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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:35 am
-o-Havik-o- @Despair:
It can not be out right immune to physical attack when covered in chakra, hard as s**t to break, sure, but not immune.
You need to add ranked amount on the types of tai, or kenjutsu blows that can break the spear, Havik does not have strength as his attribute, but is very strong. You could say a base strength amount of +1, although the way it sounds to me any type of attack with a C rank or more amount of power will break it. Up to you what you want to put though.
Chakra Enhancement: This seems like a less costly version of the Chakra Blade jutsu from your clan, and weapon ability's that mimic those of jutsu already available, but to a lesser degree have been denied in the past. The exact same thing would be achieved through simple adding a chakra coat to your weapon, like other weapon users do, the fact your is a spear, and not a sword just means you mold differently .
Chakra Bash: Again, very close to a clan jutsu, but your weapon is a medium, and you added on a little bit more cost, and a duration as a counter balance, so approved.
Jutsu Repellent: It is pretty much fine the way it is, I just need to know one thing, how would the effected area work on a persons body? For example Deil charges Zenko, throwing Misuki to the wind, as he is overwhelmed by her sexy, and surprised by this Zenko starts twirling her staff like a frightened cheerleader. What would happen to Deil if he was caught up in the effected area of this ability?
Blast, really? I thought administering an alien chakra would be an easy enough task, even taijutsu users have jutsu. Hrm, could I say that it would break to an A/S rank? And C when it doesn't have the chakra coat. Not really that familiar with taijutsu. =x -Chakra Enhancement: Well, Chakra Blade is the focus of pure, raw chakra into the Konaga user's balled fist, creating a 9 in. blade which can pretty much cut through anything, however, it can't block anything. ( It's also a prerequisite to use this as stated. ) This ability extends the blade by an inch, and makes it super sharp if it wasn't apparent by the description. This also only lasts for one post. If you want, I can make the cost of using it equal to or greater than Chakra Blade since this is kind of a medium for that as well, just more powerful than a standard person could do with their weapon because of the nature of her chakra. -Chakra Bash: Woo! -Jutsu Repellent: It has just about no effect on the human body, the technique is solely for repelling projectile jutsu. If he gets to close he might get a good whack, but otherwise, nothin'.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:41 am
A/S Rank defense? My shield, specifically for this reason has that defense and I'm thinking it's too much. Explain how a little bit of chakra changes defense from C to S Rank.
At the mention of my weapon, here is it. The Shield
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:48 am
We can come up with something for the level of force your staff will be able to withstand. I saw it can't be immune because if Havik swings his custom weapon at you ( a 1000 pound Nodochi ) then it is far to say that you would have to use a considerable amount of chakra to counter the level of force that would be hitting you. Granted it is rare you will have to deal with that much force, but adding the ranks in will help a lot for balance purposes. Let me maul it over, and think of a good system for you weapon, and once it is up we will see what you think, andif it fits well enough for you.
Chakra Enhancement: I thought you would get extra cutting damage for you weapon simple because your a Konaga, and there chakra on it's on is more volatile, so again I am not seeing the need for the jutsu.
I looked at it as you chakra being more powerful all around, and since it is you wouldn't need a weapon ability for this, it would pretty much happen weather you used it with this weapon, or any other. Chakra coating is a bit of a rough area, I will Pm Cobra about it, but for now lets see what happens and will come back to it.
Jutsu Repel: Seems to be like you making a cyclone of Konaga chakra which would effectively damage the s**t outta the human body. Granted it wont be considerd a wind jutsu, more a focused spinning vortex of chakra, but it would at least have the ability to force the enemy back ward, at higher levels even throw them for several meters.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:02 am
1000 Pound Nodachi? What is he, the hachibi host? ( On the note of considerable amount of chakra, I don't think that would be an issue. However, blocking something like that would probably raise her Pain Stress degree once ore twice. =P ) Chakra Enhancement: Well, some people would dispute that, and when one thinks of one of those, you would think of only piercing through a tree like Asuma did, at least that's what I think happened. This technique would allow the spear to cut a large rock to ribbons. Jutsu Repel: Oh, a cyclone? I guess that was the interpretation given when I said she spun it like a windmill. It does nothing of the sort honestly, it sort of creates a shield of chakra which would only work because the staff is spinning.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:23 am
Edited Signore Criticizer.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:27 am
Unrelinquished Despair 1000 Pound Nodachi? What is he, the hachibi host? ( On the note of considerable amount of chakra, I don't think that would be an issue. However, blocking something like that would probably raise her Pain Stress degree once ore twice. =P ) Chakra Enhancement: Well, some people would dispute that, and when one thinks of one of those, you would think of only piercing through a tree like Asuma did, at least that's what I think happened. This technique would allow the spear to cut a large rock to ribbons. Jutsu Repel: Oh, a cyclone? I guess that was the interpretation given when I said she spun it like a windmill. It does nothing of the sort honestly, it sort of creates a shield of chakra which would only work because the staff is spinning. Lol nope, I am the host of a cunning, agile demon, the strength is aaaaaaall Havik xD
Jutsu repel: would that repel the jutsu though? The name implies the jutsu, or projectiles would be shot back, or in another direction. If spinning the staff creates a chakra shield would just crash into it, or would it bounce off, leaving any type of 'force' to be absorbed by the shield Letting Zenko escape and type of blunt force injure?
Sorry if it seems overly explained, just need to make sure everything is as clear as possible.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:46 am
-o-Havik-o- Lol nope, I am the host of a cunning, agile demon, the strength is aaaaaaall Havik xD
Jutsu repel: would that repel the jutsu though? The name implies the jutsu, or projectiles would be shot back, or in another direction. If spinning the staff creates a chakra shield would just crash into it, or would it bounce off, leaving any type of 'force' to be absorbed by the shield Letting Zenko escape and type of blunt force injure?
