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 Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:20 pm
Would I be denied if I created a weapon that absorbed Hate, Ambition, and Determination from an opponent. I was thinking a holy CaneBlade that would render opponents unwilling to fight.
Geniues, right? No?
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:26 pm
Beatriz-chan Name of weapon: Hone O Gensui - 骨を減衰 (Decaying Bones) Who owns the weapon: Kiyoko Kaguya Where it was found/Who made it: A sword mastersmith with vast knowledge of the Kaguya bone creation cells, forged a weapon that reacted to their ability. The Range of the weapon: 1.9 meters (6,2 feet) Weakness: Extreme heat, the blade still has metal. Lightning isn't a weakness though due to its mix with the bones when it was forged, what caused it to be more insulating. Description: The blade's color is pure white and it is made of a kind of metal that is similar to the Kaguya's bones. In order to create this Katana, a bone, made by Kiyoko, of the size of a katana was used along with special metal that reacts to the bone cells that created the bone used when forging this sword. The result was a pure white blade. At first look the blade doesn't seem to have any special ability, but as the bone manipulation ability would be used, the same cells of the Kaguya bloodline that allow them to create bones are created all over the katana. But there is a difference, the cells produced by the katana, are modified by the special metal. When they are in contact with another person other than Kiyoko, the cells invade that person's organism and look for the nearest bone. Once the cells find a bone, they would start to destroy that bone and then look for another bone to destroy. After the bones are destroyed, the cells stop acting for a while before they create an exact copy of the bones that were destroyed by them, inflicting a good amount of pain since the bones would be regrowing inside the victim's body. After they recreate the bones, the cells destroy themselves ending their life cycle. Bone Cells' cycle: 1st post: The cells have just entered the victim's body and will look for a bone, no symptoms are shown. 2nd post: The bone was found and started to be destroyed. The cells act quickly and would have destroyed already 10% of a bone at the end of the victim's post. 3rd post: The cells are already used to the victim's bone and the process is hastened. 30% of the bone is destroyed at the end of that post. 4th post: Being at a hastened pace, if the victim continued to move the bone infected will be 60% destroyed at the end of the post. If the victim didn't move 50% of the bone would be already destroyed at the end of the post. 5th post: The cells hastened their pace once more and the bone would be 85% destroyed even if the victim didn't move and 95% destroyed if the victim moved. 6th post: The bone is already destroyed. The cells begin to look for another bone. 7th post: With the already hastened pace of the cells, when they find another bone, it would be 30% destroyed at the end of that post and double their speed with each post. 8th post: 60% 9th post: 100% These cells now won't destroy more bones. 10th post: The cells are still not acting and their metabolism has slowed down. 11st post: The cells started working again, but instead of destroying bones, they now create copies of the bones that were destroyed, at a slower pace since their metabolism slowed down. 12nd post: 10% of both of the bones started to be created. 13rd post: 20% of the bones were recreated already. 14th post: 30% 15th post: 40% 16th post: 50% 17th post: 60% 18th post: 70% 19th post: 85% 20th post: 100% The cells have finished their life cycle and destroy themselves without causing anything else to the victim's body. During the bone destruction process, the victim feels an intense pain at the moment it starts and it lasts untill the end of the process. The feeling is as if inside the part of the body where the bone is being destroyed is burning. (Resistance to Flame or anything like that doesn't affect this effect since it is not real burn) During the bone creation process, the victim feels as if the area that was "burned" is now being stabbed as the bone forces its way when being recreated. With each hit that lands on the same area, the process of bone destruction advances 1 more stage but doesn't advance from the last destruction stage to the inactivity stage. When at the bone recreation process, it causes the process to be slowed down and go back 1 stage but doesn't go back to inactivity stage. Though the cycle is shown with two bones at most, when the area touched by the sword has several small bones, like the hands or the feet, then the cycle of destroying 1 bone, would mean destroying half of the bones of that hand/foot, the cycle of the second bone would be destroying the second half. Same applies for the recreation cycle. If by any chance, the sword touches the enemy's vertebral column, the most it would destroy is 50% of it and the pain caused at destruction and creation would be about 3 times more painfull due to the location. A strike at that region while the bones are being recreated could cause the victim to be unable to move untill he/she is taken to hospital and healed by a medical shinobi of at least jounin rank for 5 posts. In order to cure the victim, it would require 10 posts for a genin rank medical shinobi to cure the victim, 7 for a chuunin and 5 for a jounin or higher medical shinobi. During