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 Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2013 5:23 pm
malavaes Yep. Pretty good work if I may so. thank u very much
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 9:30 pm
Not using the character from this Sample for my actual RPC, just a nice display of my roleplaying ability.
Atiero was, to put in simple terms, very, very tired. And it would only get worse from there. Sighing exasperatedly, the young, sullen man seemed to waver for a moment, before appearing behind the first of his opponents, a young quincy who couldn't even draw his bow before the prodigy executed him, a swift chop to the neck with the knife edge of his hand sending the young man's head rolling mere feet from another opponent. This one would prove to be no more challenging, as a swift kick to the chest sent him careening into the side of a cliff wall, all six ribs shattered, one most likely piercing his inner organs, as the quincy started to cough blood. Drawing his bow, the second assailant managed to get off a few arrows before succumbing to his injuries. Atiero simply sidestepped the arrows, bringing down his hand in a chopping motion, shattering one arrow mid-flight. Picking it up, the powerful ninja pondered over it for a moment, before crushing it entirely between two fingers, and rubbing the residual chakra off.
"I hope that this wasn't your original plan, Quincy. In fact, I'd be surprised if this was even a backup plan to your backup plan. When two of my weakest arrancar rushed into my home, screaming of a powerful squadron of quincy devastating the area, I had hoped to perhaps even break a sweat. Shows what you can and can't expect of people, tch."
Another quincy jumped at Atiero, sending off three arrows before being grabbed roughly by the throat and sent hurtling into the same cliff wall as his friend. The cliff wall in question here began to crack, until finally giving into the pressure, sending half a ton of granite on top of the two dead quincy. A fourth began to limp away, hoping to escape the notice of Atiero, only to come face to face with a disapproving, and very frightening Atiero Valcuron.
"Now, why would you run away? Surely you realized the consequences of your actions, did you not?"
The quincy, probably no older than 25, squeaked in fright before being cut off by a massive reiatsu-enforced fist to his chest. Collapsing inwardly, he simply fell to the ground, his entire chest compressed on his heart from the impact.
"Stand up; I'm not done with you yet."
Atiero seized the quincy by the throat, lifting him up off of his feet, until he was at face-level with the massive figure in front of him. Powerful, brawny arms grasped one arm, the other hand still on his neck.
"You are all weak. This land is not one to accept the weak, at least not yet. I regret taking your life, little quincy, but you brought it upon yourself. May you rest peacefully in death."
The quincy simply broke down, gurgling in fright before Atiero grabbed his head, squeezing slightly.
"I will give you ultimate peace. Cero!"
A massive dark red beam of flames shot out of Atiero's mouth, completely disintegrating the Quincy at point blank. A few, tiny rags of burnt cloth fell serenely to the ground, floating down slowly.
"Now, to find their fina- hurhggh!"
The final quincy in question, appeared behind a thick veil of smoke, an arrow already prepared and drawn. One arrow had struck Atiero, piercing cleanly through his chest. The wound, probably a few inches above his belly button, was bleeding slightly, and Atiero's body heaved for a few moments.
"You are mistaken in thinking you could kill us all. Should it take my own life to do so, I will rid the world of such Espada scum as you!"
Now that the smoke cleared, Atiero got a better look at the final Quincy. He was probably middle-aged, with a close-cropped haircut, probably ex-military. He was wearing a very different form of the normal Quincy outfit, without any sleeves, showing off his large, tattooed arms. Also, the high tunic was completely open, billowing slightly in the wind. A large, vertical scar ran down one eye, which seemed to be sewed shut.
The quincy leaped forward, his weapon manifesting in the form of a sword, the reishi extending from an ornate kunai. Swinging it wildly, he managed to push back Atiero for a few steps, until the brawny Espada recovered his footing, parrying each sword thrust with his arms, managing to land a single punch on the Quincy, throwing him back five meters or so.
"I see you are truly powerful. In respect to your ability, I will ascend beyond my current power."
