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 Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:55 am
Shruikan: Well, I guess I should do my job for once and actually look over custom skills sweatdrop . Although, I'm not sure about some of them gonk . Also, just as a warning, my decision can be repealed by any of the other approvers so... umm... yeah....
Clear of mind- Umm.... Not sure about this one. I think I'll let someone else handle it....
Dragon claws- Sounds good, but before I accept it, I have to ask. Does the energy cost always remain at B-rank or does it match the rank of the skill that the user wants to use? (Ex: if the user only wants to cut through iron, then it costs C-rank, but if the user wanted to cut through steel, it'll cost B-rank.)
Fighting Spirit- Wait, you have to meditate before the effects of this skill can be used, right?
Tail Blade- Sounds good. Accepted... I think.
Oh, and on an overall note, don't be lazy. Write up a two sentence sample or something >_< . I'm fairly certain that a sample is required for the non-free skills at the very least, but I might be wrong sweatdrop .
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:02 am
Kagetsukiko Shruikan: Well, I guess I should do my job for once and actually look over custom skills sweatdrop . Although, I'm not sure about some of them gonk . Also, just as a warning, my decision can be repealed by any of the other approvers so... umm... yeah.... Clear of mind- Umm.... Not sure about this one. I think I'll let someone else handle it.... Dragon claws- Sounds good, but before I accept it, I have to ask. Does the energy cost always remain at B-rank or does it match the rank of the skill that the user wants to use? (Ex: if the user only wants to cut through iron, then it costs C-rank, but if the user wanted to cut through steel, it'll cost B-rank.) Fighting Spirit- Wait, you have to meditate before the effects of this skill can be used, right? Tail Blade- Sounds good. Accepted... I think. Oh, and on an overall note, don't be lazy. Write up a two sentence sample or something >_< . I'm fairly certain that a sample is required for the non-free skills at the very least, but I might be wrong sweatdrop . Dragon Claws - No, it varies on your rank for the cutting. But to use in general, its B rank energy regardless of your rank Fighting Spirit. - Yes, like how you would for iron form or steel form. If you look in the beserker section, you'll see them. just like that ^^ Tail blade - Awesome, just like the claws, cutting power varies on rank. But its still costing B rank energy no matter what. XD I know, but at times its very pointless to make a sample about something extremely obvious. But if you wish meh to make a sample I will be happy too
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:12 am
Dragon claws- Alright, I guess it makes sense considering that you'll grow in strength as you rank up. Just to make sure that no one is confused, though, can you put in something about how the energy cost remains the same no matter what the rank is? Do that and it's approved.
Fighting Spirit- Hm, I guess it's approved then.
Tail Blade- Gah, forgot about that >_< . Yeah, can you, umm, just put in somewhere that the cost remains the same just so no one gets confused sweatdrop . I still have no problems with it so it's still approved.
Please do sweatdrop . I know how tiring it can be to make sample (sometimes it's the part I hate most about making stuff gonk ) but just to make it fair and simple for everyone, please write a sample.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:35 am
Shruikan Tenshi Username: -
RPC name: Shruikan Kuroryu
Is it a Free skill?: Nope (plan to teach others though)
Type of skill: general
Skill name: Clear of mind - Extra Sense
Rank: -
Limits: -
Skill description:
A skill that once learned becomes passive. The user must settle down in a remote area and meditate for long period of time without rest. Once meditating, if the process is broken then the user will have to repeat the process. For 10 posts, the user is clear of mind and ignores everything of themselves and instead becomes focused on everything surrounding them. The purpose of this meditation is to allow the user to be able to have focus and be able to sense, or rather, predict attacks and overall improve reflex. Once learned, it cannot be repeated for stacked effect. This skill is good for those who are not as adept with speed, making them last longer in a fight. Knights and Paladins find most use with this, though others who are not quite fast makes up speed with this.
Bonus(s): Combat reflex increases by a rank, allowing the user to have a clearer mind and react faster then normal.