the healing process, the bone cells are put at an inactivity state for 1 post and then those cells start to recreate the bones, without pain. If by any chance the process is interrupted, the cells will start to destroy the bones again at the same pace they were before, while becoming more resistant to the treatment. If they become resistant, the number of posts to cure the victim will increase by X posts, being X the number of times the treatment was interrupted. If the process is interrupted more than five times, the cells advance their stage to the inactivity stage and if the victim is cured at that stage, the cells will be destroyed without creating the bones. Meaning it would be better if the victim isn't cured at that stage. Even though it can be cured, an antidote doesn't give the same results of a medical treatment. The antidote won't completely heal the victim since what is causing the problem are cells that are seen as normal bone cells, the most an antidote can do is slow down the process, keeping the cells inactive for 2 posts before they restart their activity and don't work more than twice seeing as the cells can easily become resistant. Rp Sample: On her way back to Iwagakure, Kiyoko was tempted to test her new sword. She was traveling alone with Kaze and there was nobody else that she could test her sword on. It wouldn't be a good idea to test it on Kaze, he is a genin from her village and Kiyoko doesn't like to harm their villagers if they did nothing wrong. They continued to walk but it seemed to be Kiyoko's lucky day, and unlucky for someone. There was a house by the river they were near. The house was small and simple, but that is not what would help her. The house was being robbed. Kiyoko could see someone through the window, looking for something all over the place, leaving everything a mess. Kiyoko told Kaze to stay there while she looked closer to see what was happening. As she would get closer, Kiyoko could hear someone trying to scream, but the voice was being muffled by something. That was enough for her to walk in and ask what was going on. Kiyoko tried to open the door normaly, but the door was locked, so she used her strength and forced her way through the door. The thief was quite surprised at first but them he noticed the headband Kiyoko had on her neck and realized that the person in front of him was a shinobi. But that didn't make him retreat, the thief pulled out a sickle with a thin chain attached to its handle. He didn't think twice and threw it at Kiyoko. The thief had quite swift movements while throwing but it was nothing that a chuunin wouldn't be able to deal with, maybe even a genin could deal with this guy. But she didn't want this to take too long, the people that lived in that house could get hit by the sickle if she was not carefull. With that in her mind, Kiyoko drew her new katana and slashed at the sickle's chain while she dodged the sickle. The sickle would spin a bit with the impact of her slash on the chain and cause the chain to wrap a bit around the sword. The thief tried to use that as an advantage but it didn't go very well. When he tried to pull the sword using the chain he was holding, Kiyoko launched herself along and pointed the sword to him to stab his arm while he was pulling the chain. A bit scared of her speed, the thief didn't move and his arm was stabbed, close to his shoulder. Kiyoko quickly pulled back her sword, releasing from the chains. When she stabbed him, she had activated the special properties of the sword, injecting the bone cells in the man's arm when he was stabbed. Not too long later, the man came back to himself and noticed he wasn't killed with a single blow. If he survived, he had a chance to kill her, or so he thought. When he tried to lift the arm that was stabbed, even though the wound of the stab was shallow, the pain he was feeling was too much to be a shallow wound, it felt as if his arm was burning inside out and at the same time, it was hard to lift his arm untill the point he couldn't move his arm anymore. His bones were destroyed. "Heh...I guess the sword is doing fine..." Kiyoko said with a smirk. As the man seemed to be in shock with the fact he couldn't move his arm, Kiyoko slowly moved her sword towards him, untill the tip touched the man's forehead and caused it to bleed a bit. The man noticed that, if what happened to his arm was caused by the sword, then...could it happen to his head too?? His thoughts were interrupted by another sudden pain inside his arm. The bones were being recreated. "Stop it!" the man screamed. If the pain of his arm wasn't enough, it wouldn't be a problem, his skull started being affected aswell, causing an unbearable plain. The man looked at Kiyoko, as if he was begging to be killed and be released from his pain. Looking at the man, her sword was almost begging to grant his wish. Kiyoko then did as the man asked with his eyes. With a single strike, Kiyoko's katana pierced through the man's head, leading him to a painless death after so much pain. "You are a really fine weapon." she said while pulling back her sword from the thief's head that had no skull. After she killed the thief, Kiyoko dragged his body out of the house and buried it by a tree. She then walked back to Kaze so they could continue on her way to Iwa. But she had the feeling like if she forgot something...maybe someone that was tied up...but...maybe it was nothing so she continued on her way. Pic:  The changes are underlined, is it okay the way it is now?