Atiero's whole body heaved, settling into a low, deep stance. His left hand grasping the scabbard of his katana, he slowly reached down with his right hand to the handle of the sword.
"You ought to be immensely proud of yourself. It's been roughly 5 years or so since I've had to draw my blade in true battle. Pay close attention. What you see now is 15% power. When I draw my blade, for a brief, white-hot moment, I will let myself reach 20%. The sound of my blade drawing out of its scabbard will be the last sound you hear, Quincy scum."
Atiero breathed heavily, before whipping out his sword at speeds too fast for anyone to see. An enormous wave of lightning enveloped both combatants, bringing the quincy to his knees in true despair, a low groan escaping his lips as his clothing and hair sizzled.
"I give you ultimate peace."
Seemingly, nothing happened, other than Atiero sheathing his sword again. After a moment, a veritable fountain of blood sprung from the Quincy’s chest, bifurcating him entirely. As the bloody body thudded loudly against the desert ground, Atiero turned, walking away slowly, his heart heavy. Having to kill what he considered children always made Atiero regret the world he lived in.
"Still, I suppose it couldn't be helped."
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 11:17 pm
Told I had to re-audition for my new character, I think this qualifies me more then my other one XD. Pleas tell me what you think :]
He stood up straight and cursed in Italian which translated to words that he would not dare speak near the ears of a child. "The Americana coven TUH!" He spat at the ground letting his Italian accent come out. He straightened him self and his expression softened. He took a seat at his desk and motioned for the girl to sit at the chair in front of him once she was seated he began to speak.
"Yes... A child alone even of your age and experience would be a danger to our world and your self." He smiled with kind and soft eyes. "The rain comes and go's living were we do storms are prone to arise with out warning." As he looked into the little girls eyes he could not say no, but as he looked he searched anything that her face could tell him.
"Yes... You may stay here child, I would not let you leave knowing what I do now. The Americans can be quiet... arrogant." He snapped his fingers and young human women in a maids outfit stuck her head over the rails.
"Yes my lord?"
"Prepare a room on the third floor we have another member to add to the family." He smiled at Babylon.
The manor was rather quiet tonight most of the time the teenagers were horsing around or the older vampires were arguing about what happened in what wars. Seeing a immortal child made him wonder, he had not seen one for many years hundreds even. He remembered the stories well and tried to forget them. "I have just a few questions... You can start by telling me your name, and some things about you such as were you where created and how you have managed to live this long with out being noticed by the humans or one of the elder vampires... Most of us are not to fond of immortal children... But I am guessing you were created before they became a problem?"
He asked these questions to get to know her better. He had a soft spot for children. Even though the girl was created before he was, by appearance he was older, maybe even a little by mind. It depended on how she answered these questions would determine were her mentality was at. Being changed at her age, did that stop the brains development process? If not then why has she not grown? He had these and many more questions and as he waited for a answer he tried to remember of his last time of talking with the king of America and how it ended. It gave him chills thinking about that place even for a vampire. American and European covens were very hard to get, to get along with each other. There were too many differences and rules. But they all shared one, never go into the daylight.
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 11:48 am
Tenkie Approved! Sounds like a book I've read. rofl Nice job!
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 4:37 pm
Tyler sat down by the tree and watched the harizon. The beutiful sunset gave the eight tails insperation. He then pulled out his note book that was passed down from generations in the cloud kingdom. Its owner was the legendary killer bee from so so long ago. He then couphed and beat on the tree making sounds. "I traded in my hallor words for jelly filled verbs. Its a good pregudice its bad eligance. allowance plowin- nope." He said crossing plowing out. He stood up and looked left and right he yawned of being tierd. "Well this is being saved for a little bit i'll finish this later." He said as he left from the spot.