Sample: Shruikan sat in indian style underneath the waterfall. His chest rose up and down slowly as he began clearing his mind. In this exercise, he has to be able to fight with a clear mind, and this meditation would help. Slowly, the voices in his head that tells him what he should be doing faded away. All he could hear now is the watefall. He sat there for several hours, no one around to disturb him making it easier. Slowly, the sound of the waterfall grew louder, he could even hear the water beat against the rocks above before coming down. He could feel the air around him, the little critters moving about. A ranger stepped forward, part of his training. Stringing an arrow, he fired his shot at Shruikan. Shruikan's eyes opened, his arm coming up and catching the arrow before it could hit him. He noted his reflex was faster, as he would usually dodge or intercept the arrows or overall fast assaults. This would make things alittle easier on him, for now he can at least defend against those much faster then himself better.
Is it a Free skill?: Yes
Type of skill: Draconian
Skill name: Dragon Claws
Rank: B
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: Must be Adept to learn, claws (the skill must of been used)
Skill description: After claws have been used, the user can use a rather powerful skill to make their dragon like claws to become more dangerous. Coating energy around the claws, the user adds their element into the attack, causing different things to occur depending on what element the draconian has. This lasts three posts, and requires a two post cooloff period. The energy coating the claws gives it an extra 3in length, and is capable of cutting through hard substances. At Adept it can cut through Iron, steel at expert, and through most things but diamond at master. Remember, regardless of your rank you have to spend B rank energy
Fire = Claws are burning with searing flames
Water = Claws are icy and cold, wounds they make leave small icy crystals in the body
Wind = Claws are coated in swirling winds, making it sharper and slightly longer by two inches
Earth = Claws are hardened further and more solid, increasing to be harder then steel and adds to the sharpness
Sample: Shruikan held his claws before him, which suddenly fire bursted around them as the energy coated his long nails. Growing an extra three inches, they were more lethal and have better range. Normally he wouldn't be able to stand two feet away from a tree and hit it, but this time was different. Being about two feet away from the tree, he swiped his arm across, not moving forward. With the energy enhanced claws, they tore through the bark, making it catch fire from the burning energy. Nodding with approval, he deactivated the skill.
Is it a Free skill?: No, but will be teaching
Type of skill: general
Skill name: Fighting Spirit
Rank: B
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: Must be at least Adept to learn
Skill description: A skill that gets the user pumped up, requiring at least two posts of undisturbed meditation. After the meditation, the user will be coated in a firey red energy of their fighting spirit, their will power. The user's strength and speed temperarily increases by one rank. At master rank it'll raise by two ranks. This lasts for 10 posts, and can only be used once in battle, or prior to battle.
Sample: Shruikan stared down at his opponent, the hatred between the two rising. This battle was coming for a very long time, and now was time to end the fued with a victor. With his opponent, gathering his energy like he had done so previously, he was doing the same. His heart beat with power, it was his job to protect the city, not matter what. At the same time though, as every beserker does, his love for fighting made him want to have this glorious battle. Suddenly his spirit, his fighting spirit that resided within his heart exploded forward, red energy surrounding him and his body and mind pumped. People say meditation brings out the energy and mind, some say having powerful will and fighting spirit brings out the beast in you. As the lycan ran forward, Shruikan met him on par. One of the most legendary fights between two kings, two superpowers, has finally started.
Is it a Free skill?: Nah, definitely will be teaching though
Type of skill: Draconian
Skill name: Tail Blade
Rank: B
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: Must be adept at least to learn
Skill description: An interesting skill where the draconian uses his tail as a weapon more often. Coating the tail with energy, anytime the user stabs at or sweeps with his tail, a blade of energy will form from the tip, extending anywhere from 3in to 7in. (3 at adept, 5 at expert, 7 at master). The blade of energy is capable of cutting through anything thats B rank or less. And can cut into higher rank things, but not through them. While the tail isn't being used as a weapon, the energy stays on it, making it a great defense. While attacking though, the energy leaves the tail to make the blade, making it alittle more vulnerable once more until the assault is finished. Regardless of rank though, the user still must pay B rank energy.
Sample: The knight ran towards Shruikan, sword raised as he was yelling something rediculous. Shruikan stood there, arms crossed as if he was bored. His tail began glowing with energy as the knight closed the distance. Then, suddenly, the draconian's tail swung around at the knight. The knight jumped back, where the tip would miss him. However, upon the tail just about to miss him, a blade of energy extended from the tip, cutting through the knight's armor which with energy probably was about C rank energy. The knight stood there for a moment, blood coming out of his mouth, as his body slowly fell apart in half. there we go ^^, all better??? Save for the first skill? Though I added an rp sample. Its basically training to enhance combat reflexes. Though if the description is off, I can edit it for...more proper training?