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:08 pm
@luo: It is just a gourd that to carry sand. It is able to rebuild its self once broken so that the user dosnt have to go get a new gourd after every fight. It can be used for defense but not really like how gaara had auto sand defense. The user can hold the gourd out infront of them to soften a physical blow such as a punch but must have 50% of the gourd filled with sand. In doing so the gourd is destroyed and because of the sand inside of it it softens the blow.
The gourd its self isnt sand but it is turned into a sandy material when damaged that cant be used for jutsus. When useing the jutsu to rebuild the gourd it uses the sandy material the gourd turned into and that's all.
Water would indeed turn the sand into mud within the gourd but it wouldnt turn the gourd its self into mud.
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:19 pm
@Beatriz: Perfecto.
@Orchid: But, the gourd itself is made out of sand nes pas(right in French)? Make it so that it takes one jounin level water jutsu to destroy the gourd itself, and apart from that I'll approve it. Sound fair?
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:23 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:24 pm
Gourds can be made out of many things >.>
but 1 jounin rank water jutsu is fine >.< they still have to hit the gourd for it to be destroyed lol >.<
ill change that right now
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:25 pm
Orchid Moon  Name of weapon: Sand Gourd Who owns the weapon: Sand Element Shinobi Where it was found/Who made it: The user infuses their chakra into the materials used to make the gourd. The Range of the weapon: N/A Weakness: Takes one jounin level water jutsu to destroy the gourd along with hard blows to it... see below. Description: When the users Gourd was created, he/she infused his/her chakra into the materials used to make it. This gourd is no different from other gourds except for its ability to reform its self when broken. When broken, the gourd will change into sand that cannot be used for jutsus but it will not just fall apart. The gourd will keep its shape until 45% of it is cracked/ destroyed. If it is cut in half horizontally, the top half will turn into sand and no longer hold shape. If it is cut vertically, both half's will turn to sand and no longer be able to hold its shape. The gourd can also be used to soften blows to the back of the user or if the gourd is moved to block a physical attack the same effect will happen. (this can only happen is 50% or more of the gourd if full of sand) Name: Gourd Reconstruction Description: Due to the users Gourd being infused with chakra it is able to reform with the cost of chakra. This is a passive ability once learned. It requires 5 posts of forcing the gourd to reform, after the first time it requires 1 post to reform. During those 5 posts it costs the normal cost plus a additional 2 chakra per post. Chakra Cost: 4 Gregar said no rp sample is needed since this is basically gaara's gourd.
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:38 pm
tinymini7 Name of weapon: Kichiro
Who owns the weapon: Kai Muruno
Where it was found/Who made it: Kai grandfather made Kichiro for Kai. He spend two whole years making this weapon for his future granddaughter, but gave it to Kai anyway when he was born. "A disappointment" was what he said when he handed it to Kai on his first birthday.
The Range of the weapon: 42 in
Weakness: Very fragile but still strong enough to take several solid blow (Five) before it start breaking apart.
Description:Kichiro
A thin white katana that can easily cut through flesh and pierced armor. Its thin blade can easily go for the opening of a full suit armor and between the ribs. The tip of the blade is coated in poison that can paralyze an elephant with just a touch. The middle of the blade are hollow, containing a small dose of poison that can cause excrutionary pain and hallucination. The poison are released when the holder twisted the handle. The end of the handle also contain a poison gas that caused hallucination and a slight effect of body paralyze for a short amount of time. The poison gas is colorless and odorless and take effect right after it got inhale into the body. Unless one is train with these poison since birth, they will not be able to fight off the poison by themselves. The blade can be easily repaired with the right equipment and a little time thank to Kai bloodline.
Rp Sample:Kai let out a tired sigh as he arrive at the kirigakure gate. He saw the three chounins guarding the gate and smiled evilly. It was around three in the morning and the moon was covered by the clouds. "This is going to be easy." He said to himself as he slowly faded into the darkness. He had planned out everything and are prepare to kill.
Silently, Kai followed the weakest of the three chounins. He waited and waited until the young man walked away from the group to patrol the area. The young man must be a novice at gate duty because he went out of sigh of the other two when it was still dark and without back up. Kai smiled got brighter as he crept up beside the boy and placed the tip of Kichiro on the young man neck, right next to his spine. "Go to sleep." He whispered into the boy ears as the tip of Kichiro slightly cut the boy neck, but that was all it took for the poison to work. He let out a sigh as the young man body went limp and he hit the ground without a sound with Kai help.