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 4:58 pm
Nobunaga_oda12 Tyler sat down by the tree and watched the harizon. The beutiful sunset gave the eight tails insperation. He then pulled out his note book that was passed down from generations in the cloud kingdom. Its owner was the legendary killer bee from so so long ago. He then couphed and beat on the tree making sounds. "I traded in my hallor words for jelly filled verbs. Its a good pregudice its bad eligance. allowance plowin- nope." He said crossing plowing out. He stood up and looked left and right he yawned of being tierd. "Well this is being saved for a little bit i'll finish this later." He said as he left from the spot. approved
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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 10:01 pm
Mirian jumped from tree to tree behind the shinobi. Her purple, ringed eyes scanned the ground, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. Spotting that particular moment, she dived out of the trees, and landed directly on one of the ninja. She removed his head with her kunai, and moved on to the next ninja. This one had noticed her, and as his eyes widened, she noticed the byakugan. How... quaint. Mirian did not have a high respect for other Dōjutsu users, apart from the Rinnegan. As far as she was concerned, the Rinnegan was the only one worth mentioning. She threw some shuriken at him, knowing he would see them and dodge, and ran behind them, holding out her kunai. As expected, he dodged, and stabbed himself onto the kunai. Heh. All done. She turned to the trees and called out, "There, that enough killing to satisfy you? Am I worthy to be in your organisation now? Or do I have to go kill more worthless shinobi?"
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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 10:22 pm
anna1234141 Approved unless Ayperos says other wise. xD
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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 11:52 pm
Crasher Wave anna1234141 Approved unless Ayperos says other wise. xD If he says otherwise... I will be annoyed.... -_- (Not a threat, just annoyed)
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Posted: Mon May 20, 2013 8:33 pm
(trying out for the nine tailed beast Kurama, I know it has yet to be caught, but that will make a great RP moment in trying to get it, I can already see it ^_^) He was in a great mood today, the feel of the sun; the smell of flowers and the sound of chaos, just a normal job for Renard. He had found a high paying job; this one was to take care of a group of bandits that had been hiding out in some local mountains. He of course had found them, and having introduced himself they had all gone into a panic. These bandits had earned a bit of reputation, which was quite impressive seeing how there was only seven members. However, the fame had given them a high bounty and this was the reason behind Renard’s visit. Renard finding their panic hilarious kept making remarks and laughing “take your time, when you’re ready to fight just let me know, k”. The bandits had earned their bounty because of the large cannon they used to decimate towns. They had prepared a cannon ball just for him, and had everything set up. Renard looked at the cannon and smiled, “that’s a really large piece of metal you all got there” he said motioning towards the oversize cannon. The bandits all started to laugh as their leader lit the fuse and with it pointing towards Renard it was sure to hit. A loud bang rang out throughout the area and a cannon ball the size of a large house made a direct hit with Renard. The bandits all cheering and laughing at their accomplishment of killing “The Iron Army”, this however was not the case. Renard stood at the same spot, the iron ball held back with a single hand. He sighed and the iron ball started to melt away. “This has been great fun, but its time you fools spend some time in prison” The cannon had also started to melt, in a few seconds a large puddle of metal sat at their feet. Renard waved his hand and all the metal twisted and shaped into a giant round cage. All of the bandits where trapped inside and freaking out, which only made Renard laugh. “you bandits have caused a lot of pain and suffering, I really should kill you now, but I get more if your alive”, with that the fenced ball of metal decreased in size so the bandits had little room, and then started to follow Renard down the mountain towards town. “another day, and another job” Riding down the mountain on a sheet of metal and followed by the rolling ball “I think it’s time to pay a visit to ‘brother’” His face bright with joy, he could hardly wait to see his old home again, “I hope he has returned by now”. The thought of all the money from the job made Renard’s mouth water; it had been weeks since his last big pay and he was already broke. His brother always warned him to stop gambling, but it had become a habit. He had no reason to quit, no one to provide for, and no earthly belongings for people to take away. One thing he always wishes for is luck. ((I hope this is ok, I wrote it very quick and have not gone through to edit it.)) Here is an average post for me, some times longer, if I really get into the character and the situation -  Nine The Homunculus Keeper of the Philosopher's Stone
Nine's happy day was cut all too short, the sound of battle echoed in his ears and he knew death would surely follow. He quickly ran down alleyways after alleyways, not resting until he came across many dead Solarian knights, holding back the urge to puke he walked up to the nearest one and began to heal. In a second his head flew several feet away, leaving Nine's headless body and a fake lunarian knight beside the dead. The head quickly turned to dust and started to regrow where it was once cut off. It hurt like hell having his head cut off, but he had to fight the pain, at least for now.
