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 Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:22 pm
How to Become a Mechanic
MISSION - Aqua Bike Mishap
Those silly newbies and their Aqua Bikes. It seems they went out on a training mission a few weeks ago and completely wrecked their brand new Aqua Bikes. -Sigh- They really need to figure out how to take better care of their things.
Anyways, fix 3-5 and we'll give you some more tools to work with. It'll be fun. I promise. They all have different ailments such as slashed tires, melted parted, ect. The more creative, the better the rewards.
Rewards:
Mechanic Lvl 1: Student + 200-1000 PD
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Tommy grabbed a sign-up sheet, hastily but neatly filled it out, and sent it flying through the mailbox. Surprisingly, he got a message on his TADS almost as soon as he had mailed it in. He thought that it was going to be a message from a friend or family member. He was wrong. He read the title of the title of the message, and immediately opened it to scan the entire message. It seemed that they wanted him down in quadrant V, which happened to be close to both the Aqua Bazaar and Tommy's room, though it was a bit deep down in HQ. It was the headquarters for mechanics, where nothing had ever been needed to fixed before. It had been perfectly preserved, or so Tommy hoped. He would hate to have to be the mechanic to clean a mess that was a) not his, and b) not supposed to be there. He mentally braced himself for the room, and made his way down to the shop, carrying his trusty omniwrench in his hand for the trip to the mechanic's room in the depths of Aqua.
Tommy was completely shocked. The room was completely trashed, as though a bunch of parties were held simultaneously, and then left that way. It looked like he had some work to do. Calling out Swamp, the Swampert, then Champ, the Machamp, the three got to work on cleaning the room up, with Tommy and Machamp picking up trash and placing it in a pile in a very, VERY large trash can marked combustible, and Swampert pretty much blasting the walls and floors that were trashed (pun?), both wetting the floor and pushing all trash to the walls for easy clean-up. Soon, all of the trash was in the large can.
Tommy and Machamp got to work on completely cleaning the walls and the floor, the ceiling luckily escaping trashing due to being so high up. Swampert was recalled to his pokéball. And soon, so was Machamp. The place was now spick and span. Finally. Tommy wiped his maw, then his forehead, both with a rag that he had brought along. He went around and looked for the incinerator for all of the useless trash. He knew he'd need to keep the area clean on a regular basis. About thirty minutes later, he found it, and hastily dumped it in. He closed the heat-proof windows, and watched it all burn to nothing. He was satisfied with that piece of equipment. He'd always liked fire. And incinerators.
Tommy got down to work. He walked briskly over to the storage facilities for broken or damaged vehicles, with at least ten pods, all ranging in size for types of vehicles. Out of the first pod he took out a bike. It seemed that all of the damaged bikes were in here. He didn't seem to look over the other bikes, but simply took the first bike back to the work table.
He looked it over, remaining standing. The bikes handlebars were pretty much screwed up. The left handle bar was bent in a loop-de-loop, and the other one was pretty much, somehow, hanging by hinges, the metal completely torn off except for a small part of metal still attached to the bike. Even if just barely. Tommy sighed to himself. He fetched himself some safety goggles and gloves, before getting a blowtorch. The fix was simple, though he'd need to heat the metal to the point where he could bend it into place, seal it with more metal, and then cool it down. And that is just what he did. He superheated the metal with the intense flame of the blowtorch before safely bending it back up into place with some large pliers, not to burn himself, though using gloves anyways. As soon as he did this, he sealed it over with some liquid metal he had going, and then cooled it off with some cold water. The steel simmered with steam, instantly cooling down. He used the blowtorch to also superheat the other handlebar, and used the pliers to bend it to a straight-ish bar shape, also splashing the handlebar with water to cool it down. Tommy took a thirsty swig of the cold water, refreshing himself. Sure, the bike wasn't new, but it was still ride-able.
He brought the fixed bike over to the cleaner pods, where small nano robots scrubbed the vehicles from top to bottom, so that they'd be fixed AND cleaned. Bonus. He went over to the bike pod to receive the second bike. With a seeming monotony and vague repetition from the first bike, Tommy brought over the downed bike to look it over carefully.
Tommy wasn't as surprised by the second bike as by the first bike. The tires had merely been slashed, and the frames had been melted together. He set to work quickly, taking off the bad tires and setting it on a bike stand. He pushed a button on a console that looked like it had some promise, and, ta-da!, a metal slicer particle beam appeared out of the wall. "Man, this place has everything. EVERYTHING!!!" Tommy yelled, for the first time speaking since getting the mission itself. It might stay that way too. Random exclamations could wait 'till later; there was work to be done. He placed the beam catcher tool that came with the beam machine at the opposite end of the room, so as not to slice through anything. He quickly sliced with precision through the melted frames, and grabbed the handy blowtorch once more. He bent it and twisted it, he put it into place, and he cooled it quickly with the douse of water. Sure, the frame would be slight-ly weaker, but hey, if the total noob did something bad to it, he'd simply have to get a new one. He then fit on new tires for the bike, and sent it over to the cleaning pods, also making a third round to the pods holding the downed bikes. He carefully picked up two pieces. A front and a back. I think you can guess what the damage is this time.
You guessed it: the bike was completely cut in half, the chain definitely missing from the place where it should normally be found. "Nooooobs.... How do they even do this kind of crap??" Tommy shuddered at the thought of what must have happened, before getting to work. The fix was as simple-ish as the first two. Tommy started welding the two halves together with the blowtorch and a welder, along with some liquid metal for extra strength. He was able to finish that one easily. He went to the spare parts closet, and peaked inside; he was completely off guard when he saw the inside. It was pretty much a long isle of He repeated the steps he had taken with the first bikes, taking the fixed bike to the cleaner pods for... well... cleaning. He grabbed another broken bike from the damaged bike pods, and brought it back to his work table.
