Technique Name: Ultra High Speed Conditioning Rank: A Type: Training (Bloodline) Element: Jinton Description: The Jinton user puts theirself through the utmost extremes of the high-speed maneuvers they are capable of. Through this rigorous practice they adapt their body to endure limits exceeding that of most other Jinton users. Negative (side)effects from high-speed maneuvers will no longer affect the Jinton user who has completed this Ultra High Speed Conditioning. Costs a B-Rank amount of Chakra every 6 posts while affected by a high-speed maneuver technique, including the activation post.
Technique Name: Flickering Whirlwind Rank: A Type: Training (Taijutsu - Jiyūgata Senpū) Element: Maruton Description: The practitioner of Jiyūgata Senpū undergoes rigorous training to master any and all variations of the Body Flicker that they know. By incorporating this high-speed motion to the best of their abilities into their known taijutsu they can mostly retain the momentum of the maneuver after completing the Shunshin's usage. This doesn't allow them to continue moving faster than the eye can follow, but it will allow them to retain a Greatly (+5) increased amount of movement speed as long as they stay in motion. Once they cease movement at all this speed boost is completely lost, as is traditional for most Jiyūgata Senpū techniques. Costs a B-Rank amount of Stamina every 6 posts while still in motion, including the activation post. • Must have mastered up to Stage 5 of Jiyūgata Senpū to learn.
Technique Name: Radical Good Speed - Hypersonic Rank: A Type: Augment (Bloodline) Element: Jinton Description: This Jinton technique allows the user to take their Jinton: Shunshin no Jutsu to a whole new level. By overcharging the amount of Speed Release chakra used to perform the body flicker maneuver, they can in turn achieve hypersonic speed. The result is a massive shockwave following in their wake after they have completed the movement. The forty [40] foot diameter shockwave will crash into anyone and anything caught in its path, capable of shattering solid rock and warping metal structures (chakra reinforced structures of equal or higher rank will resist all damage). The shockwave itself does not travel at the same speed as the shunshin; it will follow the user's motion path in the next post. This technique cannot be used without critically injuring oneself unless they have completed the Ultra High Speed Conditioning. Consumes one [1] usage of all Shunshin.
Character: Masato Umechika Technique Name: Kiai Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Maruton Description: Masato releases a shout infused with chakra, which spreads thirty feet in all directions. When the chakra from the shout is dispersed into the area, any chakra that affects the area that Masato's chakra overlaps is dispelled from the area that is at the same rank or below the rank of this technique. Doing so ends techniques that effect a blanket area during combat. This technique only applies to pure chakra and does not remove structures such as earth or ice from the field. Constructs like those will retain the natural density that such a material would hold.
Technique Name: Masato Smash Rank: S Type: Taijutsu Element: [ Complex ] Description:Masato focuses all of his chakra into one, 'all-mighty' strike. By exerting a massive amount of physical and spiritual energy, Masato exerts himself beyond his normal capacity. His skin is illuminated with bright chakra vein like patterns that focus on the limb executing the blow. When this strike reaches its full extension from the body a wave of air pressure is created that has the concussive power to bend steel in a spherical area surrounding Masato of ten feet on his right, left and behind him. This however is the weakest point of the attack as the pure force delivered towards the target is the aim of Masato Smash. The air pressure traveling in the direction of the strike is fifteen meters surrounding the trajectory of the fist and travels for fifty meters. Anything directly caught in the blast of this technique is hit with a crushing force, cracking bones if unguarded and sending them flying to the fullest extent of the technique's range. Anything standing to either side of the width of the strike's radius will be subject to a mighty wind that prevents advancement. Being physically contacted by the limb in this strike has catastrophic effects on the target. Bone is broken and shattered upon contact causing internal bleeding if an organ is stricken, unconsciousness if the head is unguarded and sending the target flying into the pressure wave that was released from the action. This single strike gains a supreme increase in strength. Following the post, Masato suffers a supreme reduction in strength for three posts and the technique cannot be used again for five posts. The limb that was used to execute this technique cannot use this technique again for the remainder of the battle lest the limb be broken under the weight of the user's strength.
