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PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 3:22 pm


Cobra_X
TrafalgarHyozo

With what we've been discussing in PMs, do you still want this sword?


nah, i'm good 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:38 am


Cobra_X
Antonio Inferni
Tsukiakari [Moonlight]


Antonio Inferni
Range: 63cm

The Range of a weapon is not the same as it's Blade length. The range is the maximum distance away from yourself that the weapon can strike.

Antonio Inferni
Weakness: This blade is extremely weak against Suiton and Katon. They do extra damage to it.[E-->D, D-->C, etc]

Any particular reason for this?... and what does it mean that it's weaker?... so what? Jutsu hurt it more... does that mean it will break after absorbing a certain amount of damage, but damage from other elements don't count as damaging the blade at all? Your weakness needs to be more descriptive and make more sense.


Antonio Inferni
Tsuki no hikari [Rays of the Moon]

Question is here, how much damage does it do if it hits someone... a weapon, etc. Jsut saying that the weapon does something isn't good enough, you need to define the effects of the technique in a quantifiable manner so people know how to react to it.


Eh. Can we just forget about this custom weapon. I can use some normal ones for now, while I think of a better idea for one.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:41 pm


Cobra_X


So, giving credit to NanoChip for the ideas, and I edited it some.

He came up with a weakness and Excitement ability.

I've decided to remove the other Raiton ability, having Excitement be the main Raiton ability. So, yeah...
PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:24 pm


Name of weapon: Sex Bob-Omb Bass Guitar
Who owns the weapon: Maki Hajime
Who made it: The Sex Bob-Omb was an instrument was a gift given to Maki Hajime, stolen by his father Zane from the Sound Village. When he came of age and became a full fledged ninja, his father and mother bestowed it upon him to further progress in the ways of genjutsu.
The Range of the weapon: 44 inches
Weakness: The weapon is made out of wood, a strong fire attack can set it on fire. Also, it's a bass guitar, it's not at all hard to break. Using genjutsus on it require double the chakra points.
Description: A blue mahogony and rosewood bass guitar, it has been completely infused with Maki's chakra. Only those who have chosen their shinobi proffesion as Genjutsu can wield this bass. By transfering his chakra to the bass, with every note he plucks, the notes and soundwaves emitting from the bass flow out of it, becoming visual manifestations for the world to see. Anyone watching can literally SEE the notes and sounds being emitted from the bass. Through this, Maki is able to cast sound and sight genjutsus without using seals yet at double. Those who hear the music, or see the notes are affected and enthralled by the powers of the bass.
Special Properties Allows the use of genjutsu without seals by using double the amount of chakra. The target must either hear the sounds played by the guitar or see the notes merging out of it in order for the genjutsu to take effect.

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We Are Sex Bob Omb!

Rp Sample:

(Different Rpc, A Rank level)

"I'm simply tired of playing with you..." Robin stated coldly as she took out her bass guitar. Her opponent was yet another rogue ninja she was hunting down, but this one had proven to be the most annoying insect she had ever fought. His defense was too strong for Robin to bypass. He was a master of the earth element, and using his earth ninjutsu, he has been able to thwart any attack Robin had made against him. It was simply time for her to think of a new strategy in order to defeat this foe. Quickly placing the strap around her neck, she cracked her fingers and placed them on the fret. "LETS GO! ONE TWO THREE FOUR!" she cried out as her fingers suddenly flashed through the fret, playing tons of different notes as her other hand strummed on the strings. Every sound that the bass made, every time she strummed, waves of chakra erupted outwards and spread throughout the field.

Letters emerged out of her bass whenever she played a certain note. At one point she was hitting an F sharp and that was the letter exploding out of the bass. The opponent felt rather confused as he watched the notes emerge out of the bass, listening to the song she was playing. That was when chains erupted from the guitar, Robin smiling as she continued to bob her head to the song. The chains bounded the opponent unto the ground, holding him tightly in place. Struggling to break free, the opponent shrieked in shock as the flesh on his bones began to melt and drip unto the ground. The pain of having flesh drip off the bones was something indescribable, immense pain that even the strongest of beings would cry from the sheer torture. Robin simply continued playing, there was about another two minutes left of the song, and by then the pain of the genjutsu will leave her opponent completely traumatized.

