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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:41 pm


Azeiel The Fallen
Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin)

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, (Signature jutsu/ Private)

Jutsu Rank: C-Rank, B, A, S. (once possible Mifune must relearn this jutsu and it takes the rank he re-learns. So if he re-learned it as a B rank then it becomes B-Rank and replaces the lower rank ones preventing them from use. He can only re-learn them up to the maximum possible for his rank.)

Jutsu Description: Kurohitsugi is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates a purple-black coffin of chakra that envelops the target with a powerful torrent of energy that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. All of this is in illusion but the pain of being slashed from head to toe is very real. The slashes while shallow are there is enough of them to cause pain.
(I can add more if need be but for now I am tired )
Genjutsu do not cause real wounds.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:42 pm


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Azeiel The Fallen
Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin)

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, (Signature jutsu/ Private)

Jutsu Rank: C-Rank, B, A, S. (once possible Mifune must relearn this jutsu and it takes the rank he re-learns. So if he re-learned it as a B rank then it becomes B-Rank and replaces the lower rank ones preventing them from use. He can only re-learn them up to the maximum possible for his rank.)

Jutsu Description: Kurohitsugi is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates a purple-black coffin of chakra that envelops the target with a powerful torrent of energy that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. All of this is in illusion but the pain of being slashed from head to toe is very real. The slashes while shallow are there is enough of them to cause pain.
(I can add more if need be but for now I am tired )
Genjutsu do not cause real wounds.

I could of sworn it said the PAIN was real hang on a second XD

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:50 pm


Azeiel The Fallen
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Azeiel The Fallen
Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin)

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, (Signature jutsu/ Private)

Jutsu Rank: C-Rank, B, A, S. (once possible Mifune must relearn this jutsu and it takes the rank he re-learns. So if he re-learned it as a B rank then it becomes B-Rank and replaces the lower rank ones preventing them from use. He can only re-learn them up to the maximum possible for his rank.)

Jutsu Description: Kurohitsugi is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates a purple-black coffin of chakra that envelops the target with a powerful torrent of energy that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. All of this is in illusion but the pain of being slashed from head to toe is very real. The slashes while shallow are there is enough of them to cause pain.
(I can add more if need be but for now I am tired )
Genjutsu do not cause real wounds.

I could of sworn it said the PAIN was real hang on a second XD

The phrase in BOLD is misleading then.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:52 pm


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Azeiel The Fallen
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Azeiel The Fallen
Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin)

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, (Signature jutsu/ Private)

Jutsu Rank: C-Rank, B, A, S. (once possible Mifune must relearn this jutsu and it takes the rank he re-learns. So if he re-learned it as a B rank then it becomes B-Rank and replaces the lower rank ones preventing them from use. He can only re-learn them up to the maximum possible for his rank.)

Jutsu Description: Kurohitsugi is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates a purple-black coffin of chakra that envelops the target with a powerful torrent of energy that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. All of this is in illusion but the pain of being slashed from head to toe is very real. The slashes while shallow are there is enough of them to cause pain.
(I can add more if need be but for now I am tired )
Genjutsu do not cause real wounds.

I could of sworn it said the PAIN was real hang on a second XD

The phrase in BOLD is misleading then.

Eya I just noticed that part give me second I will reword it ok.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 2:21 pm


Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin)

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, (Signature jutsu/ Private)

Jutsu Rank: C-Rank, B, A, S. (once possible Mifune must relearn this jutsu and it takes the rank he re-learns. So if he re-learned it as a B rank then it becomes B-Rank and replaces the lower rank ones preventing them from use. He can only re-learn them up to the maximum possible for his rank.)

