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Prince_yureil

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2020 7:54 am
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Ohh nonono I'm only talking about named summons sorry. The basic summons doesn't interfere with that two limit! Also about the Yozen thing that is fine yes and goes into my earlier point of unless there is an additional or custom effect that allows you to summon more since we do allow that here ^ ^ Also sorry I'm getting to this now especially since you started using them already but you can keep it how it was and you don't need to submit for re-approval for the summons!

As for the custom Jutsu all are approved! (You can axe the last one since it's not needed) and maurton is a free mirror for pets!

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Awesome!! I’ll just summon my lead ferret next round then if that’s fine XD?

Ummm so if I understand I would need to wait till after exams to use these correct? Or would I have access to them in stage two if Hasaki gets there (I did the training paragraphs in advance for their acceptance) but it’s fine if Unable to until after I just wanted to check smile !!!!

Thank you for getting back to me when you’re so busy with the exams Eva you’re awesome!!!  
PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2020 9:02 pm
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Character: Tomoe created it, it’s to be an accessible patented item if someone can remind me how that works.(can’t find the rules but I remember seeing them once)
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▰ Molossus
Rank | Chakra: 275 | Stamina: 475

Ability: Location protector
This creature may be attached to permanent fuuin, construction(as in building or vehicle) created by a Jutsu, to a non-summoned building just attached to a seal and also objects. For each seal one-off these is attached to has certain conditions specified upon sealing this summon to the object(only important objects being transported or needing guarding, not user equipment... one item of a users may have this attached, but only one And it can only trigger if another person attempts to take the object in any way, although picking it up in combat would qualify, alternatively is can be attached to a user and will automatically take the required chakra to be summoned at no action when the possessor is struck unless the intentionally disallow it.) will allow it to be summoned to that location to defend whatever might need defending. One of these can be attached to seals E - C rank, two may be attached to any above those ranks(no people or personal property.) if a locations defended were triggered etc, every single one of these will activate automatically, these summons are given the knowledge the sensors and or seals that mind provide information have to offer when summon and thus know what’s expected of them. These CANNOT leave the thread the are summon in if they are summoned through this method, additionally they may Korobo with one another and any techniques they perform at at 5chakra less a rank if they are defending someone or something with their action(in other words defensive actions are discounted.) although all actions receive this discount when summoned to protect a location. Seals, sensory, important objects and topics are the objects these can be attached too, although only topics devoid of casual sealing strays may get these. Although if a topic has multiple businesses or locations of interest with it, then one of these may be attached. (Costs 50 additional Chakra to be attached this way, if dismissed through defeat and the seals or other relevant techniques/objects that are attached to are still in one piece they may be triggered again in a following encounter.) if it’s an object or person that this technique has been unconventionally added to then it must be fully reapplies to work again if the summon is defeated.

Take down [ Japanese name ] | Rank: C | Cost: ( stamina)
A big tackle and whilst biting, if the bite fails the user may pay the resource cost again to follow through with a tackle that pushes the opponent back 10 feet. If the bite connect this may be done at no cost and instead and will have the person in a grapple at this point. This technique treats the opponent as 1strengh weaker when dealing with the grapple and if a Korobo by two or more, increases stamina cost to break free or perform techniques by five stamina per rank paid per extra Molossus involved


Arorororororoooo [ Japanese name ] | Rank: B | Cost: (complex)
The dog as a defensive action may start growling and barking at intensely loud volumes, cause the slightest in hesitation from opposition, reducing the speed of those opponents who hear it by 2 during the duration of this technique and one post after. This technique can be sustained at no activation but costs D-rank amount of resources. If used as a Korabo with others this will also cause tier one mental stress to all those who hear it, if 4 Korobo it (two pairs)EVERYONE in range who can hear suffers deafness unless they have a reason they would not besides the dogs. This can be maintained whilst biting or attacking as they can still growl intensely and make aggressive guttural sounds that stem threatening intent.

[ Shake it off ] | Rank: C | Cost: (stamina)
When suffering trauma the Molossus may pay this cost to resist the strike and shake of the damage, lowering the tier of trauma taken by 1 tier, this can completely negate damage if only on tier of trauma is inflicted, this can also apply to one other status affect once per battle that isn't poison or disease, deafness, muteness or blindness.

