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 Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 8:58 pm
Good boy Yuuki I changed the level to 1. Do I need the sample? Aye, but first let me make sure that this is an acceptable talent. Will take a day or so (cause its 12 at night here and as I am typing this I am about to go to bed).
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:56 am
jwalker67 Good boy Yuuki I changed the level to 1. Do I need the sample? Aye, but first let me make sure that this is an acceptable talent. Will take a day or so (cause its 12 at night here and as I am typing this I am about to go to bed).
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 5:54 am
Good boy Yuuki jwalker67 Good boy Yuuki I changed the level to 1. Do I need the sample? Aye, but first let me make sure that this is an acceptable talent. Will take a day or so (cause its 12 at night here and as I am typing this I am about to go to bed). Your enthusiasm is much appreciated, however a rule a thumb here is that you can only have one overall talent. Hawk Eyes seems as if its a separate talent all on its own and Claw is basically the same as Kinetic Nails from the Kinetic Weaponry Style so I can't accept that. I would advise focusing on the Autophagy aspects of your talents...or if you really want to, focus solely on the Hawk Eyes, though I must warn you that we are very strict on things involving the eyes. On the upside though...I really like your RP sample. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 6:54 am
jwalker67 Good boy Yuuki jwalker67 Good boy Yuuki I changed the level to 1. Do I need the sample? Aye, but first let me make sure that this is an acceptable talent. Will take a day or so (cause its 12 at night here and as I am typing this I am about to go to bed). Your enthusiasm is much appreciated, however a rule a thumb here is that you can only have one overall talent. Hawk Eyes seems as if its a separate talent all on its own and Claw is basically the same as Kinetic Nails from the Kinetic Weaponry Style so I can't accept that. I would advise focusing on the Autophagy aspects of your talents...or if you really want to, focus solely on the Hawk Eyes, though I must warn you that we are very strict on things involving the eyes. On the upside though...I really like your RP sample. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 7:25 am
Good boy Yuuki jwalker67 Good boy Yuuki jwalker67 Good boy Yuuki I changed the level to 1. Do I need the sample? Aye, but first let me make sure that this is an acceptable talent. Will take a day or so (cause its 12 at night here and as I am typing this I am about to go to bed). Your enthusiasm is much appreciated, however a rule a thumb here is that you can only have one overall talent. Hawk Eyes seems as if its a separate talent all on its own and Claw is basically the same as Kinetic Nails from the Kinetic Weaponry Style so I can't accept that. I would advise focusing on the Autophagy aspects of your talents...or if you really want to, focus solely on the Hawk Eyes, though I must warn you that we are very strict on things involving the eyes. On the upside though...I really like your RP sample. biggrin I would stay away from the boost in strength thing unless you have a creative means of doing so. There is way to many people applying for talents that either give a boost in speed, or strength. Not many however make many talents involving the eyes. Play with the eye thing. But please don't make it a carbon copy of a Byukugan. Also, remember to give a legit reason on why your RPC has that talent...don't just put, "My character has it because he has trained his eyes day and night", be creative...original if you can though it isn't a must. Though I will say that original and creative talents are more likely to be accepted as long as they aren't to godmoddy.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 8:52 am
jwalker67 /quote] And I thought you would never know. Do I still need to do the sample? Because if I do, I personally find it unfair.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 11:28 am
Good boy Yuuki
And I thought you would never know. Do I still need to do the sample? Because if I do, I personally find it unfair. Aye, you do. It is required of everyone. Its mostly because we would like to see how you would use it in RP, its more for your benefit than anything. Applying for talents is a process of trial and error. Your more than welcome to edit your sample rather than starting over again, though that is why I asked that you should hold off on your sample until I deem it something that is something we could definitely work with. Its to save you time and grief.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:38 am
RPC Name: Jim Kamiya
Level: 1
Main Style: N/A
Talent Description:
Samenome: Samenome is when one extends their Ki so that their aura extends further than normal, then uses secondary Ki at the same time to give shape to the aura, usually a sphere. Someone using Samenome can feel the shape and movement of anything entering their circle. Upon activation, the wielder is granted an automatic 50 meter field of vision around themselves. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from person to person, and can be improved.
