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 Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 8:36 am
All Approved. You have some very interesting jutsu concepts. Approved
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:56 pm
Jutsu Name: Byōki (Sickness)
Jutsu Type:] Medical, Public
Jutsu Rank: D
Jutsu Description: A slightly altered form of the chakra scalpel, the medical shinobi coats his or her hands or projectiles (at this stage, the jutsu isn't advanced enough to coat long weapons such as swords) in poisonous chakra. The user can choose when he or she activates the jutsu the effect. It will either take off two chakra points per turn or two stamina points per turn, once it hits the enemy. Regardless, the jutsu lasts a total of two posts at two points per post, then one post of one point, then the jutsu wears off completely. This justu does not stack with itself. i.e. if the user hits the enemy with two coated kunai at once, it doesn't last six posts. However, after the three posts, the user can use the justu again to its full effect.
This justu, as it was made by and for medical ninja, can be paired with [AUGMENT] and other taijutsu styles, or kenjutsu styles that involve kunai, senbon, or arrows.
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:22 pm
Karnitis Jutsu Name: Byōki (Sickness) Jutsu Type:] Medical, Public Jutsu Rank: D Jutsu Description: A slightly altered form of the chakra scalpel, the medical shinobi coats his or her hands or projectiles (at this stage, the jutsu isn't advanced enough to coat long weapons such as swords) in poisonous chakra. The user can choose when he or she activates the jutsu the effect. It will either take off two chakra points per turn or two stamina points per turn, once it hits the enemy. Regardless, the jutsu lasts a total of two posts at two points per post, then one post of one point, then the jutsu wears off completely. This justu does not stack with itself. i.e. if the user hits the enemy with two coated kunai at once, it doesn't last six posts. However, after the three posts, the user can use the justu again to its full effect. This justu, as it was made by and for medical ninja, can be paired with [AUGMENT] and other taijutsu styles, or kenjutsu styles that involve kunai, senbon, or arrows. First off I would like to complement you as this technique is pretty interesting. However so as not to cause issue with the poison creation of the assassin class a few changes and clarifications must be made. First this poison can only affect chakra or stamina, not both. Or you could forgo both and create a medical condition to afflict the enemy? I do have a few questions though. If I strike an enemy with two poisoned kunai although the poison doesn't last for six posts is the enemy still drained of stamina points for the second weapon. If not does this mean only one weapon can be infused with poison at a time. Finally how can it be used with Augment?
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Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 10:43 pm
Martin Spiralwave Karnitis Jutsu Name: Byōki (Sickness) Jutsu Type:] Medical, Public Jutsu Rank: D Jutsu Description: A slightly altered form of the chakra scalpel, the medical shinobi coats his or her hands or projectiles (at this stage, the jutsu isn't advanced enough to coat long weapons such as swords) in poisonous chakra. The user can choose when he or she activates the jutsu the effect. It will either take off two chakra points per turn or two stamina points per turn, once it hits the enemy. Regardless, the jutsu lasts a total of two posts at two points per post, then one post of one point, then the jutsu wears off completely. This justu does not stack with itself. i.e. if the user hits the enemy with two coated kunai at once, it doesn't last six posts, and the chakra/stamina drain is the same as if only one coated kunai hit. However, after the three posts, the user can use the justu again to its full effect. This justu, as it was made by and for medical ninja, can be paired with [AUGMENT] and other taijutsu styles, or kenjutsu styles that involve kunai, senbon, or arrows. First off I would like to complement you as this technique is pretty interesting. However so as not to cause issue with the poison creation of the assassin class a few changes and clarifications must be made. First this poison can only affect chakra or stamina, not both. Or you could forgo both and create a medical condition to afflict the enemy? I do have a few questions though. If I strike an enemy with two poisoned kunai although the poison doesn't last for six posts is the enemy still drained of stamina points for the second weapon. If not does this mean only one weapon can be infused with poison at a time. Finally how can it be used with Augment? Gratzi mrgreen as I rank up (if this goes the way I'd like) I'll add C,B, and A rank versions as well. well, just so we're clear, it can't do both at the same time, it's either one or the other. Or is that still not allowed? The idea of a medical condition is intriguing, but I think I'll stick to chakra/stamina for now. Humhumhum. More than one can be infused, but only one will be effective. I say this so if I infuse three senbon, I'll be paying for the jutsu three times, but this way my opponent has to dodge all three. If I say that only one can be infused at a time, then all my opponent has to do is dodge the glowing senbon and the other two arent that dangerous. I meant the user could use both justu with the same fist. Of course chakra will be paid for both jutsu, but this way, if I punch my opponent in the ribs, not only will he be suffering broken bones but he'll also be poisoned.
