for the sides of witch one is on.
Nicolba Is a quite person preferring to think rather then speak. He doesn't really have any thing against Shinigami him self, how ever he wont think twice to kill one if need be. He can normally be found face down in a book in some far off corner of Las Noches. He doesn't like fighting if he can avoid it. Using tactic's to trap and subdue an enemy rather then kill them out right. He wont use his Resurrección unless he knows he has no other choice. His ability to fight hand to hand and with a sword makes him a triple threat. He seems to fight in steps. First using hand to hand combat styles of martial arts then drawing his sword, then finally and only if need be using his Resurrección. He Gives people the feeling his on some kind of drugs as his eyes are rarely fully open, his over all movements slow and some times animated almost. He speaks in a low tone and with very little feeling behind the words. Even when mad he seems to have no emotions or at the very least hides them very well.
Biography/History:
Nicolba was once a pet chamelaon that lived with an old man that collected rare animals with what he called "super powers". He had lived a happy long life. But soon the old man died, no one found his body for over a month and in that time Nicolba with no food or water soon died him self. It wasn't long after how ever his old owner returned looking for his old pets, only now as a hollow. It was only then that Nicolba become self aware, but it wasnt to much effect. Nicolba's soul was unfortunately eaten and he him self become a low ranking hollow.
Over the years he become more and more self aware until finally he was on the same level as a human. Over the years he'd watched as other hollows were killed by people known as Shinigami. He learned there fighting styles and combat rules. They were well organized and equipped. They had powers unlike any thing he'd ever seen before. Over the years he learned how best to fight back against them and how best to trick them into his traps so he could eat them. He soon grew to the rank of an Arrancar how ever and his own powers began to grow.
He made his way to Hueco Mundo to learn more about what he was and to become stronger. It was there he learned just how powerful he really was. He had thought him self powerful but now saw he was nothing compared to some. He was given a numbering his rank. a uniform and finally training to fully unlock his powers.
Powers:
Chameleon's[
Name:Everlasting horror
Effect:The chameleon's all have the ability to turn invisible for a short time but only if there not moving.
Name:Trilogy Senses
Effect: Each chameleon is able to both see and hear what the other two see and hear. As well as relay this information back to me.
Name:Art of Chameleon
Effect:Each chameleon can spit an acid like ooze. Use its tong witch stretches out over 20 feet like a wipe and or rope to both grab and draw a target in closer. Breath miasma [ aka-Poison ] and they have power jaws and sharp claws. They can not use a cero's or other arrancar powers.
Structure
Name:Never Ending Volley
Effect:The structure fires off a furry of spikes in a large wide spread area. The spikes are about a foot long each and very thin.
Name:Falling Towers
Effect:Each of the four giant swords that surround the structure begin to stab, slash and hack randomly at the ground.
Name:Standing Solder
Effect:This is the only time the structure's move's and can only be used once the three chameleons have been killed. The structure slowly falls down to the ground. Each giant sword digging deep into the earth to stand up straight.
The giant four armed hollow like statue that sits on the top of the platform stands up, grabbing the four swords. It attacks like a normal person would. Its movements can be quite slow due to its size.
Nicolba's none Resurrección Powers:
Name:Eye of the chameleon
Effect:Able to see in all directions at once, in the exception of behind him. Any thing between the space between his ears in the back is beyond his view.He is also able to lock eyes onto a target and almost never lose track of it.
Name:Skin of the chameleon
Effect:Able to change the colors of his self and his cloths to match any back ground. Also able to hide his spiritual presser for a short time. Cant use this while moving !
