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 Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:10 pm
Glad you two liked it, and I made some culties feel sorry for Maul... I think I have done the un thinkable xd
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 10:51 am
I liked it. I like how Maul was in the chapter it was well done. Nice work
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 4:12 am
Seaphron I liked it. I like how Maul was in the chapter it was well done. Nice work Thanks glad you liked it, but don't you mean how he was portrayed in the chapter? On another note, I have been really sick and working on story one so this story might not have another update untill saturday or sunday
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 4:37 am
Sauvie Seaphron I liked it. I like how Maul was in the chapter it was well done. Nice work Thanks glad you liked it, but don't you mean how he was portrayed in the chapter? On another note, I have been really sick and working on story one so this story might not have another update untill saturday or sunday sweatdrop Yeah that's what I meant. At lest you got the point of it.
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 4:39 am
Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron I liked it. I like how Maul was in the chapter it was well done. Nice work Thanks glad you liked it, but don't you mean how he was portrayed in the chapter? On another note, I have been really sick and working on story one so this story might not have another update untill saturday or sunday sweatdrop Yeah that's what I meant. At lest you got the point of it. Of course I knew what it meant, wasn't a big slip up mrgreen
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:31 pm
eek This story is awesome!
You captured everything that is me, all in one chapter!
Amazing! 12/10!
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:40 pm
Hero Maul eek This story is awesome! You captured everything that is me, all in one chapter! Amazing! 12/10! damn, I got a 12/10 awesome 3nodding Glad you liked it Maul, you are going to be featured a lot more than usual in this story
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:46 pm
Sauvie Hero Maul eek This story is awesome! You captured everything that is me, all in one chapter! Amazing! 12/10! damn, I got a 12/10 awesome 3nodding Glad you liked it Maul, you are going to be featured a lot more than usual in this story Guard that 12/10. ninja Other writers may try to steal it! surprised
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:07 pm
Hero Maul Sauvie Hero Maul eek This story is awesome! You captured everything that is me, all in one chapter! Amazing! 12/10! damn, I got a 12/10 awesome 3nodding Glad you liked it Maul, you are going to be featured a lot more than usual in this story Guard that 12/10. ninja Other writers may try to steal it! surprised the 12/10 is in a select location that only my dog knows... better make sure it aint in the backyard
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 5:20 pm
I have the new chapter written, and I need to type and edit it so Expect it right after Wrestlemania tomorow (so monday) sorry for the delay from one chapter to the other
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 5:27 pm
Sauvie Hero Maul Sauvie Hero Maul eek This story is awesome! You captured everything that is me, all in one chapter! Amazing! 12/10! damn, I got a 12/10 awesome 3nodding Glad you liked it Maul, you are going to be featured a lot more than usual in this story Guard that 12/10. ninja Other writers may try to steal it! surprised the 12/10 is in a select location that only my dog knows... better make sure it aint in the backyard
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 5:29 pm
Fangs666 Sauvie Hero Maul Sauvie Hero Maul eek This story is awesome! You captured everything that is me, all in one chapter! Amazing! 12/10! damn, I got a 12/10 awesome 3nodding Glad you liked it Maul, you are going to be featured a lot more than usual in this story Guard that 12/10. ninja Other writers may try to steal it! surprised the 12/10 is in a select location that only my dog knows... better make sure it aint in the backyard first of all. thanks second. yay Fluffy third. How could she, I don't have a backyard
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 5:34 pm
Sauvie Fangs666 Sauvie Hero Maul Sauvie Hero Maul eek This story is awesome! You captured everything that is me, all in one chapter! Amazing! 12/10! damn, I got a 12/10 awesome 3nodding Glad you liked it Maul, you are going to be featured a lot more than usual in this story Guard that 12/10. ninja Other writers may try to steal it! surprised the 12/10 is in a select location that only my dog knows... better make sure it aint in the backyard first of all. thanks second. yay Fluffy third. How could she, I don't have a backyard
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 6:41 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 12:33 pm
The paragraph long history on each new character seemed to make it drag quite a bit, but other than that, I like it alright.
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