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 Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 12:36 pm
Meta Fish The paragraph long history on each new character seemed to make it drag quite a bit, but other than that, I like it alright. sorry about that, I wanted to bring them all into the light at once so I could just go at a quicker pace for the later chapters, that and I am still learning a bit on how to write a chapter by chapter story. Thanks for still reading
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:31 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:35 pm
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! IT ROCKS!!!!! *bows to Seaphron for being a dagger user too* whee 4laugh blaugh cool ninja
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:37 pm
Nice chapter, some good humour and cool action too.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:59 pm
I wonder how that Lifeless guy is doing with his scythe...
-pushes Maul over-
Hah, take that.
Good chapter.
Lolz Draken.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 7:06 pm
Lifeless-Fox I wonder how that Lifeless guy is doing with his scythe...
-pushes Maul over-
Hah, take that.
Good chapter.
Lolz Draken.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 7:15 pm
*falls then at last second trips LF and recovers*
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Nice going getting my "big a** sword" in it. Claymore's are fun!
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:15 pm
Nice chapter, I liked it quite a bit. Quote: both for sure thinking “Draken...swore” That was great I lmao when I read that. Quote: Seaphron questioned Draken “do you have those things color coated?!” Shouldn't that be color coded? Quote: responded by Koosei, “yeah, I know she is down, want to help me please!” That I dunno why but it seemed funny and the added please made me think she was kinda flirty (in a good way)
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:21 pm
Seaphron Nice chapter, I liked it quite a bit. Quote: both for sure thinking “Draken...swore” That was great I lmao when I read that. Quote: Seaphron questioned Draken “do you have those things color coated?!” Shouldn't that be color coded? Quote: responded by Koosei, “yeah, I know she is down, want to help me please!” That I dunno why but it seemed funny and the added please made me think she was kinda flirty (in a good way) *smacks head* how the hell did I screw up on color coded? XD Glad that youl liked it though well it is fixed, I feel like a dumbass after that one XD
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:24 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:26 pm
glad you feel like posting, how did you like the chapter Maul?
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:42 am
Seaphron Quote: responded by Koosei, “yeah, I know she is down, want to help me please!” That I dunno why but it seemed funny and the added please made me think she was kinda flirty (in a good way) yeah. I could so see my character snapping at them there. xp never thought of the flirty though. xd AWESOME chapter, Sauvie. biggrin can't wait to see how Maul's gonna barge into the battle. and, I'm actually hoping that he manages to win the battle for us.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:49 am
Koosei xd yeah. I could so see my character snapping at them there. xp never thought of the flirty though. Who knows it was probably my fever talking. XD we all already know you are going to be in charge of us.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:51 am
Seaphron Koosei xd yeah. I could so see my character snapping at them there. xp never thought of the flirty though. Who knows it was probably my fever talking. XD we all already know you are going to be in charge of us. who ever said that? *innocent grin*
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:54 am
Koosei Seaphron Koosei xd yeah. I could so see my character snapping at them there. xp never thought of the flirty though. Who knows it was probably my fever talking. XD we all already know you are going to be in charge of us. who ever said that? *innocent grin* Does anyone need to?
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