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Heart chakra seal [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Fuuin/bloodline [ Maruton ]| Cost [ Spritual ]
As a backup to have low chakra reverses, Tomoe developed a technique that involves shrinking a sealing scroll and storing chakra within them to augment the usefulness of her hearts. For each heart she possesses she may implant ONE of these along side it and link them so that the heart may draw on the sealed away chakra and allowing her to store up to the seals applied rank worth of chakra within it of the specific element of the heart the accompany. The user may refill these at the standard rate/cost it takes to seal away chakra in a scroll, although the user may only add chakra to a specific heart once every five posts, although it costs no action. User can access the stored chakra when using the specific element of a heart that this technique accompanies, costing standard fuuin Storage activation costs as a supplementary activation. Can only be used if hearts are still attached to user or functional, destroyed hearts or sacrificed hearts take their scrolls with them. If for some reason the user is blocked off from activating fuuin techniques then they of coarse cannot access these until the effects wear of, have been countered or cancelled out. The amount of chakra accessible is based of the specific size of scroll shrunk down and used.(used scrolls must be crafted or purchased and replaced if lost.)

Character: Tomoe
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Monstrous impale [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank B - S+ | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu [ N/a ]| Cost [ /Complex/ ]
When wearing gauntlets, or her arms are effected by a reinforcement technique of any kind she may use this strike (also works whenever her strength equals 10 or more without either of the prior requirements) using immense force and speed she thrusts her hand towards the opponent; normally their torso region and stabs her hand into them with brutal force. At B-rank it fret barrier and contact based defensive techniques as one rank lower, ignoring armor of equal rank to Any armor on her hands, this strike will pierce almost all the way to her second knuckle and cracks bone beneath its impacts. At A-rank - S It reduces barriers and blocking/reinforcements oriented defensive techniques, at this point the impact can pierce all the way just past her third knuckle, allowing her to is she so desires to attempt to tear out whatever part of the body happens to be within her grasp or what have you with their next activation, the opponent being considered grappled. When struck at this rank bone struck breaks out of the way, organs rupture and the pain is horrible. At S and s+ her hand can go in one side and come out the out clutching a organ, able to be instantly extracted with the extraction technique and no additional activation cost but the read piece cost must be paid.

Character: Tomoe
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wings of Dystopia [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank A | Bloodline [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual ]
She may. Choose to eject a large volume of threads, mixed with the ugly black mass of the “spirits” She can make. This allows her to produce a large set of horrifying black wing made of said materials and last for ten rounds, the cost may be repaid when the technique ends at no additional action but does cost the price of the technique. This allows her to fly, she may use them to block attack Jutsu of equal rank when flying. When on the ground she may use each wing as part of one of her offensive or defensive actions, allowing her to include a basic combat strike or block with the wings as part of relevant actions. (Meaning either use them both offensively or one defensive one offensive or both defensively.) Both wings may be used at the same time to block an S-class technique although will be lost in the process (s+ if wings were made through Korobo)



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PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2020 5:24 am

Character: Masato Umechika
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Event Horizon of Heavenly Authority [ Ibentohoraizun Kamui ] | Rank S+ | Bloodline-Demon-Taijutsu | Complex
Masato manifests a chakra arm for each tail Kurama has while rushing forward toward his target. Each of Masato's limbs strike with sixty eight individual strikes with the same intensity as the user's Jyuken. Each of these strikes are then warped by Kamui like pockets that appear just before the user extends their strikes fully, allowing the user's strikes to be released only inches from their target from all sides, including above the target. These strikes formed in such number and with such unparalleled force shatter the ground upon the target's location and create fissures in the earth that reduce the surroundings for five miles to rubble. Those stricken by the technique suffer tier four trauma and are reduced of chakra equal to the full rank of this technique instead of the half rank the gentle fist allows normally as they are crushed under the tremendous force. The endurance stat is bypassed for this attack, armor reduced by one tier in durability and defensive techniques reduced by one rank due to it's tremendous overwhelming force. After the usage of this technique, the chakra arms created by it remain active for a C Ranked upkeep per post and have the same range as the `Tailed Beast Chakra Arms`. Arms created in this manner however are able to ignore one endurance rank and continue to treat armor one tier lower and defensive techniques as one rank lower.

If the user's strength is 12 at the time of the technique's execution, the range of it's damage is doubled. Additionally, the Tailed Beast Chakra Arms created from it are capable of decreasing armor durability two tiers. This effect carries over to it's up-kept arm's attacks following the initial attack.

If the user's speed is 12 at the time of the technique's execution, the following post the chakra arms ( if upkeep cost is paid ) may execute a secondary attack without fail so long as the previous attack was successful. This secondary attack releases a smaller volley of the first attack, releasing jyuken strikes with the arms for an A Rank amount of resources, carrying the first technique's effects along with it.