Hyoukai Nikutai no Jutsu (Melting Flesh Skill)
Description: Upon watching the user form the necessary hand seals, the victim will see many chains suddenly surround and bind him to the ground, upright. Slowly, he will feel the flesh on his bones melt and drip to the floor, all over, on his limbs and torso and face. There is a great deal of illusionary pain involved, of course… Even after the effects are over, the victim feels compelled to pat himself, just to make sure he isn’t really melting.
 

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Laram Myusai

PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:11 pm


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Name of Weapon: God's Judgement
Who Owns the Weapon: Laram Shihouin
Where it Was Found?/ Who Made it? Laram obtained God's fist when he helped an old man in trouble. He wasn't asked, but he offered his help to be a good person. Little did Laram know, this old man was a legendary weapon's smith responsible for many historic weapons in the world. In return for his selfless nature, the old man decided to make for Laram a special gauntlet that would aid him in his life. Thus, God's judgement was created.

Range: Melee weapon, reach of Laram's arm(plus a foot and a half if the blade is extended)

Weakness: It's heavy: -1 additional stamina each time it is used in battle(every time it is used it costs an additional stamina point)/ Laram cannot use the speed punch technique with this arm.

Weapon Description: Made of titanium, tempered in a special way, this gauntlet is much lighter than it should be. That being said it is still a really heavy weapon to wield. Weighing in at twenty pounds, nobody less than an adult should even attempt to wield it. Once it is sealed on the user's arm, it never comes off, unless it is destroyed. It was made to fit like a second skin on Laram's left arm.

Special Properties/Abilites: The user pays fifteen chakra and fifteen stamina and the next taijutsu attack increases by one rank. Cooldown is five posts.

The user pays fifteen chakra and fifteen stamina, and fifteen stamina to absorb the incoming tai/kenjutsu strike. Can only absorb five hits before breaking. Cooldown is five posts.

Rp Sample:

Ting! Ting! Ting! Laram lowered his arm after the kunai had fallen to the ground. "You're going to have to do better than that if you want to defeat me. It's no problem for me to block such half-assed attacks, especially with this." Laram brought his left fist into the air and pumped his arm. "Really, it's like you're not even trying." With that exchange, Laram used Flash Step to place himself behind his opponent, and then slammed his metal fist into the center of the man's spine. Laram, grimaced sympathetically as the man groaned and dropped to his knees. He knew that a blow like that was bound to be painful. Laram's victory was short-lived however, as what Laram thought was his opponent disappeared in a puff of white smoke. "A clone, typical. Why don't you come here and face me like a man you coward." Laram knew such childish taunts wouldn't work, but he felt like saying it anyway. He had faced too many opponents that would never fight him outright. They would always use clones until he exhausted himself. He knew he had to work on that fact, but for the moment he didn't care.

Shurikens flew at Laram from three different directions and altitudes. It was fair to assume that Laram's opponent wasn't all that strong, otherwise he wouldn't remain in hiding. Either that, or he just wasn't sure about his opponent. Either way, Laram could use that insecurity to his advantage. Laram dodged one shuriken, so he could block the other two. The power in those two shuriken were identical. That means one of two things. Either those were both from clones, or he's purposefully matching his clones weakness. Either way, I have a target. Laram once again used his Flash Step, and appeared two feet in front of his opponent. "Hello." Laram punched the man square on his nose, and the, now obviously a clone, disappeared in a puff of white smoke. "Guess and check time." Laram disappeared from sight once again, and appeared behind his next target. This time he pumped electrically charged chakra through God's fist before he smashed the doppelganger in its' shoulder. Laram's face took on a snarl, as he was frustrated once again by another clone. He used Flash Step once again, and appeared behind what he knew was his real opponent. Within his steps Laram switched his weapon's blade around so that he could use it. "Nowhere left to run, you know I really hate it when people use clones. Just die."