The bike was in shambles, missing a chain, a front and back tire, both handlebars, a seat, and the gears for shifting up and down. Tommy carefully took his time to gather each needed material and bring it back to the table. First, he grabbed a new chain, then a racers seat, some cool rubber mountain bike handlebars, the much needed two tires, and then on his final trip grabbed eleven gears, ranging in size, just as a mountain bike would have. Tommy then started assembling the bike, fitting on new handlebars, the seat, and the two tires. Then came the harder but not-so-tricky part, putting on the assorted gears in the correct order in the right place. He added the chain after the gears were rightly added. He ran over to the storage aisle, as he now referred to it now, to grab a certain can with a thin nozzle straw at the spray point. He started using it generously on the practically new bike. It was the trusty old miracle of WD-40, lubricating the joints and gears to further better the bicycle. He continued to carry the finished bike to the cleaning pods.
He moved back over to the pods for the final time... to see a box. Curiously, he opened it up to see a totally dismantled, un-fixable, mechanic's worst nightmare, tenfold, that even had a fine ground-up pile of frame dust on the bottom of the box. "Uh, yeah, no." Tommy carefully removed the box from the pod, and brought it over to the incinerator. Placing it in not-so-carefully, he closed the see-through door. However, he did not immediately start up the burner. First, he cleaned up the area he had been working at, then put away the beam machine with given parts, and carefully cleaned up the messy floors, locking the supplies closet as well. As soon as he was finished cleaning up, he opened the door to the stairwell that held some light to the upper reaches of HQ. He turned off the lights.
Tommy made his way over to the incinerator. And turned it on. A flame like a rocket's engine came up at full throttle, the color of orange and a very, very deep shade of red. Tommy smiled to himself. He could get used to that thing, oh yes he could indeed. He made his way back up to his room to shower. But more importantly to eat like a king, and then sleep like a dead man. Except for the fact that he'd, y'know, wake up in the morning. As a dead man would not. Cause he's... well, he's dead.
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Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 10:13 pm
E E P S T E R itaku obichi MISSION- Fossil Fraud It seems there's someone in the Johto region selling fake pokemon fossils. From his description, it sounds like he's a Legendary Brilliance Gang peon. Track him down and put a stop to his scam. (You will face one LBG peon with 2 fossil pokemon) Pokemon: None Rewards: 800 Item: One fossil of your choice ---------------------------------------------------------------- Well, I must say, this is a a good mission for somebody just starting out. Most people would start with the easier "Catch a pokemon" missions, so I'll give you marks for that. Now on to the grade. It was actually written somewhat well, as there were some words that I just wouldn't think of while writing a mission. Like the word digress. However. There were several mistakes throughout the piece, such as "I peddled along with his trusty partner..." I think you can figure out that you need to choose between the first or third person view of writing it. I'm pretty sure you chose first person, and this happened only once. Also, you need to capitalize all move names and pokemon names. Again, this kind of thing only happened once. One moooore thing. It's your battle. I actually liked the battle, but try not to make it so one-sided. I can see a good combination of move choices, but you've gotta give the other guy a chance. Zubat would be fine because of its flying type, but Chinchou would've taken heavy damage, if not being KOed, from the Magnitude 10. Sure, there were a ton of mistakes, but all of these are easily fixable by going over the mission once it is complete. Because this was your first mission I'll overlook this. Be warned, as you go up in rank, the grader will be harder on you, so work at it! So, in the end, you pass. Keep the 800PD, and the fossil of your choice. Oddly enough, I didn't see anything about the type of fossil you picked. I'm sure you didn't need to put it, but it's always nice to put down. As for fonts, I have no idea. If your talking about the size of the font, you jsut put add text here. I think. If you're talking about font type, I'm at a loss for words. So, anyways, keep up the good work! This grade can be overturned by Teir-1I thought I missed a line in first person, my apologizes. I did make the battle a little one sided didn't I, I will work on that in the future. I did pick a fossil and mention allow me to quote it if that's allowed smile "" I'm so sorry for what I have done here I want you to have all the Pokedollars please return the money to everyone, also here I was holding this for someone special but you are worth it. It's a shield fossil a shieldon can be found in that." Thank you for your criticism and help there will be more from me in the future haha
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Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 11:28 pm
E E P S T E R How to Become a Mechanic MISSION - Aqua Bike Mishap Those silly newbies and their Aqua Bikes. It seems they went out on a training mission a few weeks ago and completely wrecked their brand new Aqua Bikes. -Sigh- They really need to figure out how to take better care of their things. Anyways, fix 3-5 and we'll give you some more tools to work with. It'll be fun. I promise. They all have different ailments such as slashed tires, melted parted, ect. The more creative, the better the rewards. Rewards: Mechanic Lvl 1: Student + 200-1000 PD
Okay, at first I was confused, "What I thought he had to salvage all the bikes! but that I went back and saw what you did, it said three through five and you fixed four. Heh.
It wasn't a bad mission in the least, you had a decent amount of detail there wasn't very much in the way of repetitiveness and your ideas for the broken bikes were also decent. I liked that one that was cut in half. Maybe the newbie ran into an angry Scyther which used Slash?
Hehe, anyway, good job. You're in the Mechanic Class with 800 PD.
And that is all there is to say.
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 8:40 am
Mission: Night Raid on Devon
Objective: Steal 50 DS units at Level 3 of Devon Building. Don't get caught. Catch Zigzagoon, Voltorb, or Duskull.
Rewards: 1000 Pokémon Dollars
----------Mission 4: Start!----------
indenthereZero folded his arms and stared at the sheet of paper tacked to his front door. He frowned; sure, there were inaugurations to every group, but...
indenthere"Why would they ask me to steal some electronics, of all things? I thought we were above this kind of mischief..." Zero's Zubat, the Countess, poked her head out from Zero's hood. After nibbling on a Caterpie-candy, she flew into her master's room. She hovered a few moments in front of the Hoenn map and pointed out Rustboro City: the home of Devon Corp. His eyes turned to the map.
indenthere"Well, if it's what we're assigned..." He pulled out a Pokéball and tossed it to the ground. His Horsea, Leviathan, hopped out. She looked up at Zero with a questioning look. "We're off to Hoenn. That means another boat ride." She trumpeted her glee; Zero was finally getting some fresh air away from the library-room! She could swim!!! The Countess cried out her disgust; after her previous boat experience, she learned not to like overseas travel.
