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((I had already been informed))

Ok, that's fine.

That's pretty much exactly what I wanted to hear.

Once that's done, please post a link in the Profiles Thread.

Post ze profile link in ze other thread!

((Here is the non-serious stuff))

Here's some sarcasm for you:

Well, according to your physical description, your RPC seems to be a pair of eyes, some hair, and a soul patch. I don't see anything about his body type, what skin tone he is, or the shape of his face.

((Sorry, I had to get that one out of the way))

Physical descriptions should me more than just listing off colors. They aren't even nearly the most important part of your Character's description. That, and your descriptions should be more than describing appearances by referencing other Characters. All information regarding your RPC should be in your own words.


The other things are just little nit-picky things that I have.

I don't quite understand the necessity of the tachi as your sealed form. To me, it seems like a needless addition.

While it isn't an enforceable rule, we (the crew) generally encourage people making new RPCs to stick with regular Katana as their sealed form unless truly necessary.

I took the liberty to look through your profile.

You might want to reread your physical description, as there's a part that doesn't make a fantastic amount of sense and might need rewording and possibly a little bit more detail (you'll know what bit I mean when you see it... trust me. biggrin ).

Other than that, I don't have any more issues with it at this point, so you have my thumbs up.

May i join? ^^

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Vermillion Death, exactly how is Takeda lean and full of muscle? It just sounds quite contradictary to me. Also, you've listed Boxing as a skill, which for the time being I will ask you to remove. You will have the chance to train your RPC in Boxing if you wish, but as a guideline, you're not to include it if you haven't had authorised training, or some kind of special approval, since souls don't remember much, if any, of their past life memories. Lastly, try to add a bit more to your background, because its lacking a little depth.

Kalineza, your profile needs a lot of work. You need to add an actual description to your appearence section, since I find pictures by themselves a very lazy option. That, and you haven't really put much description in at all, if I'm honest. You need to have an idea for Shikai in place, so that if there's any problems when you train for Shikai they can be discussed. Your background is inconsistent with your RPCs age. Feudal Japan was 1185 - 1868, so the soul age in relation to your RPC would be 143 - 826 years old. Also, there isn't enough depth to your background either, so try to include a bit more detail.

Fulmine Rabbia, you're good to go! Go post your profile in the Squad 7 Profiles thread, and I'll add you to the roster shortly.

Bankai isn't much of a "need to have" right now, so don't worry about it at this moment in time. Your profile is accepted, although could you replace the Bleach reference, or follow them up with some kind of description. Believe it or not, there ARE people that do Bleach RPing without actually following the anime/manga, so they won't know who many of the characters are.

Anyway, it's accepted, so go post a link in the profiles thread. Sorry I took so long.