Martial Mastery [ Bujutsu ] | Rank S+ | Taijutsu [ Keystone ] | N/A
Masato has learned to read the vast majority of the movements, reactions and even natural weaknesses of the human anatomy. This reduces the opponents stats by half of their maximum potential and does not reduce the stats below zero. This only applies to increases granted from styles and disciplines.

Advancing Fire Stance [ Zenshin Suru Hi Dachi ] | Rank X | Taijutsu | Simple
The user stands in a boxer's stance with their fists defending their chin, similar to the Combatant stance. The user is able to remain mobile in this stance as they advance straight towards the opponent while able to evade incoming attacks as a supplementary action by bobbing and weaving beneath the attack in a deep squatting motion side to side, decreasing the opponents agility by one point per body rank of the user.

Killshot [ Kettei-da ] | Rank S+ | Taijutsu | Simple
The user delivers an upward hook punch from beneath the target's chin. This monstrous uppercut shatters bone from the point of impact on the jaw up to the top of the cranium and the spine at the nape of the neck. Unblocked impact causes tier four trauma and full body paralysis, delivering a concussion that swells the brain at a dangerously rapid pace, requiring medical attention immediately lest they lose an additional amount of stamina equal to their body rank per post until combat ends.

Weapon of Mass Destruction [ Tairyō Hakai Heiki ] | Rank S | Taijutsu | Spiritual
The user enhances their body with chakra in order to super charge the stopping power of their simple taijutsu. For six posts, the user's simple taijutsu have effects that happen at ranged variances tripled in range. Additionally, techniques that require direct impact to cause an effect now occur within the radius of the simple taijutsu's enhanced range.

Masato Smash [ Masato Smasshuu ] | Rank S+ | Taijutsu | Simple
The user clenches their fist while in a transformed stage of the Eight Gates Taijutsu at Sixth Gate or higher. The user's body surges with might as they release a straight punch at their foe. This strike is cataclysmic in nature, burrowing deep into the target's body as it negates armor and treats defensive techniques as though they are two ranks lower. The impact of this technique when un-evaded doubles the trauma that would normally be dealt for the same duration of posts as tier four. A shockwave ruptures upon impact that shatters bone and materials of lesser durability than the rank of this technique within a one hundred foot cone before the user. After the initial shockwave, the impacted target flies in the direction of the user's punch until exiting the topic or slamming into a solid structure. As the target travels along their path, everything to one hundred feet on either side of the target is mulched as the pressure from the strike causes a trench to form in it's wake. Those in the topic suffer deafness for the following post from the explosive noise the punch generates. Alternatively, this technique can be used to send a pressure wave with the same destructive abilities as the one stricken by a direct impact that is fifty feet in width and travels two hundred feet. This variant creates a concussive force of wind throughout the topic that requires stamina equal to the rank of this technique to remain standing in place.

Burning Finger [ Moeru Yubi ] | Rank A | Taijutsu | Simple
After activating the first gate or higher, the user folds their index finger and thumb together as they would to merely preform a finger flick. When the user flicks their finger, a projectile ball of pressurized and concussive force that is ten feet in width blasts forward until striking a target. The friction of this fast moving pressure wave ignites it as it travels, causing tier three burns, burning and trauma.

Omnipresent Authority of the Gods [ Henzai Suru Kamui ] | Rank C | Bloodline | Spiritual | Supplementary
The user pays the chakra cost of this technique in addition to Kamui. When teleporting to another area, the user is less restricted as they are now able to teleport to any chakra source they can sense even if they have not been to the location they are currently in.

Master Gunslinger [ Masutāgansuringā ] | Rank S+ | Taijutsu | Training
Expanding the mastery of the Gunslinger Training, Masato has learned to manipulate the form of his punches even further. By paying the cost of any spiritual tier technique a a supplementary action in addition to throwing punches in a complex manner from the Gunslinger Training, Masato can take all the effects of that spiritual technique and apply them to the orb punched at a target. The effects of the attached technique only take place upon impact.

Full Counter Punch [ Ippai Gyaku Kōgeki ] | Rank X | Taijutsu | Simple
In response to an incoming physical technique, Masato strikes at it's center. This strike is delivered equal in rank and potency to the incoming attack, reflecting all trauma that were to be inflicted upon Masato back upon the target,dealing damage to the target in an identical manner to how Masato would have been damaged, leaving him unscathed ( cutting, blunt force, ect.) This technique can only be used once every other post.