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Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2011 8:31 pm
Jutsu Name: Raiton Fist
Jutsu Type: Nin/Tai < Personal >
Jutsu Rank: C
Jutsu Description: The user makes a fist, and coats it with raiton chakra, not manipulated raiton chakra, just one hundred percent raw raiton chakra. This technique works the same was as a Konaga's raging spirit, in the fact it'll leavethe user's hand chakra burned. This technique is only usable by a Konaga, as they have the ability of the Raging spirit. Although this technique does push them one pain level higher for 3 posts, as it is self triggering a raging spirit.
Jutsu Name: Crashing Thunder
Jutsu Type: Nin/Tai < Personal >
Jutsu Rank: D
Jutsu Description: This technique is basic, in the fact that it is using Raiton chakra to enhance a downward kick. The attack itself is capable of slightly paralysing shockwaves, and will leave burn marks on an opponent, and possible broken bones. The technique is fairly easy to dodge though.
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2012 7:08 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:31 pm
Karnitis Martin Spiralwave Karnitis Jutsu Name: Byōki (Sickness) Jutsu Type:] Medical, Public Jutsu Rank: D Jutsu Description: A slightly altered form of the chakra scalpel, the medical shinobi coats his or her hands or projectiles (at this stage, the jutsu isn't advanced enough to coat long weapons such as swords) in poisonous chakra. The user can choose when he or she activates the jutsu the effect. It will either take off two chakra points per turn or two stamina points per turn, once it hits the enemy. Regardless, the jutsu lasts a total of two posts at two points per post, then one post of one point, then the jutsu wears off completely. This justu does not stack with itself. i.e. if the user hits the enemy with two coated kunai at once, it doesn't last six posts, and the chakra/stamina drain is the same as if only one coated kunai hit. However, after the three posts, the user can use the justu again to its full effect. This justu, as it was made by and for medical ninja, can be paired with [AUGMENT] and other taijutsu styles, or kenjutsu styles that involve kunai, senbon, or arrows. First off I would like to complement you as this technique is pretty interesting. However so as not to cause issue with the poison creation of the assassin class a few changes and clarifications must be made. First this poison can only affect chakra or stamina, not both. Or you could forgo both and create a medical condition to afflict the enemy? I do have a few questions though. If I strike an enemy with two poisoned kunai although the poison doesn't last for six posts is the enemy still drained of stamina points for the second weapon. If not does this mean only one weapon can be infused with poison at a time. Finally how can it be used with Augment? Gratzi mrgreen as I rank up (if this goes the way I'd like) I'll add C,B, and A rank versions as well. well, just so we're clear, it can't do both at the same time, it's either one or the other. Or is that still not allowed? The idea of a medical condition is intriguing, but I think I'll stick to chakra/stamina for now. Humhumhum. More than one can be infused, but only one will be effective. I say this so if I infuse three senbon, I'll be paying for the jutsu three times, but this way my opponent has to dodge all three. If I say that only one can be infused at a time, then all my opponent has to do is dodge the glowing senbon and the other two arent that dangerous. I meant the user could use both justu with the same fist. Of course chakra will be paid for both jutsu, but this way, if I punch my opponent in the ribs, not only will he be suffering broken bones but he'll also be poisoned. Well then, approved.
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Posted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 4:03 pm
Martin, now that we have a genjutsu system and it seems solid, can you re-look over my Weeping Angels jutsu?
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:35 pm
Jutsu Name: Shadowplay: Assassination Technique
Jutsu Type: Fuuton ninjutsu, public
Jutsu Rank: C
Jutsu Description: Despite its namesake, this technique utilizes air rather than Nara clan techniques. After making a few handsigns, within five seconds a jet-black weapon is woven from the air into your hand (staff, dagger, katana, axe, kunai). It is as strong as its physical counterpart, though at almost no weight (so weapons that rely on weight, such as the battleaxe, would be much weaker). The weapons last for three posts, and have a cool-down of two posts. This jutsu is useful for catching opponents off-guard, by negating the necessity of carrying a weapon and thus appearing unarmed. At jounin rank, the jutsu lasts five posts and the cool-down of three.
