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Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2013 5:37 am
pdragon619 (you guys are a tad bit late, seeing as he's allready been posting for a while now) (I know but I was required by him in hear maby by axident but I thought I shuld at least achonalage it)
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Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2013 6:19 am
( I just thought it would be nice to know that he has our approval as well)
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Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 10:35 am
Odayakana Tora
Name: Odayakana Tora
Age:16 Almost 17
Race biggrin emon/Angel Hybrid
Powers: 1.Shadow Manipulation(Can teleport and hide through shadows and has total control over them creating Tentacles/tendrils,Swords, Arrows, Clones, chains and/or threads to attack or bind.)
2.Metal Manipulation(User can move, shape, liquify ,compress, and manipulate any metal and metallic substances, allowing them to make weapons, armor, or even floating metal platforms)
3.Healing hand(Tora's right arm can heal any creature but he cannot use it on himself)
Additional Abilities:
1.Tora is a poison specialist
2.Tora is a master of the falcon talons
Personality: Lazy,Slacker, Extremely Smart, Sometimes forgiving and Very open,Playful
Likes: Sunny days with a little clouds,Sweets,Cooking ,Peace and Quiet
[Dislikes:Rainy days ,Sour candy,Wars , Disturbance
Bio: Tora lived with his mother an angel his whole life, when his mother was pregnant with him she ran away because she knew satan Tora's father would kill them both he thought Hybrids were filthy, They lived a normal life until one day at school Tora demonstrated his power to one of his school friends, Tora was teleporting through shadows his friend went running to the principles office and told on Tora , the principle thought Tora was scaring the kids, she didn't actually believe the kids so she called Toras mother and told her that Tora was scaring the kids by telling them he can go through walls and teleport.
Tora's mother feared that Tora would reveal his true identity to the school, so she moved to another town the same thing happend, but this time he liquified a car, after that his mom decided to enroll him to YMHS
Extra: He's almost never awake during classes and everyone thinks he's a weakling because he tries his best to avoid violence
Weapon:
He keeps Steel alloy discs in a pouch located on his left thigh and manipulates them to whatever projectiles he needs
2.Falcon talons:

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Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 12:33 pm
(I approved this, don't see anything wrong)
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Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 12:07 am
You do know you need atleast three people to accept before you're officially approved of and can start posting? But i don't see anything wrong with your character apart from how his powers and abilities have barely any relation to his race but otherwise approved. But how did he get those claws? (falcon talons)
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Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 1:06 am
elkiai You do know you need atleast three people to accept before you're officially approved of and can start posting? But i don't see anything wrong with your character apart from how his powers and abilities have barely any relation to his race but otherwise approved. But how did he get those claws? (falcon talons) well shadow manipulation is tied to darkness, which is fitting as he's half demon, and healing magic is obviously refrence to his angelic nature, so the only power that doesn't fit is metal manipulation, but seeing as almost every character has at least one nonsequiter power its pretty forgivable (I.E Victor being able to manipulate wind and barriers has nothing to do with being half wolf, being a tree spirit has nothing to do with shape shifting, being a bird has nothing to do with teleportation, healing, or summoning magic, being any character Meta makes has nothing to do with being able to have all elemental powers (which he gives literally every character he's ever made), being any character David makes has nothing to do with being able to magically restore and repair damaged items (which he gives to characters he makes literally as soon as something needs to be fixed) being a neko/vampire has nothing to do with having a split personality/inner demon thing, being a neko has nothing to do with being able to shoot energy balls and see through anyone's eyes at will, Rina for technically being an Ogre has completely unfitting powers, being a sound elemental has nothing to do with being able to use attacks that are of other elements (and no having them in the shape of a music note does not suddenly make it any less unfitting), being a snake demon has nothing to do with being able to burrow underground or shoot energy, being a rock elemental has nothing to do with having a pumpkin god attached to your face, being a zombie has nothing to do with wind powers, being a hell raven has nothing to do with being able to shoot nuclear blasts, being a cyborg has nothing to do with shapeshifting or elemental magic, being a shape shifter has nothing to do with controlling wind or ice etc. etc. etc.) basically what I'm trying to say is if your gonna start docking people on having oddly assigned powers then that means you've disqualified oer 90% of the established cast because very few actually take the effort to logically tie their powers into their character's race and/or back story, and if they do most of the time the connection isn't established until long after the character has been created)
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Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 2:37 am
elkiai You do know you need atleast three people to accept before you're officially approved of and can start posting? But i don't see anything wrong with your character apart from how his powers and abilities have barely any relation to his race but otherwise approved. But how did he get those claws? (falcon talons) Im really sorry I didn't know that sweatdrop if you want me to delete my post I will , and I'll wait for more people to accept 3nodding and about the falcon talons he created them long time ago
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Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 3:45 am