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:49 am
Good, everything except for the first one, which I'm going to let someone else decide on, is approved mrgreen .
As for the first one, I understand what you're trying to say about it. It basically gives a boost to reflexes through faster perception. There's nothing wrong with the skill itself, it's just that I'm always worried that a passive skill--because it doesn't require energy--might be op when it isn't. So... umm... yeah. Basically, I don't think I'm a good judge for passive skills sweatdrop .
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 11:05 am
lol even I am trying to see how it'll work out.....it may be....just trying to find a way for people who are uber slow to fight back ya know?
Anywho, thanks for putting up with me mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:32 pm
Username: Shruikan Tenshi
RPC name: Shruikan Kuroryu
Is it a Free skill?: Personal
Type of skill: Draconian
Skill name: Dragon Acid
Rank: B
Limits: n/a
Skill description: A rather disturbing yet deadly skill. The user brings up stomach acid coated with their energy and spits it all over the target. The acid, being from a dragon related family, is very powerful and is very sticky. The acid is capable of breaking down living substance slowly, but surely and painfully. Attempting to wipe it off would only smeer it everywhere. However, it has a very different effect on nonliving substance. It'll be able to break down any inorganic material within moments, making this a very useful skill when you need to get through a cave or castle walls quickly for combat. However, due to the nature of simply vomitting causes pain in the throat, making usage of this limited to only once every 3 posts to prevent injury to your throat.
Sample: Shruikan growled as his opponent fled, only summoning walls of earth to trap him in. He struck at the wall, finding it being a mixture of substance which, to his disdain, some of the substance was much harder to where he couldn't break it. Thinking quickly, he smirked and stood still for a moment. A lump formed in his throat which traveled to the mouth, and he suddenly spat out a stream of acid. The acid splattered on the walls, which a loud hissing noise was heard as the material was breaking down extremely quick. Within moments, a good sized hole was in the wall, Shruikan walking out with no trouble. "That...was not exactly how I plan to escape...but whatever works." He said to himself.
Is it a Free skill?: No.
Type of skill: Draconian/Fire element
Skill name: Dragon Flare
Rank: A
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits: Have to be at least Master Rank to learn this skill
Skill description: A very powerful flame, only those who achieve master recognition can learn this and is said to be a skill draconians of the fire clan learn to state their right of being a true dragon. The user exhales a large stream of fire that is so hot it can melt steel and boulders alike in a matter of moments. The flame gives off a blue color, indicating it reaches temperatures of 1,400 C. The stream travels about 10 meters, and can even cause water to evaporate around it. Obviously, the temperature is hotter and range increases when in dragon form. The user can hold the stream for two posts.
Sample:
Shruikan stood his ground as five knights came running at him. All of them closing the gap between them until they started coming at him in an arrow formation. Why do they try this old fashion stuff? He thought has he inhaled air alittle, and released a violent stream of blue fire, which ripped through the center of the formation catching all of them. It was almost moments for them to die, the armor making it even hotter and with the metal melting into their skin, it was a crude way to die. After closing his mouth, he observed the knights, who were deformed and burning.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:58 pm
Username: (...)
RPC name: Athena "Cherry" Lovette
Is it a Free skill?: Mine!
Type of skill: Mage/Sin skill
Skill name: Poisoned Kiss
Rank: B
If it uses ammo how much: n/a
Limits: Must be Cherry/ Must be atleast Adept
Skill description: Poisoned Kiss is a skill for Cherry since she is paired up with Lust. Applying energy to the lips, Cherry is able to transfere said energy into the opponent. The victim must either be willingly kissed or unable to move so the kiss is forced upon them. Once her lips touches the victims, it will send them into a hallucination for two posts. In this time, they are immobile and their lives are in Cherry's hands.
Sample: Cherry slipped into the room of the man she was once supposed to marry. The female walked over to him and looked down at his sleeping for. Though there was a creak in the floorboard which awoke him from his slumber. The man turned on the light and looked to the woman who had run off on their wedding day. The woman he thought he had sent people to kill. Obviously they had failed.
"Athena...Still alive are you? Heh..Quite scrappy aren't you?" His dark hair cascaded infront of his face.
Cherry looked to him and took a deep breath. Lust was still curling around her, and she decided to use the sins power to help her influence this man. "Gregor..." Cherry stated simply as she walked closer to him.