indenthereA few hours later, the ferry landed at the small dock outside Petalburg. The Aqua member hopped off the boat, thanked the captain, recalled his happily swimming Horsea, and released his Gible. "Come on out, Menart. You haven't had a chance to stretch, either." Menart leaped into the sand and immediately began chewing on small rocks. Zero looked around. A forest was visible from the beach, and the lights of Petalburg cast their glow on the nearby water. A few trainers were exercising by the ocean's edge, and an old man was tossing seashells to his Wingull. He stretched; might as well take a quick nap while waiting for the sun to set a bit lower...
indenthereA young boy in extravagant clothes tossed another Nugget to his Zigzagoon. "Come on, Coon, you'll never win contests at this rate! Catch the Nugget after Sand Attack, not before!!" The Zigzagoon, already worn out from such repetitive maneuvers, lied down on the sand instead, happily basking in the sun. The rich boy groaned. "No, we can sleep later! Don't get your coat all filthy! I said, catch the Nugget!" The child tried throwing the Nugget again, this time further from his Pokémon. Zigzagoon opened one eye and watched the Nugget fall to the ground.
indenthereBut another Pokémon had its eye on the shiny piece of gold, as well. Menart's fin broke out from beneath the sand, and before either the child or the Zigzagoon could react, the Gible launched himself out of the sand and swallowed the Nugget, disappearing back into the granular waves as soon as it had appeared. His fin poked back out, and Menart happily "swam" back to Zero, finally satisfied for the day.
indenthere"Thief! Get back here! How dare you!! Zigzagoon, quick, catch that Gible!" Zigzagoon raced after Menart's fin, and lowered his head in preparation for a Headbutt. Gible's fin disappeared completely into the sand right before the Headbutt struck him; after all, if he kept his fin out, he'd run into his master...
indenthereZigzagoon's Headbutt rammed into Zero's side, sending both Pokémon and sleeping victim into the air for a few seconds before crashing onto the floor. Zero leaped up, startled by the sudden awakening.
indenthere"Gah! Menart!" Menart popped back out of the sand, unable to contain his laughter. The rich boy, panting, finally caught up to his Zigzagoon.
indenthere"You...! You.. must... be... the owner... of that Gible, right?" The boy regained his stately composure. "Ah-hem. You owe me 10,000 Pokédollars for the Nugget that your Gible has stolen from me. I'd double the price, but seeing how my Zigzagoon has already given you his own form of punishment, it's the least you could give me in return. Foolish trainer." Zigzagoon snickered in time with his master.
indenthereZero dusted himself and glared down at the child. His voice dripped with venom; he wasn't very happy at being woken up so soon. "I owe you nothing, little brat. Menart, Sand Tomb." Gible kicked up large amounts of sand, creating a small dust devil, and launched it at the child. The Zigzagoon leaped between Menart's attack and his master, receiving the full blow and getting knocked out in one hit.
The child was shell-shocked; did this trainer try to attack him...? He turned to his Zigzagoon. "Coon.... Coon, get up!" He turned to Zero, who was already disappearing into the forest.
indenthere"You... How could you...? The police will severely punish you for this! It is against Pokémon Trainer regulations to direct any Pokémon attacks at a Trainer!" Zero turned his head and gave the rich boy a sideways-glance.
indenthere"Repayment. Your Zigzagoon headbutted me, so I figured it was only fair to return the favor. Consider yourself lucky that I'm not asking for payment for my win against you." With that, he set off to Rustboro City.
indenthereMenart walked with Zero in silence, contemplating Zero's actions. Zero's Zubat glanced back the sobbing rich boy as he ran to the nearest Pokémon Center. She knew her master wasn't the nicest person around, but... The Countess uttered a low cry to Zero. Why was he so cruel to a young boy? Zero turned his head to the Countess. "Don't give me that look. He was just some rich kid who was looking for a way to blackmail us." She bit Zero's finger tightly in response.
indenthere"...Alright, alright. Maybe I was a bit harsh to the kid. I don't know why I did that. Maybe we'll stop by the area after this mission to apologize..." The Countess shrieked in Zero's ear.
indenthere"Gah! Fine, fine, I get it. But you know I hate whiny little impudent kids-" Another Supersonic to the ear. "Ok, ok, stop it already!" He rubbed the side of his head and sighed. "I dunno... I just didn't have a good feeling about that kid. I felt like he deserved a bit of his own punishment, you know?" The Countess flew back into Zero's hood, without response to her master. She knew that he was usually never wrong with his "bad feelings." Gible, however, remained confused and slightly guilty. Did Zero command him to attack the boy, knowing that it would give him a guilty conscious, just because he ate that shiny rock? Was it punishment? Was he being punished?
indenthereA Bug Catcher watched Zero and company from afar. "You see them, Wurmple? Another Trainer lost in Petalburg Woods. Let's show them a good time." He leaped from his hiding spot and faced Zero. "Yo, Trainer! Our eyes have met, let's battle!" Zero groaned. What is with these kids...? I feel like such a bully after all these confrontations with children... The Bug Catcher grinned down at his Wurmple. "Let's do this!"
indenthereZero nodded to Gible. "Right, then. Menart, Slash." Menart's claws sharpened, and he lunged at Wurmple.
indenthereThe Bug Catcher gasped. "Quick, roll under the leaves and get on that tree! String Shot!" The Wurmple rolled next to a tree, avoiding the sharp claws, and used its momentum to String Shot the trunk, causing it to spin around the trunk like a tetherball. Gible tried keeping his eyes on the small worm, but got dizzy after a few moments. The Bug Catcher laughed.
indenthere"Poison Sting!" The Wurmple leaped off the tree and struck the dazed Gible, the force sending Gible into a tree. Wurmple immediately rushed back to the large trunk and proceeded to swing from branch to branch.
indenthere"Menart! Break the rope!" Menart jumped up and swiped at the string, grabbed the broken half connected to Wurmple, and caught the swinging bug in his mouth. Zero smirked. "Take Down. Ram into the tree." Gible kept his hold on Wurmple and rammed face-first into the large tree. The attack violently shook the tree, and a group of Cascoon fell. Wurmple staggered up, but a Dragon Rage to the face quickly finished it.
indenthereThe Bug Catcher groaned. "Aww, man, I lost again!" He returned his fainted Wurmple. "Good job finding those Cascoon. If I didn't have a fainted Pokémon, I'd have caught them all. See you later!" The boy ran off to Rustboro City. Zero looked back down at the Cascoon.
indenthere"Huh... Well, Menart, I think you've done enough for today." He recalled his Gible and sent out Scipio, the Charmander. "Easy training for you, eh." Scipio turned to the sleeping Cascoon and flared up his tail. The Countess sighed from within the hood. Sometimes, Scipio was as harsh as her master. The Charmander sent out wave after wave of Ember, burning the Cascoons who, in vain, tried to Harden themselves to safety. The Charmander stood above the burnt cocoons, tilted his head towards the sky and sounded the cry of victory; an easy win! Zero placed the KO'd Cascoons at the front of the north exit; surely, some trainers would be happy to catch them.
indenthere"Well, it's almost night. Let's get to that store." He stayed at the outskirts of Route 104, avoiding the small lake and instead weaving through the forest, thinking of an escape route should things at the store end up as terrible as the rest of his day.