pdragon619 elkiai You do know you need atleast three people to accept before you're officially approved of and can start posting? But i don't see anything wrong with your character apart from how his powers and abilities have barely any relation to his race but otherwise approved. But how did he get those claws? (falcon talons) well shadow manipulation is tied to darkness, which is fitting as he's half demon, and healing magic is obviously refrence to his angelic nature, so the only power that doesn't fit is metal manipulation, but seeing as almost every character has at least one nonsequiter power its pretty forgivable (I.E Victor being able to manipulate wind and barriers has nothing to do with being half wolf, being a tree spirit has nothing to do with shape shifting, being a bird has nothing to do with teleportation, healing, or summoning magic, being any character Meta makes has nothing to do with being able to have all elemental powers (which he gives literally every character he's ever made), being any character David makes has nothing to do with being able to magically restore and repair damaged items (which he gives to characters he makes literally as soon as something needs to be fixed) being a neko/vampire has nothing to do with having a split personality/inner demon thing, being a neko has nothing to do with being able to shoot energy balls and see through anyone's eyes at will, Rina for technically being an Ogre has completely unfitting powers, being a sound elemental has nothing to do with being able to use attacks that are of other elements (and no having them in the shape of a music note does not suddenly make it any less unfitting), being a snake demon has nothing to do with being able to burrow underground or shoot energy, being a rock elemental has nothing to do with having a pumpkin god attached to your face, being a zombie has nothing to do with wind powers, being a hell raven has nothing to do with being able to shoot nuclear blasts, being a cyborg has nothing to do with shapeshifting or elemental magic, being a shape shifter has nothing to do with controlling wind or ice etc. etc. etc.) basically what I'm trying to say is if your gonna start docking people on having oddly assigned powers then that means you've disqualified oer 90% of the established cast because very few actually take the effort to logically tie their powers into their character's race and/or back story, and if they do most of the time the connection isn't established until long after the character has been created) (Right right right, i get your point shhhh that's why i accepted it. But yeah it's nice to have your powers tied to your race in one way or another or atleast have some explanation as to how you got them. And for the record she can only summon bird related things and that's due to some cultural belief crap i really dont want to explain because im not that dedicated to the races i create unlike you and snake demons. But yeah, one or two unrelated magics are perfectly fine if you can explain them but putting a really vague power as an excuse to do completely unrelated stuff. (which is pretty much enlil right now) is not really a good thing but we've pretty much stopped giving a crap about that ages ago.)
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Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 3:56 am
Rush And Crush elkiai You do know you need atleast three people to accept before you're officially approved of and can start posting? But i don't see anything wrong with your character apart from how his powers and abilities have barely any relation to his race but otherwise approved. But how did he get those claws? (falcon talons) Im really sorry I didn't know that sweatdrop if you want me to delete my post I will , and I'll wait for more people to accept 3nodding and about the falcon talons he created them long time ago Ah that's okay you dont have to delete it, im pretty sure someone else is going to accept it but i kinda lied really. At this point you only really need Pdragon to accept you cause we've pretty much accepted him as our leader cause he's pretty dedicated to this rp and he's one of the few that actually have decent characters with power limits and can use them well. Yeah he pretty much owns all our asses.
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Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 3:59 am
elkiai Rush And Crush elkiai You do know you need atleast three people to accept before you're officially approved of and can start posting? But i don't see anything wrong with your character apart from how his powers and abilities have barely any relation to his race but otherwise approved. But how did he get those claws? (falcon talons) Im really sorry I didn't know that sweatdrop if you want me to delete my post I will , and I'll wait for more people to accept 3nodding and about the falcon talons he created them long time ago Ah that's okay you dont have to delete it, im pretty sure someone else is going to accept it but i kinda lied really. At this point you only really need Pdragon to accept you cause we've pretty much accepted him as our leader cause he's pretty dedicated to this rp and he's one of the few that actually have decent characters with power limits and can use them well. Yeah he pretty much owns all our asses. He replied to my post so im guessing he did ^.^ If you want I can add something in the bio that might explain his metal power
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Posted: Wed Jun 05, 2013 9:47 pm
Jun Na Lee Name: Jun Na Lee Age:110 Race: Lyn - A race of small people with animal traits. Mostly seen from their ears, tails, and legs. They are mostly foxes, cats, dogs, or other small creature of the forest. Powers: Junna is a force master. Similar to being able to use telekinesis with the mind. She enhances this power by focusing on the glowing ribbon she keeps which magnifies her power by 10 fold. Additional Abilities: She can use her senses to sniff things out. Using the earth and its vibrations to send messages to others. Can speak with animals. Personality: Junna is still a young chid desite her age. For the people of the Lyn 110 is similar to being 10 years old. She is ignorant to a few things despite being alive long and has a strong sense of curiosity. Likes: tea, stories, nice people, food, meat Dislikes: mean people. really big people, onions, frogs. Bio: Junna comes from a small village of Lyn not to far from the very central village of the Lyn. One day her village was attacked by bandits (the one that she as now forced to work in with another person close to her). Her friends ended up being killed off and has been working under the bandits despite her hatred for it. Extra: Is a fox and sometimes mistaken for a boy.
