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 Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 7:47 pm
Jaded_Propaganda Bloodline: Sorikata Clan
Why do you want it: Well I've never used it, despite my making it o.o I have always wanted to, and know seems the best time to expirement.
What will you do with it: Make my RPC reach the Oinin Rank and RULE NATURE xD
What you know about it: I know everything, as I have created it
RP Sample:
Jade sat by the brook, legs submurged in the flowing water up to her calves. Her black curls cascaded down her back, framing her soft features. The sun kissed her closed eyelids as her hands played with the lush grass. All was quiet, nothing but nature ringing in her ears. She suddenly twitched into an upright and alert position, something unnatural had sounded; the snap of a twig. She strained her human ears, eyes scanning the surrounding woods. Jade cursed herself as she could not hear anything in her current state. She smirked, knowing damn well that she would fix that in a moment. Her eyes began to loose their lilac color, turning into a golden brown, similar to a falcon. Her eye sight increased practically tenfold, and everything was vibrant to her. The once dark spaces were like beacons in the night. Her ears lost their natural roundness, and began to turn to points, long and sharp. The bat she had studied long ago had actually come in handy. Her new ears twitched with every noise, every breath, every movement her head snapped to it. A growl erupted through the woods, and Jae immediately pin-pointed its location. A rather large wolf emerged from the trees, seemingly smiling at her. Jade smirked, backing up slowly as her ears returned to normal. Her nails grew, sharpening and becoming claws, as well as her teeth, growing to thrice the size. The wolf let out a bark, just before leaping at her, paws out. Jade laughed and dove forth, aiming low and wrapping her arms around the wolf's torso. She tackled it back, and it flipped her off with it's hind legs. Suddenly, the wolf began turning into a Rhinocerus, and began to charge. Jade ran forth, loosing her eagle eyes and gaining large falcon wings. The falcon was her 'default' animal, and also the easiest for her to perform. Jade jumped into the air, propelling herself off of the Rhino's horn, just before it crashed into a tree. The Rhino turned and reared onto it's hind, releasing an odd roar. Jade turned in midair, loosing the wings and performing a sky dive. A simple game was taking place between her and a friend, nothing more than a game of Point. While skydiving, Jade's mouth opened wide, and rows of razor sharp teeth showed. The Rhino turned to a bear, and caught her in it's infamous hug. Jade struggled until she admitted defeat, and the bear let her go, returning to the normal man it once was.
...however, I would suggest some form of seals or chakra surge to make the shifts more naruto-ized.
Approved!
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 8:12 pm
Sooo... What about mine? O.o
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:21 pm
Demonic Slayer and Alpha :
I didn't like that the Ranmaru bloodline was the Byakugan/sharingan/and other all conveniently rolled into one, so i changed it to be more fair. (in my opinion)
Here are the basic changes :
- The bloodline can see and sense a user's chakra, but cannot see the tenketsu.
- They do not have the analytical powers of the sharingan... they can however see chakra molding inside an individual which allows them to know what jutsu is likely coming up next.
- The range of vision is limited to 200 yards, as opposed to the Byakugan which is miles.
Please take a look at the bloodline and give me some feedback as to what you think of the changes.
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:33 pm
Well, you are kind of right. It is kind of cheep that it can block all three of them which it was really suppose to be block only the Byakugan. And the same powers of the sharingan is saying like it itself is like the sharingan with other stuff. also with the range, I think it is meant to be meters not miles. I don't know really, but 200 yards still sounds fair.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:06 am
 Arata Near [Uchiha]"Team work will help you in the long run." You would not believe your eyes
If ten million FireFlies lite up the air as I fell asleep
'Cause they'd fill the open air
And leave tear drops everywhere
You'd think me rude
But I would just stand and... Stare Mew Says:
Bloodline: Sharingan
Why do you want it: Because I have a slight obsession with Itachi Uchicha. I also believe that It will suit my character well, as he is outgoing and clever.
What will you do with it: I will strive to be the best I can be. Having this bloodline will push my character to work a little harder, and possible get over his disability of being sickly.
What you know about it: Sharingan is believed to be a descendant of Byakugan. The user usually isn't born with the power, but the power is revealed when the user is in a life threatening situation.
RP Sample: Arata, also known as Near, walked out of the brick building into the dark. It was getting dark and he was just walking home from the academy, so he started to walk faster than usual. The wind blew against his face and his white hair blew into his eyes. "Dammit," He said looking up as the rain began to fall. He hated the rain and now his day was ruined. With a run forward he sprinted forward and into the abyss of darkness.
A dark figured cloaked his footsteps and followed after him. He threw a kunai and it flew past Near's head just barely missing his left ear. "C'mon little child," He said and Near turned around.
"Don't call me SMALL!" He said and his eyes glowed red with anger.