---Rustboro City: Night---
indenthereZero hid in the shadows of the looming Devon Corporation, keeping mind of the two guards waiting just inside. Well, if I got into so many fights on my way here, it must make up for the lack of fighting I'll be doing now, right...? My luck can't be that bad... He turned to the Countess. "Did you get a good route for the area?" The Countess flew to a second-story window and clung onto the window frame. Zero nodded; entering from the second floor seemed like a better idea than sneaking around from the first floor.
indenthereZero sprung into action. He climbed up a ladder from a nearby fire exit from an adjacent building, then made a quick leap from the fire exit to the wall of Devon Corp., then jumped up Devon Corp.'s walls, making sure that he wasn't kicking loose any brick. He grabbed onto the ledge of the second floor, and pulled his head up to see if any guards were on patrol. The coast was, thankfully, clear; the window faced a dark hallway, with doors that led to research rooms. Zero hoisted himself up on the window ledge and crouched; he wasn't taking any chances.
indenthereZero opened the window and looked back at the Countess. "Keep watch. You know what to do." The Countess nodded, and flew inside the hallway, hanging on one of the ceiling fans. Zero turned to his left. From what he remembered on the layout displayed on his TADS, the package was supposed to be lying at the third floor's storage room. He glanced at the corridor that led to the stairway. Three guards were hovering around: two at the stairway, and one walking on patrol. Zero sighed. There goes the easy way in. Looks like I'll have to find another way to get past them. He hid behind a computer desk while the patrol guard walked past. Zero listened in on the radio that the guard held in his hand.
indenthere"How's the President doing? No late work tonight, right?" the voice crackled over the radio.
indenthereThe guard replied, "Nope. He said he had business to do back at Sootopolis. I bet he's researching that old cavern there again."
indenthere"Ah, man, I'd love to take a vacation whenever I wanted..."
indenthere"Hey, you can always be Mr. Stone's personal guard. Then you'd be traveling everywhere!"
indenthereZero watched as the guard turned back to the other hallway. Well, at least he's distracted. I wonder if this many guards are really necessary for patrol... Unless... There's more important stuff than just the electronics... Zero turned back to the window. Well, time for a distraction. He turned to the Countess. "Go."
indenthereThe Countess flew off her perch and soared to the entrance, grabbing the lit firecracker in Zero's hand. She swooped down to the building's left side, where the corridor with the windows right outside the stairway were, and dropped it at the building's side. The noise was deafening.
indenthereZero quickly walked back to the stairway and peeked at the guards. "Simon! Did you see that?!? It was an explosion at the side!" All the guards were facing the window, watching the firecracker as it flared and hissed.
indenthereNone of the guards noticed the hooded man sneak into the third floor.
indenthereZero closed the storage room's door silently and took a quick look at everything. He groaned. "Ugh... Pick up the package, the paper says... It's a brown box, the paper says... Well, everything here is in a brown box..." He began walking past the shelves; to his luck, everything was in alphabetical order. Zero walked to the shelf marked "D," and bumped his foot against a ball. The ball rolled to its side, and eyes opened. It was a Voltorb!
indenthere"Voltorb...? Oh, no..." Zero muttered. The Voltorb began glowing. It was preparing to explode!
indenthere"Crap..." Zero hastily looked to his left. A window! He opened it while sending out Horsea. He grabbed the Voltorb and forced it to fit in Horsea's snout. "All right, Focus Energy, now!" Leviathan began building pressure at her snout, with a flashing Voltorb sticking out. She faced the window, and tilted her head upward.
indenthereZero quickly glanced at the window. "Ok, somewhere in that forest! Fire!" Leviathan shot Voltorb out like a cannon, sending the shot far overhead Rustboro, and into Petalburg Woods. A moment later, the Voltorb self-destructed, sending smoke everywhere while in flight before crashing into the trees.
indenthereZero grabbed the package and recalled Horsea. "Good job... We're lucky it didn't explode in your face." He leaped over the ledge and did a tucked somersault, rolling on the ground as he landed, and used the extra momentum to run back to the forest. The Countess flew up into the sky and chased after Zero, leaving the Devon Corp.
indenthereIt was a little after midnight when Zero reached Petalburg Woods. He sent back out Horsea. "Right, where'd you send that bomb off to? We started over there," he explained, pointing to the north. Leviathan glanced back, then pointed her snout to a clearing a little southwest from where she was. Zero nodded. "Alright, let's go find it." He picked up Horsea and crept through the forest, trying not to attract attention of all the Pokémon in the area.
indenthereThe clearing was slightly darkened by the smoke caused by the explosion, with an exhausted Voltorb at the center of a small crater. Leviathan hopped over to her prey, and was about to shout for joy, when the Voltorb opened one eye and sent a Sonicboom out! Horsea knocked against the tree, too startled to move. Did that Pokémon just survive a Self-Destruct?!?!?
indenthereThe Voltorb rammed into Leviathan, rolling up the tree after impact. It wasn't going to let these thieves get away with their crime! Leviathan was enraged; how dare some stupid ball get the better of her! She squirted a jet of ink at the Voltorb's face, and immediately began focusing her energy on the next strike. The Voltorb lunged at Horsea again, but missed, and instead of a Water Gun coming from Leviathan's snout, a salty shotgun-spray of water blasted out. The Voltorb crashed into the floor, exhausted.
indenthereZero blinked. "So, that's what Brine does, eh...?" The Horsea hopped over to the fallen Voltorb and triumphantly cried. Zero pulled out a Pokéball and tossed it to the Voltorb, catching it easily. The ball warped out of sight, into the Storage System.
indenthereHe turned to Leviathan. "Alright, let's get out of here." The Countess picked up the Horsea and flew to the ocean, where the ferry was waiting. Zero looked up. The night sky was beginning to lighten up; it was almost morning. He hopped on the ferry and tried to relax. It's just a boat ride, it's just a boat ride... He had yet to feel comfortable on the water.
indenthereThe rich child rubbed his eyes. Another morning in his father's estate. He yawned. "Well, at least I got to get another Nugget from Daddy..." Upon thinking of his father, the boy grinned.
indenthere"Heh, Daddy promised me he'd find that Trainer and bring him to his knees, remember, Coon? I want that Gible dead!"