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Posted: Thu Jun 06, 2013 12:40 am
huevopuss Jun Na Lee Name: Jun Na Lee Age:110 Race: Lyn - A race of small people with animal traits. Mostly seen from their ears, tails, and legs. They are mostly foxes, cats, dogs, or other small creature of the forest. Powers: Junna is a force master. Similar to being able to use telekinesis with the mind. She enhances this power by focusing on the glowing ribbon she keeps which magnifies her power by 10 fold. Additional Abilities: She can use her senses to sniff things out. Using the earth and its vibrations to send messages to others. Can speak with animals. Personality: Junna is still a young chid desite her age. For the people of the Lyn 110 is similar to being 10 years old. She is ignorant to a few things despite being alive long and has a strong sense of curiosity. Likes: tea, stories, nice people, food, meat Dislikes: mean people. really big people, onions, frogs. Bio: Junna comes from a small village of Lyn not to far from the very central village of the Lyn. One day her village was attacked by bandits (the one that she as now forced to work in with another person close to her). Her friends ended up being killed off and has been working under the bandits despite her hatred for it. Extra: Is a fox and sometimes mistaken for a boy.
Yes, the cutie can stay.
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Posted: Thu Jun 06, 2013 4:43 pm
Aerial Name: Aerial Age: Appears to be 10 Race: Unknown Powers: All she knows is that she is able to use telepathy and levitation Personality: She is a nice girl that is caring for others. She doesn't understand what she has to do with "bad people," as she calls them, and she's quite naive. She does ask a lot of questions though. Likes: Anybody nice to her, learning more about her past, questions, etc. Dislikes: Being locked up, being forced to do things she doesn't want to do, having to deal with fighting, not knowing about her past, being stolen away from her 'parents.' Bio: Aerial doesn't know much about her past. All she knows is that one day after she was stolen from her 'parents' from a group of crooks that took people in exchange for money, she began to question why they weren't planning on selling her back to her 'parents.' Aerial didn't think that her small source of power was strong enough to make people want her, and she didn't understand why she was such a high up target. She also didn't know why the people trying to take her was offering so much money to get their hands on her. It began to cause her to question her life and her past that she doesn't even remember. She slowly remembers some things and at this moment, all she remembers is a green haired boy. Other than that, she remember nothing of her past and wants to learn as much as she can to get the answers she wants. As she learns more, the more of the present she knows starts to disappear from her brain.
( this is davids character. you guys. )
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Posted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 6:53 pm
Liyana Name:Liyana
Age: 5000
Race: Angel
Powers
1.Divine Empowerment
(Liyana is able to draw strength from powerful divine forces of different gods in order to increase her natural abilities. she is able to absorb the energy of gods and unleash it in a variety of ways)
2.Holy Fire Manipulation
(Liyana can manipulate holy flames, which are especially effective against evil and demons and are inextinguishable . It may also trap and/or immobilize angels or demons, rather than killing them outright.)
3.Mass healing
(Liyana can healing everyone within 25 ft from her)
Personality: Liyana is a loving mother ,but she likes to tease people especially her son Tora .She Treats almost all children as her own, and she will do whatever she can to protect the people she love even if it means her life
Likes: Tora, Peace, Sour candy, Training, and Children
Dislikes: Satan, Most Demons ,God, and her Father
Bio: Liyana was a rebellious daughter of a very powerful angel ,she became a powerful warrior at a young age .One day she had a fight with her father and left the heavens and went to earth .On earth Liyana befriended a lot of people ,creatures, and even demons ,one night Liyana found her self being chased by a couple of strong demons ,they cornered her and so she was forced to fight, she was able to kill some of them but the numbers were just to many, they captured her and were about to kill her, until satan showed up and destroyed the demons ,Liyana fell in love with satan she stayed with him until she got pregnant with satans son, Liyana was about to go inform satan about her pregnancy, but before she could ,she over heard satan and his advisers say that if she ever gets pregnant with a hybrid son they would kill her and her son, after hearing that she left hell and went back to the heavens, they welcomed her there, but she kept her pregnancy a secret ,she wanted to tell her father first and see his reaction, so after one month she told her father about her pregnancy, with out saying a word her father tried to kill her, she managed to imprison him in holy fire and escape. Because no one could accept her or her son she decided to live on earth and protect her child from harm
(Im sorry for the bad bio im planing on fixing it later)
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Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 6:46 pm
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