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discoqueen090 Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:49 pm
Exultati So... fantasy or scifi...? Will mused as he approached the library doors (stepping back to look at THIS curiousity), and entered. Will opens the weighted doors to see a magnificent chamber complete with marble floors, huge domed ceilings, and massive windows. there are three floors to the library, books in every language human and otherwise, a koi pond in the center, and crystal ladders. A female version of perosof walks toward will. "I am esmert your assigned guide and companion. I am here to assist you in any way you need."
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 3:24 pm
discoqueen090 Discoking090 Elliot becomes one with the granite and bashes the hydrant open and directs the water at the Shadow demon. The water is successfully directed at the shadow demon, the creature is fried as it's internal circuts misfire and cause it to convulse. Elliot opens up the ground beneath the demon and as soon as it falls in he slams it shut.
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 11:12 am
discoqueen090 Exultati So... fantasy or scifi...? Will mused as he approached the library doors (stepping back to look at THIS curiousity), and entered. Will opens the weighted doors to see a magnificent chamber complete with marble floors, huge domed ceilings, and massive windows. there are three floors to the library, books in every language human and otherwise, a koi pond in the center, and crystal ladders. A female version of perosof walks toward will. "I am esmert your assigned guide and companion. I am here to assist you in any way you need." Will, still a little fazed, scratches his head and looks around for a minute. "Could I... get something like histories of the species that're on the earth on the moment... besides humans?"
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 9:19 pm
discoqueen090 StChuckie discoqueen090 StChuckie discoqueen090 Quote: Ted cautiously proceeds to the bomb shelter, looking in all possible directions for more black shrouds. He eventually reaches the door, swiftly opens it, crawls inside, and slams it behind him. Ted hears Logan wailing above the bomb shelter. "IT BURNS, MAKE IT STOP, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IT BURNS!" "I'm coming, Logan!" Ted shoves the door open once more and crawls on top of the shelter. Ted tries to push open the door, when to his terror he realizes it's weighted shut. Ted takes in a massive breath, filling his lungs to the brim with air, and unleashes a torrent of sonic waves at the door. The door comes flying off and pins a shadow being to the ground, leaving it unconsious. Logan comes running and pulls ted into the shelter alongside him. He closes his eyes and hums softly to himself as a gold fluid is excreted from his skin. The fluid rises into the air and makes a barrier along the entrance of the shelter. Ted simply stares in amazement at the display. When Logan is done forming the shield, Ted slowly walks up to him. "What the hell were those things?"
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2017 6:55 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2017 9:39 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2021 12:38 pm
He then grabs his brush and puts a little makeup. He notices some unfamiliar scars, and decides to hide them to fadeaway the shakeup. Looking to his right, the young man notices his house keys were left on the dining room counter, not the location be last left them. He concluded it must have been from when his lady friend came home from work last night, after he'd already fallen asleep. Out of morbid curiosity, called to her - "Hey, why'd you leave the keys up on the table?" A groggy-sounding female voice from the other room murmured "You wanted to." William, fed up with his girlfriend's chronic fibbing looked up at the ceiling, dropping his arms to his side. "Here you, creating another fable!"
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Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2021 11:14 am
discoqueen090 Exultati discoqueen090 Exultati discoqueen090 WIll stared, dazed.
"What the f**k is going on here..."the creature looks into wills eyes with a penetrating intensity, "I ask of you to join us, we can keep you safe." "After I crash into a building, nearly die, find the city like THIS, I find nightmares like this... ah." - and to the bug - "Ask me again, when I'm awake." He walks off along the rest of the building's holes in the side, staring incredulously at the city. "This is SO like apollyon it's not even funny... it's..." It's a little too real... He chuckled. "Really getting a bit light headed here. Whoo. Ok... let's think... I was in a plane... and it's back there. Now I'm here. Wow. How utterly cool is this?! hahaha. Unbelievable." Man it felt great. Wow. Incredible. Will sits down, looking out on the water. Not too many clouds in the sky. Nice day. "it's really peaceful. This isn't too bad a dream. But... dream or not, it could be dangerous. I hope that thing doesn't wanna eat me. I think I'm lucid enough to fight or run. I really want my knife - oh, it's in my pocket... haha. I should probably go check the plane for.... for ....my .......BAG." I sobered up, one hand running through his hair, the other feeling very light. "f**k. It's real. I ******** knew it. oh FUUCK...." ((Will this is lovely talkey talk, really it is, but not terribly condusive to the fast paced rp style I tend towards. So.........I think it would be preferable if you talked to the scaley guy rather than to yourself. Otherwise you'll be picking your a** on that skyscraper for far longer than I would prefer. thanx)) ((Well, then I don't really care. I'll rp the way I think I would act in that situation, otherwise, I'm just being moved around by an NPC character, which is no fun. I'd need to adjust to that kind of situation, and we ARE playing ourselves, aren't we...? Don't worry, I can make them smaller, but suspending the disbelief in favor of accepting the surrealness of it all without question doesn't make a roleplay.)) ((Well I really do care, it's make believe will, some things are going to be exaggerated and left out, that's the damn nature of the thing. If you want to do something different, no one is making you stay. I have no desire to rp for people who don't care what I think though....the entire rp is an extension of my thoughts. Get over it. Excellent GM skills on display here... stare "RP as yourself, but only react like you would when I want you to." "Don't write out thoughtful, well constructed paragraphs, cuz I got 3 move plotpoints I want to throw at you 5 posts from now." "Sure, it's literally only the first 4 posts you've made in this thread and you took the plot hook on your 4th post. ... But I wanted you to take it within the first 2 posts. How dare you?" Seriously, this is a shitty way to treat your players ON TOP of it being bad storytelling. Take notes, future historians.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2021 7:41 pm
RP Retrospective Review
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. . . . . . . . . . . *CLAP* So!
This was so abysmal that I'm having difficulty working up the effort to delve into any sort of detail. The flaws here are pretty self-evident, but let's do our due diligence here and not make this RP feel left out, eh?
To call this loose sequence of events unfocused would be understatement of the century. Mutants, zombies, sapient humanoid stag beetles, electric shadow demons, furries, aliens, superpowers, the military, just throw ALL of it at the wall and see what sticks. Who needs artistic cohesion or direction? That shiz is for the birds!
Again, we see self-indulgent self posting from the GM regarding events and actions no one is there for. Put that in a personal journal for extra reading or in an in-character expositional storytime segment. It's the same principal for a Dungeon Master in D&D: Don't tell your players what your PC is doing while separated from the party. It's dull and it doesn't matter. I think Kaci had a thing for vampires because this was their 2nd time making a vampire character (the other being Naki, from Champions). My best guess is they were super into the humanity vs. dark thirst dichotomy. Weak and overdone, but it's something I suppose.
Wish Kaci showed the same level of respect and interest in their players' writing style! JFC, Kaci just completely sandbagged Will for daring to *GASP* . . . Write posts featuring human emotions and realistic responses! How dare he?! Seriously, Past Kaci - F*ck off with that nonsense. Never talk down to your players like that, and ESPECIALLY don't admonish them for writing in their own style. Just because you wanted to rush him to the next shitty plotpoint you had planned doesn't mean he won't get there period. Let your player play at their own pace.
Lastly. . . The length of your exposition posts needed the aid of a frigging bandsaw. Holy hell! Nobody wants to hear your NPC's entire backstory as soon as they meet him.
Glad to see I didn't miss out on f*cking anything by skipping THIS turkey!
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