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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 9:50 pm
TtheHero J of The Wind TtheHero Ack...
Script format...
Script, script, script.
I can make all the revisions I need to make to flesh out my stories but it's just that the way I address the dialogue is one thing on which I can't budge!
I mean there are some rare instances where i go 'blahblah', said Person and so on so forth, but putting the names in front of most of the speech just feels so... so right.
I do have the narrative parts like a normal story... You seem a little stressed? @ ZK- stare Ah I'm just trying to take the feedback I got and put it to good use. Well, yu're a better person than I am. If I were to somehow ever be able to write a story, I'd be too afraid to post it. I can't handle criticism. Even if the intentions are good, anything said goes into my bottle of suppressed emotions.
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 9:50 pm
Zephyrkitty J of The Wind TtheHero Ack...
Script format...
Script, script, script.
I can make all the revisions I need to make to flesh out my stories but it's just that the way I address the dialogue is one thing on which I can't budge!
I mean there are some rare instances where i go 'blahblah', said Person and so on so forth, but putting the names in front of most of the speech just feels so... so right.
I do have the narrative parts like a normal story... You seem a little stressed? @ ZK- stare I was including myself in that comment. >_> Ya lost me...
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 9:54 pm
Hashire Kazemeijin TtheHero J of The Wind TtheHero Ack...
Script format...
Script, script, script.
I can make all the revisions I need to make to flesh out my stories but it's just that the way I address the dialogue is one thing on which I can't budge!
I mean there are some rare instances where i go 'blahblah', said Person and so on so forth, but putting the names in front of most of the speech just feels so... so right.
I do have the narrative parts like a normal story... You seem a little stressed? @ ZK- stare Ah I'm just trying to take the feedback I got and put it to good use. Well, yu're a better person than I am. If I were to somehow ever be able to write a story, I'd be too afraid to post it. I can't handle criticism. Even if the intentions are good, anything said goes into my bottle of suppressed emotions. Well, Betty and Dan have said some pretty straightforward things.
I know my early eps that are up now, are a bti on the weak side.
They say there are some things that deftly need explaining. Like how the four I meet at the tourney come to be roomates with me, and how even A.N.A.L.Y.Z.E.R. came about.
This has given me a whole load to think about.
And I gotta think less about page length hindering me from keeping the story going.
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 9:55 pm
Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Betman Okay, now I'm confused again. Scruffy, are you bi or something? xD Scruffy is a Ditto, according to another Cultie. XD Yeaah, just keep telling yourself that, baby. That way it's..... Nintendo Cult Appropriate. *massages* wink Who said I agreed with it? *massages back* wink (Got sidetracked with homework. Sorry.) >////<; Ooooh........lowerr.... <3All right~
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:08 pm
Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Betman Okay, now I'm confused again. Scruffy, are you bi or something? xD Scruffy is a Ditto, according to another Cultie. XD Yeaah, just keep telling yourself that, baby. That way it's..... Nintendo Cult Appropriate. *massages* wink Who said I agreed with it? *massages back* wink (Got sidetracked with homework. Sorry.) >////<; Ooooh........lowerr.... <3All right~ ;D <333
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:08 pm
It ain't easy being the king, baby.
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:11 pm
J of The Wind Zephyrkitty J of The Wind TtheHero Ack...
Script format...
Script, script, script.
I can make all the revisions I need to make to flesh out my stories but it's just that the way I address the dialogue is one thing on which I can't budge!
I mean there are some rare instances where i go 'blahblah', said Person and so on so forth, but putting the names in front of most of the speech just feels so... so right.
I do have the narrative parts like a normal story... You seem a little stressed? @ ZK- stare I was including myself in that comment. >_> Ya lost me... I was saying that it's fine. We all make mistakes.
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:19 pm
Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Yeaah, just keep telling yourself that, baby. That way it's..... Nintendo Cult Appropriate. *massages* wink Who said I agreed with it? *massages back* wink (Got sidetracked with homework. Sorry.) >////<; Ooooh........lowerr.... <3All right~ ;D <333I have to go to bed. We can pick up here tomorrow. ;D
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:23 pm
Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Yeaah, just keep telling yourself that, baby. That way it's..... Nintendo Cult Appropriate. *massages* wink Who said I agreed with it? *massages back* wink (Got sidetracked with homework. Sorry.) >////<; Ooooh........lowerr.... <3All right~ ;D <333I have to go to bed. We can pick up here tomorrow. ;D Mmm......."All right~"......
.....Sleep well~ ;x <33
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:26 pm
Hmm... I cnt decide. Which sounds better?
The Orange armada, or
The Orange army
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:26 pm
Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy Zephyrkitty Hobo Scruffy >////<; Ooooh........lowerr.... <3 All right~ ;D <333I have to go to bed. We can pick up here tomorrow. ;D Mmm......."All right~"......
.....Sleep well~ ;x <33You two need a room. >_> with peepholes ninja
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:28 pm
J of The Wind Hmm... I cnt decide. Which sounds better? The Orange armada, or The Orange army I tagged you as the Orange Army in my dossier.
You are tagged for life!
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:29 pm
J of The Wind Hmm... I cnt decide. Which sounds better? The Orange armada, or The Orange army Well, is it a militia or a fleet? talk2hand
@Above: Yeah we do. ;D
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:30 pm
J of The Wind Hmm... I cnt decide. Which sounds better? The Orange armada, or The Orange army I tagged you as the Orange Army in my dossier.
You are tagged for life!
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Eloquent Conversationalist
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Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:31 pm
hai again.
The opening song from 'The Hunchback of Notre Dame' Is pretty awesome.
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