Laram brought his blade down and cleaved the man's skull in two. Laram's face went through a series of emotions, starting with smug, and ending with rage, as his last opponent disappeared in a puff of white smoke. "FUUUUUUUUUU!" Some distance away a lone figure stood underneath a tree scribbling something on a pad. Naive, inexperienced, but nevertheless dangerous. Using a unique weapon, as well as belonging to the Shihouin clan's bloodline has given this young shinobi great potential. If he is ever able to harness his power, he could be a serious threat to the village. Recommendation: execute as soon as possible.  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:15 pm


(Couldn't really find a good image)

Name of Weapon: Woe
Who Owns the Weapon: Atsureki Hyuuga
Where it Was Found?/ Who Made it? In the center of a small village found in the land of Water, there grew a Great Yew Tree which the villager's believed housed a spirit of bounty. As years passed and the villager's left offerings at the base of the tree, the village prospered, and the villager's grew wealthy from the bounty. But it did not take long for others to covet this wealth. In the dead of night, a group of bandits attacked the village, hoping to steal the wealth that the villagers had worked so hard for. But no matter where they looked they could not find the wealth of the small village.

Infuriated, the bandits rounded the villagers that they had not slaughtered to the center of the village and tied them to the trunk of the tree. They threatened the villagers with death if they did not give them the gold that they sought. But what the bandits did not know is that the villagers had offered much of the bounty of their harvest to the tree of Yew, and the spirit which had blessed them. When the villagers tried to explain this, the leader of the bandits howled with rage before taking a torch and throwing it into the boughs of the tree, setting the whole tree ablaze, along with the villagers that were tied to it. As the anguished screams of the villagers filled the air, the spirit which dwelt within the tree became a twisted perversion of what it once was.

Though the tree was a charred skeleton of what it once was, the spirit within lived on, dreaming of the day it could take its revenge upon those that had tainted it. Years passed, and the village remained abandoned, the taint of the Yew driving away any that thought to bring prosperity to the land once more. And then the day came when a young hunter happened upon the tree, its charred remains strangely hypnotizing to the man. Seeing its opportunity, the spirit reached out to the man, promising to make him the most renowned shot in all the world if he would help the spirit in its quest for revenge. The man agreed happily, and before his very eyes a single charred branch began to shift and take a new form.

A bow, black as night, a great eye carved just above the grip, the anguished faces of the murdered villagers carve into its lower limb, and five smaller eyes dotting its upper limb. Taking the bow in his hands, the man heard the voice of the spirit once more, this time resonating from the bow itself.
"I am Suffering and Despair, Affliction and Torment,, the spirit cried within the man's mind, its words filled with venomous hate, "I am Woe, and I shall see the ones who made me suffer, as I have suffered!"

Though it has been many centuries since Woe's creation, stories of those that have wielded it can be heard in almost any of the great nations. Though its whereabouts are yet unknown, Woe is no doubt in the hands of another, promised glory in return for the revenge Woe still craves.

Range: Base maximum range of 200 feet, roughly 66 yds

Weakness: Having an intelligence of its own, Woe can feel emotions, and one of the strongest of its emotions is Fear.

[Fear]: Woe has an uncontrollable fear of fire, and will refuse to allow its wielder to utilize any of its abilities, drawn from the kenjutsu style The Cry of Anguished Souls, if within thirty feet of an open flame. In addition if Woe is near a flame, it will scream within its wielders head. While this is simply annoying out of combat, this can be detrimentally distracting in combat (wielder suffers a -1 to evasion until at least thirty feet away from the flame).