----------Mission 4: Complete----------
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Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 2:54 pm
Captain Linda
Mission: Night Raid on Devon
Objective: Steal 50 DS units at Level 3 of Devon Building. Don't get caught. Catch Zigzagoon, Voltorb, or Duskull.
Rewards: 1000 Pokémon DollarsUh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh. I love it! Especially the Countess' attitude. There was but one thing the urked me though, the jump from the third story window. I mean, totally possible but still... And I don't know about that Voltorb, I mean really surviving a Self-Destruct? Determination much? No matter! It was a clear pass! 1200 PD and your new Voltorb.
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 1:49 pm
Ice_Wolf_Demon Captain Linda
Mission: Night Raid on Devon
Objective: Steal 50 DS units at Level 3 of Devon Building. Don't get caught. Catch Zigzagoon, Voltorb, or Duskull.
Rewards: 1000 Pokémon DollarsUh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh. I love it! Especially the Countess' attitude. There was but one thing the urked me though, the jump from the third story window. I mean, totally possible but still... And I don't know about that Voltorb, I mean really surviving a Self-Destruct? Determination much? No matter! It was a clear pass! 1200 PD and your new Voltorb. It is possible to survive a fall from three stories, but I admit, I must have gotten a bit carried away. XD As for the Voltorb surviving... I didn't want to just make it explode and die, making it the easiest catch EVER. I figured it was like cheating my way into another catch, so I made it survive for the sake of doing a quick battle later. Sorry if it doesn't make much sense.
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:52 pm
Captain Linda Ice_Wolf_Demon Captain Linda
Mission: Night Raid on Devon
Objective: Steal 50 DS units at Level 3 of Devon Building. Don't get caught. Catch Zigzagoon, Voltorb, or Duskull.
Rewards: 1000 Pokémon DollarsUh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh. I love it! Especially the Countess' attitude. There was but one thing the urked me though, the jump from the third story window. I mean, totally possible but still... And I don't know about that Voltorb, I mean really surviving a Self-Destruct? Determination much? No matter! It was a clear pass! 1200 PD and your new Voltorb. It is possible to survive a fall from three stories, but I admit, I must have gotten a bit carried away. XD As for the Voltorb surviving... I didn't want to just make it explode and die, making it the easiest catch EVER. I figured it was like cheating my way into another catch, so I made it survive for the sake of doing a quick battle later. Sorry if it doesn't make much sense. Sorry, sorry, I know and understand I was in an odd mood that day so I felt like saying something about it. sweatdrop Trust me though, I really did love the mission report. Can't wait for your next one! :3
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Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:16 pm
MISSION- Fearow of Water
A group of Fearow have been harrassing travelers near the Power Plant. To make things worse, they have our emblem on their legbands. Naturally, we're getting blamed for it. Go and stop the Fearow (fight 3-5) and bring back one of the legbands.
Pokemon obtainable:
Bellsprout
Oddish
Machop
Spearow
Rewards: 600-1200
It was a beautiful day in January, surprisingly sunny especially for January. The sun was bright, it was partly cloudy...rain or perhaps snow... I loved this weather, it reminded me of Lavender town...long ways from there.... I pedaled along on my Aqua bike.. this seemed to be a tougher mission then normal... Mysterious Fearow with our armbands attached to them, attacking villages and Pokemon..giving us a terrible name. Fearow are flying types, meaning they are weak against electric types... Lieutenant Sparks will be my go to Pokemon for this mission hehe. I kept going on until I got near the target area. It was a Power Plant, seemingly abandoned probably due to attacks by the Fearow. It was a large area, filled with patches of tall grass and a babbling brook of crystal clear water. I started to scan the area when a felt a lump on my head. It was ZuZu my Zubat it seem someone or something was near... Could it be one of the Fearows???
" Come on out, whoever you are.... I'm not going to let you get the jump on me....Show yourself!!!!!"
Out from the tall grass came a short figure about 3 feet tall. It's skin was gray, and it was a mass of muscle. I had seen this Pokemon before, it was a Machop and it would be perfect for me. The Machop was wandering around and then spotted me, it immediately rushed in for an attack.
" Ahhh damn he's a feisty one, let's see if he can handle ZuZu. ZuZu quick Air Cutter!!!!!!!!"
ZuZu sprung into action and immediately let loose a furry of razor sharp wind. The Machop was caught of guard and immediately was cut by the wind. The Machop nearly fainted with that one attack. I was shocked..either this Machop was a pathteic weakling or my ZuZu is stronger then I thought... regardless I reached into my bad and tossed an aqua ball. It shook once, twice, third time and finally I heard that satisfying click signifying my victory.
" Nice!!!! I caught a Machop....but why so easy...Come on out Tai!!!! "
I tossed the pokeball in the air and it exploded in a bright light, my newly caught Machop was panting and resting on one knee. My attack didn't hit his knees.... I got it...
"Tai were you in a battle with a Fearow before me!!!!!???"
Machop nodded his head.... and tried to get up only to stumble to the ground. Immediately I rushed into my backpack and pulled out a super potion. I sprayed over Tai's wounds and handed him a sitrus beri.
" Here this will heal you up don't worry about those Fearow...I'll make them pay for what they did to you....Return for now..."
