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Uh, was that response to me? I posted before the person who put their application up?

I'm sorry, but your RP sample just isnt long enough, and doesnt go into enough detail. All it says is "I make ice mirrors and run away." You need to show that you know how this kekkei genkai works, what it can and cannot do, and that you can RP skillfully with it. Look at some other people's applications for other bloodlines and use those as examples of how this one should be organized

srry, I guess I missed it, I'm going to say approved, I've seen you use it in other guilds and I know that you have a good understanding of the clan, so again, APPROVED!

while it was a little hard to read, and it could have still been better, it was pretty good and showed a fairly good knowledge of the bloodline. APPROVED! but keep in mind that when you get chakra points cut off it does more than just block chakra, it can cause some pretty serious bodily harm.

I sent you the gold a while ago, so its approved like you said right?"

Rpc Name: Varro Hai’Auo
Village: Mist
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ushio Clan
Rp Sample: Varro held his bow staff with an angered force that betrayed the calm and calculating look that painted his face. The village he called home and helped in some ways to build and even re-build in parts was under threat again, this time he could fight back and protect the common people he had grown up around and even for a time aspired to be. The foreign shinobi came at him, there were two and both looked powerful, and he stood fast, keeping his concentration on them both. His stance was held as they approached then suddenly without conscious thought he swung his staff up and behind his head blocking a downward swipe that came from another shinobi he hadn’t noticed. The others had been on him at the time of his block, each taking low hard swings at his mid-section. With a small twist at the middle of his weapon the staff broke in two and his calculation was quick enough to bring the two smaller staffs; now the size of batons, down to block both oncoming attacks.

Without speaking he began to work the chakra around him, knowing that it was only a matter of time before one of them would get through and end this fight. Varro pulled up on his left baton, controlling the blade that had came at him in an upward arc, freeing that side for just a moment, long enough to turn his body to the attacker at his right and slamming the baton down on the hand of this opponent when the shinobi looked to pull back his sword to attack again. As soon as the other hand was free from blocking, and when the impact had been done, he swung his right hand to stop the attacker who had made the first strike in an attempt to claim his shoulder.

This dance continued, with Varro quickly and instinctively blocking and countering with small yet hard hits on vulnerable spots his enemies showed until one attack got through. Though all this time he had mentally prepared a jutsu, and without words right as the blade made faint contact with the fabric of his vest his body dispersed into sprays of water. The shinobi looked around, not quite understanding what had just happen, but before much thought could cross their minds Varro reappeared in full form behind the man who had been at his back. When the shinobi turned to face him he was met with a quick succession of pokes at vulnerable points on his body that subsequently made his muscles lock up, the sword he held fell to the floor and was followed fairly quickly by the mans body. He was not dead, but temporarily incapacitated.

As the other two began to regain their minds, Varro moved his hands in quick signs, “Tsunami Tama no-jutsu!” In the village of the mist, bodies of water were everywhere, and even in small collections throughout. In this case two puddles of water jutted up behind the two shinobi’s forming into compact balls the size of a fist and flew at them as they came to approach Varro. The balls slammed into the back of their heads with the force of a hard punch, and given the unexpected attack, it gave further power to it. They stumbled forward and went off guard just long enough for Varro to use the other useful part of his staff. With a snap of both his wrists the top section of each baton broke off, connected to each end was a chain that jetted as if propelled by a force within the weapon.

The chains wrapped around the necks of both ninjas, and when Varro pulled down with force and given their balance, they slammed down to the ground, their faces making impact with the unforgiving concrete. Both of their faces laid on a portion of the chain and with a quick and hard pull upward it twisted at their chins, both of their heads snapped upwards with a force that broke their necks. It was a sickening snap, but the fight was done. He had to move on, there were many more to deal with.