Kai couldn't believe that they would place someone like this on guard duty. He shook his head and went back to work. Quickly he went back to the gate and nearly laughed out loud when he saw that there was only one chounin guarding the gate. He quickly climbed up a three to see that the other chounin went to the restroom and by the expression on his face Kai doesn't expect the man to be back soon. He silently climb back down and approach the last chounin. Now wanting to kill anyone today, he silently sneak up behind the man and placed the tip of Kichiro at the man neck, but was caught by surprise when the other chounin, who he thought to have went to the restroom, appeared behind him. He chuckled weakly and raised his hands up into the air. "No trouble." He said and smiled as he look at the chounins.
Both of the chounins looked at him with discuss and took out their own weapon, but before they can fully unsheathe their katanas Kai cut the first chounin on his wrist and smiled went his body went limp and he fell to the ground with a thud. The other guy prepared to jump back but Kai expected that. He bend forward and pierced the guy through the arm. The poison on the tip must have been used up because the guy was still standing. He sighed and moved toward the now whimpering Chounin who is on his kneed. "Now," He whispered into the Chounin ear. "If I twist this handle then you are a goner. So, you want to do this the hard way or what?" The chounin shook his head and Kai smiled brightly before knocking him out. He gently helped the man lied down before pulling out Kichiro and bandaged up his arm. He stood up after he got done with the first aid and faced the gate. Taking in a deep breath he walked pass the gate and into the village. Entering the village took longer than he though. Common man, you're ignoring me
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:39 pm
Orchid: Haha, yes definitely. If the attack isn't directed at the gourd, then it doesn't count. And with that....
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:43 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:44 pm
 Name of weapon: Hanone Ken Sangai (Fang Blade Havoc) Who owns the weapon: Kaze Arashi Where it was found: Given to Kaze by Mr.Kurozan, a man Kaze ad the Tsuchikage helped on a mission. The Range of the weapon: All Ranges; 60 cm (23.6 inches) Weakness: Delay when charging the blasts. Over 50 Chakra Points injected into blade. Pure melee when firing a wave of chakra. Description: It has a red handle, and a fairly original blade shape. It has a lever between the hilt and the handle. It was said that pushing that lever could be very….Useful. But, overall, this blade is a chakra monster….Of the user. Abilities: -Storage As soon as the user grabs the blades handle, it begins sucking the users chakra into the blade each post the user holds the blade. It absorbs 1 chakra point each post, unless the user decides to inject more chakra into it. This technique is used to further advance other techniques of this blade. Once the blade reaches the max amount of chakra absorption from the user, which is 20 chakra points, the user can then use further attacks with this blade. Though, the real limit of the blade is 50 chakra points. [Academy|3 Posts to Learn| +1 Chakra Point per Post] -Chakra Wave The user presses the lever on the sword, which would release the stored chakra becomes condensed, then launches that condensed chakra at the opponent in the shape of a Fang. It is 5 ft high, 3 ft wide blast. Whatever the color of the users chakra, will be the color of the chakra blast. This blast, if it has enough friction, can burn small objects. Such as grass, bugs, toys, etc. [Genin|5 Posts to Learn| 5 Chakra per blast] -Great Chakra Wave This technique is just a greater version of Chakra Release. The condensed chakra, when fired out, has the blast much larger than before. Making the size 10ft high and 8ft wide when fired out of the tip of the blade. Whatever the color of the users chakra, will be the color of the chakra blast. This blast, if it has enough friction, can burn objects. Such as cars, outposts, animals, etc. [Chuunin|7 Posts to Learn | 15 Chakra per blast] -Final Overwhelming Chakra Wave The final technique in the Chakra Wave series. The user pours an overwhelming amount of chakra into the blade. This causes it to overwhelm with chakra. If the user pours over the max amount of chakra, the blade will glow the color of their chakra. This technique involves 4 strikes, no matter how much chakra was put in, as long as it was over the max amount 50. The user swings the blade 4 times in any direction, with the blast being 20 ft and 13ft wide. This technique can only be used once every battle. [Jounin+ Only |10 Posts to Learn| 21+ Chakra Points] Rp Sample: It’s been a while since Kaze was backed into a corner like this, Travelling the world on a scouting mission at Jounin. Easy enough right? Wrong. Because Kaze’s identity has been revealed worldwide, as the Yonbi Jinchuriki, everyone always tries to fight him. Test his power….Fun. Chakra wasting? Yes. Boring? No.