Nine drew his sword and cut away the enemy knight. He then focused on the many dead before him, sighing he stood up "normal healing would be to slow, I guess I've got to wake all of you up..." noting three more enemy knights closing in on his position he took his sword and cut open his arm, allowing the blood to cover the fallen Solarians as he ran away from his pursuers.
As the blood touched the fallen it glowed a bright crimson color and was quickly repairing their dead bodies. The lunarians who was chasing after Nine where quickly halted at the once dead force before them. Power was surging through the solarians and allowed then to quickly cut down the fake knights. The power given from the spilled blood would fade away, but the happiness the once dead knights felt would last for the rest of their lives. They waved towards Nine and once again began fighting the fake knights.
Nine's arm soon healed and feeling empowered by the cheers from the people he healed he felt like he could take on the world. He pulled out his other sword and started fighting the fake knights himself.
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Posted: Tue May 21, 2013 7:36 pm
Nakazora Approved, sorry I forgot. xD
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Posted: Tue May 21, 2013 7:40 pm
Crasher Wave Nakazora Approved, sorry I forgot. xD not a problem ^_^
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Posted: Sun May 26, 2013 9:45 am
Applying for sage/ or as anyone would call it Legendary ninja. The air whistled and whipped around Sora as his body broke through the clouds and began plummeting to earth. His clothes were tattered and torn, and the air was sprinkled with the blood from his face as he continued to fall. It was clear to him that he had been defeated. There was nothing more he could do now, he was out of chakra, his technology had been destroyed, and there was no way that damn monkey was going to be of any help. Yonbi was never of any help; his philosophy was that even if Sora managed to get himself killed, he would just find himself resurrected as a free Biju somewhere else anyways. This was what Biju did after all; when they died they would be resurrected after a certain amount of time anyways, like some sort of cancer that you can never truly cure. It was always there, watching, waiting, plotting to find some way to take you over. Even if you do not notice it, it will always be there, trying to drive you in to remission. New character for sage. Sora was not sure what to think as he continued to plummet helplessly towards the ground. The worst part was that he did not even have enough energy to move his body, so he could not see how high up he actually was. It was a terrifying feeling not knowing how close to the ground you were, how close to death you were, how close to the end you were. Normally the sky was where he felt the most at home, gliding through the air with his trusty companion Zephyr at his side; this was not the case this time. This time he was scared, scared that he was going to meet his end so early in his life, and all because he got caught up defending his home. The worst part about all this though? Well he could not decide. He was torn between not being able to fly through the sky anymore, feeling the wind have its way with his clothes, his hair, his spirit, and letting that damn monkey go free. What was worse?
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Posted: Sun May 26, 2013 3:53 pm
"Evacuate the village now!" Saku had ordered the shinobi of the rain as chaos consumed the village. Suteki was running around following his orders to the letter aiding those in need. She had no clue what was going on other than something howling loudly in the distance. It had honestly sent chills down her spine every time that this had occurred. Explosions started sounding off in the distance as well as the destruction of buildings from them collapsing. "Mommy!" A little girl screamed her heart out and Suteki's eyes widened as she was pulled back into reality. She looked over in the direction where the screams had come from and saw the girl. Suteki dashed over to her lifting the little girl up into her arms before concrete from the buildings collapsed where the little girl was. Suteki continued running with the girl crying into her shoulder and something howled again. Seeing another Jounin in the distance Suteki knew that she would have to deal with the source of the destruction before anything else. She would have to be the one to take this damned creature down. Handing the girl off to the jounin without another word she ran towards the source of the howls. The howling came from the center of the rain village which had been completely destroyed. All that was left was a great crater in which she knew would be her next battlefield. She didn't care if she lived or died from this battle as all she cared about was buying her great village time to escape with as many people as they could. Her eyes went wide with what she saw next.