Sorry if it seems overly explained, just need to make sure everything is as clear as possible. That's crazy maaaaaan, of course I don't expect he could swing it around as easily as Zenko could this spear. Hmm, I was thinking more along the lines that the chakra shield could be seen as some hungry beast that tore the jutsu to shreds, chakra wise. However, I like the latter option that you've provided better, since the former would make this technique more powerful than I should it should be.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:34 am
Unrelinquished Despair -o-Havik-o- Lol nope, I am the host of a cunning, agile demon, the strength is aaaaaaall Havik xD
Jutsu repel: would that repel the jutsu though? The name implies the jutsu, or projectiles would be shot back, or in another direction. If spinning the staff creates a chakra shield would just crash into it, or would it bounce off, leaving any type of 'force' to be absorbed by the shield Letting Zenko escape and type of blunt force injure?
Sorry if it seems overly explained, just need to make sure everything is as clear as possible. That's crazy maaaaaan, of course I don't expect he could swing it around as easily as Zenko could this spear. Hmm, I was thinking more along the lines that the chakra shield could be seen as some hungry beast that tore the jutsu to shreds, chakra wise. However, I like the latter option that you've provided better, since the former would make this technique more powerful than I should it should be. Mmk well make the edits to your app and I will finish up a rank system for you defense resistance
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:24 am
So, this is what I came up with for your system.
When Zenko focus's chakra into her spear two things happen, one its edges grow dramatically sharper able to cut most stone, and other object into ribbons, the second thing is the spear become more durable to blunt force.
Activating this ability will cost the same as a jutsu of what ever rank Zenko decides. The staff will be able to block tai, or kenjutsu attacks up to +1 of the jutsu used, the chakra edge will start as normal length for Cranked then grow one inch for every rank higher than C, up to three inches for S ranked, and 4 for SS.
The draw back to this ability is that when a alien chakra force comes into contact with the spear it is deactivated.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:47 am
I don't understand what you just presented me, and what I do get, I don't like it at all, and it doesn't conform with the original idea/feel of the weapon. ( Basically I feel what you made to be a whole different weapon. )
The coat is supposed to be a passive thing, deactivated, like I said by an alien chakra. This 'alien' chakra could be something as simple as an e-rank jutsu, or a Hyuuga user pushing chakra outward at/toward the weapon. As long as an alien chakra source touches it, the coat would deactivate. I would like to WORK this my idea, not completely change it.
I think the chakra coat should be able to take up to b-rank physical abuse, but is broken at A-rank. Likewise, without the coat, the spear can be broken by standard chuunin level strength, able to withstand Genin level strength.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 11:05 am
Unrelinquished Despair I don't understand what you just presented me, and what I do get, I don't like it at all, and it doesn't conform with the original idea/feel of the weapon. ( Basically I feel what you made to be a whole different weapon. ) The coat is supposed to be a passive thing, deactivated, like I said by an alien chakra. This 'alien' chakra could be something as simple as an e-rank jutsu, or a Hyuuga user pushing chakra outward at/toward the weapon. As long as an alien chakra source touches it, the coat would deactivate. I would like to WORK this my idea, not completely change it. I think the chakra coat should be able to take up to b-rank physical abuse, but is broken at A-rank. Likewise, without the coat, the spear can be broken by standard chuunin level strength, able to withstand Genin level strength. I did not understand that it was a passive ability, makes sense though since Zenko's chakra would be aparent to the weapon at all times.
If that's the case then just edit that it can withstand up to A ranked tai while the ability is activated, when it is deactivated it take on post to reactivate, and if you want, say that at the cost of 5 stamina you can up the defence of the staff to S rank, or SS for 10 stamina. (Chakra would be used to but whats the point in adding it?)
As for the ribbon cutting bit... make it cost the same stam as a B ranked jutsu, and a 1 post cool down. If something with chakra coating blades, and a systems is made for it this might change, but for now use it appropriately.
One last question, after answering and edits you are approved. Would cutting into a earthen armor jutsu deativate you chakra coat? Since it is a jutsu that fills the earth with the users chakra. (The higher rank ones do, not the really low level ones... dont think so anyway.)
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 11:18 am
-o-Havik-o- Unrelinquished Despair I don't understand what you just presented me, and what I do get, I don't like it at all, and it doesn't conform with the original idea/feel of the weapon. ( Basically I feel what you made to be a whole different weapon. ) The coat is supposed to be a passive thing, deactivated, like I said by an alien chakra. This 'alien' chakra could be something as simple as an e-rank jutsu, or a Hyuuga user pushing chakra outward at/toward the weapon. As long as an alien chakra source touches it, the coat would deactivate. I would like to WORK this my idea, not completely change it. I think the chakra coat should be able to take up to b-rank physical abuse, but is broken at A-rank. Likewise, without the coat, the spear can be broken by standard chuunin level strength, able to withstand Genin level strength. One last question, after answering and edits you are approved. Would cutting into a earthen armor jutsu deativate you chakra coat? Since it is a jutsu that fills the earth with the users chakra. (The higher rank ones do, not the really low level ones... dont think so anyway.) Yes, it would. Edits made.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 11:29 am
Lilith: Have fun in the Rp
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:24 pm
Inferni: Tsukiakari:
- Is there any particular reason why exactly those elements as its weaknesses? Also, give it a Taijutsu defense as well. How many slashes/taijutsu strikes would it take to break your sword? - We'll see what Cobra has to say on your technique there, last time he did not let a similar technique, so we have to wait for his decision.
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