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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:34 pm
Red peeked out from under the table "you sure? Okay..."
Nathan picked up Red's dropped book "why do you have a book on monsters and myths?"
Red took his book back "I thought... I thought I could find something that looks like me."
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:36 pm
Johnathon and Martha Kent find a rocket with a baby in it. Martha has hit menopause early in life, and she pressures Johnathon into keeping the child, reluctantly he agrees.
Johnathon begins drinking because of the child and becomes an abusive husband. Once the child (named Clark) gets to be five years old, Johnathon begins taking his rage out on Clark as well as Martha.
Clark very quickly becomes the bad boy in Smallville. Once he hits puberty, Clark begins to discover that he can run fast, he is a lot stronger than he used to be, he can hear things that he could never hear before. He decides to use this to his advantage, but continues with the same small-time crimes he has been committing.
Police attempt to arrest him on numerous occasions, only to find that Clark cannot be held.
Clark leaves Smallville for good at the age of fifteen.
LuthorCorps begins developing technology to try and hold Clark. Alexander Luthor, Sr. approaches a S.T.A.R. Labs for assistance. The government also begins developing the Cadmus Project, designed to neutralize the worldwide threat.
Kara Zor-El arrives on Earth a few years later, in an attempt to find another Kryptonian. She is successful, but finds Clark to still be rebellious and unruly.
Having found another like him, Clark approaches Kara to help him start taking down cities. She refuses and seeks out Earth's heroes to help her stop Clark. She finds Batman first, but he is so bogged down with his own troubles in Gotham he wants nothing to do with the super powered man. He tells Kara to find Wonder Woman on Themyscira.
After proving herself worthy to be on the island of the Amazons, Kara makes her appeal to Hippolyta, who refuses the woman, but extends an offer for her to stay. Diana hears Kara's pleas and decides to join her in the outside world, and both are promptly forbidden to return upon their leaving.
Kara and Diana go to Batman who once again refuses to aid their cause. In retaliation, they clean up Gotham for him, leaving Batman no choice but to help them.
Meanwhile, Clark becomes increasingly more destructive. Entire countries begin banding together in an effort to stop the menace. Batman approaches Alexander Luthor, Jr., who immediately agrees to join their coalition.
With LuthorCorps and Wayne Enterprise backing the foundation of the Justice Corps of America, the four immediately begin recruitment.
Story begins
There is room for improvement. Give me everything you've got.
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:44 pm
Psychoholic Slag Story begins There is room for improvement. Give me everything you've got. How about, Krypton is a dictator ship of a planet, similar to Apocalypse. They send Kal as a full grown adult to invade Earth to test how much of a threat it is against Krypton. The individual heroes can't deal with him alone, the JL is formed and they're able to take him down and hold him prisoner before he can signal Krypton.
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:47 pm
Kara crash lands into the Gotham Bay. Lois Lane having lost most if not all her family discovers Kara causing her cousin Chloe to help secure Kara's identy as her little sister. Chloe has been watching Clark since they were at Smallville together. Lois and Kara begin living with Chloe shortly after. She had begun connecting the dots and realized he was a greater threat and goes off in search of a way to neutralize him.
Chloe faces off with Clark with a chunk of Meteorite before she is killed. Lois takes Kara into hiding in Gotham City, where Kara befriends Tim Drake.
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Barbara Gordon_Batgirl Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:47 pm
Eric Coldfire Psychoholic Slag Story begins There is room for improvement. Give me everything you've got. How about, Krypton is a dictator ship of a planet, similar to Apocalypse. They send Kal as a full grown adult to invade Earth to test how much of a threat it is against Krypton. The individual heroes can't deal with him alone, the JL is formed and they're able to take him down and hold him prisoner before he can signal Krypton. Sounds very DBZ-ish. I wanted to keep it kind of like a Mirror Universe kind of Clark. Although, Krypton does not need to have been destroyed.
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:49 pm
Barbara Gordon_Batgirl Kara crash lands into the Gotham Bay. Lois Lane having lost most if not all her family discovers Kara causing her cousin Chloe to help secure Kara's identy as her little sister. Chloe has been watching Clark since they were at Smallville together. Lois and Kara begin living with Chloe shortly after. She had begun connecting the dots and realized he was a greater threat and goes off in search of a way to neutralize him. Chloe faces off with Clark with a chunk of Meteorite before she is killed. Lois takes Kara into hiding in Gotham City, where Kara befriends Tim Drake. So your suggestion is that Kara is roughly the same age as Clark?
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:50 pm
That's a surprise... I hate DBZ.
But that's the best I can do, Wonder Woman isn't leaving Themyscira until Leo washes and ends up making her leave the island and venture into the Modern/Man's World.
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:51 pm
Kara's the same age as Tim. I'm thinking of Lois getting her chance to be a fighter verses her being a damsel in distress.
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Barbara Gordon_Batgirl Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:53 pm
Eric Coldfire That's a surprise... I hate DBZ. But that's the best I can do, Wonder Woman isn't leaving Themyscira until Leo washes and ends up making her leave the island and venture into the Modern/Man's World. So, in the reboot, Leo lives on Themyscira?
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:54 pm
Barbara Gordon_Batgirl Kara's the same age as Tim. I'm thinking of Lois getting her chance to be a fighter verses her being a damsel in distress. I had expected as much. She still going to go after Connor Hawke?
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Barbara Gordon_Batgirl Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:59 pm
Lois will most likely still be going after him. ^_^
Kara: Why don't we just expose Lois to some form of K and have her be super?! Lois: Cause.. It would be too easy..
*reading Lois Lane and the Resistance again* I might find an idea to make her badass.. give me a bit
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 7:02 pm
Psychoholic Slag Eric Coldfire That's a surprise... I hate DBZ. But that's the best I can do, Wonder Woman isn't leaving Themyscira until Leo washes and ends up making her leave the island and venture into the Modern/Man's World. So, in the reboot, Leo lives on Themyscira? No he gets Ship wrecked on the Island after a Hera tries to kill him by causing a storm to sink the cruise ship he and he's students are on. Hera expects the Amazons to kill him and when they don't, she causes a disaster of some sorts and tries to make it seem like his fault. After Leo helps Wonder Woman and Amazons, Diana stands up to Hera for his behalf. Hera threatens to kill Diana if she doesn't kill Leo. Diana's mother opts to banish Diana as a way to spare her life. Leo goes with her.
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 7:05 pm
I don't know enough about the Super gang to offer any help.
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 7:08 pm
Superwoman of the comics used a Super Suit didn't she?
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 7:12 pm
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