Role-Play Example:Nicolba stud in a sea of sand for as far as the eye could see. This was Hueco Mundo. world of the hollows. Giant red objects stud guard like stepping stones for some giant beast to use when it would talk down from the skys. Tree's that seemed to be made a stone with out a single leaf on there branches could be seen every few yards apart from one another. Only one other living creature was in view of Nicolba. another arrancar level hollow. This one a small girl. She wasn't any thing special. Smaller then Nicolba by a good two feet almost she held a sword, her Zanpakutou. It two was nothing special, looking like a normal katana."Scream into infinity blutterflaaar !" Screamed the girl as she let lose her Resurrección. Steam pored from her Zanpakutou soon obscuring his view of her.Giant black butterfly wing burst form the steam followed by two antenna and finally with a blast of air she stub before him in her true form. Nicolba hadn't even drawn his Zanpakutou simply watching with half open eyes at this meager display of force. "NOW DIED YOU ARGENT b*****d !" She attacked with her antenna like wipes, it was so fast it caused small waves in the sand. Nicolba's eyes seemed to split views one watching the right side the other the left side. Nicolba waited till the last second to even move, he simply turned side ways and stepped forward and to the right. Both attacks missed. The girl was in total shock. While she tried to comprehend what had just happened Nicolba simply grabbed both antenna and squeezed them in his hands until broke like twigs.The girl cringed in pain. "you a** hole IMA KILL YOU !"
It came in a flash, Nicolba had used Pesquisa and was now behind her. His Zanpakutou drawn. He had cut her so fast she hadn't even have the time to see it never mind dodge or block it. Off fell one of her wings. Blood prayed into the air. The girl fell down in over whelming pain. Nicolba pit his Zanpakutou back onto his back and walked away. The girl wasn't done how ever sending one last attack his way. She sent a third antenna straight for his face. He hadn't even though to fully disarm her before trying to leave. His face finally showed some emotion. it was fear. the antenna had a sharp spear end to it he didn't have time to dodge the attack, he was going to get hit. and badly. The attack was with in a foot of his face when some thing woke him up. [ Yeah it was a dream XD you failed ] Nicolba eyes opened and his head lifted straight up at an ungodly speed. Eyes blinking fasts, his pulse was up. It had only been a dream. He looked down to see that the book he had been reading was now covered in drool. He let out a slite displeased grown and tried wiping it clean.
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 5:53 pm
Once TheWickedTruth approves your profile, I will be more than happy to take you in, as I most highly trust her opinion on matters such as profiles, even though I have a great deal of experience myself.
So, once it is up to snuff in her eyes, I can accept you.
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 9:09 am
Name: Triox Azamura (reincarnation,powers sealed) Aliases/ Nicknames: · Triox Age: Appearance of an 20 year old.  Physical Description: Triox azamura takes the appearance of a young man in mid 20,s.Standing at a height of 1.85m his uncovered grey colored eye gazes towards his opponent. last seen he had waist length white hair which covered the left half of his face hiding a bone patch which covered his left eye.Mostly dressed in a long white coat (similar to that of ullquiora.) and a pair of white pantaloons with a par of sandals made from a bone like material. Zanpaktou: Due to his overwhelming reiatsu he was forced to seal his powered into three vessels.Three sword which each held an ability that the arrancar possessed.The power to protect,the power to destroy,and the power to control. Innocence: Created with an defensive nature it as the ability to protect its user with barriers which are made by releasing a high pressure of reiatsu around him.Even tho most people find this blade to be most useful the arrancar Triox Azamura despised the ability hence sealing it into a bladed form.If possible he would prefer to enter the battle field without this sword. Innocence is a sword made from a glass like substance just like its sheath it is see through and has a pure feeling to it.In it's sealed state it seems multiple chains are wrapped around it to keep it from unsheathing. corruption: Forged from the everlasting hatred which dwelled within Triox Azamura's soul towards the shinigami's.After they had everything from him his so called sibling,friends and even the one he had loved.Everything was gone.not being able to contain his own anger he sealed it away into his second blade named "Corruption" known for it's destructive