{Also, Martin, if you could get the chance, please add Byoki, Overcompensate, and Thunderclap to the justu list}
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:32 am
Karnitis Jutsu Name: Doton: Naku Tenshi (Earth Release: Weeping Angel) Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, Public Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Description: The jutsu is activated by performing handsigns and then making eye contact with the enemy. The enemy must watch the handsigns as well to be caught in the genjutsu. Immediately the ninja will notice something out of both sides of his periphreal vision. Once he turns around, he'll notice that on all four sides of him, about 15 feet away, are stone angels, their faces covered by their hands, as if crying. Every time the ninja looks away from any of the angels, or even blinks, they get closer. As they are each on a different side there is no way the ninja can see them all at once. Once any one angel gets within five feet, it's posture changes. Its hands now more closely resemble claws, and its face is pure anger, mouth wide open and bearing wicked sharp teeth, with two sets of elongated canines on the top and bottom rows of teeth. After all four gotten within 5 feet, they move (even if they are being watched) and begin to attack the ninja and eat his heart. Attacks to the angels do no damage; they are seemingly impossible to kill. Once the angels eat the ninja's heart, the genjutsu ends. The main point of this jutsu is extreme psychological damage, as the ninja has seen his heart eaten in front of his own eyes. They feel the pain of all this. Please note that this is a Reality Change Genjutsu. How long will it take the Angels to get within five feet (keep in mind the duration of an A-rank Genjutsu caps at 4 posts?
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 8:05 am
Martin Spiralwave Karnitis Jutsu Name: Doton: Naku Tenshi (Earth Release: Weeping Angel) Jutsu Type: Reality Change Genjutsu, Public Jutsu Rank: A Jutsu Description: The jutsu is activated by performing handsigns and then making eye contact with the enemy. The enemy must watch the handsigns as well to be caught in the genjutsu. Immediately the ninja will notice something out of both sides of his periphreal vision. Once he turns around, he'll notice that on all four sides of him, about 15 feet away, are stone angels, their faces covered by their hands, as if crying. Every time the ninja looks away from any of the angels, or even blinks, they get closer. As they are each on a different side there is no way the ninja can see them all at once. Once any one angel gets within five feet, it's posture changes (this takes 3 posts). Its hands now more closely resemble claws, and its face is pure anger, mouth wide open and bearing wicked sharp teeth, with two sets of elongated canines on the top and bottom rows of teeth. After all four gotten within 5 feet, they move (even if they are being watched) and begin to attack the ninja and eat his heart. Attacks to the angels do no damage; they are seemingly impossible to kill. Once the angels eat the ninja's heart, the genjutsu ends. The main point of this jutsu is extreme psychological damage, as the ninja has seen his heart eaten in front of his own eyes. They feel the pain of all this. Please note that this is a Reality Change Genjutsu. How long will it take the Angels to get within five feet (keep in mind the duration of an A-rank Genjutsu caps at 4 posts? Done and I edited the quote above to say that it takes 3 posts.
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 1:54 pm
Jutsu Name: Running man
Jutsu Type: Signature Raiton Ninjutsu
Jutsu Rank: A? B?
Jutsu Description: This is a technique that Akira had created (based of off a dance move called the running man) when he was 8. He created this jutsu because at this time he was alone and he wasn't very strong so instead of fighting most of the people that tried to steal from him or even kill him he would just grab the important stuff and run to a new place. Somehow his dad would always find him though and Akira was always elated to see his dad. How this technique is performed is simple. Akira starts with one foot forward and one foot back. His front leg is bent at the knee and his back leg is straight. Then he brings his front leg underneath him and his back leg forward at a 90 degree angle (foot still in the air). Finally he completes the move by bringing what was his front leg behind him and what was his back leg in front of him. Akira repeats this process several times increasing his speed each time. The friction created begins to increase and sparks start to engulf Akira and soon he looks like a human-shaped lightning bolt.
In this form Akira is much faster (+1 to speed) and adds lightning to his physical attacks. If he were to step on leaves they might catch fire and dirt would turn into a glassy rock. Water techniques may touch Akira but if the water that is touching Akira is touching someone else at the same time they will be electrocuted for the duration of the connection. In this form Akira cannot utilize techniques that require chakra. This technique can last for a few hours before Akira needs to deactivate the technique so he wont suffer from electrical burns (1st 5 posts=3 cp per post, 2nd 5 posts =6 per post, after those 10 posts 9cp per post and 9sp per post and scars will form from the burns when they heal.) (this technique requires the speed attribute and lightning resistance training)
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