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 Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 2:57 pm
XD Comic spoilers are the worst! I haven't read any X Men in a while though...I will once I get a job!!
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:25 pm
Please take a moment to read the announcement regarding fluff. Thank you!
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:28 pm
I myself will apologize for posting fluff... nearly all I wrote was irrelevant.
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:34 pm
Sorry if I'm fluffing it up. I'll definitely get to interacting
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:07 pm
Not too much fluff right? *points to last post*
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:13 pm
kisuke0sama Not too much fluff right? *points to last post* I hate to bring this up, but unless you followed Isis and Adie to their old dorm room, you wouldn't have heard the story, just that Isis was going to tell Adie what she knew about the fight between the Brotherhood and the X-Men, that lead to this memorial. EDIT unless your character heard the same rumors...
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:15 pm
ah, didn't read that part sweatdrop but easily remedied. i'll just take off the first line and leave it ambiguous 4laugh
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:17 pm
The fluff announcement was put very nicely! =D
thanks for informing me and giving me good quotes to use for future essays!!
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:26 pm
The original fluff post was done by my friend Libris. She agreed to let LJ and I use it for this guild. I just tweaked it to fit our situation. We have a big fluff issue in GRiMMERY...
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:32 pm
I agree with the fluff announcement...I think it takes more to not want to post so much fluff. I admit that I do it, on a daily basis when I talk, and it might spill over when I post. But this is a guild that is very helpful and I like each and every one of you. I consider you all family and I hope you do the same. Regaurding Isis, I will work on my posts more, but some of the fluff feels like it needs to be there even if it is a memory or something like that...
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:30 pm
Agreed on the fluff, as is I'm simply skimming most of the post during the fight for Gideon still. crying I missed some good action.
Agreeably though I'll have to try not to get carried away on the introversion of my character to much. Although personally if the posts are within a 2-6 paragraph range, I'm usually able to read the bulk of it and keep up with everyone else. Which is saying something cause I have horribly slow reading speed.
Anyway, back to reading what's happened up until now.
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:57 pm
We all are guilty of fluff, but it's going overboard right now. Even as guild captain, I have a hard time reading posts because it's a lot of fluff.
A good rule of thumb is to try to write what you need to write to build your character and move the story along in a minimum of 2 paragraphs and if possible, no more than 5. This isn't exact because sometimes we need to write more than 5. (Especially if we are writing plot moving actions)
I would also like us to try to cut down the joint posts. There really is no reason everybody can't write their separate parts with their own avatar and their own account. Once in awhile it is fine, but the growing trend just really makes things cumbersome to read.
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:21 pm
Well then it's a good thing I'm too lazy to joint post....XD
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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:29 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 1:58 pm
Hey guys, in regards to my character, you guys can have whatever relationship with him. You can be his best friend or worst enemy... but try and go with the former, shall we?
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