capabilities. Constantly pouring out reiatsu each swing he sends out a pulse of destruction. Corruption has no other objective than to destroy everything in site along with innocence it is sealed with multiple chains to prevent unsheathing.A completely black blade and sheath covered by rusty chains the blade looks terribly worn down to the point one more slash might force it to shatter to bits. Zerox: Reiatsu manipulation. Zerox the true reason this arrancar was able to survive all of the shinigami assaults.Within this blade lies his ability to manipulate reiatsu. Special Accessories: An eye patch made from a bone substance. It is not yet known what the purpose for his eye patch is. .:General Abilities:. Cero: is a highly powerful and relatively swift energy blast that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Menos, Arrancar, and Vizard have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently and forcefully. Cero also requires some time to be used effectively, so the enemy must be either not moving or busy with something else, or too badly wounded to even simply dodge it, with the exception of a few Cero techniques and users. Additionally, there exists quite a number of variations of Cero, which are usually unique to the Arrancar using it. Garganta: Is how Hollows and Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen, Kisuke Urahara and recently Mayuri Kurotsuchi have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. Negación: Fields are used to rescue fellow Hollows. Only the Gillian-class Menos have shown the ability to use it. Espada have a special cube-shaped device called Caja Negación (反膜の匪 (カハ・ネガシオン), kaha negashion; Spanish for "Negation Box", Japanese for "Anti-Membrane of Negation") (Caja de Negación in the English dub) meant to simulate Negación fields, which are used to trap and punish their subordinates if necessary. High-Speed Regeneration is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs. Only Menos-class Hollows have demonstrated this ability. Ulquiorra states that most Arrancar gave up Regeneration for far greater strength. .:Unique Abilities:. Soul distortion.[[Signature move.]] The ability to partially nullify reiatsu.This abilitie can only be activated when touching the blade "Zerox" if not touched the abilities is reversed and his own reiatsu is sealed. Soul reflection. The ability to deflect certain attacks. An extremely limited technique. . razz assive:. Soul siphon: In his released form this passive ability activates which allows him to subconsciously constantly absorb small reiatsu particles around him .:Resurrection:. [[Distort the balance zerox!]] After being forced to go into going full force.Throwing the three blades into the sky slamming his fist together his airborne blades dissolve into reiatsu particles which rain down upon the arrancar before swirling in a violent whirlwind of reiatsu.Wrapping around the arrancars they become part of his skin,clothing and form a faceless mask around his face.from the back of the mask a long strapped ponytail sprouts from a hole.his clothes remain the same long white coat along wit the white pants and sandals.This form has shown not to use any swords nor weapons.Instead he uses a combination of his "innocence" and "zerox" ability to create objects. (swords etc..) Boi coming soon dont have the time right now.
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:42 pm
Former Numero 90 and former 9th Espada re-applying. Just to note, I'm using the old RP example that I originally used with this profile. If you want me to change it I can. Name:Human Name: Keiji Fukushima Arrancar Name: Zankairou Barragielle Den'Jaron (Pronounced: Zan-kai-row Ba-ra-gi-el Den-ga-ron) Number:90 Aliases/ Nicknames:Zan Physical Description:Zankairou stands at 10" tall as something of a tall-giant. With pure black hair that looks something in similarity to a lion's mane, instead of covering around his head however it has been pushed back and only furthers out behind him until ending in a point around waist length. His eyes are a light blue colour across dark-tanned skin. Zankairou's body is fairly buffed up and his appearance seems to want to flaunt off having muscles as indicated by his upper clothing being nothing more than a vest fashioned in the style of the Arrancar uniform - the vest is white across the most of the vest with black outlining the main details would the golden embroidery of two dragons making there climb up from the bottom of the vest to the shoulders where the heads stop - embroidered in a motion as if they are going to jointly bite Zankairou's neck - the back of the vest is completely plain for whatever reason, the vest length stops just after Zankairou's chest leaving the lower part of his upper body completely revealed (probably to flaunt the muscles on his body as said