Weapon Description: A bow of blackened yew, a great eye carved just above the grip, the anguished faces of the murdered villagers carved into its lower limb, and dozens of smaller eyes dotting its upper limb. The bow is a Yumi bow, so it is quite large compared to western bows, with a length of roughly 6 and a half feet.

Special Properties/Abilites: Aside from granting access to the Kenjutsu Style The Cry of Anguished Souls, Woe has an innate ability to draw upon the power of one of its most powerful emotions, Hate.

[Hate]: Though the bandits which tainted Woe are long dead, Woe will sometimes mistake those which threaten it as one of those it swore revenge upon.
(At the beginning of combat, the wielder of Woe will roll a D10 for each opponent, each roll corresponding to a specific opponent, chosen before the roll is made. If a 1 or a 10 is rolled for an opponent, that target will become a target of Woe's ire, increasing the power of any technique from the style The Cry of Anguished Souls used against that opponent by 1 rank for the duration of combat.)

Rp Sample: (most of Woes abilities will come from the Kenjutsu style, so do I still need to do this? )


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:05 am


j3susfr3ak1991
Name of Weapon: God's Judgement

Weakness: It's heavy: -1 additional stamina each time it is used in battle(every time it is used it costs an additional stamina point)/ Laram cannot use the speed punch technique with this arm.

Weapon Description: Made of titanium, tempered in a special way, this gauntlet is much lighter than it should be. That being said it is still a really heavy weapon to wield. Weighing in at twenty pounds, nobody less than an adult should even attempt to wield it. Once it is sealed on the user's arm, it never comes off, unless it is destroyed(very unlikely). It was made to fit like a second skin on Laram's left arm.

Special Properties/Abilites: +1 defence rank, if used to block physical attacks, for that post. It cannot be used to block elemental ninjutsu that has no physical form.(something tangible) It cannot be used to block genjutsu of any kind. +1 attack rank for the post it is used in. The user is able to channel ninjutsu through the gauntlet, just like they can without it. The gauntlet has the uncanny ability to grow as Laram does, through a special seal made in its' construction. This in no way effects any of the attributes, its' just something odd about the gauntlet.

Okay, there are a few problems here... the first of which is that your a Shihouin and that Clan no longer exists in this guild until it can be reconstructed.

The second problem is that your weapon isn't really described well. What is a "Defense Rank"... that concept doesnt exist in the guild. You need to use terminology as it pertains to our systems for this to make sense.

Then there is the issue of +1 attack rank for the post it is used in... Does this apply to all attacks, whether the gauntlet is involved or not?... or jsut Taijutsu attacks?... or Taijutsu/Kenjutsu. Are you saying it raises the rank of the attack every time it's used?

...if so, I'd argue it to be too strong fro a small cost of 1 stamina per use. Please try to be more precise with your descriptions so your weapon can be more easily and accurately processed.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:12 am


Cobra_X

Okay, there are a few problems here... the first of which is that your a Shihouin and that Clan no longer exists in this guild until it can be reconstructed.


I was already accepted as a Shihouin, are you telling me I have to wait even longer to RP because of that?


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The second problem is that your weapon isn't really described well. What is a "Defense Rank"... that concept doesnt exist in the guild. You need to use terminology as it pertains to our systems for this to make sense.


My apologies, I was referring to here. I guess I just used the wrong jargon. I simply meant that when my character uses tai/ken/ or any type of physical attack, it acts like a chuunin getting hit by a genin. Basically when he uses the gauntlet to block attacks, it's like he is one rank above what he is, when damage is dealt. It just basically comes down to the use of a shield. It's going to hurt less when someone punches you, verses you having no armor.

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Then there is the issue of +1 attack rank for the post it is used in... Does this apply to all attacks, whether the gauntlet is involved or not?... or jsut Taijutsu attacks?... or Taijutsu/Kenjutsu. Are you saying it raises the rank of the attack every time it's used?