”Pfft. Having to push myself this far to defend myself from some guys….I shouldn’t be breathing so heavily...” Kaze said out loud in the midst of battle with two formidable foes. They wore black cloaks, with blue clouds on them. These guys were much different from the other guys with red clouds. ’These guys are different....’ Kaze thought, reaching for the sword on his back, in it’s sheathe. ’to think…I’d have to resort to using my blade….’ Kaze thought, pulling it from it’s sheathe. Also, before Kaze reached for his sword, he searched his ninja pouch on his hip, reaching for his Military Raitons Pills ,checking if he had it. He did, so he took his hand out of the pouch, and grabbed the handle of the blade. ”What’s wrong, Soukou! One of the men shouted. Being called Soukou highly irritated Kaze. Ever since the word got out he was the Yonbi Jinchuriki, people have been calling him that instead of his own name. ”My name is not Soukou!” Kaze shouted as he began to pour (15) chakra (points) into his sword.
[76/91Chakra Points]
[15/20 Chakra Point Charge]
The man laughed. ”Whatever!” The man said. The second man stood there. He had black shades, and the black cloak with blue clouds on it,”….” He said as he lifted up his arms above his head, releasing hundreds of bugs from under his cloak, towards Kaze.”Insect Sphere.” The Aburame man said. The bugs began to surround Kaze, then enclosed him in their own sphere, and began eating away at his chakra. ”Yeah! Way to go!” The man shouted. ’Not yet…I have to win this on my own!’ Kaze thought. It was directed to his….’Guest’ Kaze, being in a sphere of bugs, seeing nothing but black bugs surrounding him, lifted up his blade to the air. Kaze then swung his blade downward in the direction of the men, even though he was surrounded by bugs. ”Chakra Wave!” Kaze shouted as silver chakra came out of the blade in the shape of a fang, similar to that of an Inuzuka clan member’s fang on their face.
The wave of chakra tore through the bugs, though, it was not enough for Kaze to make it through.
[0/20 Chakra Points Charge]The aburame sighed as some of his bugs were killed by the wave of chakra. But, that wasn’t all, the aburame jumped out of the way of the wave of chakra, for it had torn right through the bugs, and headed for the Aburame and his partner. [15/20 Charge Points Charge]”Tch.” The Aburame spat, looking toward his partner. ”Aren’t you going to help?” He asked, irritated his bugs were doing all the work. Though, his bugs had quickly covered the area Kaze had made a whole in. [30/20 Chakra Points Charged -Overflow] ”Alright, alright. Byakugan!” The man said after performing some hand seals. ”Here we go!” The man shouted as he moved toward the incest dome, knowing Kaze would fire out another wave of chakra. The Hyuuga planned on destroying the blast, then kill Kaze. That time the two men were talking, Kaze had enough time to gather enough chakra to finish this battle.
[61/91 Chakra Points]
”Final Overwhelming Chakra Wave!” Kaze shouted, and swung his blade once, in the direction of the two men. That wave of chakra shot out of the tip of the blade, it was colored silver, and very large. It destroyed that half of the incest dome, and the wave was shaped like a fang, and continued its path toward the men. But, Kaze swung his blade again, sending another wave of chakra shaped like a fang, toward the two men. Then, Kaze did a third, then a fourth, all consecutive. Kaze himself disappeared after the four waves of chakra launched at the two men. The aburame man was talking with the Hyuuga guy about watching out for those chakra waves. Unlucky for him, the Hyuuga man was standing right in front of the incest dome, which caused him to get hit by all four waves, which put him in a hell of a lot of pain.”Ahh! Help me Shinko!” The Hyuuga shouted, rolling around on the ground, in serious pain. As the Aburame man looked at the large waves of chakra, and his partner saying to help him. So, the Aburame man rushed toward his partner, thinking he could pass the wave of chakra. Little did he know, it was fairly large for a blast of that size, but, the Aburame didn’t know how wide it was because it wasn’t that closed to it. So, when he did get close to it, he realized something. He was screwed.
The man made of insects avoided the first blast, but it just barely caught onto his cloak. The Aburame named Shinko, spun to avoid the first wave, but, that landed him a direct hit from the second wave. This had him take a direct hit to the center of the front of his body. ’Damnit....’ Shinko thought as he dropped to his knees and took the last two waves of chakra to the body.
