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 Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:41 am
Azeiel the fallen Can i put it as a clan within the Rouge Village that way they retain the non-alignment thing. Also i am working on editing a few of the techs. And it is meant to be a weapon bases clan if you read the weaknesses (i put a new one in there that should even it out a bit) Do you see any problems with any of the particular justsu's
EDIT:@ Akura your damn right you have i was the one who originally jacked the idea from a manga named vampire princess. It has been copied multiple times by annoying little shits that need to ******** stop being a plagiarizing little ******** class="clear"> Bring the hate down a notch and watch the language.
...I'm sure it's frustrating, but there are a few things to remember.
- Imitation is the highest form of flattery.
- Its possible that if you based it off of something (a popular anime) others may have done the same thing, not particularly copying you, but your premise.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:45 am
@ Cobra: Your post look funny rofl
@ Hinote: Thank you ^^ The only reason I picked that style was to tell the guild Captain how OP it was.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:47 am
Hinote Tosatsu @Cobra: I'm holding off on posting in the bar again until Havik and Auggie have had a chance to post.
Have you PMd them telling them that you're waiting for them? Because Havik can be sporadic with his access/posting and Auggie lives in a far different time zone. I just don't want to freeze us for a long time. Kye has work to do.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:48 am
Akura Bashirou @ Cobra: Your post look funny rofl
...or I'll kill you. ninja
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:50 am
@ALL i apologize for the language i cant stand it when people do that crap. Quote: Many as One Rank A Simple A complex pattern of blows converge on the target. You may make a series of 5 blows with the chakra sabers and one with your real sword. All the attacks are real, and each strike can wound your opponent if it connect with flesh Quote: Form Manipulation Rank C Complex Truly skilled practitioners learn to shape the chakra around their weapon into different shapes. From a knife to a broad sword, As long as it is a bladed weapon(katana, longsword, short sword that sort of thing) The weapon formed will retain this shape until the chakra scabbard is removed or until the end of the fight. User CANNOT change the shape of the weapon multiple times in a fight. What do you think of the changes Ps i am going to take out the Hachiwara
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:50 am
@Akura: Huh. When I want to do that, I write a mile long essay on the thing. And then people agree with me, without even a word about what I said. Makes me feel like I wasted my time sometimes...
@Cobra: I have PM'd Havik, and Auggie is waiting for him to post.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:54 am
@Azeiel: The first one is the same, just phrased differently. The real issue is that it doesn't say how the blows are made or anything, leaving it so the user could just do whatever.
And form manipulation is a tough spot in an RP guild like this. It tends to be an excuse to do things that would normally take more chakra. Using that technique, you could use the same amount of chakra to make a zanbato, as you would to make a tanto.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:57 am
That just gave me a idea hang on a sec then check the move again
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:59 am
Cobra_X Akura Bashirou @ Cobra: Your post look funny rofl
...or I'll kill you. ninja Forget it... It's my Laptop that made all the posts to the right for some reason... It looks funny XD @ Hinote: Yea, that must suck. @ Fallen: Lol don't worry about it. Many was one: It doesn't matter, the fact that you can make blades out of chakra is still OP. And what's stopping the person from shooting the blades at the target? What's stoping the person from hitting the target in the same place with all of them? Form Manipulation: Same as above. What's stopping the dude from changing the weapon from a dagger to a bow? From a dagger to a whip? What's stopping the user from having multiple weapons and using the justu multiple times, one different weapons.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 12:00 pm
Azeiel the fallen That just gave me a idea hang on a sec then check the move again
...actually taking the edits you've done and putting them in a post and saying "How about this" is both faster and much more convenient for all parties involved. At the very least, you could provide a link so we don't have to search forums.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 12:09 pm
Can you all please tell me what you think. link
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 12:27 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 12:31 pm
Better, but the form manipulation post length is too long.
...I'll leave the rest of the judging to the officials, but I'll warn you that there will be a lot of editing to be had. You keep referencing the "Chakra Sabres"... but what they actually are seems ambiguous.
Keep in mind, this guild does not take kindly to "lightsabres" and is VERY restrictive on "chakra weapons". Chakra channeling weapons are one thing, but creating weapons from chakra is another... and it is scrutinized very closely.
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 12:31 pm
Can you please tell me what if anything needs changed
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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 12:32 pm
OMG all of page 1423 is weird....
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