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 Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:10 pm
Atra raised an eyebrow at the fool's latest spout. He was so close to being correct, but his fundamentals were off. She had no doubt that the intruder had only read fantasies about the Dark Jedi, and never the fact.
Her gaze ran back to Draiman. She raised a hand to touch his lightsaber's hilt, quirking an eyebrow expectantly.
"You're only going to shock him?"
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:14 pm
He begins to fade away and their voices are merly whispers, he decides he should speak some last words.
I have been in your temple.... I have read many of your books, in fact another dark jedi recommended that I should.. I chased him across this blasted desert trying to learn from him. but I made the mistake of giving up... I won't make that mistake again. i have been training myself mentaly. physically. and I have studied your books. I have read up on making a lightsaber. I have been practising with the force....
He had no idea why he said what he did.. but he figured he would try to state a fact that may prove him worthy.
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:16 pm
He was already angered at the moment, and as felt his saber being touched he extended his other hand and used the Force to swing the saber in his fist.
He placed a tight grip upon the saber, he kept striking him with the bolts as he raised his saber and soon the saber was unleashed, the bright colour of red filled the area.
He soon stopped the bolts and threw his saber directly towards the intruder, it looked like it was going to slice him in half but instead it slanet to the side and directly went to his right arm, where the arm would be jointed to the shoulder.
The blade moved too quick, he used some Force to throw it, he used much strength behind the saber, when it would hit, the saber of course was too hot that it would melt the flesh, where no blood could come out, mostly covering the wound.
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:16 pm
"Fool," Atra repeated. She had no idea how he managed to stay in her Temple so long. She'd noted something was off, but never had the thought even crossed her mind that there would be a Temple intruder.
She frowned again.
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:20 pm
He feels the sharp pain of the saber and screams out in anger and in pain
Raaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............
He tries to hold back the tears, but cannot. He speaks again.
I have been in your temple for a rather long time. I have been seeking an audience with you. to ask you if I could be taught... if I could learn any thing. I have encountered many of your students. in fact I met a rather strong Dark jedi master. he was confronted during his meditation by another who was asking about you...
His strength leaves him and he passes out.
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:22 pm
"Stubborn fool," Atra corrected herself.
She glanced over to Draiman. "That is enough."
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:25 pm
He took the saber and holstered it, it directly came back to him as he Forced it back to him, he looked to the fallen man, his arm apart from his body, it could be replaced back to him.
Draiman: As you wish...
He whispered to her, his eyes focusing more on the arm then the intruder, he soon crossed his arms over his chest as he stayed next to the Dark Lord herself.
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:28 pm
(( meh.. I'll just be hanging around makin money I'll check in once in a while to see whats happening .. seeing as how I'm passed out. just so you know I'm not gone or any thing hehe ))
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:29 pm
Atra's gaze lingered on the sprawled body in front of her.
Without worning, she yelled for the maintenance crew, saying she wanted 'the mess cleaned up and the arm removed,' and 'to take the body to a holding cell'.
That done and over with, she turned her attention back to the underling beside her. She wasn't sure why she put up with his constant badgering, but he was a Temple favorite of hers.
"How do you feel?"
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:35 pm
He stayed silent for a bit as he ran his tonge along his top teeth, he was shocked slightly from pervious electrisity he sent to the other, he adjusted his shoulders then soon spoke to her.
Draiman: Fine...slightly still angered...but I'm calming down gently...
He soon turned towards her, keeping his arms crossed, this would be the first time he has ever made and example of someone, he felt rather proud, an apperntice showing an example to another, he then remembered he was a lower rank then sighed a bit, he grunted as well but then soon looked back up to the Dark Lord.
Draiman: I feel a big ashamed...someone like a Knight...should have done this..I'm just a Apperntice...
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:35 pm
(( I gotta go I'll just wake up tomorrow in a cell ))
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:39 pm
"Indeed," Atra echoed his words. "Just an apprentice."
She continued watching as a small crew-- made up of droids-- none-too-gently handled the body, as another wheeled in cleaning supplies, handing the disembodied arm off to another. No doubt, 'the other' was taking it to a trash compactor.
"You're on the right track."
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:43 pm
He watched the driods then watched the mess being cleaned up, he soon uncrossed his arms and focused upon some students slightly watching but soon moved away.
Draiman:....I'll be...in..in my room..
He looked slightly depressed, it wasn't about the whole ranking situation, but he took notice, big notice of something, he lowered his head and walked past the Dark Lord herself, he didn't know if she was pleased or what, but he wanted to be alone at the moment.
He proceeded towards his Quater, as some students got out of his way and he made himself quick and soon entered his room, the door closed behind him once he entered.
He took the cloak off and threw it upon a rank, he was left shirtless at the moment, he moved towards his bed area and sat down sighing slightly, he took hold of his saber and juggled it a bit in his right hand.
Draiman: Life is too short......short for what?...
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:47 pm
"Of course," Atra said, sweeping back to allow him access to the doorway.
She watched as he strode away, and as soon as he was out of sight, she glanced back to the surrounding officers.
She crossed her arm, staring in approval as the floor and wall areas were cleaned up. The droid gave her a mechanical bow, and left, the others trailing behind it.
She caught the arm of a passing officer, and spoke to him in hushed tones for a while.. The area was quickly cleared for the two to talk in private, their expressions giving no indication on their current subject.
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Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 12:16 am
The bodies hit the sand, lifeless and obviosly dead. Meanwhile, the only survivor was back in the ship wondering why they had been gone for more then a day. They were only supposed to search for food and water then come back. They had been gone for way to long, and they were armed, so it couldnt have been animals. Had they died for some other reason? The sgt didnt have time, or the care to find out. He had to get the power back oline and get the half smashed beacon online. That was a good days work, maybe more.
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