He was now in pain, his cloak, blowing in the breeze. The Aburame, Shinko was himself in pain. He would describe it as….He hit a brick wall. The insects near Kaze, died from the sheer pain of the blast. Since it is bigger than them. ”Interesting…” A nearby woman said, walking from behind a tree, and laughed. She wore the same cloak the blue clouds as the other two. ”Didn’t I tell you guys not to try? He’s too strong and you two are goof balls. Fufufufufufu.”Kaze was up in a tree, a distance away. ’Whatever....’ Kaze thought, as he began to leap from tree to tree to escape the area. ’What a hassle…A true pain in the a**.’ Kaze thought, as he sheathed his sword and leaped from tree to tree to continue his scouting mission.
[46/91 Chakra Points]
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:26 pm
 Name of weapon: Kichiro
Who owns the weapon: Kai Muruno
Where it was found/Who made it: Kai grandfather made Kichiro for Kai. He spend two whole years making this weapon for his future granddaughter, but gave it to Kai anyway when he was born. "A disappointment" was what he said when he handed it to Kai on his first birthday.
The Range of the weapon: 42 in
Weakness: Very fragile but still strong enough to take several solid blow (Five) before it start breaking apart.
Description: A thin white katana that can easily cut through flesh and pierced thin armor. Its thin blade can easily go for the opening of a full suit armor and between the ribs, aiming for the heart. The tip of the blade is coated in poison that can paralyze an elephant with just a touch. The middle of the blade are hollow, containing a small dose of poison that can cause excrutionary pain and hallucination. The poison are released when the holder twisted the handle. The end of the handle also contain a poison gas that caused hallucination and a slight effect of body paralyze for a short amount of time. The poison gas is colorless and odorless and take effect right after it got inhale into the body. Unless one is train with these poison since birth, they will not be able to fight off the poison by themselves. The blade can be easily repaired with the right equipment and a little time thank to Kai bloodline.
Rp Sample:Kai let out a tired sigh as he arrive at the kirigakure gate. He saw the three chounins guarding the gate and smiled evilly. It was around three in the morning and the moon was covered by the clouds. "This is going to be easy." He said to himself as he slowly faded into the darkness. He had planned out everything and are prepare to kill.
Silently, Kai followed the weakest of the three chounins. He waited and waited until the young man walked away from the group to patrol the area. The young man must be a novice at gate duty because he went out of sigh of the other two when it was still dark and without back up. Kai smiled got brighter as he crept up beside the boy and placed the tip of Kichiro on the young man neck, right next to his spine. "Go to sleep." He whispered into the boy ears as the tip of Kichiro slightly cut the boy neck, but that was all it took for the poison to work. He let out a sigh as the young man body went limp and he hit the ground without a sound with Kai help.
Kai couldn't believe that they would place someone like this on guard duty. He shook his head and went back to work. Quickly he went back to the gate and nearly laughed out loud when he saw that there was only one chounin guarding the gate. He quickly climbed up a three to see that the other chounin went to the restroom and by the expression on his face Kai doesn't expect the man to be back soon. He silently climb back down and approach the last chounin. Now wanting to kill anyone today, he silently sneak up behind the man and placed the tip of Kichiro at the man neck, but was caught by surprise when the other chounin, who he thought to have went to the restroom, appeared behind him. He chuckled weakly and raised his hands up into the air. "No trouble." He said and smiled as he look at the chounins.
Both of the chounins looked at him with discuss and took out their own weapon, but before they can fully unsheathe their katanas Kai cut the first chounin on his wrist and smiled went his body went limp and he fell to the ground with a thud. The other guy prepared to jump back but Kai expected that. He bend forward and pierced the guy through the arm. The poison on the tip must have been used up because the guy was still standing. He sighed and moved toward the now whimpering Chounin who is on his kneed. "Now," He whispered into the Chounin ear. "If I twist this handle then you are a goner. So, you want to do this the hard way or what?" The chounin shook his head and Kai smiled brightly before knocking him out. He gently helped the man lied down before pulling out Kichiro and bandaged up his arm. He stood up after he got done with the first aid and faced the gate. Taking in a deep breath he walked pass the gate and into the village. Entering the village took longer than he though. ...um...
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:42 pm
Um A katana with a hollow middle is a pretty fragile and flawed katana. It would break if you swung it against a tree... And the poison is pretty strong...
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:52 pm
Seeing as how iv made many poisons in this guild >.> i would suggest remaking that poison >.> its op, needs stages of infection and many other things. Such as the amount of posts to make 1 vial of the poison, Charges for how many attacks before the poison runs out. Stuff like that
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 5:16 pm
@iKaze: Since Luo pointed only the elemental chakra thing as something he wouldn't approve, and you removed it already. I believe it is okay. I read it already and found nothing wrong with the other things so, unless Luo has something against it, approved. 
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