Calamity Strike [ Saigai Kōgeki ] | Rank S+ | Taijutsu | Simple
A technique to be used in a transformed stage of the Eight Gates Taijutsu at Seventh Gate or higher. Masato spreads his arms wide at either side, bringing them together in a mighty clap. This clap creates an immensely powerful pressure wave that reaches across the topic in every direction, throwing all persons from their current location back one hundred feet. Those within a two hundred foot radius of Masato when the clap is initiated will suffer more severe effects. The friction of the air molecules moving so violently ignites the air at the origin point of the clap, causing an instantaneous wave of flames to wash over the area causing tier three burns.
Additionally, tier four trauma and deafness are inflicted as everything within this radius that does not resist with equal rank and potency defenses is uprooted and crumbles as it flies five hundred feet.


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2020 6:48 am
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Kondo will review the other profiles once I am done evaluating him. For your review the keystone technique must be edited to where it can only ignore half of the target’s base stats. Once you edit that then you are approved.  

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2020 8:21 am
Prince_yureil



Approved. As a reminder, RPC can't be killed and your organ extraction won't allow you to do so.  
PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2020 2:15 pm
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Character: Puppeteer Character
Funnel Web of Strings | Rank X | Puppeteer [Maruton]| Kugutsu[ Spiritual ]
The user forms a string of hand seals and then breaks their hands apart to place at least one hand on the surface of a sturdy object (tree, wall, column, created structure etc). Chakra strings fly from their fingers to form a very intricate, massive spider web-like creation that doubles width, length and range for each rank this technique is used (starting at 5 feet) but always forms a funnel-like creation. The funnel’s function is to provide a defensive structure, protecting the user inside the creation from lower ranked offensive attacks. The user may freely stand on this creation, without the Tree Climbing Technique, in suspension above a specific space. The user’s puppets may seamlessly pass through the funnel however these strings cannot manipulate a puppet. Opponents caught by this technique are required to use a B-ranked amount of chakra to break out of through the use of the kai technique.  

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2020 1:41 am

Character: Zahara Kevali [Soon to be Scholar]
Link to profile: [[urlhttps://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=25285205]x]

Sage Art: Hunter's Sense [ --- ] | Rank S-S+ | Sennin | Spiritual
A technique derived from Zahara's sense of empathy when he uses his sage sense. Since his encounter with Shuusui Uzumaki, Zahara had devised a means of identifying living targets without the means of the Byakugan or other chakra sensory techniques in the case such abilities get blocked. This technique is used with Senjutsu to feel everything around him, triggered by heartbeats by living organisms and ignores chakra constructs such as clones and puppets. This gives mental feedback of a general approximation of heartbeat locations, individual sources can be singled out and tracked. This sense cannot be jammed by any normal means, Zahara can only feel a heartbeat of living creatures and doesn't relay information about targets unless the Byakugan is active. With the Byakugan, reverberations are seen visually in the field of view of the dojutsu around targets that are living however this technique can then be canceled by jamming if used with the Dojutsu. Lasts [6] posts for upkeep, non-dojutsu based sense is 100 feet, used with the Byakugan however it shares the Dojutsu's range instead. If this is used with the Dojutsu, this technique becomes an S+ and lasts [8] posts.


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2020 9:43 am

Character: Minashiba Takatsuki
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Cicada Armor [ Semi no yoroi ] | Rank A | Taijutsu | [ Training ]
An Upgrade to the Mirror Image Art ability, Cicada Shell. Whenever a Mirror Image Art Jutsu creates an afterimage, the user is able to create a clone from any of the non-Maruton Clone Jutsu they know aas well as the Maruton Clone


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2020 7:42 am
Hurrak

I love it! I would just add that the size/range doubles for each rank it was used, starting at 5 feet. this is approved and I'll take it to crew to see if we can add it to the list! (If you're still willing that is).

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2020 6:33 pm
Making some techniques for my hopeful Yuki-onna character. Her profile may not be accepted but I’d like to at least post my jutsu.. I hope I did genJutsu right!!
Any advice would be helpful.

I’m also wanting to make a genJutsu that is “poisoned saliva” how would I make a illusion poison effect... still need to get the poison approved even if it’s A fiction of one right, so that it’s effects even though an illusion fit appropriately right?



Character: Yua
Link to profile: [x]
Life Eating Monster [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank C - S+| Nin-Jutsu [ None ]| Cost [ Spritual ]
Whenever Yua casts this technique she taps into her spirit consuming abilities. The result is for the next six posts any instance of physical contact with her the person in question will loose two ranks lower than this technique In stamina and chakra and transfers it into her reserves OR can put both into her “vital force” techniques pool. This extends to weapon and affects entities that contain chakra, including clones or constructs but not from other active techniques unless they would create a link between both parties spirit/chakra network(like connecting souls at a distance...? Or using a astral projection and touching her as two examples). If she gets a hold of someone with a grapple when using this technique she can expend any remaining offensive actions to amplify the draining effects(each activation spent counting as an additional contact that post), she can continue to do this in consecutive posts should a person/persons continue to be in her grip. All draining effects from second activation on of continuous contact inflict double the drain dealt from that point on until contact is ended or this technique is.