Talent Weakness:
The downside to this is that it is extremely tiring and draining for the Ki-user to constantly deploy so much aura. The amount require need to maintain the technique is listed below.
Level 1: 40
Level 2:35
Level 3: 30
Level 4: 25
Level 5: 20
Level 6: 15
Level 7: 10
Level 8 :5
Level 9: 3
Level 10: 0
How did the character get this talent?: Jin had spent years trying to perfect unique skills that assassins portray and possess. He was forced to battle in the wilderness at the age of 6, in which he took two years to get out. After he return, his grandpa taught him the Same no me as a reward of surviving.
Sample:
Leaping through the tree's Jin was running ahead of three enemy that were on his tail chasing his around inside this forest.Using what he could for cover he landed behind a small shrub and kept himself down."Stupid Assasin.I didn't expect them to find me this quick.It seems that they have been trained well."The boy smiled at the thought and laughed."They are still no match for me."He peeked his head out to check if anyone was coming but hadn't seen anyone.Activating his Same no me he examined the area and smiled once he was able to spot them."Behind me."He said quietly deactivating his Same no me just as a Kunai came into the shrub to hit him.Leaping forward he had just enough time to dodge it cutting his clothes just a small amount."Almost had me there!"He yelled looking back at them as they stood behind him.
"You were luck once Kamiya.But next time you won't be.We'll catch you soon enough and then we'll have captured you."A rather small man snapped at him.If memory served him correctly the man went by the name of Ryo.Ryo grasped a Kunai quickly in his hands."I'm going to be the first one to hit him!"He yelled taking off from the ground and charging toward Jin. He was able to hit him.But not with the Kunai he had in his hand and only hit him with his own shoulder throwing Jin off balance.
Watching as his team mate was able to throw Jin off balance he tossed Kunai at him hoping the he would be able to hit him on his way down.He hadn't hit him but he was lucky to give him a few cuts and scrapes as he landed on the ground.Ryo moved quickly along with his other smaller companion.Grabbing Jin and slamming his against a tree holding him there.
Jin laughed as he was being held against a tree.Three ninja had been fighting him to try and capture him.Too bad there calculations were incredibly wrong.An SS-Rank criminal taken down by three lowly Assassin.Something like that could never happen.He had the Same no me and fighting them off would be too easy for him it wouldn't take him much effort at all.But why not let them think they had him.Not fight back and take somewhat of a beating.Not like it hurt him anyway.
The team that had been able to pin Jin against the three consisted of three men.All the rank of Special Trained Assassin.With there skills by the look of things.This Legend Assassin was greatly underestimated and wasn't even half as good as the story said he was."Master of the Assassin.Isn't that a laugh.Couldn't even keep three Special Train Assassin from holding him down.How sad."A rather large man said adding a laugh to the end.He seemed to be the strongest one out of the group.Lifting his fist he drove it into the side of Jin's face causing his head to follow the direction of the man's fist.
Jin let out a small groan only playing around with him as he wanted to come of as weak and without power.It would only make him the more angry.The longer he had to play around with these clowns the more pain he would cause them before he took there life.Turning his head back to face the man he smirked at him."That punch was weak,I didn't even feel anything from it.Are you sure you are special trained or was it just by some mistake."He said to him and began to laugh.
The large man gridded his teeth as he was insulted about the abilities he had.Only made him just more angry with the Assassin in front of his squeezing his hand into a fist he continuously began to drive his fists into his gut and face.Taking his anger out on Jin seemed to make him feel better after all he had insulted him and he was giving him pay back return.
Letting his body take the rather weak punches from the man he began to grow bored of fighting them after they proved no real challenge for him at all.Breaking free from there hold he grabbed the man's fists stopping them dead in there tracks forcing them away and kicking him away along with the two men on each side of him."Weaklings."He grinned as he activated his Same no me."now i get to have fun with you."He laughed and smirked as he used his Rotation.Pushing his enemies away with his own gust.
The Assassin gather themselves up and looked at Jin as he stood easily like there punches had done nothing to him at all.The men stood in horror as they watched him.Didn't they hurt him they had given him cuts and maybe a few bruises that were going to show later.Putting there hands together to perform gene-x they began to do the preparation.