above). Zankairou wears wrapped up bandages on his hands as makeshift fingerless gloves which stretch over his hands, covering his wrists and stopping a short ways up his arms. While the remains of his hollow mask sits on the left side of his chin going around to just below his ear. Although none of the teeth from the mask are present a large fang (in resemblance to a Saber-tooth Tiger's fang) reaches off of the mask coming below Zankairou's chin by a few centimeters. Zankairou's Hollow hole is located at the center point of his chest easily pointing out that part of his spinal cord should be missing even though it doesn't effect his physical functioning in any way. For his lower body Zankairou's garments are something most would consider unconventional, wearing armoured leggings and boots that is white with black out-linings and golden links passed through the chain mail that bears itself visible on the back of the knees of the leggings and at the crotch area - as underlay for the rest of the armour. On the back of his lower body he wears a kama following the same white and black motif with more golden embroidery this time the embroidery is in the shape of Kirin with smoke coming from it's nostrils. Zankairou is always seen standing or sitting up right, commonly with his arms crossed or his arms folded over his back with his Zanpaku-tou being held in between his arms and the back of his neck. When in combat Zankairou always wields his Zanpaku-tou with his right hand regardless of which state it is in, in some cases when his Zanpaku-tou is in Resurreccion he will wield the halberd with both hands at the bottom end as if it is a rather-lengthy sword, he usually does this when he wishes to ensure the attack will have some range and that both his hands can be used to put force on the attack. Zanpaku-tou & Resurreccion:Sanguijuela de Almas (Leech of Souls) Release Command: Feed, Sanguijuela de Almas Sanguijuela de Almas in it's sealed form takes the form of a normal katana. With a squared guard that is black and outlined in a dull-gold colour, the sheath and hilt are a bright red with links of chain attached to the bottom end of the sheath that is re-connected at the top end. The Zanpaku-tou is usually worn on Zankairou's back from the left side with the links of chain worn diagonally across Zankairou's chest. When Sanguijuela de Almas is released the weapon become a large Chinese Halberd. With the shaft being a bright red like the hilt and sheath in it's sealed state. The blade comes out in a sort-of box like appearance the center blade being where the other parts extend and return from. At the starting of the blade it crosses out much like a cross-bladed spear the two crossed blades fold around up-words and and then fold inward to meet the center blade once again - where the blades folded into meet the center continue up for a final bend in meeting the blade just before it's peak at the tip. On his body the bleached-white bone-like Hollow material that makes up the mask of a Hollow covers his entire right arm. On his hand and wrist it looks an armoured-gauntlet while the rest of the arm looks pretty plain up until it reaches the shoulder where it extends out as a pauldron with two spikes protruding from it. Four thin curved points extend out from the arm and onto the chest curving around and stopping near the stomach area. The reformed mask covers up Zankairou's entire face with right-angled triangle openings for the eye holes. The teeth on the mouth area are mainly rectangular except for the two lengthy fangs from the upper row that come down and pass by the jaw for a few centimetres. Up above the eye where the eyebrows should start is a group of three triangles in a deep green colour that form a larger triangle with noticeable spaces in between each of the three triangles. The top of the mask comes up over Zankairou's head stopping just after passing over the top of his forehead. Absorción (Absorption): The main ability of Sanguijuela de Almas is that it absorbs the Spiritual Energy of the enemies it cuts. Specifically the wound must draw blood and the blood must at the very least be visible on Sanguijuela de Almas' blade. Once blood has been drawn Sanguijuela de Almas' blade will begin to radiate a deep green glowing pulse (the pulse beats every few seconds), the pulse shows the fact that an invisible link has been formed between Sanguijuela de Almas and the wounded enemy's body. Sanguijuela de Almas slowly starts to absorb the Spiritual Energy from this link and will not be stopped unless Zankairou's Resurreccion ends or the opponent is sapped of all of there Spiritual Energy and is killed. The absorbed Spiritual Energy is sent up his right arm and through one of the five thin curved point to produce different effects. It should also be noted that multiple wounds