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 Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 6:52 am
Nah, too easy. I thought about making it a sphere in Yensen's chest, that whenever activated causes random things to happen. But I doubt Fen would like the chances of death beams from space, pianos falling on him, or fighting a time space opposite of himself.
I've also thought about it being a powerful system upgrade for Yensen that causes him, to generally be stronger. but if i do that, he'll be just about unbeatable. Maybe make him learn and work faster. But that would become useless later on after I learn all my skills.
So yea. I'm still stuck.
I also thought of it making waves of Khaos whenever I do things. Kinda like Jury Hans Feng Shui engine in SSF4.
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:32 am
Why not make it so for every post you use it, some random negative effect occurs to your character? Or, make it so that for however many posts you use it, one of your stats (Speed, strength, etc) are reduced by a rank or two?
RPC Name: Ronnel Hirozaki
Rank: Uncreated, will be trainee
Talent Description: Ronnel has learned how to alter the combustive energy from his body to make it into an explosive gas that trails after his arrows when shot. Similar to the C4 explosives, he has to click his tongue at a certain frequency to cause this gas to explode.
Talent Weakness: Because he has trained himself to do this, Ronnel has lost the ability to create the C4 bombs of his bloodline.
How did the character get this talent:After studying the abilities of his family, he experimented on a new way of using the bloodline, and came up with this.
Sample:
Ronnel perched on the tree branch, his bow laid across his lap as he watched the trio of men who were moving through the woods.
A mechanist, gunslinger, and knight.... that's not a good combination for my home.... He sighed and pulled three arrows from the quiver and laid them along the bow. The man lifted each one to his mouth and blew across the feathers on the end, then set them to the bowstring and pulled back.
"Fly straight and true please..." His voice was a whisper amongst the branches as the arrows shot out.
One slammed into the torso of the mechanist, making him blink and look down at it in shock. The second sank into the gunslinger's eye, killing him instantly. The third landed in the ground in front of the armored knight, who blinked and laughed as the mechanist pulled the arrow from his own armor and examined it.
"Good, good..." Ronnel watched until the knight hoisted the gunslinger's body onto his shoulder and was about to step across the arrow in the ground, the two men hurrying to get to a defensible position. When the knight's torso was above the arrow, and the mechanist had the arrow that had struck him lifted to his face to examine it, Ronnel clicked his tongue, flexing it in a unique manner.
Unseen to the two living men, vapor trails had followed the arrows, even after they were done flying. When the ranger clicked his tongue, a specific frequency went out that caused those trails to detonate, ripping a line of fire along the front of the knight's body and directly into the mechanist's torso. The explosions left the two survivor's on the ground - the mechanist dead, the knight heavily wounded and unable to do anything when the ranger dropped onto the ground beside him and drew out a longsword.
"We don't take kindly to invaders." Ronnel plunged the blade down into the gap in the plate armor at the knight's neck.
I know this isn't too good, but with the original boom boom air idea being used for the Internal Combustion bloodline, I figured combining the bloodline and class would be a good plan, and Shruik helped with an actual idea for what to do with that.
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 10:24 am
Gtack: Approved, but the explosion won't be but a C ranked, and it won't be anything huge. Maybe a 5 foot radius.
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:55 pm
(actually you should wait till i redo it G. should be tommorow if i'm not swamped by the one other thing i need to do)
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 12:44 am
RPC Name: Kora Summer
Rank: Master
Talent Description: She can make special cloth/clothing. Protection, fire proof, water proof, little bonus, special ability, ect. (Probably like clothe enchanting XP))
Clothing such as:
Clock of insensibly; Large big sheet, having it over the hole body well blend into the background magically even moving.
speed/strength up; clothing with gives magically boost to the body's strength or speed.
flight; The peace of clothing like a jacket that can have wings come out of the back and be use to fly.
breathing under water; Full body suit that gives the ability to breath under water. (Like Zelda)
I'm not sure what else I can explain. I mite need help with that if need added more. crying
Talent Weakness: Can not put in more than one ability the cloth/clothing can do. She can only make it special at one thing. Also it doesn't work on leather; they're made of animal skin, not cloth. Wearing this cloth takes up two weapon slots, and that only one cloth can worn at a time.
How did the character get this talent?:
After the last two years, Kora been very entrusted with weaving the strings together and making clothing. She then tried to make it with the metal wires, silky strings and strong web strings from Arachnoid. After time, from many mistake, she finally knows how to make cloths be more useful by making it by scratch.
Sample:
Kora was laying by the tree, covered in many cuts. She just was attacked from a wile creature and it finally got defeated. Kora used up all her energy and couldn't do any healing on her self. She has to do something with these cut's before they get infected.
Kora slowly move her acing arm to reach something in her pocket. She pulled out a banged, all roiled up that she made her self. Slowly she un-roiled it and just rap it around her acing arms. Once she covered all the wounds, the banged started to making her arms feel better. That's because Kora made these banged with her own specialty to heal any wounds that aren't that leather.
After a hour, Kora's arm stopped seeping blood on to the cloth, meaning the cuts are closed, but her arms isn't fully healed yet. She slowly pull her self up and tried to walk. She didn't had any damage to her legs but it was very sower. She grabbed the her staff, that her hands are finally feeling better, and headed back home.
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 4:50 pm
was mine actually accepted or not? confused
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 5:25 pm
RPC Name: Laura Delgado
Rank: Novice
Talent Description: (Man, I couldn't word this well at all.) This talent enhances Laura with the features of a werewolf. However, instead of being a lycan, she is a living experiment from toyed DNA between wolves, and humans. It gives her most of the traits that wolves hold, including physical, and social roles. Fur covers just about every inch of her body, and she has a tail. Her intelligence is also enhanced beyond that of a normal human being, giving her decreased reaction time. (+1 Rank in speed.)
