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Cotton Shorts Kid

High-functioning Gekko

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 6:38 pm


Nebbia d Argento
Cotton Shorts Kid
Nebbia d Argento
Cotton Shorts Kid
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Cotton Shorts Kid


Alright. Well, what if I told you I've
already made plans with Fiendish
to make a demon into a monk? As
the creator, if I've made provisions
for a certain outcome I would think
it would be feasible for them to be
instilled...

The top rank is always the Iron
Phoenix. Then comes the Headmaster,
the Gung Fu and Qi Gung master,
and so on. Always. This has been
indicated numerous times.


Well either think of a way for a demon to become a complete human.
or simply ask fiendish kindly to make a human character.


*sigh* Fine. You're the boss.


Alright, everything else seems fine so far.


Uploading the movepool thus far
soon.


alright, lemme know when so I can look up to it.


Okay~ go
PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 7:21 pm


Cotton Shorts Kid

Okay~ go

I feel a little iffy about the abilities management
Since Gung fu pretty much takes a slot.
It's not about the styles being unfair, it is the fact that having a style counts as a Skill,

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Everything in the chakras sounded good until we hit the solar plexus and from down there.


Solar plexus:
Also called the stomach, this is the center of power. It also controls appetites. Those who have mastery over it can fast for unthinkable stretches of time, and also can generate truly jawdropping force.
[So far so good.]
Iron Armor: For two turns the user can make his body like armor with no weak points (that means toughening the eyes, throat, groin, etc. as well conventional areas). Three turn cooldown.

I see this one being troublesome. Such low cooldown. No weak points while also carrying an overwhelming force? Not really a good combination for a fair character. We need to fix this by either remodeling the skill or be more specific.
Can they move?
What are they capable of during this instance?

I can see this one being extremely popular with "Beat them up" guys and girls. so I don't want to have a Solar plexus monk/nun running wild.


Iron Finger: Counteracts Iron Armor. User can find an opponent’s weak point and exploit it. Three turn cooldown.

Again, same problem with Iron armor. Low cooldown, plus the ability to create/find an oponent weakness AND exploit it.
The description itself its too vague. It leaves room for heavy exploitation.
It is after all an indirect autohit.



Phantom Strike: An invisible needle of an attack tears through the opponent’s guard, Cooldown is three turns.

It makes sense, still it's an auto hit. Yet, unlike the previous ones, seems like there's more room to work it off. I'll keep an eye on it.

Toughen up!: User can ignore damage for one turn. Use once per fight.

not really an issue with it being broken given it's just once per fight. Still. It makes it more of a reserve skill. I don't really look at it as being bad. But I can see much people skipping it.


Over all, you've spoken of the solar plexus being beings with remarcable force. Yet none of the habilities speak of using said force.
Weakness exploitation doesn't count. I suggest you take a better look at this Chakra archetype.



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Sacral: The pleasure center. Yep, definitely talking about sex. Also helps with acceptance and socializing. Those who have this as their dominant chakra often become masterful persuaders, able to charm their way to great success or even quell aggressive in the heat of battle. [Lel]

Adapt: User can adapt quickly to their surroundings. Ex: Can see more clearly in a sandstorm. [Good to go]

Bliss: User dulls the mind of the target for two turns with a blanket-feeling of total bliss. Cooldown is five turns.
Define bliss? this skill seems to have potential. Especially since is a supportive skill. Please elaborate.

Persuasion: Naturally higher charisma than other characters. As such, this ability may be used to persuade a would-be aggressor not to attack, seduce a key target, etc. May not be ignored 100% of the time. Regardless of success will make a connection with the target.

[I kinda get it, but let's be real. It's an autohit and it only plays with NPC's and some people actually wiling to take the character into consideration. I can see some monks being frustrated with people not cooperating 100% of the time. But making it available with People makes it a clear Autohit and an instant OP ability. I suggest you revise this skill carefully.]

(Adv.)Shadowlash: If a connection is made the user can attack the opponent remotely, slightly damaging their soul. Two turn cooldown.

how so remotely? it makes Persuation already an autohit to make this skill work. Please revise carefully.
Persuation is your bread and butter for this. So I suggest you take careful look.
I do like the combo. But it needs more Tweaks.



(Adv.)Discord: If a connection is made, the user can disrupt the rhythm of the opponent’s soul with a strike similar to Soul Purge.