will increase the speed of Spiritual Energy absorption but it all depends on the amount of wounds inflicted and they must all draw blood from the opponent, this is more than likely a common thing as the process of absorption is really slow and can be quite ineffectual at a lone pace. Evolución Forzada (Forced Evolution): Evolución Forzada is one of the effects that can be created through the use of Sanguijuela de Almas' Absorción. Evolución Forzada is used by the way of Zankairou absorbing the Spiritual Energy completely to increase his own power, this is arguably the the rarest of the effects Zankairou is likely to use with Sanguijuela de Almas due to the fact Evolución Forzada is a possible way for Zankairou to become stronger without the use of training (as long as his current ability could defeat an opponent his power could continually be increased making him stronger without any effort other than beating his enemy once), this is something Zankairou frowns upon because he prefers physical training - with the belief that effort is the only way to get proper results. Reparación Maldecida (Cursed Repair): Reparación Maldecida is one of the effects that can be created through the use of Sanguijuela de Almas' Absorción. Reparación Maldecida can be used when Zankairou incurs an injury and needs healing. By transferring the absorbed Spiritual Energy into his body and focusing it on his wounds Zankairou can heal his wounds completely making the wound disappear - however the ability can only heal something in direct proportion to the amount of Spiritual Energy that Sanguijuela de Almas has absorbed, making the ability's use a rather complicated one and in some cases useless. La Mímica Física (Physical Mimicry): La Mímica Física is one of the effects that can be created through the use of Sanguijuela de Almas' Absorción. Through the use of the absorbed Spiritual Energy Zankairou can use it as a means to mimic his opponent by focusing the energy back into Sanguijuela de Almas the mimicked ability (if requiring a Zanpaku-tou) can then be launched from Sanguijuela de Almas to perform it's own function against it's original master. This power however is very taxing and often times requires a specific amount of Spiritual Energy to mimic the amount that the original user would have to use to fire the bare minimum of the ability, meaning if Zankairou uses less than the required amount the technique is more than likely to back fire on himself. Special Accessories:All of Zankairou's clothing can be considered outside of the norm from the normal Arrancar uniform especially because his entire lower body apparel is armour, the alloy for the armour however is very light making the weight gain on Zankairou quite a bit less but this also makes the durability of the armour fall short on practical terms making the armour seem barely anything than more for appearance. Abilities:Physically Zankairou is all about upper body strength, He often "tests" his enemies by seeing how the with stand attacks from his fists before using his weapons, giving him abnormally strong hands. Personality:Zankairou is something of a wild animal. Being reckless and hot headed, he is always seen with a toothy grin on his face, while he eagerly awaits the next time he gets to partake in battle. Despite being an Arrancar he does have some degree of fairness against his opponents and even in his own abilities often disregarding the fact he could absorb the power of his enemies to further his own growth as well as holding back his full strength unless he's sure his opponent has the ability to kill him in an equal standing. Even though he seems to only live for the next battle he is severely loyal to those he calls friends and will forsake his own safety to protect them - this is only made a more sturdier part of his personality by the fact he doesn't care about other opinions degrading or otherwise. Biography/History:Zankairou was something of a cross between a Bear and a Sabertooth Tiger as a Hollow (Pre-Shinigamification). He was often found wandering between hiding place between hiding place making his presence known as he devoured other Hollows. Of course even he hid from the Arrancars but this was because he knew they were the level above him and that he would fight them on equal terms once he hit that level as well. Sure enough the time came but not how he had expected, he was made as an artificial Arrancar. Zankairou at first disagreed with it but quickly grew to stop caring and then even accepted the transformation - he had done his fare share of evolving through devouring other Hollows and he was rewarded even if it wasn't natural evolution. Now Zankairou works to prove that he can become the best of the Arrancar through sheer strength no matter how long or bone headed it may seem. Powers:Cero: (sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Vizards have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. Colour: Light BlueFiring Point: Left Palm Bala: (bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed. Firing Point: Either hand Garganta: (garuganta; Spanish for "Throat," Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. Hierro: (iero; Spanish for "Iron," Japanese for "Steel Skin") refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar generally have proportionally stronger skin than usual. Pesquisa: (pesukisa; Spanish for "Inquiry," Japanese for "Probe Circuit") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions very similarly to sonar. Use: Zankairou's use of Pesquisa is created by touching the bottom of his Zanpaku-tou's hilt to a surface where a blue line shoots forth from it to the target in question. Sonido: Sonído (Spanish for "Sound," Japanese for "Sound Ceremony") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps. Zankairou's Sonido is a little slower than most as his forte doesn't exactly lie in speed. Role-Play Example:Standing at the center of the main hall, was a tall giant of a man. Staring down on this man was Aizen, sitting on his throne high above the giant. His Arm rested on the arm-rest while his fist leaned into his cheek, Aizen's posture gave it away that he was more than likely very bored but even so the glare in Aizen's eyes looked as if they would peer into the depth's of a mans soul. "Who might you be?" Aizen asked even his tone carried the weight of how bored he seemed but the tall man that was being questioned had yet to stop grinning his toothy grin. "I am Zankairou Barragielle Den'Jaron, but other than names I'm more interested in that glare of yours. It's like your peering deep into my very core - it gives me goosebumps" The giant identified as Zankairou started his voice was rough and gritty but none the less it carried the tones of an excited barbarian. "Those goosebumps, there making me all excited. All you have to do now is point me in the right direction and I'll slaughter it!" Zankairou spoke his tone lifting in height as his excitement grew. Fear with Zankairou didn't often work well, fear only served to garner excitement within the tall built man as he knew it was a sign of someone who could easily provide him the greatest of challenges. "So wha'dya say?! care to let the beast loose on your enemies?" Zankairou asked in response at last which only served to garner a laugh from Aizen. "Very well, show me what you can do" Aizen waved his hand as a large group of Hollows poured into the chamber - ranging from your average Hollow to Adjuchas- Class Menos. "With pleasure Aizen-sama" Zankairou turned to face the horde of Hollows with no signs of drawing his weapon. As Zankairou let out a deep roar he leapt forward launching himself at the lower class Hollows with nothing but his fists. Once he had closed in Zankairou's feet landed on the floor and skidded across the ground the metal alloy of his boots creating a deep screeching sound as sparks flew out. Following this was the echo of Zankairou's fist meeting with the first Hollow's face sending it flying into other members of the horde. The Hollows instinctively moved to attack Zankairou now, this hadn't changed his stance however and he simply started pushing into the groups of Hollows with his large fists. Grabbing one of the Hollows by there throat he used it as a makeshift weapon while beating into the other Hollows - but recklessness and brute strength would only get him so far and one of the Hollows had got Zankairou from behind. The pain didn't seem to matter more over it was the principle that he was injured by one these weaklings that annoyed Zankairou enough to used his Zanpaku-tou. Spinning around he crashed his fist into the Hollow that had attacked him while throwing the Hollow he was using as a weapon away. Pulling out his Zanpaku-tou from it's sheath on his back. "No more holding back, you all die!" Zankairou roared as he slashed a swathe through a group of the Hollows. Out of the space created by the now dead Hollows was an attack from an Adjuchas, Zankairou easily blocked the attack with his blade and quickly counter attacked smashing his head against the mask of the Adjuchas which proved Zankairou's head was stronger - no doubt the strength of his head was a metaphor for something he was lacking in. After headbutting the Adjuchas, Zankairou followed up the attack with a vertical slice from his Zanpaku-tou. The battle would continue for several more minutes but by the end of it the horde was decimated and Zankairou had barely even broken a sweat. "Got anymore I can kill?" Zankairou asked his grin had never left his face during the fight and was still apparent now. Aizen slowly clapped a few times in approval but spoke no words.