Character: Yua
Link to profile: [x]
Vital Force [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | passive [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual? ]
Whenever Yua drains chakra or stamina from people through a number of affects she can choose to do one of two things with that energy beyond transfer it to her respective pools. One of these thing is to donate energy into her Vital force pool(this technique) The results are for every two points of chakra or stamina or one of each that would be gain, she may instead create one point of vital force(being able to store 80 Vital force) within it, Vital force being the aspect of chakra connected directly to someone’s life force. Vital force may be tapped into for resources and counts as either chakra or stamina but each point only converts at a 1:1 ratio meaning this is an inefficient use. Her draining techniques when “life eating monster” is active will cause a tier of trauma. She is incapable of filling this pool up herself as it requires the life force of something other than herself to do so. Meaning this can only be built up by draining another source of chakra than her own.


Character: Yua
Link to profile: [x]
Vital tap [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Augment [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual ]
Whenever an effect would drain chakra or stamina would be drained from a person she may chose directly tap into the more essential core chakra of a person that she refers to as “vital force” upon any of these effect taking place she may choose to pay up to one over her own body rank in chakra and absorb that much more chakra and stamina from the person. The most terrifying aspect of this technique is the chakra and stamina drained smash the persons total energy pools as their core essence and life force is directly ravaged, this results in the opponents chakra and stamina totals being lowered by the rank of this technique and 50% of chakra/stamina drained from any other source. This damage cannot be healed until combat is over and by either a medic taking the time to use the healing hands technique and heal on of the reduced pools specifically, removing the healing properties of the technique until the persons pools at restored.



Character: {Who uses the technique}
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Kiss and tell [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Ninjutsu [ Element ]| Cost [ Spiritual ]
By pressing her lips against another’s she can start to drain their life force at an incredible rate. The victim will loose chakra and stamina equal to the rank of the technique and in addition is muted, incapable of verbal communication. The victims techniques all cost 5 more per rank of this technique. IF the person in question has an inner source of chakra (sage, bijuu, cursed mark etc.) this will also tear out an equal quantity of that, the Petrification aspects of said chakra being dismissed if she converts it to vital force, also at a 2:1 ratio. Due to yuki clan PA frost reaper this causes Teir one frostbite to the lips, mouth and tongue and wherever she grips. Anyone kissed will have their clan and elements revealed to her as well as their current energy count.




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Character: Yua
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Frozen words [ Japanese Technique Name Here ]
Category: Enchantment
Rank: X
Primary Sense: [ Touch ]
Additional Senses: [ Sight, chakra, ]
Base Duration: 4 Posts
Upkeep: 10
Trigger: Words in the form of an order or request
Source: Sensory Phantasm
Status Effect: Mental Stress, paralysis
Description: With a simple command or even something phrased as a request or suggestion but ultimately something worded in a sense to deter conflict is spoken and they carry with the them a sharp penetrating weight and visible Icey winds that seem to ride her words for a brief instant that they occur and affects her perceived speech from that point forth. The word have an effect is if reaching into the mind and body creating doubts and a sensation of impending doom hidden subtly within them. This effect combine with the momentary icey burst causes a chill and makes it feel like the blood is beginning to feel like it’s running cold and tensing of the body, making physical actions stiffened and delayed by the cold numbness the “freezing” sensation the blood experiences making the body believe it too is cold, after a post the victim/s seeing frost starting to build up as if from inside, this allows her to chain or cast or other genJutsu in combination or to follow up this technique that play in said effects. This can be cast as a supplementary action with bloodline technique and other techniques that produce eerie sounds at the rake rank as technique used, causing the sounds from the technique to trigger said effects due to incoherent sounds caused by the Jutsu this is used alongside and of coarse phantasm may be added to make it more convincing or intimidating through the mental stress.




