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 Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:57 pm
 Haikimaru caught Mitsuko by the arm right on time. He had just come back from his own errands and things. He even had a bag in his other hand. There would be some stuff of both him and Mitsuko in the bag. The young man smiled as he helped his roommate back up. Haikimaru then shut the door behind him. He had left it when he say his play toy falling. Once the door was shut they could be a couple. Haiki leaned over and kissed the boy on the cheek. "Good afternoon cutie." The young man said before removing his shoes and walking onto the tatami mat. He set his bag on the table and his school bag by the door. "I brought home some cakes." The man commented.
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Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:24 pm
 ::• Mitsuko L. Toshi •:: †o be YOURSELF in @ world †ha† is cons†@n†ly †rying
†o m@ke you SOME†HING ELSE is †he gre@†es† @ccomplishmen† •-★-•Freshman Honnor student • Child of Light•-★-•
Something tugged on him, pulling him back from the surprising situation into a breathtaking one. The books and few papers he had had still fell in the light breeze the other had made in his daring rescue. He hadn't expected Haikimaru to come out of nowhere.. to save him of that horrible after feeling that someone -or something- above wanted him dead and/or miserable. His eyes were just as surprised to see the senior as they were that he had just been falling a few seconds beforehand.
His mind needed time to think, to catch up. He stared blankly like an idiot.
The sound of the door closing.. then locking. Mitsuo's face turned bright red. Haikimaru hadn't ever seen his clumsy side.. or at least not that he knew. The kitsune was so embarrassed now.. Then Haikiamru's soft lips touched his cheek. His heart quickly moved up into his throat. It felt like a huge lump, making in a bit hard to think, not to mention breath, efficiently. The smell of the other's breath, their dorm, their own space, it reassured Mitsuko somewhat, and he sighed, still a bit taken aback. The kitsune closed his eyes and went to the floor anyway. His knees were set together, his legs on either side of him as he slumped forward, trying to get over that small flushed moment, his face still a beautiful shade of red. He rubbed his neck and wanted desperately to just mope, complain, and cry about how horrible his day had been so far.. His face obviously showing it. But he kept to himself, his stomach not feeling so well either.. it felt like it was eating itself.
Mitsuko kept his eyes closed, so tiered that he didn't even have to try. They were so heavy on their own he hadn't even caught what his roommate had said to him.
•-★-•Lone Kitsune • Mirror Image•-★-•
$†υck in †he mømєnt.. and nøw yøu can'† gєt øυ†..
$ø hєrє I am, Jυs† drøwning in †he rain.. øn an єndℓess nigh† I drєamt øf †he jøυrnєy..
єvєn iҒ I'm pøwєrLєss, I'LL Livє $trøng in this dєstiny.. I Gazє at †hє Ғørєign skiєs and єmbracєd the LønєLinєss..
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 7:58 am
Haikimaru walked over to the bag and started to pull the cakes out and set them on the table. He then turned and started to make tea to go with them. "I hope you don't mind strawberry shortcakes. Ichigo wa oishii desu. Nihon ni kekii wa takai desu." The Kitsune told his companion. It was easy to tell is accent was Kanto which meant that Haikimaru probably grew up around Tokyo. He didn't know that Mitsuko had a history of clumsy. For all he knew it was only that one moment. The kitsune loosen his clothing so it wasn't as clinging. He then got out forks for them to use and the tea had warmed up so he poured the cups. He then turned to Mitsuko and patted the spot next to him. Telling the boy to join him. ((Strawberries are delicious. Cake in Japan is expensive.))
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:50 pm
::• Mitsuko L. Toshi •:: †o be YOURSELF in @ world †ha† is cons†@n†ly †rying
†o m@ke you SOME†HING ELSE is †he gre@†es† @ccomplishmen† •-★-•Freshman Honnor student • Child of Light•-★-•
A sweet scent.. the smell of strawberries.. cake. Mitsuko lifted his head, hearing Haikimaru's words. He watched him get ready, and so the sleepy kitsune took off his shoes, setting them next to the senior's, and pulled his legs forward so he could stand. He quickly picked up his things and set them aside next to the table as he came to sit with the other. His heart took a small flutter as he sat down, Haikiamru and him. It was a strange relationship that they were in. But every time it still managed to make him feel different.. like he was in a dream world.
The boy was still waiting for himself to wake up.. Which happened everytime he steped out that door.
Mitsuko leaned on the other, about ready to crash if it weren't for the fact that Haikimaru was with him with his favorite food. "Where'd you get it?" he asked curiously to the other, his eyes gazing up to look at Haikimaru.