Character: Kazama Decimo Shinsetsu (Given to Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu) • Yukiton: Oni no Fubuki [Snow Release: Blizzard of the Demon] Rank: S
Type: Bloodline Element: Yukiton -- Snow Description: The user will first finish a long sequence of handseals. Afterward, The user's eyes will glow white as they summon upon a great and furious snowstorm that can obstruct any army and keep them struggling for a long time. The size of the snowstorm can encompass an entire village and parts of the land outside of its walls. The storm itself makes for poor visibility, whipping winds, extreme temperatures and hazards normally associated with the arctic. Can not do this jutsu alone as it leaves the caster open for any attack while they gather the chakra needed and perform the seals; unless the enemy is not so smart and lets you get away with it. Each chakra particle is like its own chakra structure and can be independent from the other particles. But it won’t do much good alone.
Effects of being outside in this storm will lead to hypothermia in no more than 5 posts without sufficient protective clothing. Katon users can risk their body to extend this timeframe by five posts. Those with protective clothing have 15 posts before hypothermia sets in, which can be modified with various things at the users discretion. Being inside and out of the hazardous element means they just feel cold.
Effects of hypothermia
Mild -- starts to sink in while the time frame for warmth dwindles.
Symptoms of mild hypothermia may be vague with sympathetic nervous system excitation (shivering, hypertension, tachycardia, tachypnea, and vasoconstriction). These are all physiological responses to preserve heat. Cold diuresis, mental confusion, as well as hepatic dysfunction may also be present. Hyperglycemia may be present, as glucose consumption by cells and insulin secretion both decrease, and tissue sensitivity to insulin may be blunted. Sympathetic activation also releases glucose from the liver. In many cases, however, especially in alcoholic patients, hypoglycemia appears to be a more common presentation. Hypoglycemia is also found in many hypothermic patients because hypothermia often is a result of hypoglycemia.
Moderate -- starts after Mild sets in.
Low body temperature results in shivering becoming more violent. Muscle mis-coordination becomes apparent. Movements are slow and labored, accompanied by a stumbling pace and mild confusion, although the victim may appear alert. Surface blood vessels contract further as the body focuses its remaining resources on keeping the vital organs warm. The victim becomes pale. Lips, ears, fingers and toes may become blue.
Severe -- 3 posts after Moderate
As the temperature decreases further physiological systems falter and heart rate, respiratory rate, and blood pressure all decreases. This results in an expected HR in the 30s with a temperature of 28 °C (82 °F).
Difficulty in speaking, sluggish thinking, and amnesia start to appear; inability to use hands and stumbling is also usually present. Cellular metabolic processes shut down. Below 30 °C (86 °F), the exposed skin becomes blue and puffy, muscle coordination becomes very poor, walking becomes almost impossible, and the person exhibits incoherent/irrational behavior including terminal burrowing or even a stupor. Pulse and respiration rates decrease significantly, but fast heart rates (ventricular tachycardia, atrial fibrillation) can occur. Major organs fail. Clinical death occurs. Because of decreased cellular activity in stage 3 hypothermia, the body will actually take longer to undergo brain death.
Duration: 40 posts of the user or when the host decides to turn it off.
Bloodline Customs • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Snow Phantom ] Rank: B
Type: Bloodline Jutsu Element: Snow Description: By using all 9 of their [ Hatsuyuki ] (Meaning the user has to use up all three of his activations beforehand) The user is able to produce a replica like clone of any person or beast appearence and size. (So long as the user has seen it.) Able to cause actual damage, its snowy built makes it good for absorbing a lot of damage. They possess shadow clone like intelligence.
• Tōshō [ English Name ] Rank: S-Given to Old Man in Tunnels -Gimangakure
• Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Armor of Snow ] Rank: X (C for Learning Purposes)
Type: Bloodline Jutsu Element: Snow Description: The Shinsetsu Clan user melds his chakra into a protective armor snow and ice, this armor is very lightweight but as strong as steel and can protect from various amount of damage. Active until destroyed
• Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Razor Flake ] Rank: X (A rank for learning purposes)
Type: Bloodline Element: Snow Description: This technique turns a snow flake of intricate and beautiful design into a weapon capable of mass destruction. The snow flakes grow in size with every rank used, have incredible cutting power.
E-Slices Flesh Easily D-Slices Light Armor Easily C-Slices Heavy Armor Easily B-Slices Through a House Easily A-Slices Through Multiple Houses Easily S-Slices The Top of a Mountain off Easily.