Character: Yua
Link to profile: [x]
Frozen Scorn [ Japanese Technique Name Here ]
Category: Illusory
Rank: B
Primary Sense: touch
Additional Senses: Taste, scent
Base Duration: 5 Posts
Upkeep: 10 Chakra
Trigger: Ending of a kiss or embrace
Source: Sensory Phantasm
Status Effect: Frostbite, Insanity, trauma
Description: The frozen chill of her body and especially her lips is imparted to the victim when a kiss or embrace has ended. The technique can be performed at no additional activation by paying its chakra if one of her embrace or kiss oriented Jutsu connect and again when ended as long as it’s a different post, triggering upon the end of said technique. If active when kissing or holding someone The victim will feel the coldness from Yuas body in a reduced almost comforting sense as if the contact relives them of any pain or discomfort her cold would cause, any motions of resistance making this comfort falter until contact is ended, the first part of this technique making it possibly for someone to choose to stay within her grip as she drains them without them experiencing discomfort. When this is ended, from the victim mouth feels and tastes (if from a kiss) the sharp bitterness of her Saliva as it runs down their throat and also produces the sensations of when something is invested that is too cold, numbing the tongue and dulling taste and smell as the victim.(this taste can be used as a gen-Jutsu trigger)
This Perceived cold reaches down to their stomach and then blooms outward, freezing them from the inside out, causing parts of their body to crack when they move from the frozen areas causing numbness and immense pain as it spread across them as the technique progresses and comes with it all the effects of being ultra cold like shortness of breathe and shaking, which makes the cracking and such worse. This technique is extremely terrifying and can cause immense fear and panic in a person caught by it. this technique is a rank easier to break free off if only performed from an embrace/hold and not a kiss, if from an embrace the cold comes only from where she last had contact with the victim, this still affects taste and smell but only when the cold affect reaches that part of the body. Of coarse all status affects are illusory and end with the technique. This technique can affect multiple opponents if phantasms of herself kiss or embrace multiple people.


Character: Yua
Link to profile: [x]
English Technique Name Here [ Japanese Technique Name Here ]
Category: Illusory
Rank: C
Primary Sense: Sight
Additional Senses: [ Touch, scent ]
Base Duration: x Posts where posts are the initial genJutsu this is used alongside
Upkeep: 5
Trigger: Handseal
Source: Sensory Phantasm
Status Effect: Mental Stress
Description: Whenever she catches someone in an illusion focused on a single person, she can pay the cost of this technique and cause those who can see her/the victim as the genJutsu is triggered to catch them in this technique. This causes them to see what the initial genJutsu victim believes they can see, as well as accompanying sensations, like heat or cold of effects the are witnessing or experiencing as well as smells that might be given off as well as sounds. This causes tier two mental stress in said people and one single other status they might cause upon themselves through her illusions at second tier (I.e. believing they are burned when jumping through fire etc) believe is caused upon them but this Jutsu is mainly used to sow panic and confusion/ create distractions and openings. Costs an addition e-rank chakra upkeep per person above 4 caught by this technique

 

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2020 8:35 pm

Character: Minashiba Takatsuki
Link to profile: [x]
Fission Clone Jutsu [ Bunretsu Bunshin no Jutsu ] | Rank B-S+ | Keystone | Variable
Due to experienced usage of the Mirror Image Art, Mina is able to create a vastly destructive clone. These clones are solid, like regular Shadow Clones, however they destroyed at D Rank amount of damage. However, when they are destroyed, they produce a massive explosion of lightning, fire, and concussive force. Each explosion causes Tiered Burns/Burning, Tiered Blindness, and Tiered Trauma (Max: Tier 4 at S+ Rank) in an explosion that as the following radius per rank


E: 20
D: 40
C: 80
B:120
A: 240
S:Topic
S+:Sub-Forum

Chakra and Stamina are dispersed to each clone upon creation and are subtracted from the users energy pools on top of the cost of the jutsu.


Character: Minashiba Takatsuki
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True Shadow Clone Explosion [ Hontō Bunshin Bakuha ] | Rank A | Augment | Spiritual
An upgrade to the Shadow Clone Explosion jutsu that allows the user to detonate any clone they've created, not just Shadow Clones. The user may pay for the cost of this technique with no additional activation when using a clone technique to apply it's effects to a total of three or fewer clones. Each clone is capable of exploding with a concussive force that would throw the target up to thirty feet, causing deafness from the sound of the explosion and causing deep bruising on the target when successful.


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2020 11:36 am
Prince_yureil

Hello! I hope you're having a good day! C: I'm gonna break it down into bullet points to make the list easier! Also to your question about the poison, we actually have something similar to that in the guild if you would like to use it as a guideline! The B-ranked snake summon Kagami can use an illusion like that. Obviously you can change how exactly it works with your custom but the only hard rule of hat would be since it's not real, any effect it inflicts would vanish on use of a kai ^ ^

1) Replace instances of Chakra and Stamina with Chakra or Stamina, please!