"I can't have you doing that.You doing tricks would only make this harder for me and i would like to keep this as easy as possible."With that said he moved quickly and used his gentle fist to disrupt the energy flow into his hands."Sixty four palm."He said and soon began to hurt the ki points into each of them hitting each point in their bodies.Once he finished he smirked as they dropped to the ground.
Gathering themselves up they finally noticed that they would be no match for this Assassin now that there ki flow was cut off into there hands.It was the main creation of gene-x and without ki in their hands they would be helpless to stop him.Quickly they ran from him taking off into the forest to hopefully find a safe place to hide.But knowing that there enemy held the most perfect assassin technique they had barley any chance in doing such a thing.
Jin smirked as he watched them run into the forest activating his Samenome.He watched them run from him tracking there moment's easily.Once they reached the limit of his Samenome he focused into his eyes more and soon he could still follow there movements as they got further and further away from him."Good,My Samenome is getting stronger soon it should reach Level five and I'll have the ability to see anything in a ten kilometer radius."Watching them still he smiled as they were able to reach the limit of his Samenome.Taking off toward them he used his speed and was able to slowly catch up with them.Once he did he was going to kill them quickly and make everything easy but it was going to take some time it wasn't an instant thing to take the life of a assassin they are going to put up a fight.
After tracking their movements he was finally able to meet up with them.He smirked as he landed in front of them."All that running was for nothing.It seems you tried and failed in your attempt.If only you were stronger and able to fight me on even ground.The three of you could do nothing to me other then a small amount of injuries.It's rather sad.It seems that you organization training isn't any good.I hope you aren't the strongest."He said to them as he got ready to finish them off he pulled a knife from his pouch."I will kill the three of you with this knife."He told them and smiled as he watched them pull weapons from there pouches to try and attack him.As they released the kunai at him he blocked it easily soon leaping at them and able to slice there throat open he smirked standing over them as they slowly died beneath him."There,I finally finished you off i had enough of that silly game anyway.I'm glad i was able to kill you easily."He grinned as he watched the blood form around them slipping the kunai away back into the pouch he began to walk away from them with a rather sadistic grin on his face."It was a fun game while it lasted too bad they were too weak to survive.."He said to himself glancing back at the bodies as he began to walk away."Well i have killed the men that wanted to grab me and capture me.What a failed attempt it was.A failure in what they did.I only hope that once i meet more enemy they will be able to take me on in a battle and not disappoint me."He smirked as he began to walk away from the murder scene and leave the forest.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:22 pm
There should be a drawback or limit or weakness to this talent, like that your character has to stand still to use it.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:26 pm
Fenrir Graveheart There should be a drawback or limit or weakness to this talent, like that your character has to stand still to use it. I filled that in with Byakugan weakness. rolleyes
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:28 pm
Good boy Yuuki Fenrir Graveheart There should be a drawback or limit or weakness to this talent, like that your character has to stand still to use it. I filled that in with Byakugan weakness. rolleyes Not good enough.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:30 pm
Fenrir Graveheart Good boy Yuuki Fenrir Graveheart There should be a drawback or limit or weakness to this talent, like that your character has to stand still to use it. I filled that in with Byakugan weakness. rolleyes Not good enough. Fixed.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:32 pm
Good boy Yuuki Fenrir Graveheart Good boy Yuuki Fenrir Graveheart There should be a drawback or limit or weakness to this talent, like that your character has to stand still to use it. I filled that in with Byakugan weakness. rolleyes Not good enough. Fixed. I need more details man. Like how draining is this ability. Does it take Ki to use, and if so then how much?
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:38 pm
Fenrir Graveheart Good boy Yuuki Fenrir Graveheart Good boy Yuuki Fenrir Graveheart There should be a drawback or limit or weakness to this talent, like that your character has to stand still to use it. I filled that in with Byakugan weakness. rolleyes Not good enough. Fixed. I need more details man. Like how draining is this ability. Does it take Ki to use, and if so then how much? Done. rolleyes
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:44 pm
Good boy Yuuki Fenrir Graveheart Good boy Yuuki Fenrir Graveheart Good boy Yuuki I filled that in with Byakugan weakness. rolleyes Not good enough. Fixed. I need more details man. Like how draining is this ability. Does it take Ki to use, and if so then how much? Done. rolleyes
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