"Are you serious?" the man asked him and pulled out a sword. He ran forward and towards Near. Suddenly Near appeared behind THe man and kicked him in the back, "HOW'S THAT FOR A MIDGET,' HE asked and appeared in front of him. The man got up and formed several hand seals. "Water cyclone jutsu," Near says and copies him, A blast of water flys from him and towards the the shinobi. "Fire jutsu," He said just as the enemy was about to get up. It pushed him back down.
Near looked at his hands and blinked, "What happened," He thought to himself his eyes turned from it's red color to it's usual gray.
"How did you do that?" He asked Near. Near amiled and shrugged, "I don't know," He said and walked off.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:22 am
Zale : Denied, but redeemable
Hey Zale, the RP sample wasn't bad persay, but it made NO reference to the Sharingan at all (except red eyes). You need to prove to me that you know how to responsibly use the Sharingan and prove that you know how it works.
Please redo it, but add more to the RP Sample that shows your knowledge of the Sharingan and how it is used. (If need be, assume a higher level of ability with the Sharingan then you currently have.)
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:40 pm
Bloodline: Wangetsu Lunar
Why do you want it: Its freakin awesome cuz I made it!!!!! lol, its also pretty neat the moon is involved with a bloodline for medical uses as it is in mythology so I want to test my bloodline and see how well I cna use it.
What will you do with it: I will lead my village and ensure its safety. With the bloodline I can also heal those who needs it with ease and at the same time kick some a**! Besides who wouldn't want the moon on their side?
What you know about it: Everything I made it rofl
RP Sample:
Gin held his hand over the injured shinobi was the war raged on. "Hang on there Baika, your wounds are nearly healed up" He said as his hands moved around the wound, glowing a silverish color. Lunar's Chiyu Tacchi (Lunar's healing touch) He thought as he placed his hands on the wound. The shinobi cringed for a moment as he felt Gin's hands on the open would. Gin pushed his chakra through his hands, flowing into the wound that soon stopped bleeding and closed the wound. The shinobi's aching muscles were also healed and refreashed. Heh, thankfully its night, the moon amplifies my abilities. He thought as he stood up smiling. The shinobi got back onto his feet and moved his arms a bit, smiling when he saw his arms were free of pain and restored to normal again. The two nodded as he took off. Gin ran into the center of the village, where most of the fighting is going on. As he turned the corner he used the ability of the kekki genkai and seeked out the ones who were alive.
It was similar to that of the byakugan, so he could identify who was who as well. Seeing three shinobi round the corner he knew they were not friendlies. He made handsigns swiftly and channeled his chakra through his forarms, and a pair of long white pale looking blades of chakra emerged from each of his forearms. The enemies who rounded the corner to meet him charged, obviously showing how itiotic in believing medical shinobi cannot fight. Two came at his sides, raising their arms with swords in them to cut Gin in half at the same time. Gin smirked a bit deciding he'll have fun and he dropped onto his back as the blades whistled overhead, and he bent upwards slightly and spun around like a top, the moonlight splicer's blades he created sliced through the ankles of the shinobi standing by him, which was like in slow motion around them, while outside it happened in moments. The enemy shinobi cried out as they're ankles snapped in a very painful way since they were no longer connected even to the bone, which made the bones rip out of the skin. Gin caught them as they fell by flicking his arms in a quick motion, and before the eyes of the third shinobi there, his friends died. They crumbled to the ground, which upon hitting it their neck protruded away from the spine, making a very bloody scene since the bone stuck out from the snap. Seizing the moment to take advantage of this Gin strung handsigns using Conflict Emotion, a genjutsu that affected the emotions of a shinobi. He made the shinobi's rage for his fallen comrad intensify to an animalistic behavior and the shinobi charged at him, not thinking at all. Gin smiled the whole time and in a split second was to teh side of the shinobi, his arm against his chest and a long silverish chakra blade was protruding out of his back, showing the chakra blade went through the shinobi's heart. There was a few moments of gasping and gurgling with blood and then the body crumbled. Gin didn't even change his expression but instead kept smiling, walking around the corner to rejoin in the fight. The moon is still young.....many more pest to be eradicated He thought to himself cheerfully as he continued helping the village in this war.
((its a small sample but it shows somewhat of what I can do ^^))
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:01 pm
Obviously, you are approved, but man, those chakra blades are so broken.
...are you sure we can't ya know, get rid of those? I mean, let's face it, it's really powerful to make a blade of chakra that can sever anything internally without effort. What is it that can stop them again?
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:06 pm
anything inorganic......chakra can block it....its no different then the chakra sculple thing or w/e. Kabuto's technique? knwo what i mean?