Non-Bloodline Custom • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Disruption ] Rank: A
Type: Fuinjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user after years of sensing the emotions that people let out so easily. Discovered a way to not only hide his emotions, but to hide all other info of himself. With a seal carved into his body he can activate it at will. The user will then not give off any info to any sensor no matter who they are. But in return the user cannot use chakra or stamina and this is incapable of fighting on a fair level with this jutsu active. The user must release the jutsu for him to able to use jutsu and then reactivate it again after. Hiding all information must be active for a minimum of 5 posts before it can be broken. It should be in the form of a seal place on the person for it to use, but due to the technique they would unable to discover the seals presence. The second part of the jutsu is basically the same as the first, the user can hide all his info from the enemy. But this way allows him to use Jutsu, because of this a (only)sensors the same rank or higher can see his info after 5 posts of studying. And the jutsu must be active for 5 posts before it can be broken.
• Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Insight Storm ] Rank: S-Passive - Free Custom
Type: Bukijutsu-Shigeru Soen Element: Null Description: Noctis after much training in developing his Insight Rain technique was able to create a stronger version. While the former allows him to sense hostile intent in the area but not the location. This stronger version allows him to sense a larger range of negative emotions. Hostility, Anger, Hate, and if it is strong enough Evil etc. It even allows him to pinpoint the location of the person.
Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2018 11:31 pm
Character: Chloe Blueford Technique Name: [ Efflorescence ] Rank: D - Rank Type: Ninjutsu/Bloodline Element: Mokuton Description:Traditionally only learned by medical Senju who have gained a deepened spiritual connection to nature and the forests. This technique, although classified as a D - Ranked this jutsu, has no cost or effect until an Eiseijutsu technique is used by the Senju ninja. At which point the user may expend a chakra cost equal to half the cost of the Eiseijutsu in order to 'modify it' during it's cast to be able to travel through any Mokuton creation of the user.
Denied. Apologies for the long delay. I genuinely thought I responded to this. But yeah, the drawbacks are solid, but the effects are far too grand. It was truly a great attempt, and if I were to approve things of this scale, then this is how I would want it.
Grand Chevalier Haji
I am truly sorry to ask this of you, especially because you have been waiting a while for a judgment, but is Kazama Noctis? Like, how are you given a character? If it is the case where you are given someone else's rpc then all customs are denied on the grounds that, as far as I am aware, you cannot just be given someone else's rpc. Right now, however, I am working under the assumption that Noctis is Kazama. Again, however, I cannot approve customs of an rpc unless you are the one who created and owns the character.
Blizzard of the Demon: Denied as the frost hazard systems are already a thing
Snow Phantom: Approved. Just make it A-ranked, since this is kind of in lieu with the combination transformation, and that required two B-ranked amount of chakra to make something as big as the demon.
Armor of Snow: Pending. Can't make techniques active until they're destroyed. There's a duration required for all active techniques. I'll allow it two post per rank applied.
Razor Flakes: Denied as it bypasses the armor system.
Disruption: Pending. I'll allow it to negate all typical forms of sensory. But, if someone devotes a custom to breaking through sensory jamming skills, then this won't help you. Also denied on the second part of the technique. Make two customs please if you're going to have one seal which completely makes you unsensorable, and one which allows you to use techniques and only be sensorable to ninja of the same (body?) rank.
Insight Storm: Denied as it does not follow the rules of passives, where it needs some sort of chakra and stamina cost.
Evanescently Magnificent
I don't know if we are still allowing customs to make medical work at a range. Since I didn't hear anything about a final judgment, however, I am going to approve it. Fair warning, however, that this may be taken away at some point.
Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2018 9:54 pm
Mattysandwich
Character: Kazama Decimo Shinsetsu (Given to Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu) • Yukiton: Oni no Fubuki [Snow Release: Blizzard of the Demon] Rank: S
Type: Bloodline Element: Yukiton -- Snow Description: The user will first finish a long sequence of handseals. Afterward, The user's eyes will glow white as they summon upon a great and furious snowstorm that can obstruct any army and keep them struggling for a long time. The size of the snowstorm can encompass an entire village and parts of the land outside of its walls. The storm itself makes for poor visibility, whipping winds, extreme temperatures and hazards normally associated with the arctic. Can not do this jutsu alone as it leaves the caster open for any attack while they gather the chakra needed and perform the seals; unless the enemy is not so smart and lets you get away with it. Each chakra particle is like its own chakra structure and can be independent from the other particles. But it won’t do much good alone.
Effects: After the Initial dose effect every post thereafter adds 1 more dose of frostbite. All ranged jutsu except Ice/Snow jutsu lose 1 rank of effectiveness while used within this jutsu. Victims of this justu are unable to use any high speed movements (Substitution/Shushin)
Duration: 40 posts of the user or when the host decides to turn it off.