I pulled out Tai's pokeball and returned him for a rest. It was time to destroy those who did this to tai... Team Clone I believe their name was.... I ran to the back of the Power Plant and was immediately greeted by a Fearow feasting on a berri in the grass.
"ZuZu there's only one there right now, you can take him right.."
ZuZu grinned wildly and rushed into battle. He was a handful.....
" ZuZu quick confuse ray!!!!!!"
The Fearow was quickly taken off guard and caught by the dazzling ray. He swayed and squawked sending for help. Even confused the Fearow was able to get off a fierce gust attack. ZuZu was swept up in the powerful gale force wind, this was not enough to stop him however.
" ZuZu use Wing Attack and deflect that gust right back at him!!!!!!"
ZuZu flapped his wings wildly and for a moment they glowed in a white light, he smashed back the wind directly into the Fearow. The Fearow confused and frightened took the attack headon, he did not expect the Wing Attack from ZuZu. The Fearow took a direct hit and collapsed on the spot. I ran up and ripped off the armband.
" Nice that's one band down.. I wonder how many more there ar-"
A loud whistling could be heard as something rushed towards my back. I trained for this, such a sneak attack would not work. Quickly rolling to the left I grabbed a large stick in the grace. Immediately turning around and swinging the stick at whatever was there. I heard a loud smack and then a splash! In the water was floating another Fearow knocked out in the brook.
" What the hell!!! Oh no!!! I don't ever attack Pokemon....that was a planned attack... Show yourself criminal!!!!!!!! "
A snicker could be heard a a man in similar uniform as mine appeared from the rooftop of the Power Plant. Three large Fearow were flying around the man.
" Your a fast one, Aqua snot......I didn't expect you to dodge that attack, nor did I ever expect you to knock out the Fearow by yourself....you can call me Kai I'm a grunt from Team Clone. I didn't expect anyone from Team Aqua to come and try ruining my operation. It was easy ruining your name, and now we can use this power plant for energy to power our latest machine..."
" Oh to be honest I don't care why your here... let's battle I need to ruin you and get back to the base..."
" As you wish Aqua scum...but you can't fight what you can't hit... Fearow fly high and bombard them with Gust!!!!"
*The Fearow flew up high and began to flap their heavy wings, a powerful storm was brewed. Itaku could barely stand himself...but he had a plan. I reached into his pocket and then was knocked over by the gust.*
"ZuZu quick fly up high!!!! Get them!!!!! Wrap yourself in gust and ride their air waves!!!!"
* ZuZu quickly wrapped himself in a gust and began to ascend to where the Fearow were. The Fearow pounded more furiously and knocked ZuZu out of the air. I smiled as the Team Clone grunt cackled.*
" ZuZu now spit it out!!!!! "
*The Team Clone grunts face was one of shock and confusion as he watched Zubat shoot a Pokeball from his mouth. With a flash of light Lieutenant Sparks(my Chinchou) appeared above the Fearow.*
" Lieutenant Sparks surround yourself with Spark and then release it!!!! "
* Lt.Sparks was surrounded by electricity and he immediately burst with the raw energy, successfully clipping the wings of the Fearow. Chinchou and the Fearows began to fall to the Earth. I ran immediately and slid catching Chinchou and Zubat in my arms. ZuZu was knocked out and thus I returned him to his ball. Chinchou was eager to battle and thus jumped into the field.*
" You did great ZuZu take some rest.... Now Kai...were on the same level your damn Fearow can no longer fly, since they are paralyzed...."
" You Team Aqua twerp how dare you!!! Do You think you have won!!!! Fearows use Drill Peck and surround that pitiful Chinchou don't let him make a fool out of you!!!!!"
* The Fearow came in for the attack, quick and powerful but at least they were grounded.*
" Lieutenant Sparks use Thunderbolt on the one coming from above!!!!!!"
*Chinchou let loose a powerful Thunderbolt successfully catching the jumping Fearow, it was knocked out upon the attack. *
" Ohhh looks like you got one to bad the other two, are more powerful then that one hehehe...Kai snickered"
* The drill pecks hit home sending Chinchou into the brook. My only electric Pokemon was defeated...what could I do now....I have one left..but...he was hurt....Hold on.... he wanted revenge.. I suppose he'll try hard to get it. I swallowed and hoped my new friend would be able to handle these birds. I threw the Pokeball in the air and it burst releasing Machop. Machop took notice of the Fearow and immediately became pumped for battle.*
" That Machop...that's the same Machop we destroyed before hehehe. That little weakling can't do anything!!!!! He will be defeated once again." Kai and the Fearows seemed to be laughing.
*Without any commands Machop began to pump itself up, hi fingertips were glowing red....but why.. That looks like Focus Energy.... What is his plan. Machop rushed forward to the grounded Fearows with blinding speed, he slammed his fingertips onto the wings of both the Fearows. At first nothing happened, but suddenly the Fearows collapsed and fainted.*
" What the hell, just happened what did you do to that weakling Pokemon. How is he that strong what did he do!!!." Kai began to panic.
I laughed and smiled, I knew exactly what he Tai did. The fact that he did it by himself and fights like that however was a major surprise.
"You want to know what just happened do you, well this Machop seems to know it's opponents weak points. Case in point your Fearows wing. The exact point being where the wing connects to the body.... He used focus energy hence that red light and focused the energy in his fingertips, when he struck the Fearows it was a critical hit in their most vital of weak points. I would have never commanded him to do that. This was a surprise, this little guy wanted revenge and he got it...now to take you down..."
" I can't believe it beaten by an Aqua snot. This isn't the last time you'll see me boy!!!!!!!! I'll remember your face. "
*Kai threw a smokebomb into the ground and with that he was gone.*
" The name's Itaku Obichi and the Machop that defeated you was Tai!!!"
*I laughed and petted Tai. Tai and myself collected the last of the armbands signifying the mission was over.*
" Well little fella you made a great addition to my team, let's go back to base and celebrate a job well done."
*Tai smiled and jumped accidentally kicking my Aqua bike, the bike shattered and Tai laughed.*
" MY BIKE!!!! AHHHH NOW WE GOT TO WALK BACK!!!!!!!!!!! Why are you all handfuls........"