...if so, I'd argue it to be too strong fro a small cost of 1 stamina per use. Please try to be more precise with your descriptions so your weapon can be more easily and accurately processed.


No, I meant it's the difference between being punched with a fist, and a metal fist. It's going to hurt more. That's why I added the +1 rank to the attack. It only works if you punch someone with the weapon. It doesn't keep stacking more and more damage. Also, does it need to be considered kenjutsu if the blade isn't involved? It has the same mechanics as taijutsu, at least that is what I believe.

The stamina cost comes from swinging around a big metal arm, it would take more energy to move your arm, than if you didn't have the weapon. If you think that the stamina cost needs to be more, just say so.

Laram Myusai


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:04 am


j3susfr3ak1991
I was already accepted as a Shihouin, are you telling me I have to wait even longer to RP because of that?

The Clan was unfortunately yanked by it's creator, so we no longer have the right to use it. I will be remaking the Clan and Taijutsu style in my own image, but there are other development projects which come ahead of it.

...it's unfortunate, but that's the way it is. This doesn't STOP you from being a Shihouin, it jsut limits you on using Shihouin techniques until they are re-established. There are many other things you can do in the meantime.


j3susfr3ak1991
My apologies, I was referring to here. I guess I just used the wrong jargon. I simply meant that when my character uses tai/ken/ or any type of physical attack, it acts like a chuunin getting hit by a genin. Basically when he uses the gauntlet to block attacks, it's like he is one rank above what he is, when damage is dealt. It just basically comes down to the use of a shield. It's going to hurt less when someone punches you, verses you having no armor.

I guess what I'm saying is that the Stamina Drain isn't enough... and the arm has to have a Defense rating of it's own, maybe a Stamina rating of some kind which would act as the total amount of hits it an take before breaking.

j3susfr3ak1991
No, I meant it's the difference between being punched with a fist, and a metal fist. It's going to hurt more. That's why I added the +1 rank to the attack. It only works if you punch someone with the weapon. It doesn't keep stacking more and more damage. Also, does it need to be considered kenjutsu if the blade isn't involved? It has the same mechanics as taijutsu, at least that is what I believe.

The stamina cost comes from swinging around a big metal arm, it would take more energy to move your arm, than if you didn't have the weapon. If you think that the stamina cost needs to be more, just say so.

So you want to permanently add +1 rank to all Taijutsu attacks made with your arm... personally I think that's too strong, even with an associated Stamina drain.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:09 am


What would you suggest then? Personally, I would like it not to break except under the worst of situations. Just tell me what needs to happen to get it to pass, and consider it done. Would you like help with the Shihouin clan? Bleach is what I know most of all. Besides, I had an idea on the clan's Shunko ability anyway.

Laram Myusai


Laram Myusai

PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:19 am


Cobra_X


Sorry for not putting this in my last post.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:37 am


j3susfr3ak1991
What would you suggest then? Personally, I would like it not to break except under the worst of situations. Just tell me what needs to happen to get it to pass, and consider it done. Would you like help with the Shihouin clan? Bleach is what I know most of all. Besides, I had an idea on the clan's Shunko ability anyway.

I'm afraid it doesn't work that way. I'm not going to make your weapon for you. Try to think of a suitable weakness or cost. Honestly however, I'm not sure I want to accept something that gives a permanent Strength increase to Taijutsu strikes... seems too strong for any one person to have.

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Laram Myusai

PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:05 pm


Cobra_X
j3susfr3ak1991
What would you suggest then? Personally, I would like it not to break except under the worst of situations. Just tell me what needs to happen to get it to pass, and consider it done. Would you like help with the Shihouin clan? Bleach is what I know most of all. Besides, I had an idea on the clan's Shunko ability anyway.

I'm afraid it doesn't work that way. I'm not going to make your weapon for you. Try to think of a suitable weakness or cost. Honestly however, I'm not sure I want to accept something that gives a permanent Strength increase to Taijutsu strikes... seems too strong for any one person to have.


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