As for this one. I'm already having to using 9 of my [ Hatsuyuki ] to create this which is 3 D ranks so 30 Chakra,
Hope about I remove the 9 [ Hatsuyuki ] requirement and make it B rank for anything smaller than a house and A rank for anything bigger? Bloodline Customs • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Snow Phantom ] Rank: B/A
Type: Bloodline Jutsu Element: Snow Description: The user is able to produce a replica like clone of any person or beast appearence and size. (So long as the user has seen it.) Able to cause actual damage, its snowy built makes it good for absorbing a lot of damage. They possess shadow clone like intelligence. B Rank for anything smaller than a house, anything larger requires A rank.
Can I get 3 posts per rank? biggrin • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Armor of Snow ] Rank: X (C for Learning Purposes)
Type: Bloodline Jutsu Element: Snow Description: The Shinsetsu Clan user melds his chakra into a protective armor snow and ice, this armor is very lightweight but as strong as steel and can protect from various amount of damage. Active 3 Posts Per rank of armor.
Edited as discussed • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Razor Flake ] Rank: X (A rank for learning purposes)
Type: Bloodline Element: Snow Description: This technique turns a snow flake of intricate and beautiful design into a weapon capable of mass destruction. The snow flakes grow in size with every rank used, have incredible cutting power at E rank they can slice through flesh like butter. At S+...well lets hope you never see that.
Does this really require 2 customs? They are essentially the same technique with two modes. One mode is secure, while the other mode is not as secure but gives more freedom. I don't see the need for two different customs. As they both do the same thing. Non-Bloodline Custom • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Disruption ] Rank: A
Type: Fuinjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user after years of sensing the emotions that people let out so easily. Discovered a way to not only hide his emotions, but to hide all other info of himself. With a seal carved into his body he can activate it at will. The user will then not give off any info to any sensor no matter who they are. But in return the user cannot use chakra or stamina and this is incapable of fighting on a fair level with this jutsu active. The user must release the jutsu for him to able to use jutsu and then reactivate it again after. Hiding all information must be active for a minimum of 5 posts before it can be broken. It should be in the form of a seal place on the person for it to use, but due to the technique they would unable to discover the seals presence. The second part of the jutsu is basically the same as the first, the user can hide all his info from the enemy. But this way allows him to use Jutsu, because of this a (only)sensors the same rank or higher can see his info after 5 posts of studying. And the jutsu must be active for 5 posts before it can be broken.
This technique below is a free custom given by the Shigure Soen Bukijutsu Style. I used it to enhance a technique which is considered training in the style. That is why I considered it a passive. But it is more like supplementary. Edited • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Insight Storm ] Rank: S-Passive-Supplementary Training - Free Custom
Type: Bukijutsu-Shigeru Soen Element: Null Description: Noctis after much training in developing his Insight Rain technique was able to create a stronger version. While the former allows him to sense hostile intent in the area but not the location. This stronger version allows him to sense a larger range of negative emotions. Hostility, Anger, Hate, Evil etc. It even allows him to pinpoint the location of the person. (This is a supplementary technique to Insight Rain in the Shigure Souen Style)
Armor of Snow: I'm sorry, but I have only allowed two post per rank to all other techniques, since at S-ranked the armor can last for 12 post.
Razor Flake: Approved, although be aware that X-ranked techniques cannot be used at S+ ranked.
Disruption: Yes, it has to be two techniques. And that second part of it is broken.
Insight Storm: I have no problem with this being passive, but it needs some sort of cost. Maybe a chakra or stamina cost if you sense someone out of your immediate range? Something?
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2018 5:28 pm
Mattysandwich
Edited ready for approval Character: Kazama Decimo Shinsetsu (Given to Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu) • Yukiton: Oni no Fubuki [Snow Release: Blizzard of the Demon] Rank: S
Type: Bloodline Element: Yukiton -- Snow Description: The user will first finish a long sequence of handseals. Afterward, The user's eyes will glow white as they summon upon a great and furious snowstorm that can obstruct any army and keep them struggling for a long time. The size of the snowstorm can encompass an entire village and parts of the land outside of its walls. The storm itself makes for poor visibility, whipping winds, extreme temperatures and hazards normally associated with the arctic. Can not do this jutsu alone as it leaves the caster open for any attack while they gather the chakra needed and perform the seals; unless the enemy is not so smart and lets you get away with it. Each chakra particle is like its own chakra structure and can be independent from the other particles. But it won’t do much good alone.