Many bodies of her comrades were scattered around the crater around one shinobi. Her body began to shake as she balled her hands into fists. Her eyes still wide with disbelief settled upon the shinobi. Chakra coated this shinobi as there was something odd about his chakra. Something that felt like it was smothering her leaving her unable to breath. Suteki's eyes narrowed as instead of sorrow... hate began to consume her soul and she was going to take out everything against this one shinobi. Slowly reaching into her pockets she grabbed out her gloves and placed them on her hands. Opening and closing her hands she began to make sure they were on comfortably. The shinobi's eyes looked over to her with a large smile upon his face. Just the thought of this shinobi being happy made Suteki sick. "I got something for you." She spoke softly and the shinobi turned giving her his undivided attention. "Really now?" He asked her as he finally spoke. Using the style Eternal Style of the Broken Sword she began to focus. Stomping on the ground a large boulder jumped into the air and she timed everything just right. Jumping in the air slightly above the boulder she spun her body and swung her leg at it. With a deafening crack her leg connected with the boulder sending it flying towards the shinobi. As she landed on the ground she used every ounce of speed she possessed and followed the boulder to its target.
He crushed the boulder rather easily sending pieces everywhere however that was the intent. Suteki was right behind the boulder as it shattered and she threw a fist forward in the precise point in which his chest would be. Throwing fist after fist at her target within seconds using the lightning fist style she was trying to get a good number of hits on him and wear him down. Stepping back with her dominant foot the pieces of the boulder finally landed on the ground showing just how fast she was as well. Switching back to the broken sword style she put all of her weight on her left leg while leaning forward. Turning her upper body as she drove as much force as she possibly could within this next attack. As her fist connected with his jaw a deafening crack could be heard and then his body turned to flames. The flames consumed her arm and she cursed loudly screaming in pain as she put them out.
Panting slightly from the energy she just used and the pain that was running through her arm she began looking around for where the real shinobi was. She knew he must have switched out when she kicked the boulder at him. He was good and this was going to be a challenge for her. However she had to do this, she had to protect the village she loved, she had to kill this damned shinobi in order to save the ones that she loved. Something bright created a shadow in front of her and her eyes darted to the source and then they went wide with fear. A trail of lava was sent straight towards her and she dodged to the side only to see it turn and follow her further. Cursing loudly she began to run while the lava began to slowly keep up with her. As long as she remained on the move she would be fine and this she knew. She had to come up with a plan in order to take down her opponent. It was at this point she discovered he must be a Youton user. To make it out of this alive she was going to have to use her own kekkei genkai sparingly.
Due to her specialties she never had much chakra to spare for anything. Yet that's what made her such a devastating shinobi in hand to hand combat and even sword play for that matter. Adrenaline overran her entire chakra system blocking out the pain within her arm while she grabbed out her knuckle knives. She had to create a diversion or at least get him confused. To get the lava focused on something else at the least giving her an opening to her opponent. If she could just get one hit on her enemy she knew she could end it with this hit if she could land it. Using Shoton Senbon many crystal needles formed in the air and flew towards the shinobi. The lava quickly formed a barrier around him and she knew this would be the moment. Using another Shoton technique known as Suisho bunshin no jutsu three crystal clones emerged from the ground as they took on her features. Each wielded knuckle knives as well and began running twenty meters away in a circle around the shinobi with Suteki.
Two tails made of chakra formed from the shinobi and it was at this moment that the heat increased within the area getting Suteki slightly fatigued. Once she saw the tails she finally realized this shinobi wasn't a Youton user... He was a damned jinchuuriki. The shinobi charged one of the crystal clones and engaged her within taijutsu. The shinobi managed to take down the crystal clone with ease until it burst into small crystals. The crystals managed to get into his eyes causing him to stop and shout in pain rubbing his eyes. The other two clones rushed forward with one jumping into the air and the other rushing him. The one that rushed him managed to grab him by his neck and throw him onto the ground holding him down by his throat. Howling in pain he broke the arm of the clone causing it to burst into small crystals as well. The shinobi barely managed to open his eyes as he shot a lava ball at the crystal clone that was falling towards him. The clone melted with ease as lava fell back upon the shinobi. As he stood up most of his clothes were scorched and his eyes full of hate. Suteki stopped and merely looked at him trying to figure out what he was going to do next and how to react to it.