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 8:42 am
((WIP)) Name: Jedidiah Lee Number: 23 Aliases/ Nicknames: "Jet" Physical Description:  'Jet" stands at 5'11" and weighs in at 215 pounds of lean muscles gained from years of harsh living in the western frontier. His skin his tan and covered in scars from countless wounds sustained in battles one such scar stretches from his left waist and up his back caused by a stay cero. His hair is scraggly and brown falling to the sides and kept out of his face by his hat. His clothing is the normal color scheme consisting of whites, and blacks though the style is customized to have a more old western feel to it. Jet's hollow hole is located at the base of his neck and is covered up usually and his mask fragment covers the edge of his ear like an ear piece. Zanpacto & Resurreccion: Pistolero (Gunslinger)] Release Command: Draw, PistoleroPistolero in its sealed form takes the form of two colt pythons which are more suited for Jet then any other weapon you never give a gunslinger a sword , just like you never give a swordsman a gun. Unlike normal revolvers the ammo they fire a spirit particles in the form of bullets. Each pistol is locater on his thighs in holsters. When released the pistols change into three types of weapons two long range cannons , two short range rifles, and two short range revolvers. This gives Jet triple the fire power and range when it comes to gunfights. Which could prove deadly to a mere sword user. The rifle and pistols look like regular guns but the cannons look as if they came out of a gundam anime a popular show in Japan. Body wise the only major change is that he gains four arms made from a tangible aura one for each weapon his guns have turned into. His hollow mask spreads up across his left eye forming like a scope around it. His outfit changes as well but stays with the western feel he has about him. His hat remains but his clothing becomes more form fitter and formal looking as if he was going out to a event. The color scheme is white and black but with some browns and silver mixed in as well.When it comes to abilities his speed and strength are significantly increased, as well as his accuracy. Overall he becomes and even deadlier marksman and gunslinger. With the strength of thunder and the speed of lighting his enemies will know who he is from the crack of his gun and the pain in their chests. Bloqueo En A fast pace homing in missile that is used in fast succession through the rifles to overwhelm and distract the target from close to long range. Each shot although homes in on the target has a limited amount of life before it it runs out of spiritual energy and fades away. This is best used for crowd control and distracts. Explosión Impactante A terrifying blast from Pistolero's cannon that can deal devastating damage and is known for its large impact radius and destructive power, despite its strength it takes time to charge and requires Jet to remain in one spot else they will not charge up properly. Rápida Dibujar Rapida Dibujar is Jets most deadly attack not in power but in cold blooded efficiency. This technique is also Jets favorite. Rapida Dibujar is a quick and deadly attack which requires extreme speed and dexterity, as it require the user to draw both pistols in the blink of an eye and fire off multiple shots into kill spots on the enemy, and have it back in the holsters before they even realize what had even happened. Jet is known to be able to release 700 shots from each gun though he rarely does so unless his opponent his truly deserving of such an attack. Destinos Disparo Jet last resort this attack is his most powerful attack in pure destruction and power. Firing all six guns in a single shot that is the end all be all of Jets arsenal what is lacks in elegance and grace it makes up for in raw destructive power as it destroys almost anything in its path. This attack is also the hugest attack Jet has as well making even harder to dodge Jet himself never actually has figured out how wide the shot is as he rarely uses it because of the dangerous draw back of using it. This attack is instantaneous though only because it uses up most of his reaistu instead of charging up a surplus to use, this will leave Jet either severely weaken or take him out of his Resurrection completely. Special Accessories: Wears a custom outfit from the time he was living as well as carries around a locket with no picture inside of it, but a quote that says "Live on, Live on, till the day comes when we can live together again." Abilities: Jet is a brawler and one you want on your side for his right cross is known to crush bones and break jaws. He also is a Superior marksman and one hell of a gunslinger and his quick draw is one of the fastest ever seen , most never even see him pull out but they know he did it when they feel a cold aching pain in their chest