Talent Weakness: Laura is more prone to catching fire than your average person due to her fur, and has sensitive hearing. She suffers from extremely loud noises like lycans.
How did the character get this talent?: Laura Delgado is the product of an experiment housed by a biochemist, and a mechanist. While by technical terms she is only a few years old, her body was created at a much later age than, and her mind matured far faster by technology and natural manipulation.
Sample:
Laura crouched low against the ground, peering about at her surroundings. There was a tree to her back, and much vegetation speckled about where she stood. She was searching for the Barrens, but wasn't exactly sure in what direction it was. Several times she had asked directions from travelers she found, but it appeared either they tricked her for some unknown reason, or they just didn't feel like telling her. The only reason she had made it this far was because of her keen sense of smell, picking up on trails that had even a hint of the barrens outlandish smell on them. It was tedious work, since often the trail was lost. Eventually she would find another one again, but it wouldn't be worth anything if it didn't lead her in the right direction. It had been weeks since she had last seen civilization, prowling about as if she were on a mission. No wild life thought to challenge her, which was one of the things she found to be odd.
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 5:46 pm
RPC Name: Liliana
Rank: Trainee
Talent Description: Allows the use of one higher ranked ability for one use
Talent Weakness:
1. The ability is completely random and the user has no idea what's going to happen.
2. It induces a searing headache, making the use of other normal abilities almost none existent
How did the character get this talent?: While being passed around on the slave market, she tapped this ability the first time she was beaten for not listening to her master. No matter how she tries to control it, it is always somehow out of her grasp.
Sample: Liliana heard this family was nice but just because she could "see" on command, she was being beaten mercilessly by who she guessed to be the father. He was focusing on her head and it was giving her a strong headache. Just as the headache reached a peak, everything went quiet. There was no more beating on her head. Well, except for the headache of course. One of the other family members walked in and questioned her where the father went. But Liliana couldn't even look into anything to find out where he went. That was the first "bad circumstance" she was resold under. Now she was up to four of them. One more and she would be considered dangerous goods. Goods better left for disposal...
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:29 pm
SorceressJacklyn RPC Name: Liliana Rank: Trainee Talent Description: Allows the use of one higher ranked ability for one use Talent Weakness:1. The ability is completely random and the user has no idea what's going to happen. 2. It induces a searing headache, making the use of other normal abilities almost none existent How did the character get this talent?: While being passed around on the slave market, she tapped this ability the first time she was beaten for not listening to her master. No matter how she tries to control it, it is always somehow out of her grasp. Sample: Liliana heard this family was nice but just because she could "see" on command, she was being beaten mercilessly by who she guessed to be the father. He was focusing on her head and it was giving her a strong headache. Just as the headache reached a peak, everything went quiet. There was no more beating on her head. Well, except for the headache of course. One of the other family members walked in and questioned her where the father went. But Liliana couldn't even look into anything to find out where he went. That was the first "bad circumstance" she was resold under. Now she was up to four of them. One more and she would be considered dangerous goods. Goods better left for disposal... Your talent, is it basically letting you use one of the higher ranked skills that normally you are not able to use or learn?
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:31 pm
Shruikan Tenshi SorceressJacklyn RPC Name: Liliana Rank: Trainee Talent Description: Allows the use of one higher ranked ability for one use Talent Weakness:1. The ability is completely random and the user has no idea what's going to happen. 2. It induces a searing headache, making the use of other normal abilities almost none existent How did the character get this talent?: While being passed around on the slave market, she tapped this ability the first time she was beaten for not listening to her master. No matter how she tries to control it, it is always somehow out of her grasp. Sample: Liliana heard this family was nice but just because she could "see" on command, she was being beaten mercilessly by who she guessed to be the father. He was focusing on her head and it was giving her a strong headache. Just as the headache reached a peak, everything went quiet. There was no more beating on her head. Well, except for the headache of course. One of the other family members walked in and questioned her where the father went. But Liliana couldn't even look into anything to find out where he went. That was the first "bad circumstance" she was resold under. Now she was up to four of them. One more and she would be considered dangerous goods. Goods better left for disposal... Your talent, is it basically letting you use one of the higher ranked skills that normally you are not able to use or learn? Yes but randomly and without real control of it. I was actually about to edit it when I saw your post.
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:35 pm
lol, well if its random then maybe like a roll the dice effect? the number of possibilities equal to the number of techniques higher ranked then your limit?
Though I will say, once your at that rank, to where all of your skills at all ranks are within limit.....what will become of your talent?
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:41 pm
Shruikan Tenshi lol, well if its random then maybe like a roll the dice effect? the number of possibilities equal to the number of techniques higher ranked then your limit? Though I will say, once your at that rank, to where all of your skills at all ranks are within limit.....what will become of your talent? There will be certain talents I'll purposely not learn just for this. Since at it very base this talent can't be controlled so logically, there will be certain things she can't learn at all.
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:43 pm
SorceressJacklyn Shruikan Tenshi lol, well if its random then maybe like a roll the dice effect? the number of possibilities equal to the number of techniques higher ranked then your limit? Though I will say, once your at that rank, to where all of your skills at all ranks are within limit.....what will become of your talent? There will be certain talents I'll purposely not learn just for this. Since at it very base this talent can't be controlled so logically, there will be certain things she can't learn at all. Ah, risky. I like it XD. Well I can't really approve or deny, but this is the first of its kind i've seen....whats your bloodline gonna be?
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:50 pm
Seer. I already got approved for that.
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:54 pm
SorceressJacklyn Seer. I already got approved for that. Awesomeness, then we'll wait. I can see how being a seer and this talent work together. Kudos for uniqueness
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