He felt something, he wasn't sure what but Cherry suddenly seemed to become even more appealing. And he began to wonder why he had sent men off to kill her in the first place. He watched as she moved towards him and sat down on the bed.
"Y-Yes? What is it?" He asked as he leaned in closer to Cherry, smelling her neck and wrapping her up in his arms. She was supposed to be his and his alone. Now even after all these years, he still wanted her.
"Kiss me..." Cherry said softly as she turned to look at Gregor. Unknown to him, she summoned some energy into the tip of her fingers and lightly dragged them over her lips. Gregor leaned down to kiss Cherry softly, and as soon as he met hers, he froze. Everything seemed to melt away for him, and all he saw was darkness before two large eyes appeared before him. They belonged to Cherry.
"You tried to kill me Gregor...you're the reason Mircea is dead...and now after all this time, I'm going to avenge his death.." The female stood up and out of his grip. Grabbing the sides of his head, she turned his head fiercly and snapped his neck while he was in the hallucination.
She looked down at the man with pity before turning and hopping out the window.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:52 pm
Shruikan:
dragon acid: i'm denying it, this is pretty much a copy of the feral ability but with stronger acid.
Dragon flare: I'm going to let someone else decide that.
neko: if it uses the sins power you should change the type to sin. i'm also leaving this one for the normal person.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:59 pm
claru gardeford Shruikan: dragon acid: i'm denying it, this is pretty much a copy of the feral ability but with stronger acid. Dragon flare: I'm going to let someone else decide that. neko: if it uses the sins power you should change the type to sin. i'm also leaving this one for the normal person. Hmm true :/ I forgot to add its washable....but damn.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 6:04 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:41 pm
DGwar DGwar RPC name:
Kaelrikk Cross
Is it a Free skill?:
No.
Type of skill:
Personal Technique
Skill name:
Fire Nova
Rank:
Skill Rank D
Damage and size are based on rank of energy used.
Fire Energy - Rank E - Trainee - Creates a small 5' diameter spherical explosion of fire around the user.
Fire Energy - Rank D - Trainee - Creates a small 10' diameter spherical explosion of fire around the user.
Fire Energy - Rank C - Novice- Creates a small 15' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Fire Energy - Rank B - Expert - Creates a small 20' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Fire Energy - Rank A - Master - Creates a small 25' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Fire Energy - Rank S - Sage - Creates a small 30' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Fire Energy - Rank SS - Sage - Creates a small 35' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Fire Energy - Rank SSS - Sage - Creates a small 50'' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
If it uses ammo how much:
Does not use bullets chief.
Limits:
Can only be used when retribution armor is active.
Requires Kael to be standing still.
Has a three post cooldown.
Skill description:
This skill uses the power of the armor to create a large blast-wave of energy and destruction from the user.
Sample:
The swarm of bats was making it difficult for Kaelrikk to see the vampire. Finally he had enough, he focused his energy and braced himself. "Enough!" He yelled. As soon as he finished the word fire swirled once around the suit, and then an explosion surrounded him blasting out in a spherical pattern around him. The resulting explosion tore up some of the ground, and lit a nearby tree ablaze. The bat swarm was nowhere to be found. RPC name:
Kaelrikk Cross
Is it a Free skill?:
No.
Type of skill:
Personal Technique
Skill name:
Holy Nova
Rank:
Skill Rank D
Damage and size are based on rank of energy used.
Holy Energy - Rank E - Trainee - Creates a small 5' diameter spherical explosion of fire around the user.
Holy Energy - Rank D - Trainee - Creates a small 10' diameter spherical explosion of fire around the user.
Holy Energy - Rank C - Novice- Creates a small 15' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Holy Energy - Rank B - Expert - Creates a small 20' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Holy Energy - Rank A - Master - Creates a small 25' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Holy Energy - Rank S - Sage - Creates a small 30' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Holy Energy - Rank SS - Sage - Creates a small 35' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
Holy Energy - Rank SSS - Sage - Creates a small 50'' diameter explosion of fire around the user.
If it uses ammo how much:
Does not use bullets chief.
Limits:
Can only be used when retribution armor is active.
Requires Kael to be standing still.
Has a three post cooldown.
Skill description:
This skill uses the power of the armor to create a large blast-wave light energy.