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:11 pm
i like the changes,the analytical change is way better the what it mad before in my opinion,so over all i likes it im looking at the bloodline now, and the only thing i dont uunderstand is the ranking system, is it going from highest to lowest or from lowest to highest
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:48 pm
Bloodline:Kamisama Clan
Why do you want it:Well, i made the clan. and to win battles with the power of his clan
What will you do with it:To use it to gain power and put Katsuro a place in the world
What you know about it:Well, since i made the clan, you have the ability to fly but can only stay in the air for 3 post per rank and hold it out for a limited amount of time and chakra. Must use hand seals to summon out your wings. Can have the power of either light or dark. Base of what your karma is, Your wings change color. Dark wings means that you are evil or somewhat bad. White wings mean that you are kind of heart or somewhat good. there is more, but you get the idea. XD
RP Sample:
Silent footsteps of a young boy, walking along the dirt road was in a good mood. Since his new rank and all, he felt that he had gotten a bit more powerful than being Genin, which he felt was right. Watching at the trail ahead that look like it would take forever to get to his destination, he slid his hands into his pants pockets and whistled a tone of a song he like. His mission was to take a letter from the Otokage to the Kazekage for a alliance of peace and trade goods. He did not have to read the note since he knew what it is. Katsuro continued to threw the path that got him to a sign. He look at it closely with squinting eyes that said on it 'Sunagakure'. He was going on the right path. Suddenly, Bandits that came out of the bushes where charging to Katsuro with ready swords in there hands, about to swing them to Katsuro. The boy smiled and form hand seals. Dark wings grew out of his back, feathers dropping to the ground as he flew in the air to avoid the attack the bandits where foolishly making. He slowly made his way to the ground as he form another set of hand seals, starting to summon a sphere in the palm of his hands, molding them into bullet like shapes. "Demonic Light Barrage !" Said Katsuro with a thundering tone. With no holding back to kill the fools, he send the dark bullets to the Bandits (which where only like 3 of them) into there flesh as one of them caught on fire. The other two where in pain from the wound and the burns. The one caught on fire was rolling on the dirt, trying to put out the raging flame, but his effects where in vain and continued to burn. the two others were still screaming in pain as for they will die from the burn of the bullet. As for Katsuro, his wings shrunk into nothing and he just kept on walking to Suna, hoping that he would not be late.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:55 pm
Shruikan Tenshi anything inorganic......chakra can block it....its no different then the chakra sculple thing or w/e. Kabuto's technique? knwo what i mean?
(Also Kabuto's ability was fair... considering he had to make contact with the person and the cut was only an inch or so deep, allowing him to cut tendons or muscles...not Tendon, muscle, bone)
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:56 pm
Alpha_Misa-of_the_wolfs i like the changes,the analytical change is way better the what it mad before in my opinion,so over all i likes it im looking at the bloodline now, and the only thing i dont understand is the ranking system, is it going from highest to lowest or from lowest to highest
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:59 pm
Demonic Slayer Wasuken Bloodline:Kamisama Clan Why do you want it:Well, i made the clan. and to win battles with the power of his clan What will you do with it:To use it to gain power and put Katsuro a place in the world What you know about it:Well, since i made the clan, you have the ability to fly but can only stay in the air for 3 post per rank and hold it out for a limited amount of time and chakra. Must use hand seals to summon out your wings. Can have the power of either light or dark. Base of what your karma is, Your wings change color. Dark wings means that you are evil or somewhat bad. White wings mean that you are kind of heart or somewhat good. there is more, but you get the idea. XD RP Sample:Silent footsteps of a young boy, walking along the dirt road was in a good mood. Since his new rank and all, he felt that he had gotten a bit more powerful than being Genin, which he felt was right. Watching at the trail ahead that look like it would take forever to get to his destination, he slid his hands into his pants pockets and whistled a tone of a song he like. His mission was to take a letter from the Otokage to the Kazekage for a alliance of peace and trade goods. He did not have to read the note since he knew what it is. Katsuro continued to threw the path that got him to a sign. He look at it closely with squinting eyes that said on it 'Sunagakure'. He was going on the right path. Suddenly, Bandits that came out of the bushes where charging to Katsuro with ready swords in there hands, about to swing them to Katsuro. The boy smiled and form hand seals. Dark wings grew out of his back, feathers dropping to the ground as he flew in the air to avoid the attack the bandits where foolishly making. He slowly made his way to the ground as he form another set of hand seals, starting to summon a sphere in the palm of his hands, molding them into bullet like shapes. "Demonic Light Barrage !" Said Katsuro with a thundering tone. With no holding back to kill the fools, he send the dark bullets to the Bandits (which where only like 3 of them) into there flesh as one of them caught on fire. The other two where in pain from the wound and the burns. The one caught on fire was rolling on the dirt, trying to put out the raging flame, but his effects where in vain and continued to burn. the two others were still screaming in pain as for they will die from the burn of the bullet. As for Katsuro, his wings shrunk into nothing and he just kept on walking to Suna, hoping that he would not be late.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:01 pm
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