2) Is Life Eating Monster a keystone or regular jutsu? I saw on your profile that you actually get a keystone but this will need a few small changes to it before how it's performed before it can be considered one ^ ^; Mostly just it needing to involve weapons a bit more! Edit: Just relooked at your profile list, this is a bloodline keystone yes? Don't know where is as getting buki. Anyways as a keystone it is approved!

If this is a regular jutsu though then just separate the jutsu from its amplification part and make that a separate custom then both should be good!

3) "50% of chakra/stamina drained from any other source" Is means from other Jutsu yes? The damage cannot be healed part will need to be a separate custom too and cannot keep them from outright healing it ^ ^; If I can make a suggestion! It can make it harder, as in add to the amount of chakra needed to heal it!

4) Needs to follow the restriction set by 1! You can keep the advanced chakra types (demon, sage, etc) but only one can be chosen for each use.

5) The gen are all approved!

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Prince_yureil

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2020 1:15 pm
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I’m doing good besides dying from heat cause A/C broke gonk

I just got the Ok from Necro for Yua so I’m pleased despite the ac now lol!!
Alright, so in order then!!

1) Okie XD I was hoping to hit both but I understand why I gotta choose :p

2) Because Keystone must be bloodline related and my bloodline is Ice release I’ll have to separate it in two which you will see below “life eating monster” and “Consuming drain” are now their separations, but now viscous drain may effect any draining technique that involves contact!.

3)50% chakra drained means from any other drain effects yes but I removed that aspect under the impression it might be overkill.

Just to clarify what that technique does in case it wasn’t clear. If I pull 50 chakra from someone with 200/200 chakra, what this is meant to do is make their chakra pool 150/150 until combat ends was the idea. If there’s techniques or abilities that could heal that then fair, I wasn’t just seeing if it’s possibly to affect someone’s resource totals with a technique, like it represents actually tearing out their essential life force as opposed to important energy.

I removed the no healing aspect and will make a technique for that tomorrow lol and I’ll follow your advice!

4) Ok I made it affect one energy type, now we’re you saying that it can drain both chakra and sage chakra at the same time as long as I only chose one inner energy at a time or do you also mean only one energy type total XD? Which is fine and how I have it worded because it also gives me a lot of useful information and benefits using that jutsu ^^

6) I finished the first drafts of the technique to represent a minor level of “immortality” these all relate to her vital force pool technique and placed them after the rear (which I changed the ands into ors in all the right places I think lol)

I hope you like the aesthetic I’m going for with this characters combat style XD it’s horrible!





Character: Yua
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Life Eating Monster [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank C - S+| Nin-Jutsu [ None ]| Cost [ Spritual ]
Whenever Yua casts this technique she taps into her spirit consuming abilities. The result is for the next six posts any instance of physical contact with her the person in question will loose two ranks lower than this technique In stamina or chakra and transfers it into her reserves OR can put both into her “vital force” techniques pool. This extends to weapon and affects entities that contain chakra, including clones or constructs but not from other active techniques unless they would create a link between both parties spirit/chakra network(like connecting souls at a distance...? Or using a astral projection and touching her as two examples).



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Consuming drain [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Passive [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual ] If she gets a hold of someone with a grapple when using a draining technique she can expend any remaining offensive actions to amplify the draining effects(each activation spent counting as an additional contact that post), she can continue to do this in consecutive posts should a person/persons continue to be in her grip. All draining effects from second activation on of continuous contact inflict double the drain dealt from that point on until contact is ended or this technique is. This technique costs the rank of drain augmented on the first activation and costs no resources after that point, may be paid with the trigger techniques successful drain instead.






Character: Yua
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Vital Force [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | passive [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual? ]
Whenever Yua drains chakra or stamina from people through a number of affects she can choose to do one of two things with that energy beyond transfer it to her respective pools. One of these thing is to donate energy into her Vital force pool(this technique) The results are for every two points of chakra or stamina or one of each that would be gain, she may instead create one point of vital force(being able to store 80 Vital force) within it, Vital force being the aspect of chakra connected directly to someone’s life force. Vital force may be tapped into for resources and counts as either chakra or stamina but each point only converts at a 1:1 ratio meaning this is an inefficient use. Her draining techniques when “life eating monster” is active will cause a tier of trauma. She is incapable of filling this pool up herself as it requires the life force of something other than herself to do so. Meaning this can only be built up by draining another source of chakra than her own.


