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 Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 8:24 pm
You Will Never Be A Man
Wings? *Turns around trying to look at my back* I have wings? Too much Redbull!!!
Unless You Are A Gentleman
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 1:33 pm
I'm depressed.
My frosting is flat and I can't get it to fluff up.
So anyways, grading, yea...
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 5:45 pm
Sorry that I made that BIG BLOCK of text...
It seems that I have realized another TERRIBLE habit of mine...
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 3:40 pm
Aeros Endeem Sorry that I made that BIG BLOCK of text... It seems that I have realized another TERRIBLE habit of mine...
That's why you're here though, to work on such things.
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 5:04 pm
You Will Never Be A Man
"Sorry bout your frosting Miss Aniur. Try holding the tube in one spot longer."
Unless You Are A Gentleman
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 7:43 am
No_1_cares You Will Never Be A Man
"Sorry bout your frosting Miss Aniur. Try holding the tube in one spot longer."
Unless You Are A Gentleman
D:
I was so tired I didn't realize that I had bought it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 7:46 am
Aniur Aeros Endeem Sorry that I made that BIG BLOCK of text... It seems that I have realized another TERRIBLE habit of mine...
That's why you're here though, to work on such things.This and more, if I come across any more... XD
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 10:32 am
I hope I did okay on this one. My step-mom has gotten into the habit of baking lately. She hasn't done nothing with frosting, yet. She did make some pumpkin cake though, and yes cake not pie. I forget what she put in it.
(changing topic,again)
Is it test week or something. I have a different test for a different class each day of the week: Monday-off; Tuesday-History exam; Wednesday-biology; Thursday- Geometry; Friday- internet fundamentals. The only class I don't have a test for yet is english, but I have an essay due tomorrow though. wish I had the sheet with me now, so I could work on it.....
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 10:43 am
Squireof the son I hope I did okay on this one. My step-mom has gotten into the habit of baking lately. She hasn't done nothing with frosting, yet. She did make some pumpkin cake though, and yes cake not pie. I forget what she put in it. (changing topic,again) Is it test week or something. I have a different test for a different class each day of the week: Monday-off; Tuesday-History exam; Wednesday-biology; Thursday- Geometry; Friday- internet fundamentals. The only class I don't have a test for yet is english, but I have an essay due tomorrow though. wish I had the sheet with me now, so I could work on it.....
:3
Pumpkin cake is good, I've made a few this Autumn and they all turned out wonderful.
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:51 pm
I feel like there is something missing in my posts, but i'm not sure what it is yet...maybe because Kuri is still a new character to me. I hope I figure out what it is soon, although it could just be having to wait so long between posts. I'm really enjoying reading this RP though, the characters are all so different and varied! It's all so different to what I am used to biggrin
Good luck with all your exams and things Squire smile
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 2:20 pm
I'll keep it short and simple. Best of luck to those who need it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 3:08 pm
Karisutee I feel like there is something missing in my posts, but i'm not sure what it is yet...maybe because Kuri is still a new character to me. I hope I figure out what it is soon, although it could just be having to wait so long between posts. I'm really enjoying reading this RP though, the characters are all so different and varied! It's all so different to what I am used to biggrin Good luck with all your exams and things Squire smile Thanks. I have that feeling sometimes too. But that's good, it means you know you can improve. Just strive for perfection(or pretty close). And good luck to you too No_1_cares!!!!
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:23 pm
You Will Never Be A Man
Announcement:
Neo will be leaving The Shrine to make room for a completely new character.
Unless You Are A Gentleman
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 5:06 am
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I really just think you should stick with what you have now and slowly change him with some good writing. The base character is good though. Now all you should be doing is building up his character traits with posts anyways.
XD
I mean I just upped you one rank into advanced for an almost flawless post, save a few sticky spots.
Karisutee: Yes, I know that theres some issues with me not grading as fast as I probably could, I'm trying to knock around one post out a day so you guys see at least some progress. Life has just been at one of it's down moments for me as of late.
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 1:25 pm
*Rubs back of head* Thanks Aniur, considering that I think I will stay with Neo. That being said, I have one slight clarification to make on the whole eating the dirt apple that you absolutely abhor. Neo, being a wanderer and often in the dirtiest of places, has an immune system that has been built op over time. That and dirty food doesn't really bother him. I'll see if I can make a few changes with Neo as he interacts with the other characters so that he becomes more like my current character, Takamura Kobayashi, who I use in all my other threads.
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