Or more importantly.. what was the occasion?
•-★-•Lone Kitsune • Mirror Image•-★-•
$†υck in †he mømєnt.. and nøw yøu can'† gєt øυ†..
$ø hєrє I am, Jυs† drøwning in †he rain.. øn an єndℓess nigh† I drєamt øf †he jøυrnєy..
єvєn iҒ I'm pøwєrLєss, I'LL Livє $trøng in this dєstiny.. I Gazє at †hє Ғørєign skiєs and єmbracєd the LønєLinєss..
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 1:03 pm
Haikimaru smile and removed the protective plastic so the cake would keep it's shape and not spill out. He then passed the plate and tea towards his roommate. "I found a cafe on campus. They sell goodies like this. I'm happy they do. It's one of my favorite dishes." The purple haired young man answered. He then put a small fork on Mitsuko's face so he could eat it. "There is also a place to shop, arcade, and several other places on campus." he added. He had spent his extra time exploring the the area. Which was probably a good thing when he brought home the cake. Mitsuko seemed excited to have it.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:18 pm
::• Mitsuko L. Toshi •:: †o be YOURSELF in @ world †ha† is cons†@n†ly †rying
†o m@ke you SOME†HING ELSE is †he gre@†es† @ccomplishmen† •-★-•Freshman Honnor student • Child of Light•-★-•
The kitsune continued to rest his head on Haikimaru's shoulder, watching as he worked. "This one likes them too, that he does." Mitsuko commented then slowly looked over at the plate before pouring them some tea. He gingerly took up the fork, and squewerd a piece off the edge of the cake.
He found himself thinking of the boy he had met at the bathhouse again, and the other time he had caught him dancing. A few fallen butterflies fluttered about below in his stomach, making his face feel a bit hotter than usual and his eyes heavy. He felt a bit sad, but tried to ignore the feeling of guilt he had on his shoulders for the boy. He had to make this right, make the boy not hate him. But if he put his nose somewhere it shouldn't be he'd just be hated more. His free hand tightened into a fist. Maybe it was best to just leave things as they are.. he didn't want to be a pest, but at the same time he wanted to make this clear with them. He didn't even know the boy's name.
•-★-•Lone Kitsune • Mirror Image•-★-•
$†υck in †he mømєnt.. and nøw yøu can'† gєt øυ†..
$ø hєrє I am, Jυs† drøwning in †he rain.. øn an єndℓess nigh† I drєamt øf †he jøυrnєy..
єvєn iҒ I'm pøwєrLєss, I'LL Livє $trøng in this dєstiny.. I Gazє at †hє Ғørєign skiєs and єmbracєd the LønєLinєss..
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:27 pm
Haikimaru took a bite of his own cake before turning and looking at his roommate. "How is it?" He asked as he continued. The kitsune was happy that his companion approved of the sweets he got. He was planning on pulling the box of pocky out next with the bottles of milk coffee or ranume. There were also the hi-chews and white rabbit candies. Haikimaru was prepared to get some Mitsuko's favorite things.
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:57 pm
::• Mitsuko L. Toshi •:: †o be YOURSELF in @ world †ha† is cons†@n†ly †rying
†o m@ke you SOME†HING ELSE is †he gre@†es† @ccomplishmen† •-★-•Freshman Honnor student • Child of Light•-★-•
Mitsuko looked up at Haikimaru, then turned back to his cake, noticing he hadn't eaten or even taken his first bite. He placed the sweet dessert in his mouth, and enjoyed the familiar flavors. He swallowed. "Its just as I remember. That it is." He told his roommate, looking calmly up to him with a smile.
Haikimaru's eyes.. his eyes-. Mitsuko's butterflies did small flutters, tickling his insides and making him feel a bit lightheaded. The boy's face turned red and he quickly averted his gaze away from the other kitsune. Black bangs fell down to shield the boy's eyes, making a sort of wall between them. He couldn't allow himself to get lost in the other's features.
•-★-•Lone Kitsune • Mirror Image•-★-•
$†υck in †he mømєnt.. and nøw yøu can'† gєt øυ†..
$ø hєrє I am, Jυs† drøwning in †he rain.. øn an єndℓess nigh† I drєamt øf †he jøυrnєy..