Jutsu Description: Kurohitsugi is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates a purple-black coffin of chakra that envelops the target with a powerful torrent of energy that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. All of this is an illusion but the pain of being slashed from head to toe is very real.
(I can add more if need be but for now I am tired )  
PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 3:59 pm


More is needed, a description of the changes that the jutsu go through as it levels up, along with what exactly gets the defender caught in this jutsu.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 11:09 am


Yes sir will do ^.^
PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:15 pm


Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin)

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, (Signature jutsu/ Private)

Jutsu Rank: C-Rank, B, A, (once possible Mifune must relearn this jutsu and it takes the rank he re-learns. So if he re-learned it as a B rank then it becomes B-Rank and replaces the lower rank ones preventing them from use. He can only re-learn them up to the maximum possible for his rank.)
Jutsu Trigger : A ball of black chakra forms in the users hand and that acts as the trigger. Once they see the ball of chakra the genjutsu takes effect.

Jutsu Description: Kurohitsugi is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates a purple-black coffin of chakra that envelops the target with a powerful torrent of energy that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. All of this is an illusion but the pain of being slashed from head to toe is very real. Once the spears impale the target the victim experiences what it is like to die though only for an instant.

C-Rank Creates a coffin that is only a bit bigger then the target. The inside of the coffin is nothing but pitch black. Just large enough to cover them inside of it. It creates a grand total of seven black spears on the top of the coffin that once the coffin is completed impale the target from above.

With a B-Rank the coffin is now a full ten feet tall and a six feet wide. When it is formed the pitch black theme is still carried over making it seem as if the victim is trapped in an endless abyss. Once it forms spears now cover the entire top and upper one third of the coffin. This increase in number causes a sever increase in the pain it causes. When the spears engage at this point instead of it being all at once its one after the other with barely a second in between each of them prolonging the pain.

When it reaches A-rank. It becomes a fearsome genjutsu to deal with. The coffin is the same size as the previous level with the addition that not only does the victim feel as if they are alone in sheer abyss but should they attempt to move no matter how much they try all they see is abyss. The spears created now cover the entire upper half of the coffin and as soon as the coffin is fully formed the spears are unleashed on the victim followed by the excruciating pain caused by feeling ones entire body become pierced by spears.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 11:40 am


What catches the target in the genjutsu? Eye contact, petals, an explosion, something has to trigger the genjutsu, it cant just be hand seals-coffin-pain. Genjutsu are easy to land, but they can't be pure auto hits.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 11:41 am


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What catches the target in the genjutsu? Eye contact, petals, an explosion, something has to trigger the genjutsu, it cant just be hand seals-coffin-pain. Genjutsu are easy to land, but they can't be pure auto hits.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:08 pm


Jutsu Name: Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin)

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, (Signature jutsu/ Private)

Jutsu Rank: C-Rank, B, A, (once possible Mifune must relearn this jutsu and it takes the rank he re-learns. So if he re-learned it as a B rank then it becomes B-Rank and replaces the lower rank ones preventing them from use. He can only re-learn them up to the maximum possible for his rank.)
Jutsu Trigger : Black chakra swells and explodes in the users hand giving off black lighting like streaks before forming back into a solid miniature for of the coffin that acts as the trigger. Once they see the miniature coffin the genjutsu takes effect.

Jutsu Description: Kurohitsugi is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates a purple-black coffin of chakra that envelops the target with a powerful torrent of energy that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. All of this is an illusion but the pain of being slashed from head to toe is very real. Once the spears impale the target the victim experiences what it is like to die though only for an instant.

C-Rank Creates a coffin that is only a bit bigger then the target. The inside of the coffin is nothing but pitch black. Just large enough to cover them inside of it. It creates a grand total of seven black spears on the top of the coffin that once the coffin is completed impale the target from above.

With a B-Rank the coffin is now a full ten feet tall and a six feet wide. When it is formed the pitch black theme is still carried over making it seem as if the victim is trapped in an endless abyss. Once it forms spears now cover the entire top and upper one third of the coffin. This increase in number causes a sever increase in the pain it causes. When the spears engage at this point instead of it being all at once its one after the other with barely a second in between each of them prolonging the pain.