Sample:
The ghost merely teased him as he continued to try and hit it. It was too fast for him. He had an idea. He focused his energy into the suit and took a stance. The suit flashed once with white light before erupting into a golden explosion of light. The explosion bent a nearby pole as it hit the ghost, causing it to silently scream in agony. "Didn't think you could dodge that, did you?" He said as he finished it off. RPC name:
Kaelrikk Cross
Is it a Free skill?:
No.
Type of skill:
Personal Technique
Skill name:
Retribution Nova
Rank:
Skill Rank C
Damage and size are based on rank of energy used.
Uses a rank of holy and a rank plus one of fire energy.
Ex. E rank Holy, D rank Fire.
If it uses ammo how much:
Does not use bullets chief.
Limits:
Can only be used when retribution armor is active.
Requires Kael to be standing still.
Has a three post cooldown.
Skill description:
This skill uses the power of the armor to create a large blast-wave of holy fire and destruction.
Sample:
Kaelrikk had about enough of the group of skeletons. He decided to put an end to them for good. He threw up his arms, letting a large portion of his energy flow into the suit. White fire swirled once around it as it flashed with a white light for just a split second. A large explosion of white holy fire burst from around Kael. It tore up the catacomb floor, and pushed against the ceiling almost collapsing the place. The skeletons stood only moments in the blast before crumbling into dust. Satisfied, Kaelrikk continued his search.
This was fixed but I never got approval.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 2:23 am
Username: Hiro_Uzaki RPC name: Conner Cintere Is it a Free skill?: Free Type of skill: Universal Rapier Skill Skill name: Staccato Rank: B [A If Element is added] If it uses ammo how much:N/A Limits: Universal Skill description: The user will get into the Foil Stance and use their rapier to jab into the air 15 times and send out medium sized balls of energy at the opponent. The user may also put their element into the energy balls for more damage. The energy is capable of going through iron. Sample: Conner Smirked, "You are doing very well, Leon!" Leon smiled, he certainly was feeling a bit better today. Conner gripped the handle of his rapier and drew it out, "Now lets see if you can handle melee styles." Conner lunged forward, but he kept his foil stance. It let him lunge forward or jump back when necessary. Leon drew his Katana and blocked the attack. Conner smiled, "Now lets see if you can dodge this one!" Conner took a deep breath and then jabbed the air quickly 15 times. Balls of Energy shot out at Leon and on contact, he was blown back. When he looked at his sword, he noticed that his katana was chipped off at the tip.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 2:53 am
Since I am so generous, I shall be making random skills for anyone to use. If I need to do the RP samples, I'll do it later.
Username: Hiro_Uzaki
RPC name: Conner Cintere
Is it a Free skill?: Free
Type of skill: Rapier
Skill name: Capriccio
Rank: C
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits:
Skill description: The objective of the user is to go so fast that the opponent can not keep up and will eventually lose balance. The user will lunge forward and forward while swinging their blade and dodging attacks made by the opponent.
Sample: (lets see you use it.)
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Is it a Free skill?: Free
Type of skill: Rapier
Skill name: Consonance
Rank: B
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits:
Skill description: The user will move to a certain beat of their own, so the skill is never the same meaning each user has their own rhythm to go by. The objective of the user is to match a set of moves that would prove easy for them to do. [i.e. Jab, jab, swing, jab.]
Sample: [Is it simple enough or do I have to make a sample? I mean its sort of different to everyone.]
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Is it a Free skill?: Free
Type of skill: Siren/ Bard
Skill name: Minuet
Rank: C
If it uses ammo how much:
Limits:
Skill description: A minuet is a short song used to relax the muscles of the opponent so that they can not use too many melee attacks. That itself will put the opponent to a great disadvantage if the class relies on melee strikes.
Sample: (lets see you use it.)
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 5:22 am
shruikan: Dragon Flare- Denied. The draconians already have an A-rank breath attack. The only difference with this one is that it lets you breathe fire no matter what element you are, which makes the previous breathing attack pretty useless for all draconians that have the fire element.
neko: Approved
dg: Thats because you still haven't changed what I asked you to. I told you to pick one rank and stick with it.
hiro: Staccato- Accepted
Minuet- How many melee attacks does this song limit the opponent from using?
Consonance- Denied, this skill doesn't seem to do much of anything and should be something the user gains passively through learning the style.
Capriccio- Accepted
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