from what he shot them. Personality: "Jet" is a rough and gruff man born and raised on a land where you fight to keep your life. He is a quite man but he is not the kind of person you want angry. His anger is like a smoldering fire that never goes out till it burns you all the way many men have seen it but never live to tell the tale. Other then that is a good guy but tends to keep to himself a lot. Biography/History: When Jedidiah Lee was alive he was a soldier in the Confederate Army during The American Civil War and those it is easy to deduce that his end came about because of the war. However that isn't the entire story of his life Jedidiah was born in 1831 to a plantation owner in Georgia and in time when his father died became the owner of said plantation. While Jedidiah thanks to his fathers position had gotten the best education the world could offer he did not care for such things instead he cared about more practical things such as guns and leading an honest life which is probably why when he came to own the Plantation he treated his slaves as equals, and that is probably why before the war even began he sent them all to the north. Though why would such a man still fight for the Confederacy its simple Jedidiah hated being told what to do by a government full of fools. It was that simple it may be a stupid reason to fight but that was why he did it. Plus he was more inclined to follow a General such as Robert E. Lee instead of the North's Generals. When Jedidiah joined the Army he made his presence known rather quickly on both sides by proving he was one of the best gunslingers the Union or the Confederacy had ever seen and while he was known for such deadly skill the amount of Northern Soldiers he killed was very low he was known for crippling his enemies instead of killing them much to the disappointment of some of his fellow soldiers. This hatred would lead to his demise. During a high risk mission behind enemies lines Jedidiah was in charge of a small unit mostly filled with the soldiers who hated his tactics. Their mission was to destroy the Union's supply lines and they succeeded in doing so. However on the way pack the soldiers who hated Jedidiah's tactic rebelled against him each one firing a shot into his body however before he died he managed to kill them all, a bullet going through each of their heads. After his death Jedidiah's soul wondered the American wilderness not ready to move on for some reason years went by without him passing by and he became a hollow. Powers: Bala (虚弾 (バラ), bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed. Cero (虚閃 (セロ), sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Visored have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. Various Arrancar and Hollow characters display variants of the technique, such as the Espada-exclusive Gran Rey Cero, the Cero Oscuras that Ulquiorra Cifer can use only in his released form, as well as the Cero Sincrético performed by Pesche Guatiche and Dondochakka Bilstin. Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), garuganta; Spanish for "Throat," Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen, Kisuke Urahara and Mayuri Kurotsuchi have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. Hierro (鋼皮 (イエロ), iero; Spanish for "Iron," Japanese for "Steel Skin") refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar generally have proportionally stronger skin than usual. Negación (反膜 (ネガシオン), negashion; Spanish for "Negation," Japanese for "Anti-Membrane") are energy fields are used to rescue fellow Hollows. Only the Gillian-class Menos have shown the ability to use it. Negación fields surround a target in a square beam of light that isolates the target from the dimension they are currently in, making it impossible to harm them. The field then pulls the target towards the Menos that created the field. Pesquisa (探査回路 (ペスキサ), pesukisa; Spanish for "Inquiry," Japanese for "Probe Circuit") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions very similarly to sonar. Resurrección (帰刃 (レスレクシオン), resurekushion; Spanish for "Resurrection," Japanese for "Returning Blade") Most Arrancar have the ability to seal their power within a Zanpakutō. Upon releasing their Zanpakutō, they gain all of their former unique Hollow abilities back, essentially 'resurrecting' their old selves. When using this ability, they essentially combine their human form and their Hollow form, incidentally increasing their power considerably. As another note, when an Arrancar uses his or her Resurrección, it heals all minor wounds. Sonído (響転 (ソニード), sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound," Japanese for "Sound Ceremony") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps. Role-Play Example: (Write a short story of your character interacting with Aizen, Tosen, or Ichimaru.)
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