When it reaches A-rank. It becomes a fearsome genjutsu to deal with. The coffin is the same size as the previous level with the addition that not only does the victim feel as if they are alone in sheer abyss but should they attempt to move no matter how much they try all they see is abyss. The spears created now cover the entire upper half of the coffin and as soon as the coffin is fully formed the spears are unleashed on the victim followed by the excruciating pain caused by feeling ones entire body become pierced by spears.  
PostPosted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:01 pm







All are private, but can be taught by Nexus or copied by Sharingan.


Jutsu Name: Blazing Wheel
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu [Taijutsu Amplifier]
Jutsu Rank: D
Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire
Requirements: Flame Resistance Training and Flame Spread Technique
Description of Jutsu: Nexus starts by using a jutsu similar to the Flame Spread Technique and covers his limbs in flames, using his Flame Resistance Training to withstand the flames. Nexus then will charge at his target and leap forward at it. He then does a "tuck and roll" and charges at them like a flying boulder. After this technique is used, the flames remain on Nexus' limbs for a total of five posts. Taijutsu are one rank stronger during this due to the flames.
"After this technique is used, the flames remain on Nexus' limbs for a total of five posts", meaning that there is a total of 6 posts of flames.


These are all for later once I'm a Chuunin.


Jutsu Name: Heat Crash
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Rank: C
Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire
Requirements: Flame Resistance Training
Description of Jutsu: Nexus increases his body temperature tenfold and then charges at a target. He attempts to grab hold of them and do a bear hug attack. Once he has hold of them, he increases his body temperature even further by about three times what it is at that point. This temperature would be lethal to hold for a long time, so this heat is only able to be help for about three posts. It can be held up to five posts, but it will have severe consequences. After four posts, the body will go into minor shock and Nexus will have heat stroke, causing him to become sluggish and weak. Speed and strength become two ranks weaker. After the fifth post, Nexus' body will begin to shut down and he will require medical attention before he will be able to move again.
This technique can only be used three times in one battle.


Jutsu Name: Electric Web
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu [Sensory]
Jutsu Rank: C
Elemental Affinity: Raiton - Lightning
Requirements: Electricity Resistance Training
Description of Jutsu: Nexus performs the seals needed for the jutsu and then send out a net of static electricity over an area from his fingertips, that will connect to Nexus' nerves. This net will fall down over the battlefield (30m area) and then it will provide information about anything that touches the ground. It cannot give information about their past or their personal record, but it gives Nexus information on their movements and provides a perfect way to track targets during a battle.


Jutsu Name: Paralysis Wave
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Rank: C
Elemental Affinity: Raiton - Lightning
Requirements: None
Description of Jutsu: Nexus will charge up a massive amount of electricity into his palms and thrust them against the torso of the target. Once hit, the target will feel a surge of electricity hit their body and throw their bodies into a minor form of shock. This causes short-term paralysis and damages nerves. The target will become one rank weaker in strength and speed and reaction time is greatly slowed [-1.5 ranks]




 

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 2:23 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 10:00 am


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Blazing Wheel: My only problem is the duration of this technique. Five posts is a long time, two would be more appropriate. Also, boosting Taijutsu by one rank is too strong for a D rank nin-taijutsu.
Heat Crash:
This technique should have a cooldown of about three posts and be far more detrimental. Ten times the normal body temperature is no joke, even with flame resistance training...If you actually want him to get that hot, he should suffer something like -2 ranks to strength and speed for the next two or three posts and a penalty to reaction time after holding on for more than two posts.
Electricity Web:
Reduce the range to something like 10 or 15 meters. Also how would this affect someone with stealth and how precise is this technique? Can Nexus diffrentiate between a deer and a shinobi? Does this only cover underground? Can be move around during this time.

Finally, as this charge is connected to the nerves what would happen if someone where to saw start a fire on the ground? Would Nexus feel a burning sensation in his body?

I was actually developing a similar technique for my fighting style and these were important questions that needed to be answered so I'd like to know how your version will perform and whether I should scrap the idea.

Paralysis Wave:
Is this touch-based or is the electricity launched? Where does the paralysis take place, the torso or the entire body? Why are strength and speed reduced and how long will these effects last?

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