Character: Yua
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Vital tap [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Augment [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual ]
Whenever an effect would drain chakra or stamina would be drained from a person she may chose directly tap into the more essential core chakra of a person that she refers to as “vital force” upon any of these effect taking place she may choose to pay up to one over her own body rank in chakra and absorb that much more chakra or stamina from the person. The most terrifying aspect of this technique is the chakra and stamina drained smash the persons total energy pools at their core essence and life force is directly ravaged, this results in the opponents chakra and stamina totals being lowered by the rank of this technique, effectively reducing the total amount of stamina and chakra that person can have that combat. This drain is extremely sickening and painful, making their very sense of self and their soul feel violated and torn, if the user pays an addition 50% chakra she can cause tiered mental stress or insanity in said person to last until the beginning of the post after release through the use of GenJutsu.



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Kiss and tell [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Ninjutsu [ Element ]| Cost [ Spiritual ]
By pressing her lips against another’s she can start to drain their life force at an incredible rate. The victim will loose chakra or stamina equal to the rank of the technique and in addition is muted, incapable of verbal communication. The victims techniques all cost 5 more per rank of this technique whilst under its effects. IF the person in question has an inner source of chakra (sage, golden dragon, bijuu etc) this is also able to tear out an equal quantity of one of those(selected at the time), the Petrification aspects of said chakra being dismissed if she converts it to vital force, also at a 2:1 ratio. Due to yuki clan PA frost reaper this causes Teired frostbite to the lips, mouth and tongue and wherever she grips. Anyone kissed will have their clan and elements revealed to her as well as their current energy count. This Jutsu lasts until contact is broken, costing a D-rank upkeep, if combine with Frozen scorn the Insanity aspect of frozen scorn can be applied with this technique whilst the kiss is taking place, however this means that the victim will not experience the comforting sensations the illusion is meant to cause. This technique doesn’t require hadseals, initiating the kiss is how this Jutsu is performed.



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Immortality through life force [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Passive [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual ]
Vital force is the essence of her beyond human survival. Whenever her vital force pool contains energy her body is beyond that of natural death. Her body becomes incapable of experiencing in cer and becomes highly resilient to damage. She looses the requirement to eat, sleep or breathe and doesn’t age and is unaffected by tiered diseases and poisons equal to the tiered rank of half the energy stored within her. When immortal this way she expends energy at 5 - per day per body rank(even if only used for a second that day) she can choose to forgo all benefits of this technique on a day and this cost need not be paid.




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Immortal resilience[ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Passive [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual ]
Whenever she would be struck by a technique that would do her harm she can expend vital force of equal rank to the attack, this means that most basic close combat becomes near meaningless if “Life eating monster” is active. Gen-Jutsu that do her harm become easier to discern if she blocks with this technique as she still suffers the illusionary ailments. This does not cancel or nullify techniques rather than just make herself bypass being affected meaning this is a supplemental action. This is unaffected by Jutsu that lower the effect of defensive Jutsu or increase their cost. If broken by an equal level Jutsu for some reason, she still ignores the damage but looses an activation and access to this ability for two posts.



Now I think that’s every base covered!! If I missed something I’ll get to it after your response but I think I did everything asked XD (again I’m sorta dying from heat so my concentration is a bit more lax than I’d like sad  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 01, 2020 4:09 pm
Prince_yureil


2) Oh no! that part was crossed out because I already found that out xD It was fine how you had it before (and I encourage you to change it back)

4) I mean your Jutsu can only drain one type of resource Bijou, sage, etc, but if you cast it again than you can change what type you drain! It just can't be any more than one at a time ^ ^

They are all looking pretty good now! I just have one final question for you1 For Vital tap this jutsu is lowering the totals as in the cap gets lowered to prevent regen again? If so then that will have to be its own separate custom too sorry! Oh and also I do really like your idea that you're going with here! If I can make a suggestion, I think you can actually raise Life Eating Monster to 160 vital force instead of 80. The reason being is that overwhelming actually raises the cost that you would have to pay to block it, and since you can only have up to 80 right now you wouldn't be able to block an overwhelming A rank ^ ^
 

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 01, 2020 4:20 pm

Character: Chloe Blueford
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The Big One | Rank S+ | Bloodline [ Ignition Release ] | Cost [ Spiritual ] [ Keystone
Created by Chloe as the absolute limit of her bloodline prowess, The Big One is quite simplistic in its design. Chloe charges up chakra in any part of her body similar to ay other ignition technique. Then once making contact, releases it in a series of explosions. This ability deals an initial S+ rank's worth of damage on the first post of contact, another S+ on the next post, and then one final S+ on the third post for a grand total of Three S+ attacks that are spaced out over time. Alternatively, Chloe may blow all the damage at once and deal the three S+ ranks worth of damage on the first post of contact, however doing so is extremely volatile and does not protect from the backlash, meaning that Chloe would take three S+ ranks worth of damage all at once as well.


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