Fair use. Yet, again, check up on how persuation works.



(Adv.)Personal Hell: Essentially the opposite of “Bliss.” User brings the target’s worst fears and personal demons to life in a powerful illusion for two turns. Will take damage from apparitions if hit. Cooldown is five turns.

Who will take damage from apparitions if hit?



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I actually like gRoot. No comments on it.
If anything the radius on the gravity field.
I would call it an advance feature from this class. (which still has it's 3 mastery levels.)

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 8:03 pm


Yeah it kinda plays off the whole witch prison thing. Basically Yakō was a warden and would also hunt down witches who escaped or sentenced to prison. Back then she was far different then the way she is now.
http://souleater.wikia.com/wiki/Witch_Prison

With Yosuzume I've already started gearing her up for wakeing up her brother.

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No I think there is an example in the Netherworld in thread.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 10:21 pm


Cotton Shorts Kid
Nebbia d Argento
Cotton Shorts Kid
Nebbia d Argento
Cotton Shorts Kid


*sigh* Fine. You're the boss.


Alright, everything else seems fine so far.


Uploading the movepool thus far
soon.


alright, lemme know when so I can look up to it.


Okay~ go


Well back with Sacred
I want her to be balanced, not a one trick all in or nothing.
you could give her more attempts to create a connection.
Not just once per battle.
The move is no longer auto hit so I don't see why not trying it after a descent cooldown. 8-10.
Also you got rid of the controlling the opponent techniques so I don't see why not giving them more attempts at establishing connections. after all that's their main tool for exchanges.

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Cotton Shorts Kid

High-functioning Gekko

PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2016 8:33 pm


Yokai Yakuza
Fiendish Az


I'll be uploading a formal wrap-up later, but I
thought I'd let you know the mission is over, just
so you don't feel like you have to wait for anything.

Planning will start shortly for part two of the
mission. If you have any ideas for new chars.
to add in please let me know sometime next
week. Thanks for staying active! whee
PostPosted: Mon Jan 09, 2017 7:39 pm


Cotton Shorts Kid


Alright, speaking of activity.
Glad to know everyone's doing fine during the festivities but seeing as we are already on the highroad we'll start with your first test. Which regards popularity and activity.

From today on, you have 2 weeks (actually tomorrow so it's from Tuesday from other Tuesday). To recruit 5 people interested in the monk Archetype Beta.

If by two weeks you don't fill the Quota, it means the premise its' just not popular or appealing for the group. Therefore I would have to mark this test as a fail and we would end up the project.
If You succeed however we'll move onto the next phase.

Use this day to build a strategy for your approach to people. And to Simplify your profile builds.

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Cotton Shorts Kid

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 09, 2017 7:47 pm


Nebbia d Argento
Cotton Shorts Kid


Alright, speaking of activity.
Glad to know everyone's doing fine during the festivities but seeing as we are already on the highroad we'll start with your first test. Which regards popularity and activity.

From today on, you have 2 weeks (actually tomorrow so it's from Tuesday from other Tuesday). To recruit 5 people interested in the monk Archetype Beta.

If by two weeks you don't fill the Quota, it means the premise its' just not popular or appealing for the group. Therefore I would have to mark this test as a fail and we would end up the project.
If You succeed however we'll move onto the next phase.

Use this day to build a strategy for your approach to people. And to Simplify your profile builds.


I have prospects interested in seeing
a sample profile first; may I create to
aid said recruiting?
PostPosted: Mon Jan 09, 2017 8:39 pm


Cotton Shorts Kid
Nebbia d Argento
Cotton Shorts Kid


Alright, speaking of activity.
Glad to know everyone's doing fine during the festivities but seeing as we are already on the highroad we'll start with your first test. Which regards popularity and activity.

From today on, you have 2 weeks (actually tomorrow so it's from Tuesday from other Tuesday). To recruit 5 people interested in the monk Archetype Beta.

If by two weeks you don't fill the Quota, it means the premise its' just not popular or appealing for the group. Therefore I would have to mark this test as a fail and we would end up the project.
If You succeed however we'll move onto the next phase.

Use this day to build a strategy for your approach to people. And to Simplify your profile builds.


I have prospects interested in seeing
a sample profile first; may I create to
aid said recruiting?

Well I expected at least Illo and the grandmaster to be already build in some format.
While you also mentioned a rookie character. So yeah you should.

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