Effects: After the Initial dose effect every post thereafter adds 1 more dose of frostbite. All ranged jutsu except Ice/Snow jutsu lose 1 rank of effectiveness while used within this jutsu. Victims of this justu are unable to use any high speed movements (Substitution/Shushin)
Duration: 40 posts of the user or when the host decides to turn it off.
Kk Bloodline Customs • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Snow Phantom ] Rank: B/A
Type: Bloodline Jutsu Element: Snow Description: The user is able to produce a replica like clone of any person or beast appearence and size. (So long as the user has seen it.) Able to cause actual damage, its snowy built makes it good for absorbing a lot of damage. They possess shadow clone like intelligence. B Rank for anything smaller than a house, anything larger requires A rank.
Kk • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Armor of Snow ] Rank: X (C for Learning Purposes)
Type: Bloodline Jutsu Element: Snow Description: The Shinsetsu Clan user melds his chakra into a protective armor snow and ice, this armor is very lightweight but as strong as steel and can protect from various amount of damage. Active 2 Posts Per rank of armor.
Edited as discussed • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Razor Flake ] Rank: X (A rank for learning purposes)
Type: Bloodline Element: Snow Description: This technique turns a snow flake of intricate and beautiful design into a weapon capable of mass destruction. The snow flakes grow in size with every rank used, have incredible cutting power at E rank they can slice through flesh like butter. At S+...well lets hope you never see that.
hmmm kk i'll take a look at which one I want then.. Non-Bloodline Custom • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Disruption ] Rank: A
Type: Fuinjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user after years of sensing the emotions that people let out so easily. Discovered a way to not only hide his emotions, but to hide all other info of himself. With a seal carved into his body he can activate it at will. The user will then not give off any info to any sensor no matter who they are. But in return the user cannot use chakra or stamina and this is incapable of fighting on a fair level with this jutsu active. The user must release the jutsu for him to able to use jutsu and then reactivate it again after. Hiding all information must be active for a minimum of 5 posts before it can be broken. It should be in the form of a seal place on the person for it to use, but due to the technique they would unable to discover the seals presence. The second part of the jutsu is basically the same as the first, the user can hide all his info from the enemy. But this way allows him to use Jutsu, because of this a (only)sensors the same rank or higher can see his info after 5 posts of studying. And the jutsu must be active for 5 posts before it can be broken.
No, that makes no sense if this is a supplementary ability to a technique that has no cost why would the supplementary have a cost. I changed the type to Augment as it now should replace the previous technique because it is a augment w • Japanese Name no Jutsu [ Insight Storm ] Rank: S-Augment Free Custom
Type: Bukijutsu-Shigeru Soen Element: Null Description: Noctis after much training in developing his Insight Rain technique was able to create a stronger version. While the former allows him to sense hostile intent in the area but not the location. This stronger version allows him to sense a larger range of negative emotions. Hostility, Anger, Hate, Evil etc. It even allows him to pinpoint the location of the person. (This is a supplementary technique to Insight Rain in the Shigure Souen Style)
Speak to Kerron. I have given my final judgments on these customs. Aside from Razor Flakes, which are approved.
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2018 11:37 am
Grand Chevalier Haji
Custom's Head gave a judgement. I looked over, and discussed with him what needed to change a bit before he officially took a look.
Insight rain is Denied. If you'd like to know why, look at the custom rules, which I already told you to do twice.
At the risk of feeling like I may say this a lot, and that people don't listen, I'm going to impress the knowledge that I don't care what things exist in the guild that shouldn't. It's not a justification for your customs to be broken. You are not going to have a free sensory skill that builds upon a preexisting, probably soon to be nerfed free sensory skill, and that is the final word on that. Even with a cost attached, if you aren't a sensor I'm not comfortable giving out sensory techniques anyway, so I'm going to further deny this custom on those grounds. Further arguments for this custom will not be considered going forward.
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2018 2:23 pm
Character:Kya Technique Name: Blaze Control: Combustion Bend Rank: S Type: Bloodline [Replacing Enton Yasaka No Magatama] Element: Blaze Description: Combining Kamui and Amateratsu (worth 10% blindness) to crush the flames of amateratsu into a tiny, mobile pocket dimension, the user can fire off the packet of flames as a projectile. She can curve this explosive so that it can turn a full 90 degrees, and can be detonated, releasing he Amateratsu in a huge burst. Has a one post cool down between uses.
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