*Tai smiled and picked up the bike and carried it all the way back to the Aqua base. The future was looking bright, I was getting stronger and making friends and enemies. Life is exciting.*
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:23 pm
itaku obichi MISSION- Fearow of Water A group of Fearow have been harrassing travelers near the Power Plant. To make things worse, they have our emblem on their legbands. Naturally, we're getting blamed for it. Go and stop the Fearow (fight 3-5) and bring back one of the legbands. Pokemon obtainable: Bellsprout Oddish Machop Spearow Rewards: 600-1200 Well, I must give you a belated welcome to the team. We're all glad to have you here, I'm sure. I have to ask, did you buy the items that you used on the Machop in the shop? I'm not sure about the policy on healing items in Missions, so for that reason, I'll act like I didn't see it. If you did buy the items in the shop, just ignore this part of the grade. As you may or may not know, we try to keep mission battles as close to game style as we can in terms of abilities, status conditions, and physical/special aspects of moves. Spark, a physical electric move, you used as a special move. If you meant electricity, just as it is, I don't believe you can do that. You probably would have been better off using Discharge, or Thunderbolt. (Hint: You're allowed any move in the Pokemon's Move-pool. Even if it's learned at high level, an Egg move, a TM/HM, Tutor, etc.) And lastly, Focus Energy isn't an attack, I'm sorry to say. now if he did you an attack, like Karate Chop or something, make sure to mention the attack somewhere in the description of the move being done. It may seem like I picked the mission to death, but I'm actually kind of loose on my grading. I REALLY liked the way you wrote it, as I mentioned before, and that gives you a great deal of credit on my part. ... ..... ... Pass, 900 PD and a Machop. PS. Here's the tip, technically you haven't caught the pokemon to use it in the RP are until your mission has been graded and you've turned in a new pokemon form in the Aqua Rank and Pokemon List.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:25 pm
MISSION- Flame on!
Go catch a fire pokemon!
Pokemon:
Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon
Money: 600
It was a miserable snowy day.... I hated the snow, more then anything. It was cold and miserable, the only upside to this day was my mission. It was relatively easy compared to my last two missions. It was a basic catch a Pokemon mission, my goal this time was a fire type. I guess these missions are to bulk up our teams and test our skills, I would usually be all for this but…it was pretty much blizzard conditions outside. I zipped up my hoodie and tightened the hood. I was kind of jealous of all my Pokemon right now, Tai and Lieutenant Sparks all snug ad warm in their pokeballs. Even ZuZu was snug resting on my head in the hoodie. I was resenting my Pokemon when I got a n** on my head from ZuZu.
“Hey what was that for? I have all right to be upset, I hate the cold more then anything. We know have to walk to our destination to, yes walk because Tai wrecked my bike on the last mission. Not only that I don’t know which fire Pokemon to go for….hmmm which do you think ZuZu?” Zuzu squealed and then got more comfortable under my hood. “I know exactly which one I want, but they are rare in this region. There may be one pe'rson who can help me find it…. "It seems were off to Mr.Backlot’s ZuZu.
After wandering around in the storm which felt like hours, I wound up at my destination…SLATEPORT!!!!!!!! “Ughhh this was not right at all….well since I’m here I might as well try some of Slateport’s world famous hot cocoa. Let’s go guys.” I ran to the Slateport café and took a seat. “Come on out guys; let’s take a break from this cold.” I pressed the button on my pokeballs and released both Lieutenant Sparks and Tai. ZuZu burst out from my hat causing it to fly across the room. “Ahhh my hat!!!!!” The hat flew across the café where a man proceeded to catch it. He walked over and I realized I knew this man, but what was he doing here. He walked over and handed me the hat smiling.
“Bob what in the world are you doing here, I haven’t see you since I stopped your fossil business a while back, have you been on the straight and narrow since then.” Bob was laughing as he pulled out…no way…an Aqua badge!!!! “Yeah I guess I have been busy since we last met. I joined Team Aqua. My knowledge of fossils has come in quite handy. In fact I just completed one of the missions they assigned me.” He smiled and pulled out a Pokeball from his pocket. He released the creature inside and out came a Numel. “See this little guy here he was my mission. They sent me to go catch a fire type and this is the first one I saw, I’m glad because due to his dual types he is sure to be a powerhouse later on.” He smiled for a moment, until he heard Numel cry. He looked quickly and was shocked to see Numel being juggled by a chuckling Tai. My Machop had him flying high in the diner until a small flame came down and engulfed Tai. Bob caught Numel mid-air and started to laugh. “Seems like you got your handful with that one.” Bob continued to laugh. “Yeah I’m sorry about that, he likes to show off his own strength, he’s the reason my bike was trashed in the last mission…now we have to walk everywhere.” I sighed and motioned to the waitress to bring four hot chocolate. She returned quickly and placed dishes for all of my Pokemon. “Well after you finish you little drink meet me outside; I’ll drive you to where you need to go. Anyway you better leave a nice tip hehehe.” With that Bob was gone, it didn’t click when he said leave a nice tip..then I saw the carnage. The floor was completely charred where Numel burned it and Tai had broken two tables during his juggling act. How the hell did I not notice this earlier….. I rushed out of the café after returning my Poekmon, leaving a great tip which I hoped covered the damage during the process. “Great why can’t I have a normal mission for once…..”