єvєn iҒ I'm pøwєrLєss, I'LL Livє $trøng in this dєstiny.. I Gazє at †hє Ғørєign skiєs and єmbracєd the LønєLinєss.. ((shorteh posteh!.. sry ))
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 8:05 pm
Haikimaru looked at Mitsuko. "I'm glad you like it. bought a bunch of different treats. Maybe we'll have them later." The kitsune said with a big smile. He was happy that Mitsuko loved it. He went for another bite of his food. The bedroom was really quiet, but, Haiki didn't mind as long as he was with Mitsuko.
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:30 pm
::• Mitsuko L. Toshi •:: †o be YOURSELF in @ world †ha† is cons†@n†ly †rying
†o m@ke you SOME†HING ELSE is †he gre@†es† @ccomplishmen† •-★-•Freshman Honnor student • Child of Light•-★-•
Mitsuko's face turned deeper red. Had the senior seen the heat on his face? Thinking about it made his face turn even redder. The boy still couldn't put a finger on what he was feeling. He felt really red in the face, his stomach held butterflies, he felt a bit dizzy, lightheaded, and his heart was about to explode!
This feeling, what was it!?
He was embarrassed.
To avoid having no excuse other than he couldn't find his voice, Mitsuko took another bite of his cake. He tried to enjoy the flavors, but found himself dwelling on other things in his mind. He found Haikimaru's thoughtfulness.. sweet. He felt a small squeeze to his gut and he swallowed, brushing away his bangs as he bit his lip. He still avoided Haikimaru's gaze, averting his eyes away from the senior as best he could. Oddly he found himself thinking about if Haikimaru kissed him right now. The butterflies acted up again, and the boy pursed his lips, "Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!" He thought to himself, although he quiet enjoyed the idea. He couldn't admit himself the truth.
Little white ears atop the boy's raven black hair. He was having some difficulty keeping control of his human form, part of his eyes changing from green to silver around the outside of his iris.
•-★-•Lone Kitsune • Mirror Image•-★-•
$†υck in †he mømєnt.. and nøw yøu can'† gєt øυ†..
$ø hєrє I am, Jυs† drøwning in †he rain.. øn an єndℓess nigh† I drєamt øf †he jøυrnєy..
єvєn iҒ I'm pøwєrLєss, I'LL Livє $trøng in this dєstiny.. I Gazє at †hє Ғørєign skiєs and єmbracєd the LønєLinєss..
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:38 pm
Haikimaru notice the boys ears popped from his head and he set down his fork be smiling. The purple hair kitsune grabbed a hold of the white velet ear and stroked it like a soft sample. "You know your ears are cute. I like how soft they are." Haiki told Mitsuko before drawing the submissive kitsune into his lap and used both hands on Mitsuko's ears. He was the one who moved while Mitsuko stayed pretty much in the same spot. Haikimaru wondered if Mitsuko loved his ears being massage. He know he love it when his mother would gently rub his ears. he would sometimes start to act like a purring kitten. Or was is a pain for Mitsuko. Haikimaru could only hope it was the later as he rubbed the roommate ears.
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 10:48 pm
((its hard to respond to a post when you don;t know the person's thought process.. here's a way to lengthen your posts :3
1. Think of ways to smoothen out your sentences and paragraphs.
2. make your words fit so that they seems to place neatly into the reader's mind and express your exact outlook on whats happening. Re-re-re-re and re-reading your work is highly recommended, even after you post it. :3
3. describe in detail exactly what your character does, its easier for others to understand what to make their character do it they know exactly where your's is placed: like here, we had Haikimaru drawing Mitsuko into his lap.. but we don't know if he pulled the boy legs first/ by his ear/ by the waist/ gripped him by the wrist, or even chuckled while he did so..
4. make sure to take your time.. i'll be happy with a long post that took up three-five minutes than a short one that i cant understand/ respond easily too ))
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:34 am
((Thanks for the tips. I'm not the greatest RPer. I do have a question. I want to make a thread in the chatterbox about making longer and better post. Would you help me edit it when I get the basics down. I think it'll help everyone when they get stuck. Also I edited it.))
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 5:19 pm
(( Sure thing. i wasn't all that good myself when i first started rping.. im sure it'll help things run smoother.. it's really hard to reply to one-liners. sweatdrop
The best thing to do is to express your words like your writing a book, and then when you finish re-read to edit, double-check sentences.. like your making a book entry x3 i see a lot of misspellings and "lost words" in your posts.. but i understand for the most part.. i kinda add my own little details to it so my brain can understand xD i have to describe things in third-person in my mind for some reason.. IN LENGTHENED DETAIL.. idk why i do.. just kinda have too O.o;;; sometimes i worry about myself. OCD much??? ))
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:19 pm
((I hope that works better. I don't know what else to add to it without it looking out of place.))
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