The shinobi's eyes narrowed completely as a third tail appeared and then the cloak of chakra vanished as a fourth tail appeared. Four tails sprouted from the shinobi's hind end and her eyes went wide as she knew this couldn't be good. Obsidian spikes emerged from the ground around her and pierced her feet and legs. Growling in pain she did her best to move away from the spikes. As her pain began to hit her the shinobi appeared right in front of her swinging his fist into her stomach. Once it connected her eyes went wide as the air was forced from her lungs. Launching a round house kick at her he sent her flying into the wall of the crater as she fell down to the ground. Struggling to breath more lava was sent flying in her direction. Barely dodging the attack she limped away continuing to struggle to breathe.
Her eyes darted over to see the shinobi zig zag in her direction approaching rapidly. Fear gripped her as the shinobi hit her with a tail sending her away a good distance. Standing up as she managed to breathe her eyes looked up into the sky as it stopped raining for some strange reason. As the clouds parted she couldn't help but think of a jounin known as Kurai Kaminari and her words of advice. 'When ever you fight someone just remember this... It doesn't matter how big they are, how strong they are, how fast they are, or what they are capable of... what matters is what you're willing to do in order to win, how much pain you're going to withstand in order to win, how long you'll be willing to keep getting back up and keep moving forward. No matter what happens just keep moving forward and I promise you... you will win.' As the words consumed her she smiled slightly and took a defensive stance realizing what she had to do.
As she noticed that with every movement he acted like an animal she decided to test something at she needed to time everything perfectly. Taking in a slow breath he launched himself at her while cocking back his right shoulder. Her face went blank as she became calm and dodged underneath the strike and hit his side. A tail flung at her and she dodged it easily as well grabbing it. Using her strength she threw him over her shoulder and ran in his direction. Once he landed on his feet he threw a round house kick at her with tremendous force. Sliding along the ground she sliced his leg with her knuckle knives and he growled in pain. She was faster than him and she was going to use that to her advantage. Keeping in extremely close with this shinobi she was dodging every single attack using the lightning fist style with her knuckle knives. Hitting him in multiple spots. "Screw this!" He shouted as he jumped backwards and his body began to shift into a horrendous creature.
Suteki remained calm as the tailed beast had finally showed its true form. Cracking her neck she had her work cut out for her now... but she wasn't going to give up. "Suteki! You've done enough! RUN!" A shinobi shouted in the distance but she ignored him while she began to run around the tailed beast. As his fist launched towards her she dodged it easily yet again. Due to his size he was slightly slower giving her an edge. It was time to utilize her plan. Using multiple shoton techniques at once crystal thorns consumed the tailed beast piercing into his body dragging him to the ground as a crystal dome formed around the tailed beast trapping him inside. Lava began to shoot around the dome slowly melting it. Suteki breathed in slowly knowing this was the moment that would decide whether or not she would win. A dragon's head formed at her feet and she grabbed onto it's horns as the crystals fully formed the dragon. Flying high into the air she jumped off of it as the dragon flew down hitting the tailed beast head on. The beast had begun to revert back to his human form. Diving down like a bomb Suteki aimed directly at the shinobi throwing her knuckled fist directly at the shinobi's face. With a deafening crack all the momentum she had gained transferred into the shinobi's body and he remained still. Falling onto her back she began to take slow and steady breathes knowing her village was going to seal the beast within her. Knowing she was going to have to sacrifice her shoton in order to have it. But she didn't care as it would be yet another challenge for her. The Yonbi was hers...
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Posted: Sun May 26, 2013 5:56 pm
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