Once outside it seemed to have stopped snowing, Bob was waiting in this beat up old car. I wasn’t sure at all if it would even make it anywhere never mind Mr.Backlots….. “Ummm Bob was does your car suck…..” He got sad for a moment but then laughed. “My fossil business didn’t go so well thanks to someone, so I need to get some money first hehehe.” He laughed and started the car, I told him to head to Mr.Backlots. It wasn’t a long drive in fact it was pretty quick and quiet…thank god… Before departing Bob gave me a red Pokeblock he said it would help attract fire Pokemon. I ran into the mansion and was immediately greeted by one of Mr.Backlot’s maids. She rushed me into Mr.Backlot’s office saying something like “He is in a terrible mood” or something…. As I entered Mr.Backlot’s office I could see he was in his chair grooming a beautiful Eevee, without turning he spoke. “What do you want; I hate snowy days it keeps me out of my beautiful garden.” “I’m sorry Mr.Backlot my name is Itaku Obichi I’m a member of Team Aqua. I was on a mission to catch a fire Pokemon. Unfortunately I have my mind set on catching a fire type not normally found in this region.” Mr.Backlot’s mood suddenly seemed to change and he started laughing. The Eevee jumped off his lap and ran into another room. “Well normally this snow would make me shoo any visitors away…however I love the new Team Aqua and everything they stand for. Also the moment you mentioned a rare Pokemon I was in. So tell me which fire type are you after, and maybe I can help you out.” Mr.Backlot was eager almost on top of me. “Well the Pokemon I want is a Growlithe, I just love their majestic look and powerful grace. If I could have any fire type it would have to be that one!!!!!!” I must have gotten excited myself as Mr.Backlot backed away and then jumped in excitement. “Your in luck kid, there has been this pesky Growlithe has been showing up lately. He looks powerful and would definitely make a great ally to Aqua. Do you have any pokeblock I’ll have one of my maids cook up some delicious Pokemon food.” I handed Mr.Backlot the pokeblock he called for one of his maids and she returned some time later with a bowl of spicy Pokemon food. I figured she put some Tomato berry in it. Mr. Backlot and I ran to the garden I placed the food in the grass and waited in the bushes. It was now the waiting game…..
I waited for what seemed like forever, Pokemon came and went. There was a Meowth, an Oddish another Eevee and a few other Pokemon. I was beginning to doze off, when finally there he was. He bounded into the clearing the snow melting with every step he took. He reached the food and began to chow down, I admired his beauty for a few seconds more and jumped into action. “Since he is a fire type the obvious choice is this fella. Go Lieutenant Sparks!!!!” I reached into my pocket the ball flying through the air it exploded with a bright light and out popped Chinchou. “Quick Chinchou Water Gun!!!” A steady powerful stream of water flew out of Chinchou’s mouth and to my surprise Growlithe was already gone…what just happened….. a bolt of light and Chinchou was sent flying back. Now I understand…Growlithe knows Extremespeed…… he is going to be hard to hit like this… “Oh my, that Growlithe knows how to fight!!!!” I forgot Mr.Backlot was here watching, I chuckled he sounded like a kid in a candy shop. This was going to take precise planning to catch this one. “Quick Chinchou use Water Sport!!” Chinchou spouted out water making it rain already the area, coating his body in the process. Puddles formed from where the rain of water fell. Growlithe closed in quickly, but instead of using Extremespeed his fangs glowed a yellow light. “Ahh that’s Thunderfang, Lieutenant Sparks dodge it quick!!!!” It was for naught however, Growlithe clamped down and a jolt was sent through Chinchou’s body. Being coated in water made this move even stronger. Chinchou quickly fainted from that blow. It was time to get serious…
“Oh dear oh my, that little guy must of hatched from an egg and was breeded from powerful parents. Don’ give up, show him what a True Aquan can do!!!!!" Mr.Backlot was roaring. He’s right just because this one was tougher then most doesn’t mean I can’t win. I adjusted myself and smiled. “Go Tai show him what you can do!!!!!!!” Tai emerged from the ball with a burst of light, appearing on the field he flexed his biceps. “You’re such a showoff….” I sighed. “Ohhhh what a powerful little guy you got there, let’s see what he can do!!!” Mr.Backlot had a bowl of pretzels and was munching on them. “Tai use Rock Throw quickly!!!” Tai reached into the ground pulling out small rocks and hurling them across the field, as expected Growlithe used Extremespeed to dodge the moves…perfect. “Tai close your eyes now!!!!! Lieutenant Sparks set this battle up for us, you won’t be able to see Growlithe due to Extremespeed. That’s why I had Lieutenant Sparks use Water Sport before he fainted. He is going to have to run through the puddles to get to you. Listen closely and when he comes closer grab him!!!!!!!” Tai nodded and closed his eyes, opening his ears to the full extent.This plan was bound to work, Mr.Backlot gasped he had no idea I planned this far. Growlithe was running and there was a splash directly in front of Tai. Without a moments hesitation Tai rushed forward and grabbed the Growlithe dead in his tracks. The Growlithe was shocked it had no idea how this happened. “Good job Tai quick use Seismic Toss and follow it up with Rock Throw!!!!! " Tai jumped into the air flipping with Growlithe in his arms he slammed him directly into the ground. Growlithe struggled to get to his feet and was immediately greeted with a rock straight in his face. Growlithe flew back and was dazed. “Quickly Itaku catch him!!!” Mr.Backlot was jumping in the air, I felt like a performer. Reaching into my coat I pulled out the Aqua ball and tossed it at the Growlithe. It hit him in the head engulfing him in a red light. One..two..three shakes!!!! He was mine; finally I caught my favorite fire Pokemon!!!! “Brilliant lad, you’ve done it.” Mr.Backlot ran up and shook my hand.
That mission took longer then expected but it was well worth it. Mr.Backlot was thrilled to watch me battle, in fact he even gave me his phone number in case I needed anything. I left Mr.Backlots home back into the cold, this time I had no need to worry. Blaze my new Growlithe was under my hood providing me the constant warmth I needed. I completed the mission and got a new friend; with each mission my friends and I grew stronger….My goal is to get stronger and became an ally in the battle against Archie, as a proud member of Team Aqua I would not let that dream die. With all my friends I will soon be able to fight like the rest of them!!!!
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:34 pm
itaku obichi MISSION- Flame on! Go catch a fire pokemon! Pokemon: Any non evolved, non legendary fire pokemon Money: 600 I enjoyed reading this one. Good battle with Growlithe. There are still a few points I need to bring up, of course. 1: (Geography lesson) Slateport is in Hoenn, Mr. Backlot's mansion is in Sinnoh. It'd take more than just a few hours to get there by car. 2: (Style lesson) Gaia doesn't display leading tab indents. Please use double spacing for your paragraph breaks. 3: (Combat Lesson) I'm sorry to see your Chinchou has the useless ability, Illuminate. Better luck next time. Overall, it was a good mission. You've got a few areas that could use a spelling or punctuation check, but it doesn't impact the overall score. (At least not for Level 1 missions) You pass, keep Growlithe and get 600 PD. As a side note, the Aqua Shop Vehicle Garage can repair your bike. First fix is free, subsequent fixes are according to the price in the shop.
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